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well i am really glad to see wrat by raj and kranti .It may not be exactly as i wanted in scene 1 but has inspired me to write another scene that i hope is partly shown in some comming episodes of MRD
scene 2
Scene that I would like to see in MRD .
These days I m just wondering how to get Rand K closer and now that buaji has turn into a love guru I have tried and used her as a catalyst in this reaction
.Hope you all like it.
The scene starts where R gets up in the morning and is still in his night suit (since many days bechara has not slept peacefully as he was sleeping in his English babu suit so here he is in his black satin night suit and finally we know that he sleeps in some other room.) it's a Sunday so R is in a bit lazy mood.
Buaji enters the room with a cup of tea and asks kya baat hai puttar aaj itni der se niche nahi aya tu tayyar hokar?
R: buaji aaj Sunday hai na to jara der se utha..
B: to mere bataye hue tarike kaam kar rahe hai na?
R: ji use mujh me koi interest nahi hai .
B: lagta hai ki ab kuch aur tarika istemaal karma padega. And takes her hand and puts it on R head and finds that his hair is become very rough .buaji smiles and says mil gaya tarika .
R: kya tarika hai?bataayie
B: tu jaldi se neeche aaja.
R: ji tayyar hokar aa jata hoon.
B;nahi nahi aise hi aaja
R: confused aise hi?
B;aa to sahi
R.thik hai chaliye
B and R come down in their living room where chaijee ,K are sitting and they are cleaning green peas (well I have a allergy with that BBR so in my scene she will be resting in her room .i hope BBR fans are not angry on me )
B: tell R on the steps that she'l make ishara to come then he'l come down .so she first comes down in the living room
B: comes and tells C that R is lying in his room because he has a headache .i have called him downstairs he'l be coming .
C: sar dard kar raha hai ? kaise?
B; parjai apna Kaake itna kaam karta hai to bechare ka sar dard kar raha hoga
K madam is giving an I don't care attitude .and thinks in her mind bechara aur woh?
B: aaj maine uska desi ILAJ karma hai..buaji makes ishara and R enters the room
B: aa kaake mai tere sar me tel ki malish kar deti hoon.
R and B are standing side by side
R: ji????chiiiiiiiii mujhe nahi karni. Mere baal kharab ho jaye ge
B: pinches him and tells him slowly that "tel laga ya phir K ko bhool ja"
B: puttar kuch nahi hoga tere baalon ko .
R: agrees to take a hair massage
B and C were suppose to make a special halwa today and B very well knows that C would not allow her to do the maalish as they have to do the Halwa
B : K puttar jara thoda tel to laa de .
K; ji abhi layi (K gets the tel)
B: to C
Parjai humne to aaj BBR ke liye Special halwa banana hai na.
C: are haan main to bhool hi gayi toh aap yahan malish karne kyon baith rahi hai chaliye mere saath rasoi mein, maalish K kardegi.
K: ji main ????? main kaise???
C: puttar achii tarah se maalish karma vilayat se lautne ke baad isne maathe par tel hih nahi lagaya
R: ke mann mein ladoo photo rahe hai after all K will do the maalish
R; sitting on a small stool in the rasoi itself not in the living room
C and B are in the rasoi too .and giving instructions to K
K: takes some oil and puts it on his head and R is in his LALALALALAND.
K: purposely pulling his hair
R: aahhhh!!!!!!!! mujhe dard ho raha hai jara dhire se karo
B: puttar jara hale haathon se malish ka use aadat nahi hai na.
K: ji buaji.
K in anger take the whole katuri (bowl) and puts it on his head .the whole oil falls on his face and back
R:yeh kya kardiya saara tel gira diya ? mujh par?
K:who katori haath se phisal gayi.
B: koi baat nahi puttar ab jab tel pith(back) par gir hi gaya hai to iske back ki bhi malish kar de.
K: surprisingly .jiiiiiiiii??????????(she never expected it that usne apne hi pair par kulhadi maar di thi.)
Now she has to massage his back too. R ji buaji back par nahi woh tell nahi nikalta nahte waqt .
B: kyon nahi nikalta ????? and tells K will wash your back.
K: jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii????????????main nahi.
B: kyon puttar apne pati se kaise sharmana.???????????? Kyon parjai ji????
C: haan puttar apne pati se kya sharmana?????
K;is thinking that kaunsi musibat mein pad gayi mai????
Now in the gusalkhana (bathroom)
R: is bit embarrassed to sit shirtless but has no option
K: very reluctantly touches his back and starts washing
R: jara ball bhi dho dena
K :kyon tumhare haaton mein mehndi lagi hai kya ????
R: apni zubaan nahi haath chalao jaldi jaldi
The water in the bucket gets over there is another bucket in the bathroom K moves to take the same and
Achanak uska pair saaboon par pad jata hai .
Now this is what we were waiting for
She slips and falls and our hero goes and holds her in his arms
And they just keep on looking at each other atleast for five minutes until R says
R: I m sorry maine tumhe girne se bacha liya .i mean tumhe to girna achaa lagta hai na .
K.fells embarrassed and say thankyou to raj for holding her .
R.aab tum jao mai khud naha loonga .bohot chance maar liya tumne .
K; kya ????????kya matlab?????????
R: closes the door without arguing and keeps blusing in the gusalkhana.
Well this is my second attempt hope the readers like it .
Please post your suggestions and comments.
Shiv Shakti
