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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Kranti's perception:

Akele hi chal pade the hum in raaston par..ummeed naa thi k phoolon se yeh raahen saji hongi..

Chalte hue in raahon par naa jaane kyaa haasil ho..naa jaane meri saanson ki dor kis k saanso se bandhi hongi.

Akeli thi main..par akelapan toh nahi..tanha reh kar bhi tanhai ka ehsaas hi kaha tha?

Mere sapno ka mustakbil kahi aur hi tha ,mere armaano ka nasheman bhi jaha tha.

Aaj fir kyon dil me itni hulchul hai..k kadam is tarha bahek gaye...

Anjaan si yeh dagar thi jaha mann k yeh ehsaas is tarha mahek gaye.

Jis kaayenat ki tamanna ki thi maine..us jahaan ka koi theekana toh ho..

Jis aur meri nazar hai..us aur mera nishana toh ho..

Par aisa ho naa saka..ek aandhi aai..aur chand lamha..sapno ka karvan kahi chhoot gaya.. meri aankhe khul gayi..

Raj's perception:

Is bheed me reh kar bhi main tanha sa ban gaya..

Akela nahi tha par..akelepan ka tha yeh saya..

Aise me tum aai,kuchh is tarha k main jee naa saka is pal ko..

Naa jaane kyon..naam naa de saka apne dil me base is hulchul ko.

Mere khwabon si tum naa thi..par tumhare aane se mit gaye saare dhoondhle chehre..jo kabhi mere khwabon ki tasveer hua karti thi.

Mere ehsaason ko rang dia tumne..jo kabhi berang aur bejaan hua karti thi.

Socha tha tumhare die gaye inhi rango se sajaoonga tumhara jeevan,kyonki ab jood gayi hai humari zindagian..

Par aisa ho naa saka...ab k saawan me paani kuchh is tarha barsa..k mere armaanon ki rangoli dhool gayi.

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@sami01

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Posted: 16 years ago

i read it twice dear iw ill edit my reply in detail later on...after am done pic post but must say amazing work i want to reread before i make another reply and also u wrote it urself ...ur command on urdu seems very good thansk love sameera

Mere khwabon si tum naa thi..par tumhare aane se mit gaye saare dhoondhle chehre..jo kabhi mere khwabon ki tasveer hua karti thi.

amazing amazing writing...kya khoob likha sabhi chehre kahin kho gaye..

bus usi ka chehra reh gaya....awww am moved beyond words😭😳

Par aisa ho naa saka...ab k saawan me paani kuchh is tarha barsa..k mere armaanon ki rangoli dhool gayi.

armaano ke rang jaror sajege rajvir...ab se sawan mein rang nahi nafratein bahengee....

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Bhawna1004

@Bhawna1004

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Posted: 16 years ago

oh my god its awesome yaar.

very touching.

i must say u are a great poet.

you have very rightly showcase the feelings of both raj and krantii.

keep writing dear.

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purvi

@coolpurvi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

wow. so wonderfully written. Typhoon going on inside their heart after that Tabela night. u have so wonderfully described their feelings

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archita

@who am i???

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Posted: 16 years ago

👏 U have written so well ,there emotions and turmoil have been penned so well.

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saba

@CoolFairySaba

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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG my dear this is absolutely AWESOME, what understanding u have of their feelings.....Hats off, brilliant work, keep it up👍🏼👏

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pari

@pari29

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yakkudimag

Kranti's perception:

Akele hi chal pade the hum in raaston par..ummeed naa thi k phoolon se yeh raahen saji hongi..

Chalte hue in raahon par naa jaane kyaa haasil ho..naa jaane meri saanson ki dor kis k saanso se bandhi hongi.

Akeli thi main..par akelapan toh nahi..tanha reh kar bhi tanhai ka ehsaas hi kaha tha?

Mere sapno ka mustakbil kahi aur hi tha ,mere armaano ka nasheman bhi jaha tha.

Aaj fir kyon dil me itni hulchul hai..k kadam is tarha bahek gaye...

Anjaan si yeh dagar thi jaha mann k yeh ehsaas is tarha mahek gaye.

Jis kaayenat ki tamanna ki thi maine..us jahaan ka koi theekana toh ho..

Jis aur meri nazar hai..us aur mera nishana toh ho..

Par aisa ho naa saka..ek aandhi aai..aur chand lamha..sapno ka karvan kahi chhoot gaya.. meri aankhe khul gayi..

Raj's perception:

Is bheed me reh kar bhi main tanha sa ban gaya..

Akela nahi tha par..akelepan ka tha yeh saya..

Aise me tum aai,kuchh is tarha k main jee naa saka is pal ko..

Naa jaane kyon..naam naa de saka apne dil me base is hulchul ko.

Mere khwabon si tum naa thi..par tumhare aane se mit gaye saare dhoondhle chehre..jo kabhi mere khwabon ki tasveer hua karti thi.

Mere ehsaason ko rang dia tumne..jo kabhi berang aur bejaan hua karti thi.

Socha tha tumhare die gaye inhi rango se sajaoonga tumhara jeevan,kyonki ab jood gayi hai humari zindagian..

Par aisa ho naa saka...ab k saawan me paani kuchh is tarha barsa..k mere armaanon ki rangoli dhool gayi.

toooooooooooo good yank really nice 😳 keep on riting

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Arwen11

@Arwen11

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

*standing ovation*👏👏👏

This is Brilliant!!!! perfect description of their turmoil, the feelings.. the angst... for a moment.. i thought u came across this poem somewhere and decided to paste it here and than i realize that u have written it yourself.. wow.. keep posting stuff like this yaar, its great

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

Oh woww Just outstanding Ananya👏...I was really feeling emotional and at the same time happy after reading this beautiful Shayari/Poetry describing Raj and Kranti's feelings so aptly😳..

I wish creatives see this post of yours and give some meaningful and good dialogues to both Raj and Kranti..now that Raj is in the process of falling in love with Kranti😳..

Very beautifully written Ananya😳