MAYUR OS - Meherbaan Hua Mera Rab Page - 128. - Page 37

Mind blowing OS

Fantastic OS
this family dinner was really special

Originally posted by: Angle.

Mind blowing OS

beautifully written
u should write more and more OS as you are the best in writing such stuff

I am agree with you
Paulomi really u r wonderful writer
very nice OS
please do write more
and please update KYIH

I loved jasusi of Naina
she is so cute
and our Mayur- By God itna cute fighting couple aj tak nehi dekha

Originally posted by: Dalia.

I am agree with you
Paulomi really u r wonderful writer
very nice OS
please do write more
and please update KYIH

Originally posted by: Pia-

HaPpY HoLi PauLoMi

Wonderful OS

Wowww it's just fantastic n sweet n lovely as well..just they way I like it 😃
I just love the starting...they way u described mayur relation..lolzz its totally hatka...pehla b fighting couple ko dekha h but yeh bohat bohat he maza ka tha...sach me bechara mayank..maa beti ek team ban kar bechari k achi band bhjti h lolzz..
ha bas mujhe romance thora kam lga I mean agar dining table sa bedroom tk kuch mayur scne mil jta to kiya he bt thi...phir yo yeh bilkul perfect ho jta..but still mujhe bohat maza aya pardhta tk..seriously aj tumna apna as usual style sa thora hatka likha h..n mujhe bohat he pasand aya...aise ek scene per OS Mujhe bohat pasand h..plzz aise our likhta hna..
superb os..love it very much..
thanku soon much..
love u..
keep writing more... 🤗

Superb fantastic os.

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

muskaan could never speak properly
have u read muskaan?

Ya... I hv almost read evrythng of Mayur... Ya, Muskaan could not speak properly bt idk wt happened Naina just reminded me of Muskaan... Missing her...

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Wowww it's just fantastic n sweet n lovely as well..just they way I like it 😃
I just love the starting...they way u described mayur relation..lolzz its totally hatka...pehla b fighting couple ko dekha h but yeh bohat bohat he maza ka tha...sach me bechara mayank..maa beti ek team ban kar bechari k achi band bhjti h lolzz..
ha bas mujhe romance thora kam lga I mean agar dining table sa bedroom tk kuch mayur scne mil jta to kiya he bt thi...phir yo yeh bilkul perfect ho jta..but still mujhe bohat maza aya pardhta tk..seriously aj tumna apna as usual style sa thora hatka likha h..n mujhe bohat he pasand aya...aise ek scene per OS Mujhe bohat pasand h..plzz aise our likhta hna..
superb os..love it very much..
thanku soon much..
love u..
keep writing more... 🤗

hamesha romantic scene likhne mein mujhe boriyat hoti hai