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Both of them taken to the different direction,to have different type of death…Mayank's heart wrenches with a thought what torcher they would be giving to Nupur,he didn't thought for a second what they will be doing with him…he tried to free himself, not to for himself but to save Nupur he retort,"Chodo mujhe…chodo mujhe….chodo……".They thrown him in a chamber and opened a poisonous gas…he banged the glass walls but they were too hard to get cracked…they all left from there and were started to do their work taking the diamonds from the clothes.He tried his all tactics to open - shatter the glasses but couldn't when suddenly it strikes him that had that piece of diamond which he had checked while taking the diamond from their cloth…with that piece he cut the glass and came out of it…breathing heavily as the gas has been effecting a lot, he was coughing badly,he stabled his breath and searched for Nupur..he went to the direction where they had taken her in order to save her,he didn't called her name out as the goons out their could knew about his escape and can create more harm to her, he reached the hall but didn't found her, he searched her when a door of a room slight open suspecting it he opened it only to get shocked,they tied up Nupur horizontly with a rope which is been attached to a pully coming down to a chamber of glass filled with water but apart from that he noticed a pair of wires were being inserted in the chamber noticing him that the water has current…he said to Nupur in assurance,"Don't worry Nupur…mein aa gaya hoon kuch nahi hoga…mein..mein hoon…".Her mouth was covered but she reacted through her eyes saying him I trust you…He tried to look for a switch to shut the wire off…he has a very less time as the pully was moving downwards and in few seconds Nupur would be sumberged into it…he didn't find any of it..and plus he don't have any sort of gloves or something of which he could took out the wire and if he tried bare hands he too will get shock and won't be able to protect Nupur…he was thinking hard and hard just that his eyes fall on a small hole from where the current supply was coming…he carefully removed the wires from it detataching the supply of current to flow in the water but sioll there was a lot specific current in the water to give eletric shock to Nupur…by the time Nupur was very much near to the chamber..he hold her from her waist and tires to open all the ropes but since because of pully she was going down and down…he said while trying his best to open the ropes,"Don't worry Nupur…".he opened the ropes of her hands and put them across his neck and said to her,"Nupur mujhe pakad lo…else you'll fall down in it…".She nodded her head and does as he said…he slowly removed the ropes from her waist and very carefully from her legs…she was about to fall down when he caught her from waist and pulled her towards himself…both of them fall down …where she was on the top of him…both shared a brief eye lock…a wave of emotions tranpired through their eyes…their breaths were falling on each other..he removed fringes from her face putting them behind her ear , asked her,"Tum..tum thik ho na…'.She replied like being drowning in his eyes,"Tumhare..hote hue mujhe kabhi kuch ho sakta hain…".He smiled at what she said and replied to her,"Mein kabhi kuch hone bhi nahi doonga..".They kept on staring each other irrespective of their position for a while…after a moment they realize their position….they got up from their place..looking here and there..avoiding each other…both of them felt a bit awkward…breaking the silence Mayank spoke,"So..ab..ab tum thik ho…".She nodded her head to which he said again,"tum commissioner saab ko phone karo aur unko yaha jald se jald aane ko kaho..tab tak hum in sab se nipatte hain…right partner..".She said,"Right…!!!".

She called up the Commisioner making him explain the whole situation…and ask him to arrive as soon as possible…till than he arrived with his police force..they beated few Ajesh Rawal's goon and make them busy through their talks and tactics…When the police took him away Nupur said to Mayank,"Phewww…ye case bhi khatam…thanks partner meri jaan bachane k liye…vese ek baat batao..tumhe pata kese chala ki saaraa maal iss goodown mein aayega…".Mayank said raising his collor,"Ab vo kya hain na tum to jaanti ho koi bhi mere charm se nahi bach sakta bas isi ka mene use kiya aur jo vo receptionist hain na usse pata kerwa liya…".Nupur said in her anger tone,"Vese to bada ladkiyon se door bhagte rehte ho..lekin iss case mein to tum kuch aur hi ker rahe the..information nikalne k bahane bada flirt ker rahe the….".Mayank said in a little mocking tone,"Nupur kahin se jalne ki boo aa rahi hain…kahin tum jealous to nahi ho rahi ho…".

"Mein..aur jealouse..mein..mein ..kyu jealous hone lage..jealous hogi meri jooti…samjhe Mr.Sharma…"

"Haan ache tareeke se samjh gaya.."

"Kya ..samjhe haan…mein bhi jaanu.."

"Chodo Nupur.."

"Nahi mujhe to jaannaa…hain"

"Sachi mein.."

"Haan.."

"To baat ye hain…" Suddenly his phone rang breaking their convo he excused himself and said to her,"Nupur mujhe important kaam hain…kal milte hain mein chalta hoon…".Before she could call him out…he was out of sight…Nupur thought,"Ye ladka bhi na….pagal hain…a sweet smile appeared on her face …pagal hain but meri fiker kerta hain…bahut kerta hain..aur ye jaan ker mujhe bahut acha lagta hain…realizing what she is thinking she scolded heself,"Kya Nupur tu bhi kya sochti rehti hain…".

The next Day Mayank called hr up in the restraunt saying he need to talk her urgently…she reached a bit early and was waiting for him..a wait of few minutes was looking ages to her she waited for more five minutes while murmuring to herself,"Mayank kahan ho tum….mujhe bulaya aur khud chale gaye…Mayank…aa bhi jao…".Just than he entered with a bag and passport in his hand , he quickly sat opposite her and apologised,"Sorry..!!! for being late…".

"Mujhe bulate ho tum Mayank aur khud late ho jaate ho.."

"Ab Sorry na Nupur…vo thoda kaam tha…"

"Apne Dad k pass jaa rahe ho singapore.."

"Tumhe…kese…pata.."

"Fully dressed…gelled hair,haathon mein baag..aur passport…tumhare Dad ka singapore mein business hain na aur humare pass koi case bhi nahi hain so that means.."

"You are really very smart.."

"Tell me something I don't know..".They shared a laugh…when he said,"Ab Nupur tum to jaanti ho na bahut mushkil se Dad ne busi ness setup kiya hain..but ab unhe meri zarurat hain …Mein hamesha k liye unke pass jaa raha hoon..tumhe to maaloom hain bahut mehnat se unhone chota sa business start kiya wahan per..lekin ab he need his son there so I am leaving India forever…and my job also…".She was utterly shock but soon compose herself and said to him,"Ye to achi baat hain..tum apne bete ka farz nibhaane jaa rahe ho..".He just pressed his lips showing a mild smile..which was clearing showing the pain…the pain to be parted away from each other..their eyes were speaking volumes..depicting their pain to each other but their mouth weren't accepting it and weren't saying anything…

After a moment Nupur said,"So tum aaj hi jaa rahe ho…".He replied with,"Hmm…".Nupur confessing to him,"Vese ek baat bolu I'll really gonnna miss you…".He too said,"Me too…".Feeling to speak all his heart out..but soon left..thinking may be..feeling are not mutual he said with his heavy heart,"Okay than Bye..!!!".Tears brimmed in her eyes but she controlled herself and said,"Bye…".He said,"Airport..chodne nahi aaogi…".She bluntly said ,"Nahi.."not even thinking how much it would have pained him.Accepting that she has nothing for him he left…she silently went behind him..seeing his retreating figure sitting in the taxi and was being droven away from her..the tears which she had hold for so long finally made their way out…she sat there in the road asking herself..to Mayank,"Kyu..chod ker jaa rahe ho Mayank mujhe…Please mat jaao…mujhe nahi acha lagta kuch bhi tumhare bina…".She felt a hand on her shoulder thinking Mayank came back she turned but soon her smile faded seeing Mrs.Bevsry their well-wisher she said consolling her,"Nupur dikra….beta to maan kyu nahi leti tu usse pyar kerti hain..bahut pyar kerti hain..ja beta apne pyar ko rok le..usse bata de..ki tu usse kitna pyar kerti hain..vo bhi tujhse bahut pyar kerta hain..my child..".Realizing the pain she is feeling is nothing but her love for him..a sweet smile on her face and confesses to herself,"Mein Mayank se pyaar kerti hoon..mein Mayank se pyaar kerti hoon..mein usse rokungi…".Saying to herslef..she ran ..ran and ran..taking a taxi..she asked the driver to took her to airport as fast as she could…

On the other side..Mayank was memorizing each and every moment he had spent with Nupur..how sometimes on solving the case she pretends to be his wife..her smile..her small small fights with him..due to which some times they solve the case..her daring nature…everything..a painfull smile appeared on her face and he said to himself,"Kaash mein tumhe keh pata…".He reached the airport and took his luggage out.On the other side Nupur was stuck in the jaam..she said impatiently to the driver,"Bhayiya thoda jaldi chlayiye..please..".He said to her,"Madam ji..bahut bada jam laga hua hain…hum kya ker sakte hain…".She was getting highly restless handling him his money she moved out of the taxi and herself ran towards the airport…on a way she met with Aslam bhai who one's was goon but now become a wise man because of them he promised her to drove her to Airport as fast he could…she sat on his bike and rode towards the airport.Mayank had already checked in and was waiting for the announcement of his flight..he was sitting in the waiting area glancing of their photograph..remembering their moments together the way sometimes she used to save him from criminals sometimes he used to save her..her eyes…in which he always get's drowned but controlled himself…his heart has always given him signal that he loves her but he always ignores it but today at the time of leaving he realizes those signals which his heart used to give is nothing but is love for Nupur..whenever she was in pain his heart pricks..he used to irritate her..because he lik to see her those expressions…now at the time of leaving the pain his heart is suffereing is the pain to leave someone behind to whom you love like anything...…Just than his fight announced..taking his heavy heart he moved …he turned again seeing if she is coming after him or not..but not seeing her his heart drowned and he moved towards his destination which is taking him far away from Nupur…the girl who has stolen his heart..to whom he love like anything…

She reached the airport and rush to the counter to enquire about flight..when she received this news,"Mam the flight is going to take off within few minutes..!!!".She was completely helpless…at that..moment she don't know what to do..and what not…when he noticed Commissioner there she reached upto him and literally begged him,"Sir…please Sir..kuch kijiye..Sir..agar flight nahi roki gayi to Mayank hamesha hamesha k liye mujhse door chala jaayega..I really love him Sir..Please..".Commissioner said,"Calm Down Nupur..mujhe to pehle se hi pata tha..I am happy that you realized..you don't worry…mein kuch kerta hoon..".A ray of hope enlighten on her face…but anything could happen..the flight took off…

He looked through the window..seeing may be he could see her glance..but to his bad luck..there were only clouds and clouds…he murmered to himself,"I love You Nupur…".After around an hour of the flight being take off and since he was in business class so very less people were there…he relaxed himself on his seat and closed his eyes…when suddenly he felt a moment beside him….he opened to see a Sardarji was sitting beside him…and was doing domething on his shoulder…he jerked and asked him,"Ye kya ker rahe aap.."

"Oji..Aap ko utha rahe the.."

"Mujhe…mein jaan sakta hoon kis khushi mein.."

"Oji..vo kya hain..na…yaha per aadhe se zaayeda log so..chuke hain…aur ji..mera na..baatein shaatein kerne ka mann ker raha tha..to mene socha ki mein aapse thodi-bahut gappe-shappe maar loon.."

"Dekhiye..jab aap aaye tab bhi mein so hi raha tha..aur please apni seat per jaaa ker beth jaayiye…mujhe nind aa rahi hain.."

"Oji..nind ko door kerna to mere..baayen haath ka kaam hain..aap bhi kitna boring sa kaam kerte ho flight mein sona..yo bhi koi kaam hove hain..aa ji aayiye ..gaape shappe kerte hain..pehle mein start kerta hoon ji.."

"Dekhiye mujhe koi shauk nahi nahi gappe maarne ka samjhe aap.."

"Oji shauk nahi hain to kya hua hum bana denge…"

"Dekhiye Sardar ji mujhe irritate mat kijiye…"

"Ji..aap na..bade hi…gusse type ko..ho mein to bas baatein hi kerna chahta tha…"

"But mujhe nahi kerni..maaf karo mujhe..".Scolding him he sat back on his seat and closed his eyes..his sleep again got disturb when the Sardarji.. poking his finger sometimes on his shoulder, on his thighs..and also on his neck..he was getting irritated and try to ignore..but more he ignores more his such deeds increases…at last he looses his control and said.

Dekhiye Sardar ji zaraa tameez se bethiye…aas paas ke logo ko problem ho rahi hain..

Oooji...Sirji...humare aas paas to aap hi hain...to kya aapko problem ho rahi hain…aji ho bhi rahi hain to thoda adjust ker lo..Ki farak penda hain...tussi bhi kya yaad rakhoge…

Dekhiye...

Dekhayie ji...hum to every ready hain dekhne k liye aap kya dikhana chahte ho ji...

Tum nahi sudhroge...

Oji…hum bigdae hi kab Jo sudher jaaye aap bhi...


Not waiting anymore second he grabbed the sardarji's neck sitting beside him and pressed his lips on his…sardarji was in huge shock with sudden kiss…when Mayank started removing his fake beared, moostache , pagdi…and finally it revealed he was not Sardarji but a girl and also A girl Named Nupur….he ruffled her hair….holding her head tightly..while deepening the kiss…his hands travelled to her waist pulling her more toward him, soon she lost herself in him and sealed herself with his name on her heart…

They broke the kiss after ages…breathing heaving they touched their forhead and both said in union,"I LOVE YOU…".It really felt bliss…he hugged her tightly to believe that she is real and she really loves him….breaking the hug she showers him with her slaps on his shoulder scolding him,"Tum .tum pehle nahi bol sakte the…".To which he retort,"Aur tum..ye kaam tum bhi to ker sakti thi…".She said,"Mayank mein ladki…hoon..tum bhi na..".He replied,"Tumhe koi shak tha kya apne ladki hone per..".She was getting irritated and continued with her work beating him..when he stops her saying,"Nupur log kya kahenge…".She said,"Kehne do…mujhe koi farak nahi padta…".He said,"Okay..".Holding her one hand he pulled her towards him through waist and again sealed her lips with him…

On reaching Singapore Mayank discloses everything to his parent about his and Nupur relation..he took over his father's business and preferred it ot run it from India as he thinks it will flourish their more…Nupur too joined him in his business..getting approval from both the families in a three months on relationship…they were all set to get married…It was nice and decent type of wedding took place where Mayank was being teased like hell…On their wedding night..Nupur saw that side of Mayank…which she had never imagined he could be even more reomantic than her SRK ..it was like a dream but you see after all he was Mayank..how can't he be romantic to the person he loves the most…Finally the two detectives who made the best team against crime finally made a beautifull couple , the most adorable and most romantic .

This was their love story…a little twisted…in a quiet different form.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all parts in one go. Very nice story, u remember me krisna-arjun, bt with a different n better ending. Thanks 4 d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god MayUr are safe... Waise Mayank ke hote huye Nupur ko kuch ho hi nahi sakti...

Mayank was leaving for Singapore and to forever :( aur ye log bye bhi Bol diya, I was like ab to Bol do plz...

Sare duniya ko pata hain ke they love each other immensely but ye dono hi realize nahi kar paya..

Wah!! Nupur ran to the airport to stop Mayank... Pahle to ladke bhagte the airport par ladkiyon ko rokne ke liye.. But ye MayUr hain, kuch hatke to hona hi hain...

Thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ye flight waale part se mujhe hadh kardi aapne ki yaad aa gayi
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting one with lovely ending
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was shooo chweet
Lvd it
Thnx for the pm
Really very good tp
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful story 😊
Luved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Read all parts in one go. Very nice story, u remember me krisna-arjun, bt with a different n better ending. Thanks 4 d pm.


Thanks...
Yeah..Even I liked Krishna Arjun...

Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Humayra

Thank god MayUr are safe... Waise Mayank ke hote huye Nupur ko kuch ho hi nahi sakti...


Mayank was leaving for Singapore and to forever :( aur ye log bye bhi Bol diya, I was like ab to Bol do plz...

Sare duniya ko pata hain ke they love each other immensely but ye dono hi realize nahi kar paya..

Wah!! Nupur ran to the airport to stop Mayank... Pahle to ladke bhagte the airport par ladkiyon ko rokne ke liye.. But ye MayUr hain, kuch hatke to hona hi hain...

Thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!


Mayur story to hat ker honi chahiye thi...

Thanks a lot

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