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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update

But what happened to nupur???

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
loved it lodsss...
Beautifuly written...
awww...
so dat evil woman wasn't Nupur's mom...
n hw cud dat man did dis to her own daughter...
arhhh...i hate dem..
ok..now does Mayank fear d same thing to happen wid Nupur
dats why he was rejecting d baby...
loved it lodsss
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: sry for being late...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part...and too emotional...
feeling bad for nupur...
and just hoping she and her baby will be fine...
update soon next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Samira ... i dnt knw wht to say

nupur's past was so painful ... i wonder is her father really a human??? Goddd ... how could he did all this to nupur when she is his daughter????

n he didnt regret of anything??? how could he???

samira...its beter for u that u ll update soon... either...

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Samz it was v.v.v.nice..but it was v.painful..no doubt u r a v.gud writer!
Pm me ur next update asap!

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Posted: 13 years ago
its Lovely...ahh Love Mayur sooo muchh
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank u very much for all ur support and liking this SS 🤗
Here is next part
Love Samira
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part Five A
Mayank he was standing other side of the road waiting the traffic light and he saw Nupur coming to the road not looking the light at all, he was about to call her name to shout not to get in the road, but she's already in and car come to her...NNUPURRR... And he run screaming her name asking the people near for help "Please call an ambulance"
They did then he gathered Nupur to his chest cried asking her to talk to him but no answer, the ambulance came and took to Nupur to the hospital, the emergency people took her told him to stay in the waiting area, he stood there blaming her situation for him self, "if last night i didn't said to her get rid of the baby, i don't want to be a father she wouldn't be in this",, he hit his head on the wall, "if anything happen to my Nupur i'll kill my self, i can't be in this world without her why didn't i told her the truth she might understood me why i didn't want to be a father, i do want to be a father but not know there's still things i need to sort it out first",
He's cursing him self in silence, i have to tell her family then he knew no one give damn about her welfare so he remember someone who will, Sumayah, he called Sumayah and let her know about Nupur, Summaya come very quick that Mayank thought has she got wings to fly or what? how did she come that quick this's London and this time is so too much traffic, but he got more things to worry about, "Mr Sharma what happened to my baby it she okay?"
"Sumayah
i hope everything is okey but she'lll be fine please have sit" Sumayah put her hands up asking her ALLAH not to let anything happend to her Nupur and crying which made Mayank more sad he made three people's life so miserable him self Sumayan and Nupur's he'll never forgive him self if anything to happend his Nupur or his baby, yeah his baby,

The doctor come out taking his mask of his face and said " Mr sharma calm down you have to be strong for your self and for your wife now she needs you the most", God that means she's okey, " doctor how's my wife a. and the baby?" "Mr Sharma they both safe mom and the baby, though it was early pregnancy and the mother lost a bit of blood, congorats Mr Sharma just be careful she seems that she's bit of stress so you have to take care of her, i know you will"
Mayank fall on his knees and covered his hands on his face and let the tears fall on their way,, Sumayah came and sit next to him on the floor kept her hands on his shoulders, and lied his head on her shoulders both feeling relieve and happy that their Nupur and the baby are ok, Mayank cried like a baby feeling so guilt that he put his Nupur in this place, and Sumayah also crying for happeness that Nupur is ok.

" Mayank son you have to be strong for Nupur you can' be that weak now, To day she faced a lot so please get to together your self and be there for her, go comfort her she needed you hold her let her cry and don't be weak son please" "i'll Sumayah thank you for being here with us" "it's my duty to be here whenever Nupur needs me, it's promise i took long back son, go..go to your Nupur"
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5 B
Mayank went to Nupur room she was lying on the bed her eyes were closed but long tears remained on her cheeks, he set the chair next to her bed took hold of her hands kissed them softly her hands "Nupur i'm sorry it's all my fault that you here today, i shouldn't said that i don't want to be a father, i was scared i was protecting you and our unborn baby you have believe me Nupur, i want to be a father but not now, there's lot of things we need to sort it out first before becoming parents, i don't want to you to hate me letter when you get to know that------ forget i said things, i know your not sleeping you don't want to face me i'll leave you for while to be your self okay, but you have to know one thing before accident i was on my way to told you that i'm ready whatever you decide to be there for you okay and i love you and alays will no matter what" with that he beck her lips cares her hair and left there. Mayank went outside to let Sumayah inside, Sumayah beck his forehead and said "May ALLAH bless you and my daughter" and went inside.
Nupur thinking why was Mayank scared to be a father, "and what did he meant he was protecting me? is something wrong with his business? or is he involve something illegal? i don't know that but i have to tell him i wasn't his fault i'm here, but it's my fault i wasn't looking the road i was thinking about him that he wasn't like my father and didn't want him to be like father didn't want my baby to bear what i've been tolerated since i was child, though i had Sumayah, but if i die or my baby would life Sumayah won't live that long, she won't be there for my son/daughter when i can't be there for them". Nupur was talking to her self not realising that Sumayah were standing next to her bed, she opened her eyes and saw that Sumayah was gazing her like she know what Nupur thoughts were, " How's my little girl doing" Sumayah said " "Sumayah you know i'm not little girl anymore so stop calling me little girl i'll be a mother within months, tough i could've lost my baby today in this horrible accident" tears slipped her eyes Sumayah wept them as always " sweetie don't worry Nups you have wonderful husband who loves you and i'm so happy that i'll be dadi" with tight hug.
"Sumayah you don't know Mayank didn't want be a father he told me to a abort my child" Nupur sobbed Sumayah held saying that Mayank can't do thinks like that he might get scared when you told you were pregnant all mans do honey"

"No Sumayah i don't know what made him said something like that but there should be a reason other wise my Mayank can't that cruel and awful person as he want to portray, but i'll find it out.. "Sumayah, i'm so angry with you Sumayah why did you never told me that my mom died, and this Seeta isn't my mother? why Sumayah i thought i was your daughter that you could told me everything?" "Nupur you have to know it wasn't my right to tell you those things, your dad would've fired me if he knew i told you those things and i could afford to be without you, tell me how will i live this world without not seeing your face not talking to you how tell me Nupur?

"I promised your mother that as long as i live i have to take care of you wether your 3 or 3o it doesn't make a difference, one night remember when Mayank's proposal come to you i wanted to tell you who you're whose you mom, but Zeeta sense something call me on your dad's study and told me if i want to see you live happy, if want to see you ever? i was shocked couldn't understand where she was going all those things and said yes, " Then don't ever tell Nupur about her mom or i'll deport you for the first flight that going to India and you'll never set eyes on Nupur is that understood Ms Sumayah?
"I nodded my head coz i couldn't talk then she said " the only thing they all tolerated me all those years is for your sake so don't cross your limit's Sumayah and get out of my sight, So tell me Nupur how can i told you those things? i had to wait when the truth come out for my sake i didn't want to loose you, i did it for my selfishness didn't look what will happen to you when you get to know the truth, this all my fault" Sumayah and Nupur sobbed they were crying holding each other but someone was watching them and crying with them, but couldn't bear to come in to the room, that was Mayank,

Nupur told Sumayah she won't going to that house ever, she will stay with Nupur and Mayank to be there with them as their mom and asked her permission, if she can call her Mom, Sumayah hugged her cried and cried said " "You can call me whatever you like but remember you had the bestest mom ever she did anything for you when she was a life and if she was life to day she would've do anything for you could've give you her life if it needed, but i'm your second mom and always will be there for you honey coz your also my sweet little girl" with smile " "your saying that little girl again i'm 23 know so please no more little girl " said Nupur who was forcing smile and trying to make Sumayah laugh but she succeeded coz Sumayah smiled and said " your always be my little girl but promise i won't say in front of the people deal? "Deal Ama" said Nupur they hugged again Nupur was wiping her eyes when her eyes met another bear Mayank's one he smiled weakly and did thumbs up saying she's the best Nupur smiled back but Mayank knew she was still angry with her coz her smile didn't met her eyes, but he promised him self that he'll make sure he had bring back her smiled which he and her evil dad snatched her,

After one hour Nupur was still in the bed of the Hospital sitting and was watching the Tv not watching her eyes were on the Tv but mind was somewhere else, Mayank can tell coz she nibbling her lips, Mayank in to the room set next to her in the bed and said " How your feeling now? " you can see i'm fine and don't ask me anything else, coz i don't want go through another session of your thoughts and orders, "Nupur you don't know what i was going to say?" "oh yeah i do very well. isn't that you going to say if you hadn't got pregnant we wouldn't be in this situation huh? oh by the way i'm sad that you haven't lost the baby? isn't that what you were going to say? please Mayank i don't want fight or argue with you just leave now so i can rest, and don't worry or get scared i'm happy to have my baby alone, here in London thousand ladies are single mother so i'll be one of them" and she couldn't hold anymore the sob she was trying to hold since Mayanks set next to her, she didn't want to say those things to him but she wanted him to open up for her tell her what he meant he was protecting her and the baby,

"Please Nupur i didn't want to say those things i want to tell you how sorry i'm about your Mom, the accident and mostly the things i said that i don't want our baby, you know how much i love you and care you," No No how can you dare to claim you love me when you don't want be the father of my baby" "please Nupur listen to me, remember you used to asked me why never talked about my parnts huh?


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Posted: 13 years ago
Me 1st...😎
🥳🥳
UN-resss...API...🤗

Awesome update API...
loved it lodsss...
Thanks to u dat nothing happen to Nupur n her baby...
i loved d way Mayank told everything in d hospital...
it was an emotional part...
n u wrote it Beautifully...
loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next parts...
continue soon...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps. sry for d delay...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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