Love At First Sight ! A 'SaJan' OneShot ...

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Hey Guys!

I am back.. I finally found time to write one OS and update my Gallery! I have been very busy but in the morning I got an idea and thought of penning it down... I hope you all like it😳..
This one is dedicated to my very good friends: Ekta, Vritika and Kritika
And and, also my bestie on this forum: AMBIKA JAIN!😆 Biks, Vrits, Krits and Ekta... I love you 4! 🤗 Hope you like it! (KAVE~ Kritika, Ambika, Vritika and Ekta!😆 If you were confused!😕)
Enjoy Reading❤️...
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Love,
Nivriti
P.S: Silent readers please hit the like tab... And commenters, please be true!😳

~~❤️Love At First Sight?!?❤️~~
*Gunjan's POV*

I was new to Excel College! And believe me or not! When I met him, I love him the very moment!❤️ It was love at first sight! He was there in the basketball court playing the most wonderful game and I, being a complete nerd was coming out of the library!😉 In a fraction of seconds, I was hit by a basket ball!😲 "Hey Chashmish, pass me the ball yaar!" he said' I fidgeted and touched my glasses! I then slowly threw the ball. "Thanks"😊 he said. "You are welcome!"😳 That was the first and the last conversation I had with him. Days started to fly away! Time is indeed very fast. I had made 5 wonderful friends😳; Vritika, Nivriti, Ekta, Ambika and Kritka😉. They were a great support for me. They tried very hard to get me out of my shell! but I being Gunjan Bhushan, never ever tried to come out.😆

"Come on yaar! You should tell him you love him!" said Ambika one fine day when we were sitting in the canteen; out of blue! I was confused😕. Did they know?🤔 "Who are you talking about Ambika?" I said. "Leave it Biks! It is of no use😡" said Nivriti with an annoyed face. "She is scared."

"But Nivi, we are her friends, we should give her confidence!" 😊said Ambika in a reply. I was seriously confused. Did they both know about it? "yeah right! Even if we do, she will under-estimate herself! It will just waste our time and energy Biks! Leave it!"😡 "But what are you guys talking about?"😕 I said still confused. I crossed my fingers under the table. "We know you love Samrat!" both said in unison😉. My mouth flung open in shock!😲 "No ways!" I replied. "And please don't talk about it ever! Especially when it is not possible!" 😭Just then Vritika, Kritika and Ekta entered. Both of them shut their mouth as if someone had glued their lips. I started to laugh at their reaction and both of them just gave me a stern smile! 😳

This was the first and the last time they ever talked about this topic.😊 But this was not a relief to me. They had started to make plans for making me and Samrat talk😆. And this was not possible in any lifetime😭. But I guess I did not know my best friends that much. They somehow convinced Samrat to come and talk to me and guess what happened.

"Hey, will you be my partner in the economics project?" he said.😊 I was in a state of shock😲. I was bloody sure my mouth had flung open in shock😆. I turned towards them and they gave me a big smile😃. I turned back to face Samrat. "Ummm' Okay!" I replied still in a daze😕. We completed the project in a week's time. We presented it with a bang!⭐️ We were appreciated for it a lot!👏

I started to like Samrat even more! Gosh! I am so stupid😳. Why would Samrat Shergill, the college hunk and dream of every girl's heart ever like me? 💔
Soon, graduation day came near! I bid my good-bye to all my friends. They had been a great support for me' From them I learnt life's most beautiful lesson!😳
'Friendship is indeed the most wonderful and magical creation of god! You can do nothing without it! When friends cry😭 ; you also feel like crying😭! And when they are happy😊 ; you also feel happy😊! And also in your bad times; when you are hurt or heart- broken 🥺; they are the ones who come and make you smile😊 and laugh with their mostly stupid but mind-cracking jokes 🤣 They are always happy when you are happy😊...'

Thanks to all of them!😊 Three Cheers to them!🥳 AND INFINITE SALUTES TO FRIENDSHIP!👏

Well, now it has been 5 years since I left Excel😭! I was still in touch with my 5 besties' I had moved into London to do my post-graduation. And here I am sitting in the comfiest office of my dad. Currently I am the M.D of Bhushan Industries. I and my friends make sure to meet! Ekta, Vritika and Kritika are in India but Ambika and Nivriti are here in London. And whenever I think about them I cry😭 but also blush!☺️

*Pov Ends*

In a few minutes the room to Gunjan's door flung open' and to her surprise she saw Ekta, Vritika and Kritika with Ambika 'n' Nivriti!😲

"Happy Birthday Gunjie!🥳" all cried in unison!

"Thank you so much Guys!" she replied. "Love you all loads!" 🤗

And they all celebrated her birthday' she wanted some time alone so Gunjan took her car and went to nearby park.

*Swap~ Other Side in a porch HOTEL*

I saw her, yesterday! On the T.V! Wow! She has grown very confident in these past 5 years!😲 The moment I saw her on her first day, I fell in love with her😳. I know I was being silly!🤪 Come on dude' Samrat Shergill, the boy of every girl's heart fell in love to the simplest and introvert girl in the college. Maybe in the World too!😉

I just wandered lonely in the crowds of London. Can you believe it? The cool dude of Excel is a lonely person?😭 The one who was the life of the college and every single person be it the principal, girls, basket ball players and teachers is life-less. Why won't he be?? First, his parents left him to face the whole world alone. Exposed to all it harsh words, then the girl he loved left him too!💔

I was lost in my thoughts when I could feel my heart beats going havoc😳. I could feel her around! And guess what, when I turned I saw her😲! The most beautiful girl present on this whole world smiling and looking around the park😳. I never realized I reached there. Hoping she was all alone I went towards her direction. Her hair was flowing in the breeze and she was very cutely putting them back on her ear every time they disturbed her😆. "Hey Chashmish!" I said.

*Gunjan's POV*

"Hey Chashmish"😊 I heard his voice. It was filled with pain. I was confused. Was it really him or my illusion? But after gathering some courage I turned and saw him. I replied to his greeting by saying "Hey Samrat!" My breath stopped when I saw him😳. He is still so cute and adorable☺️. A smile came across his face' "Hmm, Thank God you did not forget me!" he said. I was staring at him when he laughed nervously. What's wrong with him? "So, where is your husband & kids? I am sure your kids must have gone on you😉" he said, changing the topic with a grin on his face. I was heart-broken💔 but gathering all the courage I said, "I did not marry Samrat, I am still single! And what about you?" 😳

*Samrat's POV*

"I did not marry Samrat, I am still single! And what about you?" I was so happy'. Thanks dude, you are the greatest, but the last part hurt me! Anyways I smiled and replied to her "Even I did not marry Chashmish, I am still single! You came here alone?" I enquired along with. "Yes, but unfortunately my car broke down but it's okay I'll take a cab!" she replied. She is still that innocent Chashmish!

"I'll drop you back if you don't mind!" I asked eagerly waiting for a positive response. "Okay! Thanks!" she said while smiling.

Then we both went towards my car. I opened the passenger's seat for her and smiled. She sat down and I gently closed the door. I went towards the driver's seat and after fastening our seat-belts, I started our journey. I wanted to tell her so much, ask her so much but I could not find the courage to do so! After some time we reached her place. Obviously Gunjan had been directing me!

I got down and opened her door again. She was going away when I suddenly spoke out "I love you Chashmish!" she seemed to be shocked of my sudden confession, even I was. She got froze on her place.

*Gunjan's POV*

"I love you Chashmish!" he said. I was totally shocked. I froze on my place, tears began to flow out of my eyes and his 3 words were echoing in my ears. I was happy! Happy that my first love also reciprocates my feelings! "I love you since the day I saw you, I loved you even when I used to tease you.. I loved you even when we were project partners😳. I loved you even on the graduation day!" he said. His voice was broken😭. "I know you don't love me back and believe me I don't expect you to! Why will you? I am a playboy, Casanova. My girlfriends change every day! Why will you? But please don't leave me again, I will die.🥺" He said. I turned and kept my hand on his mouth. How can he even speak about it? "I love you too Samrat! From the day I saw you, from the day you called me Chashmish!😳" "Chashmish, will you come into my life and be my wife? Will you MARRY me?" he said kneeling down... I blushed, cried and nodded in a yes together. "Yes I will!" My heart did a little Chiggy-Wiggy!I was so happy!😃

We both hugged each other.🤗

*Writer's POV*

Now it has been 8 years since Samrat and Gunjan are married. They have two kids~ Aditi and Aditya. They love each other immensely! And they lived happily ever after!😊

"If you believe in love, you will get it for sure! Love is always eternal! Cherish each and every moment!😊"
~ Author; Nivriti!😆
Hope you guys liked my update!😳 I tried my best!😊
P.S: Kritika, Ambika, Vritika and Ekta! Hope you liked it! You are my best buddies!😊 And the FRIENDSHIP quote is for you... 😉
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Kritianya thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey nivi thanks for making me 1 of ur best buddie & a part of ur os
its like an unseen dream cum true
first i thought kritika in the os is me only but then i thought sum other as i had seen an id with the same name(kritika) in the fourm so i thought may be she is the 1
but ur another pm clears my all the doubts
1ce again thanks for ur this luv & making me the part of ur os
thanks 1ce again
luv
ur buddie
kritika
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omg!!!!!!!😲.(nw i m behaving like ekta😆😆)..i m seriously very surprised...didnt expect this at all...😳..awesome nivi...luvd it...🤗... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..specially u included all of us made it more special😳😳😳😳..thnx alot fr dedicating it to us😛...and ya KAVEN is an awesome name.luvd it...my dialogues were too gud...😉😉😉😉...
just amazing nivs...u didnt a brilliant job...just luv it sooo much..actually i m speechless bt managed to say this much😆😆😆...really sweet of u yaar...and the friendship quote ws so true and touching...and inspiring😳...once again a fab job..👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...luv u sooo much...😳😳
ur bestie always
biks😳😉😛😆😊⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wao nivi
u rock dear.
simply amazing nd superb os yar.
nd
kaven name is jus perfect.
u r a rockstar yar.
u alwayz amaze me dear.
rcking os dear.
u r an excellent writer.
u r my bestie dear.
plz plz do write mre os m sure,dat r also going to be rcking one!!!!!!!
Luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMGGG...!!!!!!
Nivs...🤗 🤗 🤗
Gosh! i love u so so so so sooo much...
Wow!! it is just so amazing, superb, mind-blowing, scintillating, marvellous, out-standing, Januable...i dont have words to say how much i loved it...!!
Gosh! u send to SaJan Dreamland...seems like a FAIRYTALE to me...
Gunjans reservation, her feelings & evrythng was defined so perfectly...
& Samrat's Feelings...Wow!! Amazing...
& then meeting after so many years & Feeling the same thing again & then thier confession...OMG OMG...i was doing Balle- Balle...
& the Chiggy-Wiggy line...LOL...mast thi...
really it was so so so so so superbbb...
& thnk u so much for dedicating it to me...i was shocked at 1st...😲 & then vry happy...😃 & then tears of happiness in my eyes...😭...
m sooo lucky to have a friend like u & i nver wanna loose u...m vryyy happy that i joined I-F & made such awesum frnds like U, Ambi, Akriti, Sanu, Ria, & many many more yaar...
i love u all so much...evn the frnds whum i meet daily & interact have nver done such a heart-touching thing for me wat u have done today...
its not just an OS for me, its a regard of our frndshp & the best gift a frnd can ever give me...
m so thnkful to u nivriti...i still cant blive my luck that i've got such amazing frnds like u people...
plzzz dont ever let go...i really wont be able to survive witout u guys...
coz u people have bcum an Integral & Inseperable part of my life...
sorry if i bored u with my words but it was vry imp for me to let u know how i feel & to pour my heart out...hope u rn't bored...
thnk u sooo much nivs...m really blessed to have a frnd like u...plzzz dont ever break this bond...its really vry precious to me...
& i love the word for our group...KAVEN...sounds perfect for us & we all r SGians so feels Gr8...
Love u all from the group KAVEN...& specially my dearies Nivs & Ambi...thnk u sooo much all for being my frnds...i feel the luckiest girl on planet earth...
Thnk u sooo much nivs for making me feel so special & wanted & for dedicating such a beautiful OS to me...
KAVEN & Nivs Roccckkk...!!!!!!
Love u lots & lots & lots...❤️
Ekta...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

omg!!!!!!!😲.(nw i m behaving like ekta😆😆)..i m seriously very surprised...didnt expect this at all...😳..awesome nivi...luvd it...🤗... 👏..specially u included all of us made it more special😳..thnx alot fr dedicating it to us😛...and ya KAVEN is an awesome name.luvd it...my dialogues were too gud...😉...

just amazing nivs...u didnt a brilliant job...just luv it sooo much..actually i m speechless bt managed to say this much😆😆😆...really sweet of u yaar...and the friendship quote ws so true and touching...and inspiring😳...once again a fab job..⭐️...luv u sooo much...😳😳
ur bestie always
biks⭐️

Hayyye😳!
Biki Meri Jaan!😳 Kya Comment Diya!!😉😭
Ek long reply ke liye ek hug dungi🤗
Thank you so much!!😳
And Sam par koi idiot bhi fida☺️ ho jayega! 😆😆
I showed you in the positive one warna tu phirse gussa ho jati!😡
Aur, ek aur baat! Woh jo quote thi FRIENDSHIP wali, koi quote -woute nahi thi!😡
Meini hi likhi thi!😳
Aur tera to koi jawab hi nahi!👏 Gunjan ko kitne ache se estimate👍🏼 kiya ki seedha shaadi ke liye maan gayi!😆🤣
But time difference was a lot! 5 years?😕
And thanks for you lovely comment sweeetiieee!!!!!🤗

And, this friendship quote is dedicated to KAVE only!!!😳😆
Thanks for accepting the name! 😊
Chal!
I will write more and more...
And will PM you for sure!😆
I can't afford to make you angry😡 again!
Heheheh!
Love, Nivriti!❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: karantakiar

Wao nivi
u rock dear.
simply amazing nd superb os yar.
nd
kaven name is jus perfect.
u r a rockstar yar.
u alwayz amaze me dear.
rcking os dear.
u r an excellent writer.
u r my bestie dear.
plz plz do write mre os m sure,dat r also going to be rcking one!!!!!!!
Luv u
vritika

Hayyye😳!
Vritika Meri Jaan!😳 Kya Comment Diya!!😉😭
Is reply ke liye ek hug dungi🤗
Thank you so much!!😳
I am glad that you liked it!
Your friendship and support makes me a brilliant writer!😭😳
I will surely write more and more!😊
And thanks for you lovely comment sweeetiieee!!!!!🤗

And, this friendship quote is dedicated to KAVE only!!!😳😆
Thanks for accepting the name! 😊

I will write more and more...
And will PM you for sure!😆
Love, Nivriti!❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

OMGGG...!!!!!!
Nivs...🤗 🤗 🤗
Gosh! i love u so so so so sooo much...
Wow!! it is just so amazing, superb, mind-blowing, scintillating, marvellous, out-standing, Januable...i dont have words to say how much i loved it...!!
Gosh! u send to SaJan Dreamland...seems like a FAIRYTALE to me...
Gunjans reservation, her feelings & evrythng was defined so perfectly...
& Samrat's Feelings...Wow!! Amazing...
& then meeting after so many years & Feeling the same thing again & then thier confession...OMG OMG...i was doing Balle- Balle...
& the Chiggy-Wiggy line...LOL...mast thi...
really it was so so so so so superbbb...
& thnk u so much for dedicating it to me...i was shocked at 1st...😲 & then vry happy...😃 & then tears of happiness in my eyes...😭...
m sooo lucky to have a friend like u & i nver wanna loose u...m vryyy happy that i joined I-F & made such awesum frnds like U, Ambi, Akriti, Sanu, Ria, & many many more yaar...
i love u all so much...evn the frnds whum i meet daily & interact have nver done such a heart-touching thing for me wat u have done today...
its not just an OS for me, its a regard of our frndshp & the best gift a frnd can ever give me...
m so thnkful to u nivriti...i still cant blive my luck that i've got such amazing frnds like u people...
plzzz dont ever let go...i really wont be able to survive witout u guys...
coz u people have bcum an Integral & Inseperable part of my life...
sorry if i bored u with my words but it was vry imp for me to let u know how i feel & to pour my heart out...hope u rn't bored...
thnk u sooo much nivs...m really blessed to have a frnd like u...plzzz dont ever break this bond...its really vry precious to me...
& i love the word for our group...KAVEN...sounds perfect for us & we all r SGians so feels Gr8...
Love u all from the group KAVEN...& specially my dearies Nivs & Ambi...thnk u sooo much all for being my frnds...i feel the luckiest girl on planet earth...
Thnk u sooo much nivs for making me feel so special & wanted & for dedicating such a beautiful OS to me...
KAVEN & Nivs Roccckkk...!!!!!!
Love u lots & lots & lots...❤️
Ekta...🤗


Aww Ekta!😳
Thanks a lot for your long comment dear!🤗
I was not at all bored reading it! In fact I am honored!😊
I am really glad that you liked it sweety! Your long comment filled me into tears!😭
Khushi ke aasu actually!😉
And I am really happy that I could actually touch your heart with my writing!😳
Friends like these are hard to find!😊
Thanks for accepting the name KAVEN and including me in your best-buddies list! 😊😭
I will never do the mistake of losing you out! That would be a blunder
Thanks Again!
Will try write more sooner! It takes a lot of time which I am short of!😆
Love, Nivriti❤️
P.S: Balle-Balle or Chiggy Wiggy?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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!!!!
~ Nivriti ❤️❤️❤️
Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dosti mein; No
and No ...
Yaad Rakhna!😉
Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago

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