A Romantic Rendezvous/OS corner/new OS p118 - Page 66

Originally posted by: .Divya.

Sorry to interrupt, but Shubs.. r u updating???

in a couple of days Divya.😊😊

Hey friends !!!! 😃😃
i am back with a new MN OS. this one is again for my darling Amu,
who is celebrating her birthday on 22 oct .
Happy Birthday Amu!!!🤗🤗
i hope you like my gift Amu. i finished typing out this OS in record 6 hours,just for you.😆 normally i take ages to type out.


this OS is pretty different from my usual work. I wrote this on Faru's request as she wanted one which included Mayank's Mom.
Faru i hope you too like it.😃😃

---------The Sharmas----

The Sun streamed golden rays through the sheer curtain hanging on the window. the rays fell on a couple entwined in each others arms on the bed.the girl'long tresses spread across the pillow, arm around her partner's neck, her head on his shoulder. the guy's one arm held her across her shoulders & other circled her waist.
the bright sun-light disturbed Nupur's sleep ,she opened her eyes & found herself in Mayank's arms. he held her close to himself through the night. Nupur looked at Mayank his face was peaceful in his sleep.she smiled to herself, since her marriage she had given up using the pillow.* who needed a pillow when she had her dear hubby to cuddle to* she thought & moved closer to Mayank dropping a peck on his forehead. At the touch of Nupur's lips on his forehead ,Mayank tightened his arms around her.
Nupur took a look at the clock & started to get up exclaiming " by God." but Mayank's arms around her prevented any movement & he muttered " kahan jaa rahi ho Nupur ?? mere paas raho na ,plz." " Mayank !!! chhodo mujhe aur tum bhi uth jao ab." said Nupur shaking Mayank. In answer Mayank pulled her closer & patted her back saying, " shhh Nupur , so jao yaar aaj sunday hai,plz aaj to hum aaram se uth sakte hain na. tumhe kya jaldi hai uthne kii?? " Mayank !!! hume tayyar hokar airport jaana hai,bhool gaye kya??? aaj Maa aane wali hain na." announced Nupur happily.
Mayank now opened his eyes & looked at his beloved wife,she was smiling widely & he could see happiness shining in her eyes." duniya ki tum pehli bahu hogi ,jo apni saas ke aane ki khabar se itni khush ho rahi hai."said Mayank smiling at her. " haan . Mayank aaj main sach mein bohot khush hoon ,kyonki Maa itne dino baad hamare paas aa rahi hain, mera bas chale to main unhein wapas jaane hi na doon."said Nupur . "Nupur bas 1-2 saal ki to baat hai na?? phir to Maa hamesha ke liye hamare paas aa jayengi , unki agle 1-2 saal mein promotion ho jaayegi aur phir wo company ke head office mein yani yahan shift ho jayengi." said Mayank patting Nupur's cheek. " waise socha jaaye to Maa ko kaam karne ki kya zaroorat hai Mayank?? hum dono itna to earn kar hi lete hai na ke Maa ka achhe se khayal rakh sakein??asked Nupur with a pout. Mayank felt overwhelmed with love looking at his wife. He pulled her closer & lightly kissed her pouting lips." Nupur ,sweet heart tumhe pata hai na,Maa kaam ab zaroorat ke liye nahi balki apni satisfaction ke liye kar rahi hain. itne saal unhone mehnat se kaam kiya aur ab jaaker unko achhi post aur unke interest ka kaam mila hai to unhein karne do.waise bhi achanak kaam baand kar dengi to karengi kya?? khali baithna to Maa ko bilkul pasand nahi na." said Mayank. Nupur sighed heavily ," haan,pata hai mujhe.tabhi to chup hoon. arre dekha tumne mujhe baaton mein uljha liya,hum late ho rahein hai Mayank uthho na ab." Mayank said "Nupur Maa ki flight subah 10 baaje hai Banglore se, abhi sirf 6.30 baje hai, mujhe pata hai tum bohot excited ho , par itni jaldi hum airport jaa kar kya karenge?? jhadoo lagayenge kya airport mein??? hmmm...??"
Mayank's question made Nupur laugh at herself, " lekin Mayank mujhe khana bhi to banana hai na." " Nupur hum airport se aate hue kahi kuch kha lenge theek hai?? phir tum sham ko aaramse dinner bana lena. now don't disturb Mr.& Mrs Sharma they are going to greet each other good morning".said Mayank smiling naughtily & pulling Nupur closer still.
Around 11.45 in the morning Mayank Nupur were in the arrival lounge waiting eagerly for Shilpa Sharma. with in 10 mins they saw her getting down from the escalator with her signature smile on her face. Nupur ran towards her & gave Shilpa a bear-hug which she returned with equal warmth.
Mayank followed more sedately & after hugging his mom he took charge of her luggage. On the way back after having lunch both Nupur & Shilpa kept chattering, laughing. Mayank could 'nt say anything as both the special ladies of his life were on a roll . He just smiled fondly at both of them . After they reached home Nupur took Shilpa to her room.Nupur unpacked Shilpa's bag as she freshened up. Shilpa sat on the lounger with a sigh , Mayank came in with 3 cups of steaming coffee. " Mayu ye bohot achha kiya tune" said Shilpa ," coffee ki to mujhe sakht zaroorat thi." Nupur turned after closing the wardrobe ," bas yahi ek kaam to Mayank achhe se karta hai Maa, baki sab to..." she trailed away smiling mischievously.
Mayank put down the tray & frowned at Nupur " kya matlab hai tumhara haan?? bolo na ab khamosh kyon ho gayi??" " haan to kehti hoon na, main tumse darti hoon kya?? " said Nupur sticking out her tongue & teasing him. Mayank ran towards Nupur ,who ran to hide behind Shilpa , with in a few moments both of them ran circles around Shilpa who stood laughing at her children. Mayank caught hold of Nupur's hand so he pulled her back & twisting it slightly said ," ab Maa ko tum sach-sach bataogi Nupur ke Mayank har kaam achhe se karta hai.bolo!!!" " achha ,achha bolti hoon , pehle mera haath to chhodo." said Nupur laughing. " uh ,uh main tumhari rag-rag se waqif hoon pehle bolo tab hi chhodunga." said Mayank.
" ok,ok Maa, Mayank har kaam achhe se karta hai, meri hamesha madad karta hai . bas theek hai?? " said Nupur looking back at Mayank . He nodded ,smiled & let go of Nupur's hand.
Nupur picked up a cup & handed it to Shilpa saying ," aur jaisa ki aap ne abhi abhi dekha mujh par husband hone ki dhauns bhi jamata hai."
They settled down to have coffee. " ab bhi tum dono bachchon ki tarah ladte ho,pata nahi hamara ghar ab tak sahi salamat kaise hai?? jis tarah tum dono ladate ho ab tak to is ghar ki chhat udd jaani chahiye thi." said Shilpa laughing at Mayank Nupur. " nahi Maa aaj to aap aayi hain na ,isliye hum bachche ban gaye ,warna hum to bade pyaar se rehte hain. hai na Nupur??" asked Mayank smiling naughtily & winking at Nupur who in turn blushed beetroot red at her husband's naughtiness.
that evening Nupur prepared all Shilpa's favorite dishes. Mayank was acting as her assisant, Shilpa was banished to the hall.
Mayank was looking at his Nupur with love & pride. he thanked God that both the special ladies in his life loved each other as much as they loved him. He went behind Nupur & hugged
her , his chin found its favorite place in the crook of Nupur's neck. Nupur was startled ," Mayank !!!! ye kya kar rahe ho???chhodo mujhe Maa aa gayi to kya sochengi??" " kuch nahi sochengi , bas ye dekh kar ki unka beta apni biwi se romance kar raha hai,wapas chali jaayengi. waise unhe dekhne do na ke hum pyaar bhi karte hai,sirf ladte nahi hain hamesha." said Mayank chuckling. Nupur blushed hard & tried getting out of Mayank's embrace. " chhodo na Mayank plz." she pleaded . " aise kaise chhod doon ,payment do tab hi chhodunga." said Mayank smiling wickedly. " kaisi payment ??" Nupur tried to be innocent but could not manage it,as she knew her Mayank inside out. *the easiest way was to do what Mayank wanted* thought Nupur ,turning around in his arms ,cupped Mayank's face in her palms & kissed his lips hard . As Mayank started to deepen the kiss Nupur moved back ,putting a finger on his lips ,said " ab bas Mayank ,baki ke liye thoda intezaar karna hoga." Mayank let out a huge sigh & touched forehead with Nupur,looking in her eyes ,he said, " jo hukum aap ka meri sarkar." then he dipped his head ,kissed Nupur's cheek & let her go.
Nupur & Shilpa sat talking to each other in Shilpa's room after dinner. '" ye Mayu kahan gaya Nupur??" asked Shilpa . " Maa ,wo uske colleague ka call aaya hai to uske saath phone par hai. bas aata hi hoga." " hmmm... to kaisi hai meri beti??" asked Shilpa" tum khush ho na beta??" patting Nupur on her cheek. Nupur put her head on Shilpa's shoulder saying ," haan Maa main bohot khush hoon,Mayank mera bohot dhyaan rakhta hai." Shilpa smiled at her daughter -in-law. she had always known that Nupur was the special one ,who would change her Mayu. and Nupur had changed Mayank for the better. she caressed Nupur's head.
" ek baat poochu Maa??" asked Nupur. " jis tarah aapne mujhe apna liya ,aap mujhse Mayank jitna hi pyaar karti hain,us tarah mere bauji ne Mayank ko kyon nahi apnaya??"
Shilpa's fingers stilled in Nupur's hair. " main hamesha sochti thi ke mere bauji ko insaan ki pehchaan hai. par wo hamare Mayank ko kyon pehchaan nahi paaye??wo kyon nahi samajh paaye ke Mayank se zyaada pyaar mujhe aur koi nahi kar sakta aur main sirf Mayank ke saath hi khush reh sakti hoon.Mayank to door,unhone shaadi ke baad mujhse bhi theek se baat nahi ki . aap jis tarah hamesha Mayank ke peeche chattan ki tarah khadi rahin ,mere bauji mere peeche nahi reh paaye. aisa kyon hua Maa??" asked Nupur in a sad voice.
Shilpa felt Nupur's pain ,she put her arms around Nupur trying to comfort her. Shilpa herself had gone to see Nupur's bauji asking him to forgive Mayank Nupur ,but he was unrelenting,declaring he did not want any thing to do with Nupur.
" dheeraj rakho Nupur beta " said Shilpa " ek na ek din wo zaroor samjh jaayenge. par achanak ye baat kyon chhedi tumne?? Mayu ne kuch kaha kya tumse??"
" nahi Maa, wo mujhse kabhi kuch nahi kehta is baare mein. kabhi-kabhi lagta hai ,wo shikayat karta to achha hota . par wo to mujhe samjhata hai ." said Nupur with a faint smile. " bas to phir tum kyon pareshan hoti ho beta?? " asked Shilpa," har cheez ka ek waqt hota hai, shayad abhi tumhare bauji ke samjhne ka waqt nahi aaya. par der-saver wo zaroor samajh jayenge ,theek hai. hum kitni bhi koshish kar lein beta ,hum kisi ki soch nahi badal sakte. ye to us insaan ko khud hi karna hota hai."
" main janati hoon Maa ,par kabhi-kabhi ye sochkar dil bohot udaas ho jaata hai." said Nupur looking up at Shilpa . she saw Shilpa's eyes too had gone wet along with her. " i am so sorry Maa" said Nupur hugging Shilpa," maine apne saath aapko bhi rula diya." " ek taraf Maa kehti ho aur doosri taraf sorry bol rahi ho??" said Shilpa with mock anger." tum apne dil ki baat apni Maa se nahi to kis ke saath share karogi?? pagli kahi ki."
Mayank stood just outside the door listening to the inter action between Shilpa & Nupur . he was extremely touched. but the atmosphere had become too serious. He cleared his throat as he entered the room. Both Shilpa & Nupur looked up at him.
" Maa aap aur Nupur tum !!! aap dono ne mere saare sapne dhool mein mila diye". said Mayank smacking his forehead . Shilpa & Nupur exchange puzzled looks.
" maine socha tha ,meri shaadi ke baad ,mujhe apne hi ghar mein ekta maiyya ke shows ki tarah roz naye naye saas -bahu episodes dekhne milenge. par aap dono to lagta hai Suraj Barjatya ki film se nikal kar aa rahi hain." said Mayank sighing dramatically. Shilpa burst out laughing, while Nupur laughed & picked up a cushion to bash Mayank.
Mayank raised his hands to save himself ,while he too joined in the ladies' laughter.
********************************************************* here it is then friends !!! waiting for all your precious comments.

i loved it...

lovely os!!

ek teer main do do shikar
wah wah wah- kya idea hai shubs ji hats of to u

lol lol
ammu khobardar tu is OS se bighal maat ja... tune use ye bol ki tujhe kaal ek aur OS chaiye..afte all its ur b.day yaar...LOL LOL LOL


btw Happy birth Day AMMAU...
Love u so much

edittt
Shubhu janu-sweetu u r d best yaar
ye sharmas were totally adorable
By GOD u started this OS with a bright romantic - totally mayuish..Hayeee-- who needed a pillow when she had her dear hubby to cuddle to*i just loved this line- how romantic ...

As usual loved mayur convo abt S.A ... Mayank and Nupur both were lucky that they got S.A in their life .. and S.A bhi lucky hai...:D :D :D
Finally S.A came to mayur house and they were super excited specially nups. i loved their tom& Jerry fight...LOL LOL.. its so cute na


loved nupue and S.A convo-- it was really very touching and the way S.A was handling nupur and showering her love was damn beautiful...
it was just fabulous update.. i alwaz wanted to see a strong bonding b/w mayur and S.A. and today i got it.. thank u so much hun
muahhh



Do write more


Again HAPPY BIRTH DAY AMMU
MAY ALLAH BLESS U

Shubu...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
U made an os for me in just 6 hrs..and that too something really sweet and adorable😳..
The subject of ur was something that I wanted to always watch in the show..some cute moments between Mayur and SA..my most fav trio..😳..and u did complete justice to it..
The first part was romantic...USP of Mayur..😍
Nupur's love and affection for SA is something that I admire so much..as Mayu said no other saas-bahu will be so rocking like them..they are lyk best frnds teaming up together for all fun thngs and Mayu is indeed lucky to have two such special women in his lyf..😊
Mayur are so unpredictable..one second they are mature and passionate..next second they turn out to be naughty and child like😳..thats something i luv abt them..
Nupur's convo with SA was really touching...Her bauji failed to notice what a gem of a person Mayu is..not many will be lucky enough to get someone lyk Mayu as his daamad yet he doesnt appreciate him..but having a mother-in-law lyk SA and specially,the most caring and loving hubby ,Mayu,makes up for all this..😳
The last part was hilarious..didnt knw Mayu knew so much abt the tv shows and its genre but,then living with two filmy women has its own effects..😆

Totally I luved the os..it had the right proportion of everything..and I luv u for writing it keeping apart ur laziness to type😆
🤗
Ammu

🥳RESSY

its such an amzing OS full of evrythng