WITH YOU ALWAYS -A SaJan SS {COMPLETED}

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Sonia

@SwaNia_1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: monaya4eva
Just started reading this story... Got the link from Mushkil Bada Yeh Pyaar Hai...will comment after reading the whole story.

Waiting to read your comment on our first attempt at writing.😳

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.AngryBird.

@.AngryBird.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1002

I just finished this ss & as i was expected , it's simple awesome.
love, trust, understanding= with you always is a pure sajan story.

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Swati

@SwaNia_2

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1003

Originally posted by: sky05
I just finished this ss & as i was expected , it's simple awesome.
love, trust, understanding= with you always is a pure sajan story.

Thank you so much dear, for liking our very first attempt at writing. 😊

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1004

Finally I have read this SS. Tum log apni harkaton se baaz nahi ao ge. Just Kidding.😆 Actually I love reading ur long updates and when it ends I am like It was too short. I really get engroseed in reading so much that I start imagining the scene.

Enough of me now..

I loved ur SS to the core. ❤️ It felt like watching MJHT again. Sajan after marriage. I wish agar MJHT chalta to this should be Sajan's story. Sajan's love was expressed so beautifully. Their trust...their Love...their understanding...their emotions all was wonderfully potrayed. I wish I could have read this SS before.

U will not imagine I just read it in almost 2-3 days. The charcters were the same as in MJHT.

Samrat's love,care,attention,possiveness,surprises all was well written.

Gunjan was the same. I loved her shyness,care,innocene and love.

Ur song Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jayee... reminded me of Monaya's confession.😍 The Valentines party and all the promises taken seemed as if really Sajan were promising each other to be together forever and ever.

The ending was superb it looked as if they are introducing a new serial. It eas the serial way I would say.😉 I enjoyed reading it. I hope MBYP goes the way Samrat thought it to be.

But promise me to pm every time u write a story. I will read its guranted. I don't want to miss reading any of ur stories.

Ur team rocks. MY 3 IDIOTS...

I hope u won't mind calling u the way Samarat did.

Love Fatima.

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1005

Originally posted by: HSFA
Finally I have read this SS. Tum log apni harkaton se baaz nahi ao ge. Just Kidding.😆 Actually I love reading ur long updates and when it ends I am like It was too short. I really get engroseed in reading so much that I start imagining the scene.
Enough of me now..

I loved ur SS to the core. ❤️ It felt like watching MJHT again. Sajan after marriage. I wish agar MJHT chalta to this should be Sajan's story. Sajan's love was expressed so beautifully. Their trust...their Love...their understanding...their emotions all was wonderfully potrayed. I wish I could have read this SS before.

U will not imagine I just read it in almost 2-3 days. The charcters were the same as in MJHT.

Samrat's love,care,attention,possiveness,surprises all was well written.

Gunjan was the same. I loved her shyness,care,innocene and love.

Ur song Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jayee... reminded me of Monaya's confession.😍 The Valentines party and all the promises taken seemed as if really Sajan were promising each other to be together forever and ever.

The ending was superb it looked as if they are introducing a new serial. It eas the serial way I would say.😉 I enjoyed reading it. I hope MBYP goes the way Samrat thought it to be.

But promise me to pm every time u write a story. I will read its guranted. I don't want to miss reading any of ur stories.

Ur team rocks. MY 3 IDIOTS...

I hope u won't mind calling u the way Samarat did.

Love Fatima.

Thanks FATiMA for your words of appreciation on our very first attempt at writing. It is a compliment when our readers say that they love reading the long updates V write for them..Feeling strange that...after almost 1 n half year... V R still discussing this story...Its only B'coz of readers love n appreciation... [Thanks Guyz ! for tolerating us😳]

Missing SaJan and the abrupt end of the most wonderful love story ever actually prompted us to write this update. I guess, most of us fans would have loved to have SaJan story on similar lines.😳.

V did try to maintain the character essence n their simplicity as it was in the show and V R overwhelmed that U found the character sketch maintained. Feeling really strange that,U read 😲 that,U read whole 26 parts+OS in almost 2/3 days...😲 Its really 1 of the Biggest compliment for us. Thanx😳

'Jab koi baat bigad jaaye...' happens to be one of our favorite songs as V feel that this song seems to be just written for SaJan, who now are none other than MoNaya. Together in times , good or bad... the support system of each other. this song suits them...n that was very situational on that sequence.

Taking over JOSEPH's story [MBYPH], the most difficult decision and informing our readers about the same in a different manner, and that is when this idea clicked.MBYPH is totally opposite n differnt concept from this... n V really enjoy to write that...

Yes, V'll definitely PM U when ever V update the other 2 FF's. And our friends can call us by any name...😆

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1006

edited

part 1-loved sajan romance and the way gunjan distracted a tensed samrat from worrying about how his mother will behave with his chashmish

part 2 -samrat pamper gunjan the way every girl would want to be pamper and then a cute nok-jhok regarding tyre and a teasing session and ofcourse jungle romance😳 wish we had a jungle scene for sajan just like mayur had but bit romantic 😳 also second nok-jhok

part 3 -gunjan was enthustatic regarding sam mom coming but she dindn't knew what is in store for her then sajan romance under the pretext of work 😳and the way samrat defend gunjan in front of his mom and mom getting angry but gunjan feeling guilty was too good

part 4-sam mom is such a typical rich mother who does not like her middle class bahu, sajan were sweet as always neil freindshipp with sajan is sweet loved samrat trust and concern for gunjan

wil edit later

Edited by additive_monaya - 13 years ago

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER

Thanks FATiMA for your words of appreciation on our very first attempt at writing. It is a compliment when our readers say that they love reading the long updates V write for them..Feeling strange that...after almost 1 n half year... V R still discussing this story...Its only B'coz of readers love n appreciation... [Thanks Guyz ! for tolerating us😳]

Missing SaJan and the abrupt end of the most wonderful love story ever actually prompted us to write this update. I guess, most of us fans would have loved to have SaJan story on similar lines.😳.

V did try to maintain the character essence n their simplicity as it was in the show and V R overwhelmed that U found the character sketch maintained. Feeling really strange that,U read 😲 that,U read whole 26 parts+OS in almost 2/3 days...😲 Its really 1 of the Biggest compliment for us. Thanx😳

'Jab koi baat bigad jaaye...' happens to be one of our favorite songs as V feel that this song seems to be just written for SaJan, who now are none other than MoNaya. Together in times , good or bad... the support system of each other. this song suits them...n that was very situational on that sequence.

Taking over JOSEPH's story [MBYPH], the most difficult decision and informing our readers about the same in a different manner, and that is when this idea clicked.MBYPH is totally opposite n differnt concept from this... n V really enjoy to write that...

Yes, V'll definitely PM U when ever V update the other 2 FF's. And our friends can call us by any name...😆

Aww. So Sweet of u to comment.

Will be waiting for the next updates of MBYPH and APHG.

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Swati

@SwaNia_2

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1008

Originally posted by: additive_monaya
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part 1-loved sajan romance and the way gunjan distracted a tensed samrat from worrying about how his mother will behave with his chashmish

part 2 -samrat pamper gunjan the way every girl would want to be pamper and then a cute nok-jhok regarding tyre and a teasing session and ofcourse jungle romance😳 wish we had a jungle scene for sajan just like mayur had but bit romantic 😳 also second nok-jhok

part 3 -gunjan was enthustatic regarding sam mom coming but she dindn't knew what is in store for her then sajan romance under the pretext of work 😳and the way samrat defend gunjan in front of his mom and mom getting angry but gunjan feeling guilty was too good

part 4-sam mom is such a typical rich mother who does not like her middle class bahu, sajan were sweet as always neil freindshipp with sajan is sweet loved samrat trust and concern for gunjan

wil edit later

Thank you Priyanka for your appreciating words for our very first attempt at writing.😊

SaJan... the perfect definition of pure romance❤️ and so, this SS has it in plenty. Gunjan has been a perfect soulmate for Samrat, able to read his silence. And when she sees he is disturbed, she tries, in her own sweet and innocent way to calm him. If there is anything, Samrat cannot bear, it is anyone speaking rudely with his Chashmish and he knows, his mother may not accept this middle class girl he so loves as the daughter-in-law of the Shergill's.

But then, with Gunjan around him, Samrat cannot restrain himself from pampering her, from flirting with her. 😳 The jungle scene was what most of us SaJanians would have loved to see. And so, the scene in our SS.

Gunjan has always yearned for a family, a mother whom she lost early on in life. And so she is excited. But when Mrs Shergill humiliates her, simple at heart Gunjan feels guilty for being the problem in Samrat's life. But Samrat will always defend his Chashmish.😳

SaJan were perfect in every way...they were perfect soulmates for each other and good friends to those around them and this reflects in the relationship they share with Neil. 😊

Waiting for the comments on the remaining parts.😊