ArTi OS *The Prize*-part 2 page 4

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

*wipin Khushi ke aansoon*😭😆
part 2.. utterly... cute!!!!!😳
luvd it!
do keep writin more👍🏼

Quote

AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

totally fabulous!

loved it!

awesome end!

do write more!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Aqsa

@awsumgirl

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Anshu I have just read both the parts...Your first attempt is awesome..

I loved the way you described Jun's feeling while Rati was making breakfast for him...So beautiful..

Keep writing.....

Quote

Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Anshu.. very nicely written.. Lovely OS

Quote

nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

just pray to God that this will happen one day

Quote

umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

yr dis ws very very perfect as it ws ur 1st attempt....u wrote like a professionalost
jus loved it....
awww u r such a gud writer where hav u been since all dese days.....
n plzzz do continue writing mayur ff/os as dey give us a smile on our faces dat we might not b able to c dem everyday bt we cn imagine dem n in dis way i m living from da day mjht ended most importantly mayur r no more so now i hav started to live in da fantasy world of mayur which is jus perfect.....😳

Quote

AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Hey sweetz...sorry i am so late in commenting...i had read both the parts..just did not get enough time to comment...this was a real lovely OS sweetz😃😃 Why dont you write more?? pleaseeeee😃😃

Quote

Ansha

@lovelycactus

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur
Hey sweetz...sorry i am so late in commenting...i had read both the parts..just did not get enough time to comment...this was a real lovely OS sweetz😃😃 Why dont you write more?? pleaseeeee😃😃

thanks for reading and commenting sweatheart....

i can never be better then you...😳