Miley Jab BenIa continued!!! BD vm on pg3

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hey guys,
just like how SajanRox11 and 2 of her frends started off this MJHT Sajan continued,
me and my frend ann (-Annie-) have decided 2 continue the love-story of BenIa from where it was left in S1. (a tad bit different as v r going 2 start their friendship-cum-love relationship from the "baby Princess- hey baby" track.)
i had already sent a conformation 2 SajanRox11 (4got her real name😆), & guess what?
SHE'S APPROVED R IDEA!!!!
so, now every Monday-Saturday at 9 (v'll try 2 do it), either me or ann will post an FF and either 1 of us (whoever posts the the FF/OS 1st) will update it the next day!

do read & leave in ur comments!!!!!



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hey guys,
WE NOW PRESENT U A BENJI-DIA FF---

BENJI-DIA FF


The boys have finally told the girls about Princess. At first, everyone is upset. But after a lot of patana, rijhana and everything else, they agree to help.
In the canteen-
Adhiraj: "So guys, ab Princess Ka kya karen?"
Nupur: "Kya karen ka kya matlab??? Khayal rakhege isska! Aur kya karenge!!"
Suhaani: "U'r right Nupur! Par, phir toh hume isska khayal turn-by-turn rakhna hoga na?"
Gunjan: "Haan yeh baat toh tumne sahi kaha hain!!"
Mayank: "Toh kya socha tum logo ne?"

Samrat: "I think kyunki meine aur Samrat ne isski responsibility pehle lee thi, toh.....philhaal ke liye tum sab mujhe aur Samrat ko rehne do!"

Gunjan, Nupur, Dia are glaring at him.😡

Mayank: "What? Meine aisa kya galat keh diya ki tum sab mujhe aise dekh rahe ho?"

SILENCE.

But their glaring continues.

Suhaani (breaking the silence): Ab.... Haan guys! Mayank bilkul theekh keh raha hain! Jab Princess in boys ko mili thi, tab usska khayal toh mayank aur bhai ne hi rakha tha. Toh abhi, kissi girl ko hi yeh mauka milna chahiye.

Samrat: haan! Toh ab kaun lega zimmedari? Umm... Nupur?

Nupur looks up, surprised.😲

Nupur: MEIN?????😲

Mayank (acting naughtily): Haan tum! Waise bhi tumhe bacho se kuch zyaada pyaar hain, Haina?😉

Nupur: Haan! P.... Pyaar toh hain! L...... Lekin i.. itna bhi nahi, ki... ki mein kissi anjaan si bachii KO palu!

Gunjan: ANJAAN?? Dii, abhi do ghante pehle hi toh tumne kaha tha ki aggar tum Princess ki Maa hoti toh tum usse yu aise akela chchod ke nahi jaati!😲

Adhiraj (almost shouting): GUYS! STOP FIGHTING!! WARNA BECHAARI PRINCESS DARR KE MAARE RONE LAG JAAYEGI!!

At the same tym, Princess actually starts to cry.😭

Suhaani: Dekha! Darra tum dono ne Princess ko.

Saying this, she picked her up & tried to pacify her.

After 2 mins, Princess Chup ho gayi aur Suhaani ke dupatte ke saath khelne lag gayi! Both Suhaani & Princess were enjoying a lot & Princess was laughing! Seeing P laugh, every1 smiled.

Samrat: Princess haste hue kitni cute lagti hain na Chashmish?😳

Gunjan: Haan!

Adhiraj breathed a sigh of relief & continued: Guys, I think Princess ko sambhalne ka kaam hume haan! DIA KO DENA CHAHIYE!

AS SOON AS DIA HEARD HER NAME, EVERY1 INCLUDING HER WS SHOCKED!!!😲

EVERY1 & DIA: KYA DIA/MEIN???????😲😲

Adhiraj: HAAN! TUM!!! KYUN? KOI PROBLEM HAIN?

Dia: Nahi... Aisa kuch nahi hain! Par Adhiraj, mein... Princess.... KAISE???

Adhiraj: Who Tumhaara headache hain! Humaara nahi!

In the evening:

The sun was setting down; the sand beneath her feet, the sound of the waves, the cool breath of fresh wind, all of these things were giving her the same hint: an unusual calmness and peace inside her among such chaos. Irritatingly, she thought, "Aaj... college main itna kuch ho gaya hain! Aur MEIN, DIA BHUSHAN, JO EXCEL COLLEGE KI DIVA HAIN, WOH AB..... AB EK BABY KO SAMBHALEGI!! WOH BHI DO DINO KE LIYE!!! EWW!!!!!🤢" The wind came and touched her bare arms due to which she shivered and wrapped her arms around herself; then she rubbed her hands together 4 some tym, blew in some hot air 4rm her mouth and again rubbed her arms so as 2 get some warmth. Suddenly, she felt something on her shoulder. Coming out of her trance, she saw dat a boy was covering her arms wid his jacket. She looked up at him and he smiled seeing her. She also smiled at him & he sat next 2 her. She turned her face to c d sunset while he gazed at her face. She felt dat dis guy was staring at her. Snapping her finger, she asked, "Kya hua Benji? Tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho?" Coming out of his gaze, he answered, "Dia, mein yeh soch raha hoon ki aaj college main itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad bhi, aur phir itna stress lene ke baad bhi, koi ladki itni beautiful kaise lag sakti hain?" Dia just blushed at d compliment and shied away, but on the mention of the baby, she got angry & said, "YOU KNOW WHAT BENJI! AGGAR USS ADHIRAJ NE APNA YEH "SO-CALLED" IDEA- ISS BABY KI RESPONSIBILITY LENA KA"😡

Benji [cutting her in between]: "AUR WOH BHI DO DINO KE LIYE!!"

Dia: "EXACTLY!! DO DIN! I MEAN LIKE SHEEEE!!! MEIN DO DINO KE LIYE EK BACHCHE KO SAMBHALOONGII? & U KNOW WHAT? USS TIME PE TOH MERA MANN TOH KAR RAHA THA KI KI (searching 4 a stone) USS ADHIRAJ KI TOH MEIN...... (Almost throwing it.)😡😡

Benji: (stopping her midway) AB...B. BAS DIA, BAS! U know, Tumhara GUSSA Adhiraj ke taraf bilkul jaayaz hain! Lekin tumhare iss GUSSE ke wajah se, hume 'EK AUR NUPUR BHUSHAN' NAHIIN CHAHIYE PLEASE!!"

At 1st, Dia got confused as 2 why Benji was taking Nupur's name. Then, it struck her dat, he was not taking Nupur's name, but he was mentioning Nupur's G-U-S-S-A. Dia got into her "Angry Young Dia" mode and said, "ACHCHA MR... BENJI!! TOH AAPKO YEH LAGTA HAIN KI MEIN NUPUR KI TARAH BEHAVE KARNE LAGI HOON?"😡

Benji: (nodding) HAAN! (Then realizing what he just said) NAA!!! Nahi!! B Bilkul bhi Nahi Dia!!"😆

Par issi pehle ki Benji was allowed 2 defend himself, Dia stood up and started 2 chase him and he started 2 run 4 his life. After sometime, Benji got tired of running so much; so, he went 2 a vendor who sold naariyal-paani (coconut water) and bought 2 of them. Meanwhile, Dia saw Benji and went up to him. She was just an inch away 4rom him, dat she slipped and she caught Benji's collar 4 support, because of which, even he lost his balance and they both fell on the ground, dono ek-doosre ke baaju main; her 1 hand on his collar and other around his back and his 1 arm around her waist and other arm on her back. They were lost in each other's eyes.😳😳


do read and comment if u like it!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesum update yaa
plz add me 2 ur pm list
n cot soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~~~~~~index~~~~~~
part 1-pg 1
part 2-pg 2
part 3-pg 2
BeNia VM-pg 3
part 4-pg
Edited by Tania92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update😊But i felt it was confusing at the start.then gradually understood it.Benji-Dia part was good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG ahaha kamal hai tu ne start kar dia ...wow!!
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madam annie...
aaj teri baari hain!!!!😈😉
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Originally posted by: Tania92

madam annie...

aaj teri baari hain!!!!😈😉

Aaha mera kya hoga janabe aali 😆
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srry guys! kal ka update finally aaj de pa rahi hu!

precap-

At 1st, Dia got confused as 2 why Benji was taking Nupur's name. Then, it struck her dat, he was not taking Nupur's name, but he was mentioning Nupur's G-U-S-S-A. Dia got into her "Angry Young Dia" mode and said, "ACHCHA MR... BENJI!! TOH AAPKO YEH LAGTA HAIN KI MEIN NUPUR KI TARAH BEHAVE KARNE LAGI HOON?"😡

Benji: (nodding) HAAN! (Then realizing what he just said) NAA!!! Nahi!! B Bilkul bhi Nahi Dia!!"😆

Par issi pehle ki Benji was allowed 2 defend himself, Dia stood up and started 2 chase him and he started 2 run 4 his life. After sometime, Benji got tired of running so much; so, he went 2 a vendor who sold naariyal-paani (coconut water) and bought 2 of them. Meanwhile, Dia saw Benji and went up to him. She was just an inch away 4rom him, dat she slipped and she caught Benji's collar 4 support, because of which, even he lost his balance and they both fell on the ground, dono ek-doosre ke baaju main; her 1 hand on his collar and other around his back and his 1 arm around her waist and other arm on her back. They were lost in each other's eyes.😳😳


part 2-

When they were busy staring into each other's eyes, a soft drizzle starting pouring on the beach, forcing everyone to take shelter. Everyone else but them. If anyone had seen them, it would have looked as if two lost souls in search for their identity, had finally found each other.

The rains were pouring down on them; unaware of this, they kept staring at each other- as if bound by some heavenly bond. Benji was looking at her; she, time-to-time, at first would look at him & then shy away. Then, without a second thought, Benji leaning towards her, Dia became nervous and immediately closed her eyes. Their lips were just inches away from each other when----


"WHO LET THE DOGS OUT

BOW BOW WOW WOW

WHO LET THE DOGS OUT

BOW BOW WOW WOW"

Benji's phone started ringing. But the sound got them out of their trance and soon, Benji let go of Dia and made her stand up. Highly irritated, he just answered the call. But b4 he cd say smthg, sm1 else told him a lot.

Nupur: MR. BENJI!!! KYA MEIN JAAN SAKTI HU KI MERI BEHEN DIA KAHAN HAIN???

Benji (covering the mobile wid his hand): Nupur? Yaar! Yeh Nupur ki bachi toh meri jaan lekar hi rahegi! (now, speaking to her) Ab''b''b nupur? Tumne mujhe kyun call kiya?

Nupur: Kyunki mein jaanta hu ki meri behen tumhaare saath hi hain!

Benji: Achcha! Aur kya tum mujhe prove kar sakti ho, pl!

Nupur: Sabse pehle toh'' Gunjan, Samrat, Suhaani aur Adhiraj movie ke liye gaye hain; secondly'' Mayank apne ghar pe hain; thirdly'' uday bhaiya as usual kitchen main hain. Toh kya bacha--- tum dia ke saath ho. TOH PLS, MUJHPAR MEHERBAANI KARO AUR MERI BEHEN KO WAPAS SAHI-SALAMAT GHAR LE AAO! SAMJHE!

(just imagine Nupur sayg this in her trademark style!)

Meanwhile, Benji quietly reduced the volume of his phone to 0, so that he could not hear N's voice; he grabbed Dia's hand and ran. They reached his car; he hurriedly put Dia inside the car, sat on the driver's seat & drove at full speed.


guys, i knw its a short update. but, 2day, i'll again try to update

a big version. till then, pl bear wid me!!

do leave in ur comments!

tania

Edited by Tania92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy nice updt sweety..bt very short..neways it was a nice updt wid swt romance..thanks 4 d pm..cont soon😊

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