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Natasha

@OddiYulle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Lovely Update Mehak .. It was simply too godd !!I love it too Much! Update soon and Thanks For the Pm

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Mehak.. all I can say is this is what that should be shown in the serial... Beautifully written

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neetu

@mayurg2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

mehek that was really awesome
just caught up with all the updates and that was really fabulous and i had tears in my eyes when i was reading the first parts.....
beautifully written
i wish i could see some scenes like this after mayur re-union

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ardhana

@ardhana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

wow wonderful loved mayanks decision do updtae soon

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

wow!

dosti n all.....it seems very interesting!

awesome update!

plz cont soon!!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

ahmazing the way you write them...!
Its so realistic...!
i can't wait to read the next part..!
plz do continue soon
and do PM me when you update...!
:-)

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

where is the udate dear?????

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

so thank u all again...🤗
and as my university has started again, so i will upadte once a day...😊

PART 7:

Mayank opened his eyes in the morning bcz of the constant sunshine falling on him

N..good morning!!...

Nuour said this with the most extreme jubilence she could gather in her vioce and smiled fully,

Mayank was somewhat surprised to see her like this...last night she was different and suddenly in the morning it was all different..

N..kia hua?..aisaey kia dekh rahe ho?

M..kuch nahi..

He was staring at her..

N..tumhare kapre mai ne nikal diye hain aur jaldi tyaar ho jo..main breakfast bana deti hon...chalo utho jadi karo...

It was not that nupur was diong something strange but such sudden transformation!...she wasnt speaking a word till last night and now ...HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE1...

Mayank felt something suspicious...

nupur was standing in the kitchen making breakfast and talking to herself..

N..main maynk k samne bilkul normal rahon gi...bilkul normal..usey bilkul bhi ehsaas nahi hone don gi k mujhe apna past yaad aat hai, ku k main jitna chup rahon gi wo utna mujhe merey past k bare main poche ga, aur phir mian past k bare min baat kar k kuch b problem create nahi karna chahti..kuch nahi...bus ab jo bhi dard aur problem hai wo bus merey ander hi rahe gi..

Mayank was in the room thinking..

M..aisa tu possible nahi hai k ik raat mian nupur apna sara turmiol bhol jaye, aur ik dum aisey normal ho jaye..ya tu such main nai shurwat chati hai ya phir jan bhoj k chupana chati hai...

Both were having break fast and this time NUPUR WAS CONSTANTLY SPEAKING..

mayank felt very odd, he had never wanted nupur to stay quiet, it was not that he was irritated but it was that he could sense SUPERFIACIALITY!..

Mayank left and nupur thought she had succeded in being normal but mayank on the other hand was not at all convinced with her acting!..

this time she left loop holes..

Today he didnt called nupur for lunch, he wanted to test that if nupur really had turned normal then she would call maynk and ask that why he didnt called, but nupur at home was again lost into the thoughts of
her past, with mayank, then with dhruv than her present with mayank, everything was so messd up, she never thought that life would bring her to a stage at which she had to hide sororws from mayank.

and all of these things definetely didnt reminded her LUNCH and CALLING MAYANK!!..

In the evening when she heard the car horn she immedeietely washed her face just as a precautionary measure that no traces of he teara were left,

but she forgot that mayank DIDNT NEED TO SEE HER TEARS to know she was crying..

HE COULD SENSE HER SADNESS!!.

Mayank entered and nupur was again all chirpy..

N..hii...kaisa raha din...

Mayank looked straight into her eyes, but she truned her face away, she talked a lot but she was not looking at mayank..SHE WAS AVIODING EYE-CONTACT...WHICH MEANT SHE WAS ACTING..

mayank didnt say anything, they had the dinner and then nupur went to sleep but mayank was still awake, he was completing some college work when he heard...

N..mujhe chor do plz...

He turned and it was nupur talking in her sleep.He went and sat by her side..

N..plz...plz..mujhe apne ghr jana hai..plz...

Mayank got tensed he wanted to wake her up but as he placed his hand on her arm, she jerked it..

N..nahi merey pas mat ana..tum jaisa kaho gey main waisa hi karon gi...

Mayank this time called her name ..

M..nupur...

N..plz dhruv mujhe mat maro..bht dard hota hai..plz...

she was crying and was all wet in wsweat,..Mayank was shocked out of his wits...

this time he shook her vigoursily....

M..nupur utho....

She sat up with a jerk..

N..plz pas mat ana..tum jaisa kaho gey waisa hi karo gi ..plz..

Mayank shook her..

M..nupur main hoon, maynak...

She somewhat clamed after seeing him, her pulse went down..

M..main hon, kia hua?...

Nupur realised that she was dreaming, but she didnt wanted to disclose anything..

M..ye pani piyo...

she drank it in one go, and wiped off all her tears

M..kia dekh rahi thi?

Nupur was very scared, she didnt wanted to take dhruv's name in front of mayank again.

N..kuch nahi wo main aj ik action movie dekh rahi thi dophar ko tuwaisa koi khuwab tha..mujhe koi mar raha tha...

she started laughing..and maynk was couldnt belive his eeys..

N..stupid khuwab tha..choro...tum so jao..main thek hon..so jao nahi tu subha late ho jao gey...main thek hon...infact main tu..

M..STOP IT NUPUR!

He almost souted...

M..tum pagal ho gai ho ya mujhe pagal samjhti ho...dar se kanp rahi thi aur keh rahi ho k thek ho!..

N..nahi mayank main

M..just stop it!..

he was saying it all in very loud vioce..

Nupu's tears started flowing again, she had her head down and she was tightly holding the bedsheet...mayank on seeing this forgot his anger again..

He moved a bit close to her and cupped her face in his hands..

M..main itna bura hon nupur k tumhe mujhe jhoot bolna pare?

This made nupur even close her eyes...she shook her head in denial...

Mayank strightened her face..and then he wiped all tears..

M..tu ku jhoot bol rahi ho..ku subha se aisey acting kar rahi ho...thora sa bhi bahrosa nai mujhe pe...

N..mujhe dar lgata hai mayank, tum mujhe chor k...

M..nupur tumhari smile ki kasam khai hai main, ne, us pe bhrosa nai hai..

N..rum pe bharosa hai mayank, kismat pe nahi hai....

M..merey pas wapis a gai ho tu bhi kismat pe bharosa nahi hai..?

This made her tears stop, mayank again wiped hre tears and this time he kissed both her eyes......

Nupur could feel the carres of his love after so long, the same gentle touch of lips which had so much love..

M..nupur hamara rishta dosti se shoro hua tha na...main phir se tumse dosti karna chata hon, tum apne pati se u batien chupa sakti on per dsot se tu kehne main koi problem nai hai na?

Nupur was jsut staring at him..SUCH UNCONDITIOANL LOVE!!..

M..so what say..FRIENDS AGAN?

He put forward his hand and nupur didnt knew how to react, she just held his hand and moved frowrd to hug him...

FINALLY A WHOLE NEW BEGGINING HAD STARTED !!...

do comment...ur lovely comments COMPEL me to write better...😳

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago