Me and My shell- MJHT OS. Epilogue on page 27 - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
Res!
Okay i read the whole update n it was awesome!
Nupur is fine tht was a relief! so she feels sorry finally going thru the old things n realising her fault.😊
but i simply cant ignore the bad feeling, is something wrong going to happen....tht too with gunjan?😲 m scared now😕
nyways Luvd it! u r an amazing writer
Do cont soon!:)
Luv
ZJ
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MyInspirationz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was a rocking update..
sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx 4 giving a glimpse of mayur............................hope nothing wrong happens............
ardhana thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
rocking update so nupur finally realises
sorry for replying was busy with college work
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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing, supurb, fantastic update loved it completely do continue really soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow what a wonderful update yar sam's motivation his caring and loving nature filled color in gun's life i am really happy reading this update now really can't wait for sam's confession to gun do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update
can't wait for the next one now
do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy amyy!!
super duper updatee!!
cont sooon!
Hope samrat says it all cant see gunjans heart break twice...
Anyway.. cant givee a longgg comment as exams are nearing..
Just continue soonnn!!
Love youu..
--Manjari
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello everyone.

I am updating again. Once again im updating twice on the same day...😛 yepp!! im good at this.

Well, I would like to thank all of you for supporting me, liking my updates, and posting such beautiful and generous comments. Luv ya all for that...

I'm getting a little senti today, you'll know why when you read the update. anyway, leave it.
I'll just skip my blabbering and let you people read...

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Samrat asked her to come home for dinner the day they returned. Gunjan was on cloud 9 and she was sure that Samrat would propose her. She looked forward for the evening and got ready on time. She looked in the mirror some 100 times before making sure she looked perfect. Sharp at 8pm she went to Samrat's home and rang the bell.

Samrat opened the door and stared at her.

"Oh my god..dont do this to me!" said Samrat.

"What did I do?" said Gunjan surprised.

"You look ravishing..what if I get heart attack? I am just a psychiatrist not a cardiologist" said Samrat again with his flirting smile.

Gunjan blushed and felt shy.

Samrat took her hand and made her sit on the sofa. Samrat sat on the small chair beside her still holding her hand.

Samrat stared at her for a minute and said "actually I have two things to ask from you Gunjan"

"And what are those?" said Gunjan, her hands going numb. Her heart started beating so fast that she felt it will break the cage of her body and come out.

Samrat looked in her eyes, feeling the depth of emotions, and she felt a little awkward. She lowered her eyes as her cheeks turned into crimson red.

Samrat took a deep breath.

"Gunjan I want you to forgive Nupsie.. I mean Nupur" said Samrat.

Gunjan didn't understand what was Samrat talking about for a second. She was shocked to hear Nupur's name from him.

"Yes, your friend Nupur, Gunjan" said Samrat looking at her confused face.

Gunjan took back her hand which Samrat was holding with a jerk and stared at him with thousand questions in her mind. Samrat looked away from her and stared behind her. Gunjan didn't understand where he was looking and turned to the direction where he was looking. Nupur was standing there behind her.

Gunjan was shocked looking at her after all these years.

"Gunjan..hi..how are you?…." said Nupur slowly.

Gunjan looked back at Samrat.. "So you knew me from before hand..and all this was one big drama?" said Gunjan with anger. Her eyes tried to hold back tears.

"Look Gunjan..yes I knew you ..but all this is not a drama..don't get me wrong..i.." Samrat started with hesitation when Gunjan cut him in mid-sentence and left his home in rage, without even looking back once.

"Gunjan, Just hear me once.. please.. talk to me once.." he shouted running after her.

Gunjan didn't reply. She was not in a state to listen, understand, interprete anything. She was too shocked to know that Samrat was sent by Nupur. She felt deceived.


Samrat followed her till her house but she didn't let him in. She closed the doors and went to her bedroom weeping. He tried calling her mobile, but she kept it off. He tried knocking her door many times but she didn't budge from her bedroom.


Nupur was sobbing in mayank's arms when he came back to his house. She looked at him with hope, but he shook his head negatively in reply.


"I shouldn't have come here. I ruined her life. I shouldn't have come here…" Nupur murmured hysterically.


"Nupur.. Nupur.." Samrat shook her holding her shoulders, "You didn't do anything. And don't keep saying that. Gunjan will be fine."


"How will she be fine? She didn't even talk to you also.." Nupur said through her tears. Samrat looked at mayank, then at Nupur, and he came near her, facing her.


"Nupur, relax.." samrat cupped her face, "She'll talk to me, and you too. I tried to reach her. But she needs time. She had locked ocean of emotions inside her, and you came back in her life like a storm. That's why the ocean is disturbed. We should wait on the shore now. We'll reach her when she calms down. Okay?" Samrat consoled Nupur like a mother consoles child.


"Okay." Nupur replied, slightly convinced, "But how long we'll have to wait? And how will we reach her?"


Samrat stared at Nupur blankly. He himself didn't know the answer. He had convinced Nupur, but he was unable to console himself. This was not a usual case he would face in his clinic. This involved his heart, his mind. And that was affecting his brain.


"Samrat..? you didn't answer my question" Nupur's voice brought him back from his trail of thoughts.


"Sleep now Nupur. You must be tired. Goodnight." Samrat replied making sure his voice doesn't crack. But Mayank noticed his moist eyes. After Nupur went to sleep, He came to samrat.


"what are you going to do about Gunjan.?" Asked mayank.


"I don't have any idea. I'm damn confused, Mayank."Samrat broke suddenly. "I love her, and she thinks I cheated him. For the first time in my life I don't know what to do."


Mayank held him tight. Samrat had done so much for gunjan, his wife's best friend. Now it was time for him to do something for his own best friend.

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So guys,
As you all might've figured out, this FF is going to end now.
Ccomments and critisism are welcome...
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Posted: 15 years ago
so samrat was send by nupur...hope gunjan is alrite.................pls dont give it a sad ending dear......

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