OS on mayur-nupur came back

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi guys,

this my first OS on mayur,nupur came back but there is a change in her character

she has lost her memory as after the accident,some people took her in their house and they didn't saw the rest(mayank,samrat and gunjan)as they felt that nupur wanted more attention as she was badly injured than others,so they only took nupur and they treated her,they were rich people,after nupur realized where she is and when she asked them,then they told her the story why they took her with them,when nupur asked who she is and where she is?they told her the whole story and then they took her back to the accident spot but there was no one

now,it's after 3 years,nupur came to excel collage to get the admission of the boy who lives in that family and nupur is also living there,now nupur's name is khanak and she wear's jeans and top,when she enters excel collage,she rememberd something in her mind but was not clear,

she enters the principals office or the trusty's office and that is samrat,but samrat has left because of a plan for gunjan,so nupur went back and she went to a teacher's room,when she was going,mayank was coming from front and then....

nupur coming...mayank coming...nupur coming...mayank coming...and then....when mayank was close to her,she slipped and mayank hold her in his arms and he see her and shocked

MAYANK-nupur tum...(ye nupur kaise ho sakti hai...he thinks)

NUPUR(KHANAK)-sorry...wo mera pair phisal gaya tha

mayank still thinking.....and nupur says thanks and went and when mayank realizes that she was nuypur only...then he steps back and call her....NUPUR....NUPUR....

but,as she has lost her memory so she didn't knew who is nupur and she didn't listened and went because there was no principal or samrat in the collage

next day......nupur again comes in the collage and mayank was soooooo excited and he cryed the whole night and now his eyes r full red and then....nupur enters and she go to samrat's office and samrat look at her and say....NUPUR....TUM...TUM ZINDA HO....and he hug her but she remove samrat and says,i am not nupur,my name is khanak,khanak singh

SAMRAT-aesa kaise ho sakta hai...tum nupur ho...khanak nahi

NUPUR(KHANAK)-dekhie mai aapse pehle bhi keh chuki hoon ke mera naam khanak singh hai....nupur nahi,mai yahaan apne bhai ke saath uska admission karane aai hoon...

SAMRAT-acha to shayad mujhe galat faimi ho gayi hogi.....i am SORRY

NUPUR(KHANAK)-it's OK

then nupur go and mayank see her and shout,NUPUR......NUPUR...

then he go to her and

MAYANK-nupur tum...tum zinda ho...(he hug her)

NUPUR(KHANAK)-(she remove her)dekhie mai nupur nahi hoon aur mai ye aakhri baar keh rahi hoon,pata nahi sab mujhe nupur kyun samajh rahe hain,aakhir ye nupur hai kaun?

and then she goes from there and mayank follow her and in which house she go,he see and the next day go to that house and ask them who she is?the family tells everything about her and mayank thank them for taking care of nupur and he say them that 'MAI NUPUR KI YADDAASH WAPAS LAUNGA'

wo mujhe kabhi nahi bhool sakti,use yaad karna hi hoga,he tells samrat and gunjan about that and then gunjan say sorry to samrat and they all patch up and now they r planning to bring back nupur's memory

and now all izz well now becaus ethey all r together and the fun is back and nupur is also back and the old gang(benji,dia,uday)they also came back after their education from LONDON

and i hope u all liked my thinking😉

Edited by blossom1234 - 15 years ago

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Shivani

@SHINKI

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice one

aur likho

it will be gr8

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Aysha Saxena

@aysha_mayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome OS..............I loved it😳

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neetu

@mayurg2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice one
i really liked it
infact loved it
do write more and continue this one

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 15 years ago

great 1 write more thnx

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice one dear.....i think u can continue this.............

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-RS-

@-RS-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

really good.instead of khanak,we can have her name as khushi.this would be nice as she will bring happiness to everyone.moreover khanak name is taken by other serial lead on star one.

it would be more nice if nupur was not revealed anything abt her past by the family who takes care of hr.so that audience may have suspense whether she is nupur or somebody else.later sayank and gunjan discovers the truth and what had happened.

her dressing style-jeans with kurtas of indian type would look great.she stays in london for 3 years along with the family .family head works as a dance/art director to lot of bollywood shows in London. Nupur has always been attracted to dance/dramas/bollywood.... so obviously Nupur aka khushi .. and within two years she becomes theatre/dramatics/ dance/art director in london. (similar to tammana mam).she herself participating in mny dance shows and drama competitions

Now comes the most exciting part... how she comes to Mumbai....

There is a national level college dance/drama competition...Excel college is looking for a talented dance/art director for their show... so nupur aka khuhi is approached and

story of mayur begins once again

Edited by shantip91 - 15 years ago

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shantip91
really good.instead of khanak,we can have her name as khushi.this would be nice as she will bring happiness to everyone.moreover khanak name is taken by other serial lead on star one.
it would be more nice if nupur was not revealed anything abt her past by the family who takes care of hr.so that audience may have suspense whether she is nupur or somebody else.later sayank and gunjan discovers the truth and what had happened.

her dressing style-jeans with kurtas of indian type would look great.she stays in london for 3 years along with the family .family head works as a dance/art director to lot of bollywood shows in London. Nupur has always been attracted to dance/dramas/bollywood.... so obviously Nupur aka khushi .. and within two years she becomes theatre/dramatics/ dance/art director in london. (similar to tammana mam).she herself participating in mny dance shows and drama competitions

Now comes the most exciting part... how she comes to Mumbai....

There is a national level college dance/drama competition...Excel college is looking for a talented dance/art director for their show... so nupur aka khuhi is approached and

story of mayur begins once again

nice one,this will be better than my story😉