SaJan OS n nupur's comeback..updated on pg 23 - Page 17

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

Really Good Part!!
Loved It Like Always...
You re Wonderful Writer..
Keep It Up!!

*Sana*😳

hey sana!! glad u liked it
thanks a lot! for ur comment
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

hey debo

it was such a cute dedication
loved it a lot
everything was perfect
colours useage was great
i am looking forward to the next part
luv
mahima

aww mahi!!! thank u sooooo much yaar
n loved the pic!! glad u liked it
thank u sooo much for commenting!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MJHT_ROX123

amaziinnngggg
plz cont soon ...
waiting eagerly

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hey! Thanks alot for ur comment
will cont soon!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
update on page 17-
omg
so cute yaar
i love this a lot
you are realy an amazing writer
i enjoyed reading this part a lot
well done
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Januable_Sajan

aww mahi!!! thank u sooooo much yaar

n loved the pic!! glad u liked it
thank u sooo much for commenting!!

mention not debo
your updates deserve a comment
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hey guys! i am updating the next n the last part of this os
hope u will like it!😃 n thanks alot for ur comments that u have given me on my update
everyone r in there repective homes n thinking about the party
gunjan's home: (praying to god)
gunjan: aaj party mein sabkuch samrat aur mayank ke plan ke hisaab se hi ho..kuch galat na ho bhagwaan, meri di mujhe waapus miljaye..(smile)
cut to mayank:
mayank: aaj party mein neetu aayegi aur nupur ban ke jaaiyegi
i hope ki aaj ke din meri kismat mujhe dhoka na de aur mujhe mera pyaar vaapus miljaaye (smiles)
cut to samrat:
samrat: i hope ki aaj party mein nupur ko apna past yaad aajaye aur mere sar se upar uska moth ka bojh nikal jaaye
mayank ko apni biwi aur chashmish ko apni vaapus miljaaye
cut to neetu:
neetu:pata nehi aaj college mein mera pehela din bohot ajeeb laga...i hope is party achi ho
all four of them r showed in one screen
now in the party! the trio have reached
they saw that neetu came in the party already
she was looking amazing! she wore a beautiful white dress with open hair ...mayank was mezmerized by her beauty
samrat: mayank, baad mein jee bhar ke dekhlena, abhi plan mein focus kare?
mayank: mm..haan of course, main to bas yuhi..
gunji smiled! samrat had dressed up like mayank n gunji had dressed up like nupur😉
mayank: ab tum dono jao, main annocemnet karta hoon
samrat: teekh hain! all the best!
mayank goes to the stage n annouces
mayu: hello everybody! i hope aap logo ko maza aaraha hain
anyways, main yeh batane aaya hoon ki ek party mein gaana ya phir dance na ho, to maza nehi aata hain
to isiliye aapke saamne aa rehe hain is college ke trusti samrat shergill aur unka saath degi haamari college ki councilor gunjan bhushan! they will tell u story..a love story of two people (looking at nupur)so plzz give them a hand
everybody claps including neetu, getting very excited
everybody sits on their seats n the music is on n the song dastaane-om shanti om from the film om shaanti om sung by shaan...
gunji n sam enter the stage..
sam dancing n singing these lines..(looking like mayu coz of the costume) n neetu totally shocked
sunnewaalon suno aisa bhi hota hai
dil deta hai jo woh jaan bhi khota hai
pyar aisa jo karta hai, kya mar ke bhi marta hai, aao tum bhi aaj sunlo (bends on his knees)
dastan hai yeh ki ik tha naujawan jo dil hi dil me ek hasina ka tha diwana (gunji enters n holds sam's hand n starts dancing)
woh haseena thi ke jisaki khubsurati, ka duniyabhar mein tha mashahoor afsaana (gunji looking like nupur n behaving like her)
n neetu feeling more surprised as she saw this
dono ki yeh kahaani hai jisako sabhi kehte hai om shanti om (sajan dancing but looking like mayur) n at that neetu was watching the dance n was feeling very comfortable coz she was getting fb of her n mayank😳, gunji n sam
(naujawaan ki thi aarjoo, usaki thi yehi justjoo (sajan dancing)
uss haseena mein usako mile, ishq ke saare rango kabool) - 2
usane na jaane yeh naadaani hai, woh reth ko samajha ke paani hai
kyun aisa tha, kis liye tha, yeh kahaani hai (in these lines: showed that both of them (sajan) were in the car (they used a cut out of a car) n then the accident
daastaan hai yeh ke uss dilkash hassena ke, nigaahon dil mein koi dusara hi tha (neetu was totally numb after seeing the accident)
bekhar iss baat se uss naujawaan, ke khaabon ka anjaam toh hona bura hi tha (showing sajan separated) n neetu was having tears in her eyes as well as mayank
tute khaabon ki uss daastaan ko sabhi kehte hai om shaanti om
neetu: BAS!!!
everybody stopped n looked at her..the trio were shocked
she ran away inside the college n away from the function
mayank: miss neetu..rukiyen
the trio come together
gunjan: samrat, mayank, di..di ko kya hogaya hain??
main unhe phir se khona nehi chahti samrat..plzz roko na unhe
samrat: chashmish, sabkuch teekh hojaaiyega..tum chinta mat karo. (even though he was not sure of this)
mayank: guys..tum log tension mat lo, mujhe poora yakeen hain ki meri nupur vaapus zarur aayegi...main confident hoon
when suddenly nupur comes in front of everyone (yup, u heard me right! nupur, not neetu)
she changed her dress, she wore the kind of dress she always used to wear (nupurs dress)
neetu: mayank!!! she runs towards him n hugs n as usual he carries her😳
sajan hug each other n r very happy
nupur: mujhe sab kuch yaad aagaya hai...gunjan! she comes towards her n hugs her
Gunji: di, aap vaapus aagai ho! main bohot khush hu...pata hain maine aapko kitna miss kiya
nup: mujhe pata gunjan, lekin ab toh main aagai hoon na
gunjan nods n smiles
samrat: oh hello...maine yeh jo tumhaari yaadaash vaapus aayi hain na uska credit mujhe bhi jaata hain
nupur: by god samrat, tum bilkul nehi badle hon, credit lena kabhie nehi bhoolte hon
mayank: dekha! maine kaha tha na, ki meri nupur zarur vaapus aagayegi
nup: kaise na aati, after all main ek bhartiye naari hoon, aur bhartiye naari bina kisi vaje se apne pati parmeshwar ko kaise chor ke jaa sakti hain bhala?
all of them laugh n stay happy ever after lolz
hope u liked it! n do comment guys
luv
debo😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

update on page 17-

omg
so cute yaar
i love this a lot
you are realy an amazing writer
i enjoyed reading this part a lot
well done

awww mahi!! thank u soo much yaar!!
loved reading ur comment
just made my day!!
thanks alot
luv u loads!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Drishti-

awesome debo!!🤗

aww drish!! 🤗 thanks alot jaan!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Debooooooo.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗...

awesome....I read it with the song playing first i was sitting...then in mid air then in a half standing position and then seedha standing ovasion!!!! 😆.... It really made me cry yaar....tooooooo goood.... loveeeeddddd it.... loveeee u..... Yashu.....😳
Edited by yashu_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yashu!
😃will wait until u edit!

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