Aish's Caption Stories...(NEW updated pg 6 13/04)

Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey guys....thought of sharing wid u my "lovely talents" 😆 except dunno whether they are so lovely or not! so please tell me what u think of my caption story......and i will only update it if u think it is okay enough to do so.....😳

please tell me if u like it or not....., otherwise i shall stop at part one...cum on, don't want to be boring u guys out of this place!!!!!

the title is "Kya Zaara Tumhare paas hai??" i.e. do you have zaara??

this quite a recent one, but i have got some other stories too - if u like part 1, part 2 will be posted, if u like part 2, then part 3 will be posted and so on......if i get bad feedback on any of the parts of "Kya Zaara Tumhare paas hai" then i will start the next caption story......again, the purpose is to entertain u...not to bore!

and if u guyz think that i'm hopelessly making an effort to be funny....with all my captions, then i will stop the thread completely/....😆

please let me know what u think - your feedback is very much appreciated!

Kya Zaara Tumhare Paas Hai? Part 1

Rati: "Arjun....you're looking so good today!" (In her mind) ' Just keep looking at me like that forever and never look at Sanaya, Navina, or Anupriya again!

Arjun: "Thanks Rati!" (In his mind) ' do i really have to hold ur hand? Baaki sab ko maaro goli; when can I get away from Rati and go to my little darling Zaara???"

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Rati: "Arjun, stop it!!"

Arjun: "Stop what, Rati?"

Rati: "Looking here, there and everywhere except for at me!!!"

Arjun: "Uhhh, okay. Hey listen, mujhe bathroom jaana hai!"

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Rati: "ARJUN! Oh shucks...is baar bhi haath se gaya!"

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Arjun: "Zaara, finally my little angel....Rati ko chhod ke tumhare paas aa gaya main!" "Oh no, yaad aaya! Sanaya ne bhi milne ko bulaya tha...MOHIT!!! Look after Zaara please!"

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Mohit: (taking Zaara) "Yeah sure, dude ' anytime! Hey lekin Rati ne to mujhe milne bulaya tha....! Ab main Zaara ka kya karoon?"

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Mohit: "Oye Abhishek ' come here and look after Zaara!"

Abhishek: "What, wait, me??? Mohit, listen yaar! Mujhe to Navina se milne jaana hai! What do I do now????"

(By this time Mohit has gone)

so what did u all think of it....feel absolutely free to tell me if it is NOT interesting.....😆

EDIT Pt 4:

once again - updated on pg 6 please check it out!!!! hopefully i haven't made u all wait too long. pls leave ur comments....😆😳

Edited by aish129 - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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uh-oh....i said for u to comment if it was not good....

i think u guys have been very strict and used the no-comment policy on me 😆😆😆

oh it's okay...i'll wait fr another day and be hopeful.....😳

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Nidz

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey nice !!really luved Arjun's pt really rofl

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stuti

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Posted: 15 years ago

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its nice dear continue soon .........

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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aah geez....i guess 5 comments is enough to continue....thanks so much for supporting u guyz 😳

promise i won't make u all wait fr too long.....😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey guys.....major problem, i have lost the rest of this story.....i'm so sorry it didn't save in document recovery.....

so i'll just start another one :) sorry for those waiting for next parts of this.....

actually now i'll just be doing sthing else....this was not as good...bt i promise i will make the others good 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Episode 205 (indya.com)

RV: "OMG Navina!!!! Ur dress is wet!!!! How in the world did that happen???"

Navina: "Ummm RV, it's called RAIN!!!!! Stop staring at me like that!"

RV: "Navina.....ur looking so pretty like this!"

Navina: "Hmmmmm, I'm not so sure....try that on someone else"

NEXT DAY:

Abhishek: "Hmmm so we're looking for RV.....could he be in there (girl's bathroom! :P)

Arjun: "Well, unless he's converted.....it's a big NO"

Rati: "Please please Bhagwaanji, help us find RV before I go mad with Jas and Abhishek...."

Jas: "Abhishek..man, is that bag a clue to finding RV???"

Abhishek: "No dude.....it's Nupur's bag - and she doesn't know I've got it!!!"

Abhishek: "Hey....we found RV"

Rati: "hey...whoever u are....have u seen RV??"

RV: "rati.....I AM RV!!!"

RV: "what is ur problem man......and what's with the knife?"

Jas: "oh this/.....this is just to save me from my Dids...just in case you know, self defence.."

RV is looking scared and nervous.....

Abhishek: "hey...what's wrong...why are u looking like that???"

Rati: "LOL i think he doesn't believe jas that the knife is not for him...."

NEXT SCENE....

Sanaya: "ohh...let me just check that i'm looking good enough to go and see mohit in captivity!"

Mohit: "Sanaya, get me outta here.....!!!"

Police insp: "hmm.....i don't know whether that's happening.....unless u give sanaya a new car...!"

Mohit: "Uhhhh Sanaya....unless u get me outta here..i can't get u that new car - waise bike chalegi???!"

Sanaya: "hmmm...na not yet, the car can wait until navina gets here.......bt till then u can have this box of mithai...."

pls comment, tell me what u think of it!!!!

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aashi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey superb dear loved it to the core please add more na maza aayega and thanks for pm

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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thanxx both aashi n shruti...really appreciate ur comments......i will post more soon!!! it's ready....bt just making sure that no one is getting bored out of this universe coz of my stupid humour 😳 😆

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