One shot-Mayur and mjht—confession

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hoola guys...this is my first one shot on Mayur and mjht...hope u like it...sorry if it's boring...

M- Mayank

N- nupur

B- benji

S- Samrat

G- gunjan

D- dia

SS- Shukla Sir

The gang is sitting [including Mayank, nupur, Sammy, gunjan, benji, uday and dia] in the canteen. They are playing truth and dare.

Sajan have confessed for their love in front of everyone but only sajan know about mayur's relationship.

This is mayank's turn. He selects truth. B smiles as this was the thing he wanted—M to select truth!

He says, "M, tumne truth select kiya hai. Mein jo poochunga, tumhe uska sahi-sahi answer dena hoga. Theek hai?

M- haan-haan. Tum pooch to.

B- ok…so M. tum mujhe batao ki kya tum kisi se pyaar karte ho? Dekho sach-sach batana nahi to…nahi to…haan..mein tumhe shraap deta hu ki agar tumne jooth kaha to tum jisse pyaar kare ho, tumhara usse bahut hi bhayankar jhagada ho jaayega.

B had an idea of mayur's relationship but wasn't sure and also didn't had the courage to ask them directly!

N- what!? Yeh kaisa question hai? Agar M kisi se pyaar karta hai aur nahi batana chahta to kyo uske peeche pade ho?

B- arre nupur, 1st thing maine ques M se poocha hai tumse nahi, to tum kyo tensed ho rahi ho? 2nd thing Mayank ne aisa kab kaha ki wo batana nahi chahta, usne to kuch bhi nahi kaha abhi tak.

S was grinning. Now he knew that Mayur can't hide their relationship for long because 'Pyaar aur sach chupane se nahi chupte!'

M- ok. I'll tell. I love nupur.

B, U, D- What????

U- guys, maine aajtak CJ, tam mam aur khaane-peene ki cheezon ke sapne dekhe hain par yeh kaisa sapna hai jisme M kehta hai ki wo N se pyaar karta hai??pls someone pinch me.

D pinches him.

U- oouch

B- what? How? Who? When? Why? Pls elaborate it, M.

M gives hi akdoo expression and says, "kyo? Jo tumne poocha uska jawab maine de diya. Kaafi nahi hai kya?"

N was not able to utter a word. S looked at her and thought, "OMG. Ye kya ho raha hai? N aur blush?"

G- pls M batao na. Mujhe sirf itna pata hai ki tum dono ka confession play ke last scene mein hua tha par S ko to itna bhi nahi pata. Aur mujhe saati History, geography aur civics jaanni hai.

M- ok, if u r saying then...

He tells how he started realizing his love at the Ahmadabad trip and then how he tried to hide his feelings but then he decided to give at least 1 chance to his love. He told how nupur started realizing and then told about the changing of lines in the last scene of the play and their true confession.

B, U and D were shocked to listen that story.

D- I don't believe it. This is amazing. You know-opposite attract!

B- yeah, mujhe to pehle se hi thoda shaq ho raha tha to maine pooch liya!

D- M, uske baad kya hua? Matlab tum dono ke beech mein abhi tak koi jhagada hua kya?

M- haan hua na, ek chota sa jhagada hua tha.

N replies angrily- chota sa? M wo koi chota sa jhagada nahi tha. Bahut bada tha. Tumne mera locket guma diya tha. Do you even know I was hurt.

M- Madam, wo locket kho gaya to mein kya karu? Aur tum bhi to nahi bol rahi thi, upar se substitute par wo locket de diya tha.

N- are substitute par hi sahi, par tumhe dyaan rakhna chahiye na.

D- stop guys. Though you love each other but still haven't stopped fighting! Now pls N tell about that fight.

N- ok. I'll tell...

Nupur tells about the fight and the reasons and how they came out of it at the party and finally she said those 3 magical words to M.

B- kyo story hai! Haina?

S- haan. Maanna padega. M, jo academic champ tha aur ladkiyon mein 'bilkul' bhi interest nahi rakhte tha, uski love story is awesome! N ka to tab bhi samajh mein aata hai par N and blushing—no match!

All smile.

B- ok fine, now guys, lets continue with our game.

U- yeah, sure.

Here was nupur's turn to select dare. Diya said, "mein jo bolungi wo karna padega."

N- hmm.

D- ab dekho hum sabko pata chal chukka hai tumhari aur M ki love story ke bare mein par abhi tak no romance. Chalo koi baat nahi. Your task is to "kiss mayank on his check"!

M&N- what???

D- yeah, now as u r a couple, want to see something that proves it!

N- no, change the task.

D- you said you'll do whatever I'll say.

N stands up slowly and moves towards M. She stood beside him when Shukla sir comes and call M&N.

SS- M&N, pichle saal ki tarah iss saal bhi aap dono ne top kiya hai aur pichle saal ki tarah iss saal bhi academic meet hoga aur pichle saal ki tarah iss saal bhi aap dono ko hi Ahmadabad jaan hai meet ke liye.

M&N smiled, alongwith B,U,D,S,G.

M- thik hai sir. Kab jaana hai?

SS told them the date and when they had to go.

SS went and N said, "By god, phir se Ahmadabad. Mein to jaa rahi hu tayiyaari karne. Aur iss baar mein apna bag apne saath hi rakhungi (glaring at M).

D- 1 min. what about the kiss?

N- trip se lautne ke baad!

M&N went to Ahmadabad- for a more romantic journey and came back with a trophy stating that they had won.

The gang was together again.

D- dekha, bhool gaye na.

S- kya bhool gaye?

N- nahi dia, mujhe yaad hai.

She went to M and kissed him on his check, blushing. All grinned.

D- wow. You both make an excellent couple!


Hope you all liked it.

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Sorry for mistakes.

Looking forward for comments.

Criticisms are always welcome.


Love,

Anshika

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lemme be the 1st one comment! 😉 😆

Your one shot is very sweet . . .keep writing!! 👍🏼
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anshika.......superbbbbbbbbbbb..........awesomeeeeeee..............10 on 10 frm my side....it ws sooo simple....soooooo cuteeeeeee......rockin one shot yaar.,do write more....😃😃😃
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it was a very sweet and nice one shot.......keep it up......
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awesome huni, really cute and sweet!
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Superb yaar
I Really wish thsi scene hapens yaar
Mazaa aayegi
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very sweet one-shot. loved it.
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its short , cute nd nice ..... will luv to see some think like dis in da show as well........
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HI ankita'
its a so sweet, nice shot.
Just lovedddd it.
Keep it up
thanx 4 ur PM.

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kanshika wonderful OS . enjoyed it a lot. Write more. Would love to read more. So their love story has come out to te gang. Pm me wen u write more

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