Crossover Confusion :-Mayank meets Rajveer - pg 10 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
sim and dolly Omg kya hai yeh yaar serious fun hai please continue soon mei abhi tak silent reader thi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx people i thnk sim will update tomarrow
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan

aww i justr read all the parts too gud plss continue

thank u dear !!!!! I will continue soon bt my internals are going on now . So u guys hav to wait a little
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugar03

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thanx maninder !!!!!!!!! by the way where is ur ff ???? Kahan hai vo ???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: simar456

thanx maninder !!!!!!!!! by the way where is ur ff ???? Kahan hai vo ???

is dumber se iski ff post ni ho rahi as usual yeh teen baar ff ka forst part likh chuka hai n everytime it gets erased as his computer gets hanged
tere ko pta to hai iska mar jayega lekin apni likhi nhui cheez save ni karega
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HI! i just read this
i should say this is best ff i read iv ever read till date it is awesome yaar
it was hilarioussssssssssssssssss
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sim will update tomarrow
i know its late
but we both r ultra slow
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi people !!!!!!! First of all I am really sorry that I am so late in updating !!!!! Bt as I am not at home from six in the morning to seven thirty in the evening courtesy my coaching center and college I am not able to update it regularly !!!!!! Bt thanx for bearing with me !!!!!!

Ok lets get started !!!!! As many people have not watched LRL before so I am giving the pics of the cast with their character names :-

(Starting from left) Ali , Pooja , Alekh (Hhhhhaaaiiiii !!!! Arjun !!!!! Sorry bhul hi jati hun) , Dr.Ritu Mishra , Cpt.Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ( Hamari ( meri aur dolly ) ki jaan oops sorry !! The only banda with proper working brains in KMA and of course THE BEST TEACHER) , Huda , Naina (Alekh's best and most sensible friend) and Ud !!!!!

And as for MJHT , usmein se to ek ek ki history geography humein pata hai !!!!!!

When Mayank and Rajveer met :-

Huda has told Naina everything about the condition of Alekh (Mayank) . Everybody is sitting in sports room ( the place where these friends usually spend their free time chatting and making ulte seedhe plans ) tensed on seeing the change in their Qaidi bhai Alekh . Everybody is trying to figure out ki aisa alekh ke saath kya haadsa ho gya k wo itna badal gya ???? Bt nobody is able to figure it out ( actually itna dimag kisi ka hai hi nahi ) !!!!!! Then Huda speaks up ;=-

Huda:- Yaar bahut ho gya hai ab . Hum logon ke dimag se to baahar ki baat hai yo . Ek hi banda hamari madad kar sakta hai ab to .

Pooja , Ali , Ud , Naina (in unison) :- KAUN ?????

Huda hitting his head with his hand in frustration and saying :- Ab yeh bhi btana padega kya ??? Yaaro ek baat btao , KMA main sab se zyada dimag se kaam karne ka theka kis ne le rakha hai ???

All others in unison and surprised and with questioning look on yheir faces :- Cpt . RAJVEER !!!!!!!!

Huda:-Oye haan oye !!!

Others :- WHAT ?????

Ud :- Waise to dude baat main point hai lekin I tell u jis tarah ki problems hum sir ke paas le ke jaate hain na vo ek din humein apni hi goli se shoot kar denge !!!! Aur ye Alekh ki problem , ye to humein samajh main nahi a rahi aur I bet Alekh ko khud ko samajh nahi a rahi hogi to hum sir ko kya samjhane wale hai ????

Everybody is lost in samjhing Ud's un-understandable statement . Then Ali speaks up :- Ud bhai !!!! Aap kuch bhi samajhne aur samjhaane ki koshish na karein nahi to jo hamari samajh main ab tak a rha hain na utna bhi nahi ayga !!!!!

Huda:- Oye chup karo gadho !!!! Humein sir ke paas ja kar Alekh ka behaviour unhein btana hi padega . Koi na koi madad to vo kar hi denge

Naina:-Tu theek keh rha hai huda . Lets go !!!!

And they all head towards Cpt.Rajveer's room .

(Cpt.Rajver)

Scene 2

Everybody is in Rajveer's room . Rajveer is standing in middle of his room and all others are forming a circle around him nearly chillaying in his ears and he is not able to understand a single word as they all are speaking at same time .

Huda:-Sir help karo pls . Apna Qaidi to shayad paafal hi ho gya hai

Pooja:-Sir wo to chalet firte bina signal ka mobile ban gaya hai

Ud:-I cant understand sir ke use kya hota jar ha hai . . ,

Ali:-Alekh bhai bilkul hi badal gaye hain sir . . .

Naina:- Sir vo Alekh to , Pta nahi use . . .

Rajveer's tolerance gave up as 5 people were screaming into his ears at the same time

Rajveer :- JUST SHUT UP !!!!!!!! SHUT UP ALL OF U !!!!!

All of them quiet at same time .

Rajveer :- Ab agar kisi ne ek shabd bhi kaha to main tum logon ki madad anhi karunga . Do u get it ??? (Silence) . Rajveer composing himself :- Guys kya aaj tak maine tum logon ki madad karne se mana kiy hai ????

Everyone shakes their heads at same time but didn't dare to speak a word .

Raj:- To phir is baar mujhe torture kyun kar rahe ho ??? Araam se btao problem kya hai !!!

Nobody speaks up .

Raj:- Kya hua ??? Ab koi kuch bol kyun nahi rha ??? Tab to sab chilla rahe the !!!!!

Huda :- Sir abhi abhi to aapne kaha k agar hum main se koi bola to aap hamari help nahi karenge , lekin humein to aapki help chahiye isliye ………

Rajveer closes his eyes in frustration and bangs his head with his hand .

Raj:- Cadet Huda mujhse galti ho gayi ke maine kuch kaha aura b please mujh par reham karo aur insaano ki tarah btao k problem kya hai ???

Huda tells him each and every minute detail about the change in behaviour of alekh . Rajveer listens each and everything carefully .

Raj:-Listen !!!! Ye to tum log jante ho k alekh ka behaviour completely change ho chukka hai to us se kisi bhi tarah ka contradiction karne ki jagah jo vo kehta hai karo . Use bina pta chale use doctor shalini ke paas kekar jao ta ke vo uska checkup kar sakein .

Everybody listens to him and moves in search of Alekh .

Huda:-Ali aur main Alekh ko hostel main dhoondte hain aur naina aur pooja use academy ke compound main dekho aur haan ab to library bhi check karna . aur udiye to sun use mess wale area main ja k dekh .

Ud:- Dude main akela !!!! Tum to jante ho aaj kal vo thoda zyada khatarnaak ho gya hai . . . To aise main main .,………

Huda :- Oye dar mat ! yar tu yahaan soldier banne aya hai !!!!! Ja mere sher ja use dhoond .. ja ja !!!!!

They all leaves to thei respective directions

Scene 3

Mayank is sitting in the mess (caf and dining hall) of the academy having coffee .

Mayank:- Aaj chinu ki importance ka pta chala . . . Kam se kam wahan coffee coffee jaisi aur khana khane jaisa to tha !!!!!!!( Suri ji )

Just then Suri ji comes and stands beside him watching him from head to toe . Mayank notices that somebody is watching him . He looks up and sees suri ji standing and staring at him . He gets up and tries to say something

Mayu:- Sir vo . . .

Suri ji :-Sir nahi oye moron suri ji !!!!! Oye yeh academy main kya drama macha rakha hai tune ??? Sare hi hil gaye hain tujhe aise sudhra hua dekh kar !!!!

Mayu:- Ji ?????

Suri Ji :- Oye ji ji kya lagai hui hai ???? Aur tu coffee aur kahne ke bare main kuch bol rha tha ??? Kya bol rha tha ? Sach sach bta nahi to dono kaano main sar kar dunga !!!!!
Mayank makes a confused gesture and suri ji makes a double confused gesture .

Mayu:- Vo vo vo …. Kuch nahi sir …… I mean suri ji main to keh rha tha k ……… k

Suri ji :- Oye kya keh rha tha ????

Mayu:- Main keh rha tha k ……… haan yaad aya ……… keh rha tha k yahaan jaisi coffee aur khana to kahin mil hi mahi sakta .

Suri ji :- Sach bol rha hai ????

Mayu:- Han han By god suri ji !!!!!

Suri ji :- Oye ye by god kya hai oye ????

Mayu:- Suri ji vo vo vo ………

Just then an orderly (peon) enters and informs suri ji that BC (Brig.Chandok) has called him to his office . Suri ji leaves the mess and mayu heaves a sigh of relief .

Mayu:- Control kar mayank !!!!! Mana k tu nupur ko bht miss kr rha hai is matlab yeh nahi k is baat ka pta sari academty ko chale !!!!! Focus on the book mayank focus !!!!!

And he returns to his reading . Ud enters the mess bt as soon as he sees mayu sitting there he runs out immediately but then turns back , takes a deep breath and says

Ud (to himself):- Dude relax !!!!! Dost hai vo tera yaar . is time use teri zarurat hai so just stop doing idiotic things aur uske paas jao !!!!

Ud prays to god for his safety and moves inside the mess . He reaches the table where mayu is sitting . He tries to strike a conversation many times but mayank is busy in his book that he hadn't noticed Ud Standing there . Just then Ud takes out a hypnotize ball and starts waving it in front of mayank . Mayu this time notices the ball and stares at it for few moments . Ud thinks he is getting hypnotized and he gets happy as now he can take him to doctor Shalini . Just then mayu screams :-

Mayu :- O shit !!!!!!

This literally made ud jump and he gets scared

Ud:-Inti zor se kyun chillaye ???? Dude mujhe heart attack a jata abhi

Mayu (in a little angry tone) :- Tum ye kya kar rhe the ????

Ud:-Vo ………vo ……… vo

Mayu:-Kya vo vo ????

Ud:-Vo main check kar rha tha k ……… tumhari ……… eye – sight theek hai ya nahi !!!!! Ball dikha kar ckeck kar rah tha !!!!! Par tum kyun chillaye ????

Mayu:-Kyunki ise dekh kar mujhe locket ki yaad a gayi jise main yahaan aane se pehle ghar ke bathroom main bhool gya !!!!!!

Ud:-Kya ??? Kaunsa locket ?? kiska locket ?? kaisa locket ?? Kiska ghar ??? kaisa bathroom ??? Dude ab ye locket ki kya mystery hai ???

Mayu:-Vo locket mystery nahi meri life ki history hai . Mera present aur future usi pe dependent hai . Agar vo locket kahin fir se kho gya na to is baar vo mujhe dhoondne ka mauka hi nahi degi seedhe maar dalegi !!!!!!!

Ud:- Kaun maar dalegi tumhein ???? Dude tum uska naam lo hum sab mil k use dekh lenge !!!!!!

Mayu in full angry tone :- Agar tumne aur tumhare namune doston ne meri nupur ke liye kuch ulta seedha socha bhi to tum log bhool jaoge ke tum kaun ho !!!!!! Do u understand it ????

Ud merely nods and mayu moves out of the mess in angry tone !!!!!

Ud:- Yaar pehle to pta karma padega k yeh nupur kaun hai !!!!! Ab yeh hi saari mystery solve kar sakti hai .

Scene 4

Mayank comes to the class early as he cannot tolerate any more nuisance . There is still 10 minutes to class . its Cpt.Rajveer's Class .

Mayu:- Thank God koi class lag ne wali hai nahi to main paagal ho jata .

And he starts reading the topic which Raj has to cover today of Strategy and Communication (that's the subject Rajveer teaches) . Just then Rajveer enters the class as its his habbit to come to class early before teaching . He sees mayank reading the strategy and communication book . He gets surprised on seeing Alekh(mayank) studying as he almost failed in his papers last time and Rajveer had to fake his hand writing to make him pass in atleast his subject . He moves to see the time table if it is his class or not and then returns after seeing it .

Mayu is still busy readind analyzing and understanding .

Rajveer (to himself):- Class to meri hi hai , Aur yeh dikhne main bhi Alekh hi hai , to fir ye padh kyun rha hai ???? Huda aur baaki sab sahi keh rahe the , problem definitely serious hai .

He compose himself and comes inside the class and greets Mayank to bring him out of his bookish world .

Raj:- Gud Morning Cadet Sharma .

Mayank notices him and stands up to greet him .

Mayu:-Gud Morning sir . I am sorry Actually I didn't ……

Raj:-Its okay Cadet Sharma , waise bhi aap padhai main bht busy the . Bt aap class main itni jaldi ????

Mayu:- Just aise hi Sir ……… (then to himself) Thank God koi to sahi insaan hai yahaan pe .

Raj:-Tumne kuch kaha ???

Mayu:- No sir .

Raj smiles and gestures him to sit down and mayank returns a smile too.

After few moments

Mayu:-Excuse me Sir . I have some doubts and questions from previous lectures .

Raj :- Yes ?? Ask them out .

Raj comes close to his seat and takes a seat near him and Mayank starts asking him all sorts of questions from every nook and corner of the chapters . Soon Rajveer also got involved in the discussion and explained him each and every detail of what he asked . Just then Huda Ali , Pooja , Naina and Ud all of them entered into the class bt they frozed at the door on seeing Raj and Mayu discussing strategi in deep ways .

Huda:- Yaar ye Cpt.Rajveer to subah tak achhe bhale the ab inhein achanak kya ho gya ???? Oye yeh bhi apne Cpt Sir hi hain nay a Qaidi ki tarah ye bhi badal gaye ?????

Everybody is confused . Just then Raj gestures all of them to enter the class and everybody enters inside completely confused .

Raj:- Please take ur seats cadets . We will be resuming the lecture in short while .

And then he returns to his discussion with mayank . Everyone else took their seats behind them . Everyone is staring them from Mayu to Raj and raj to mayu but these both geniuses are busy in their deep growing strategies , reviewing them from each and every angle . Nearly all the lecture passed .

Huda :- Yaaro lagta hai key eh saari strategy aaj hi bnake chhodenge .

Raj:- This is it . I hope sab kuch clear hai ab Cadet Sharma ???


Mayu gives a smile to him:- Ultra clear Sir !!!!!

Just then the bell rings and Raj realizes that he has spend the entire class onn discussion with Mayank .

Raj:-Ooops Soorrryyy Class !!!!!! We wil continue next time and I hope Cadet Sharma ke agli baar main class le paun .

And he winks toward mayank .

Mayu:- Certainly Sir .

Ud couldn't stand that his favourite teacher has also changed and hence he collapses on his seat table . Everybody looks at him .

Mayu:- Behosh hona iski hobby hai kya ????

Raj:- Please cadet sharma aap cadet sahni ko infirmary le jayiye I think he needs a doctor .

Everybody takes Ud to infirmary . Rest to be continued …………

I hope u all likd it . Sorry again for late update . Pls do comment

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Posted: 16 years ago
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sim and dolly Omg kya hai yeh yaar serious fun hai please continue soon
love for ever
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😳😳by god simrit
it is it is ultraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa cute
the way u descriped today's scenen
out of the world
tu itni achichi writer kab bani??????????
aur raju ki photo to by god..................
my fav scene , u know kaunsa
raju ki photo to bygod ,bilkul uske jaisi hai..............
and then that locket ,still laughing n my eyes r full of tears u know?????
and ya raju ki photo to
BY GOD😳😳

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