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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
heyy
wonderful parts.....loved both of them
but they were too short....can u plz try and make them bigger next time
continue soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Luved d second part👏👏.........i'm gonna add in my fav....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
heyy wow i love your part 1and 2
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Arey no probs dheere dheere u'll make it 1 of d best FFs....... w8ing to kno wat will happen further........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 3


recap:sajan love confession.am holds gunjan's hand and leaves it on a condition.

continued...................

samrat kept getting close to her....she was ooking really scared..........he thought'how innocent she is' as he kept getting closer.........................

he admired her eyes,her beaty,her lips......he stopped on the lips as he knew the task he was going to give gunjan was relating to the lips.........yes ............he was going to ask her for a kiss

Because he had been thinking......
how would those lucsious lips taste under his manly lips.he wanted to feel her.take her in his arms and make her his forever.
he came out of his thoughts:


g:samrat tumhe kya chahiye?????
s:jo chahiye woh dena padega!!
g:kya?(she asked in a scared voice)
s:ek kiss

gunjan could have melted.she didn't believe her ears.
but she managed to ask

g:cheek par????
s:nahi lips par..........
g:(was about to cry)samrat main......
s:mujhe chahiye....matlab chahiye!
g:par samrat mujhe kiss karna nahi aata!
s:koi baat nahi guru samrat hai na tumhe sab sikha denge.

saying so he lunged foward,gunjan closed her eyes,THEIR LIPS WERE JUST AN INCH AWAY.he held her by the waist.gunjan was breathing hard.just then.............

SHEENA INTERRUPTED................

she thought sam was alone;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

s:hi sam

she was shocked to see gunjan coming from behind the pillar.sam was still holding her.samrat could have killed her fo messing up such a moment.

s:kya hai?mujhe apne girlfriend ke saath romance nahi karne deti.dikh nahi raha hai mai busy hoon.



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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
i am done with the third part.hope you enjoy ,do comment.


NOTE:


PEOPLE READ BUT DO NOT COMMENT.SO PLEASE COMMENT OR HOW WILL I KNOW YOU LIKED IT OR NOT.


THANX
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
good going..........I'll comment big a bit later........ rit now I'm overloaded wid pms............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
u can b d creative director...cont ur work..
V r waitin...👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
pliz comment when you are finished reading......................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
lovely deary just nice do read my ff also;-)

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