FF: Frosted Flare[Mayur] Pt10-11 pg36-37 1/7

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

ohhhgosh you wrote so much for me....ummmmmm...i loved reading it, that was analysis...of the part....that was so sweet of yaaaa.....will reply later busy with my FF writing...😆...

Muaaahhhx...Hugss...🤗
i read it whole will give you at least half a length reply...😆
yeah its okies do read which one you like...!!!

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

I think its still not enuf...i like giving BIG replies...that was not at all that long...half of it ws only my thoughts on ur writing...enjoy...if u update on weekends i wud give longer replies...only if iam not bxy...

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: styleislife13
I think its still not enuf...i like giving BIG replies...that was not at all that long...half of it ws only my thoughts on ur writing...enjoy...if u update on weekends i wud give longer replies...only if iam not bxy...
TC

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@ Bold : 😆😉 Ayesha, I have to say here that you are the QUEEN of big, long, epic comments!!

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: hgrhr

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@ Bold : 😆😉 Ayesha, I have to say here that you are the QUEEN of big, long, epic comments!!

i would like to see those epic commentss...so weekends naaa....so next update not before next sat or sunday.....😉

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

😭 rohit no index 😭😭....plzzzzzzz do include......... otherwise after few chapters and more post all ur chapters will be lost to us...😭...plz...take sometime and for all ur ff include index😛... do it for us crazy fans plzzzzzz😉

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

😉 u have got me hocked on this one too .😊..read the first 2 part as yet ... how could he hurt Nups like that when she needed his help !!!... he deserve to loose her for 2yrs ....😡

but then when i read how much he misses her i felt sorry for the poor guy ...😕

👏👏Rohit once again I have to say u r very talented👏👏
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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Rohit86
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I Didnt expected that reaction guys...How could you Love that...?? You felt it romantic...??😒

How could you guys feel it to be romantic..?? He was forcing her without her will and even seducing her, thinking so cheap about her, he is not in love guys...He wanted her just to sleep...that's ridiculous....!!! Put yourself in that situation and then think about it was it romantic...?? He was pathetic, ruchi got it well and ashread too got it what i wanted you guys to see there....i think i didnt expressed well so that you could understand it well. ar main reason too obsessed with mayank...hun...?? Cant go against him...He can do anything...!! if you feel that way then things he is gona do you will feel chalta hai...he can do it...!! then its no use for this ff...!!!

Rohit😳

After reading the last 2 parts....

😊......👏😛 complete play boy 😆😆... don't be angry with the gang Rohit ... u didn't portray a cheap Mayank u made the scene in such away that fire was there on both side .... his mistake was that he thought that Nups like all the girls will give in to that fire ... but Nups is made of solid stuff and she faught back....😛

do update soon ... want to see finally what happened which lead her to take such a bold step in the end although it was against her values....😊

Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago

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jusrockingon

@jusrockingon

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#108

dyin 2 no wts n ur stock ahed.pls upd8 as fast as psbl.m simply lvin ur concpt.

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: hgrhr

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@ Bold : 😆😉 Ayesha, I have to say here that you are the QUEEN of big, long, epic comments!!

Hey Nidhi...

Sweet of u....

I think i give huge comments on vmz.....every sec....i disscuss everything...

And FF.....but its not as long as the vm ones....

TC.....

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ
awesome rohit..................u r awesome.bhaut romantic ☺️tha.keep it up.update soon .pm me😳

Thanks for the comment dear; i am glad that you love it😉
I dont know from what angel it was romantic, they were not romancing there, he was forcing her into that kiss and thinking so cheap...😲😕

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