IshVeer os - Page 3

MM wonderful! Just wonderful!

Originally posted by: Ishveer-lover

MM wonderful! Just wonderful!

Can you please start new FF on current track like this OS!

You're brilliant!

thank u so much 🤗 🤗 would loved to , but studies are taking most of my time so i can 't start with a new ff , knowing i wont be able to give it a time 😭 so sorry 😭 😭 thank you so much for your kind words 😊

Originally posted by: MM123456

Yes he does , even ishani as well 😭 our ishveer always gets in trouble 😕

Agree to disagree ?

Originally posted by: IshveerForever

Yup , our poor Ishveer , i wish they would go to a deserted area and stay there in peace⭐️

😆okay teddy

yeah same 😊

muah 😳

Originally posted by: MM123456

thank u so much 🤗 🤗 would loved to , but studies are taking most of my time so i can 't start with a new ff , knowing i wont be able to give it a time 😭 so sorry 😭 😭 thank you so much for your kind words 😊

Originally posted by: Ishveer-lover

Best hai! Studies comes first obviously !😃

Welcome & Don't be sorry ! I would have done the same if I were you!

thanks for understanding 😊

Originally posted by: strings123

Beautiful MM.

thank u dear 😳 😳

MM!!!🤗

MM, this has to be your best work. You have improved so much! I love the way you so gently portrayed their fears, the darkness they both are in, the hope they are trying to find, fighting each moment of their existence. Ishani is worried for his well-being and he is worried for hers. That's them. They put each other above themselves. I could imagine that lifeless Ranveer trying to find solace in her touch and Ishani finding comfort seeing him speaking to her. This was magical.

I loved your concept too. Yesterday I sent LM an article about something similar to this which was about how most often survivors of anything horrible have to live through because death is not an option for them. Taking care of them is the hardest thing because mourning over the dead is very easy. This is what Ishani has to go through. See him suffer all the time her eyes fall on him and being there for him, reminding him she's there for him and as long as they're together nothing can destroy them.
You poured Ranveer's anguish so poignantly here. How horrible it would have been for him to think Ishani is with someone else, not knowing he is not Ranveer, and that he could not save her. Oh God! This OS has been a beautiful gift from you, MM. Thank you for this. I'll shut myself up. :D :D Keep writing more and more. And update your next chapter too.

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

MM, this has to be your best work. You have improved so much! I love the way you so gently portrayed their fears, the darkness they both are in, the hope they are trying to find, fighting each moment of their existence. Ishani is worried for his well-being and he is worried for hers. That's them. They put each other above themselves. I could imagine that lifeless Ranveer trying to find solace in her touch and Ishani finding comfort seeing him speaking to her. This was magical.

I loved your concept too. Yesterday I sent LM an article about something similar to this which was about how most often survivors of anything horrible have to live through because death is not an option for them. Taking care of them is the hardest thing because mourning over the dead is very easy. This is what Ishani has to go through. See him suffer all the time her eyes fall on him and being there for him, reminding him she's there for him and as long as they're together nothing can destroy them.
You poured Ranveer's anguish so poignantly here. How horrible it would have been for him to think Ishani is with someone else, not knowing he is not Ranveer, and that he could not save her. Oh God! This OS has been a beautiful gift from you, MM. Thank you for this. I'll shut myself up. :D :D Keep writing more and more. And update your next chapter too.

Thank you so much Elvish 🤗 🤗 I am so glad u liked it , i just had to write this after i heard ranveer 's scream 😭

wow you think this is my best work , thank you so much 🤗 🤗 And i cant describe the feeling when you hear that you have improved 😳 Oh you said it so beautiful

Exactly , that is so true when you have survived something traumatic like this it is more worse than death in some ways as you are in a darkness and you put your loved one in the same dark hole i am so glad u liked it the way i wrote it and thank you so much <3 You are to sweet dearie , i will and will try to update asap 😊