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swara, mini..write a strong plot..take some ideas from good horror stories..take ideas like how should be the atmosphere, actions of the leads in slow motion...make this slow motion impactful by using strong words..in horror story..more than the leads focuss is on side things like how leads are taking small steps to reach to a room..small movements to get highlighted and small sounds like door closing ka sound..suddenly candle falls and the girl shaked..describe these things. Plot toh almost sabka same hota hai..

Originally posted by: priyanshiii

swara, mini..write a strong plot..take some ideas from good horror stories..take ideas like how should be the atmosphere, actions of the leads in slow motion...make this slow motion impactful by using strong words..in horror story..more than the leads focuss is on side things like how leads are taking small steps to reach to a room..small movements to get highlighted and small sounds like door closing ka sound..suddenly candle falls and the girl shaked..describe these things. Plot toh almost sabka same hota hai..

i have a idea...make animal a ghost instead of a person. Then a fb story..it seems mjhe bhi ek story ka idea deni padegi..im very bad at writing but if i give you a basic idea abt story in form of links toh tum log bna loge ek story?

Yes you guys are right.already thought about that.actually the animal is ghost only.i basically PMed you the beginning.anyway first decide if actor are ok

The actors are awesome... 😳😳

The plot lacks umm... strength...kindly build it up again..the basic idea is fine though. Add sum more detail and do it 500 words..we ahve one day left na...😕

Originally posted by: Abhisheking

The actors are awesome... 😳😳

The plot lacks umm... strength...kindly build it up again..the basic idea is fine though. Add sum more detail and do it 500 words..we ahve one day left na...😕

Originally posted by: MiniRulz

glad that you liked the actors😳I have sent some more detail to priya.hope she can elaborate the scene more..just an example how the last line could be in a soft hushed scary tone-"even ghosts can lick"(she thinks it's her cat the whole time)..please try to find pic of both actors for the banner soon..

first plz send character sketches so that I can find the pics accordingly..also how should their expressions be... name of the movie etc etc. that is the stuffs required on the banner.

The Author can be The Q. Queens

Guys..Tomorrow is last day now we beed to do all things together by sharing work load. Abhishek..can you make banner alone? So that I can help swara and mini with story.

Originally posted by: priyanshiii

Guys..Tomorrow is last day now we beed to do all things together by sharing work load. Abhishek..can you make banner alone? So that I can help swara and mini with story.

Mini..swara how if we create a story which looks horror in starting but actually turns into a pardafaash story?😆 All aatmas and drama created so that the criminal accepts his/her crime?

@abhi..do one thing, make 1-2 banners then we'll choose the best and do save them in form of psd also..so that I can add if anything else is needed..

Mini nd swara. .give me some time to think about the above plot..I can give you the plot in links and you guys build a story on it. I'll provide you plot till evening. (IST)

if the plot gets ready it won't take much time to write it down

But what's the disney twist here? whatever we make has to be disney based na?