Creative oneshots #5 plus Game 1

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Yay! Finally! The results are here!


Game #1

-- Most jealous --

#1

Naina

#2 (a tie)

Sara and Baji

#3

Jouty

#4

Salma (no guess there she is an angel to us)


-- Will marry 1st --

#1 (a tie)

Baji and sara (wonder who will beat who)

#2

Jouty and naina (we can get married together)

#3

Salma (awww)


-- Have most kids --

#1

Baji (no shock there)

#2

Sara

#3

Salma

#4

Jouty

#5

Naina


--The Celeb in making--

#1

Jouty

#2

Naina

#3

Baji and salma

#4

Sara


--Billionaire--

#1

Jouty

#2

Salma

#3

Naina

#4

Sara

#5

Baji


--Most sexual thoughts about dbsk--

#1

Naina (big shock there)

#2

Jouty (shock)

#3 (a tie)

Sara and Baji (so devoted to their guys)

#4

Salma (changmin is too innocent for such stuff.jk)


-- Risktaker--

#1

Naina 9not only is she the devil but also daredevil)

#2

Sara

#3

Baji and Jouty (we don't know how to take risks)

#4

Salma ( too young and sweet)


-- Will scream if they meet DBSK--

#1

Naina

#2

Jouty

#3

Baji and Sara (pshh too mature)

#4

Salma (again the total angel)

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It was a cold November evening. The wind was blowing hard. It was a perfect night to end your life because there was no one about. I had dreamt so many times of this night. It was the night I was released from prison and when I went back to the love of my life. But she had betrayed me by replacing me with someone else. At the tower bridge I climbed onto the beam when...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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A November night
written by Salma
It was a cold November evening. The wind was blowing hard. It was a perfect night to end your life because there was no one about. I had dreamt so many times of this night. It was the night i was released from prison and when i went back to the love of my life. But she had betrayed me by replacing me with someone else. At the tower bridge i climbed onto the beam when...

"are you sure you want to do that?"

i looked up expecting the voice coming from above.>>>

"gosh how stupid do you have to be?"

'what?' i said..she sounded familiar.

"Are you very fond of some sort of sky diving thing or is it just the suicide alone?"

'Huh' (((only god knew what this women of some sort was rabbiting on about..)))

"Ermm.." i replied..

"Get down!" she shouted

(((i couldn't even think for a minute what i was trying to do.)))

(((the women just demanded and i followed as if i was in some sort of trance..)))

i got down and came closer.>>>.(((Boi she's beautiful.)))

(((she looked awfully familiar..hmm...i've seen her somewhere?)))

She came closer staring at me in shock.>>>

"Well are you gonna tell me or shall i lead you to a mental asylum myself?"

'Wha..What??' i said

"Hmm well first seeing you up there was Idiotic..then when i spoke you looked up that was just plain stupid

and now mate your totally off your rockers!"

(((Woah this women is on fire...he'd only met one person, one women in the past just like)))

OMG NAINA! (((its naina now i remember naina)))

naina looked at her watch..

N: hmm 4MINUTES!! 4 minutes?? it took you exactly four minutes to remember your childhood friend huh?

"well uhhr..." (((gosh she makes me feel so guilty)))

N: Xiah what is wrong with you? when i last saw you you were the happiest joyful man alive..and now...whats all this..

((( i felt really ashmed for minutes)))

N: come with me..come on...

i followed her>>> she didn't say a word all the way through the 7 minute journey

((( naina ... the one that was always on my side..has come back after..8 years .hhmm no wonder i didn't recognise her)))

she opened the door to a grand sized looking house..

as i entered after her the smell of lucious lavender hit my face..

(((woah what a house..didn't expect it to be this warm and cosy in a big house like this)))

N: sit down i'll be back in a minute.

she said very briefly and disappeared..

i sat down on the leather sofa and looked around

the whole room looked so fragile and perfect..almost untouchable.

my eyes met a picture which my instinks pulled me towards..

i slowly picked the A4 sized frame up trying not to leave any sort of mark on it

it was a picture of naina..(((boi she look's beautiful...as if she was sent from heaven to...

i came out of thought as naina coughed to get my attention

N: hmm thats me alright...my 21st! was one hell of a day,

ofcourse i missed you that was the first birthday that i had without you there and

the birthday after that and the one after that..you never turned up..hmm thats enough about the past..so

"umm.. you live alone

N: well umm i share this house with a few of my ghouls friends the pop up once in a while 'lol'

"so your alone??

N: hmm merely .. i mean Baji comes over once every month with her husband and kids.

"Baji..?? oh my gosh i totally forgot about her..she's married

N: mhmm she said she's gonna marry the man of her dreams and she did. YUNHO..and my niece ambia..

"oh wow..things definitly changed...and so much..

N: yep..especially with you huh?

"umm well..yeh i suppose..

N: Suppose?? Xiah you were about to suicide! giv eup your life..you must be messed up well bad!

"What else am i suppose to do huh..i can't take it anymore..I..I!

N: Oh boy well start from the top..what happend..

"hmm..well you were right 20 is still a young age to get married..after marrying her I.

.I felt as if i was in heaven seein her face everyday, she looked so cute whenever she smiled..

and then i was placed in prison for robbing some bank..

N: wha what?? robbing a bank? why the hell would you do that..?

"do I look like a bank robber!??

N: well honestly..umm your the one who wanted to end you life so at the moment i assume you just came

out of a Mental Asylum

"i couldn't control myself and laughed..

N: what i was being honest!

"naina i have absolutely missed you and your "honesty"

naina smiled..as if thats what she wanted to here..

N: go on what happened next?

"Well..i was put into jail and sentenced for six years..

N: six years?? Bloody hell you must've done some sirece damage!

!!Naina listen well..i got sentenced longer because i kept denying that i hadn't done anything..

who knew saying the truth will get you punished so much..well anyhow my wife tried alot to get

me out...but now i dont think she tried enough or gave up..because after a year she stopped visiting..

i did call her a few times but..she wouldn't say much or reply that she is busy..i began to worry about her alot..

N: hmm i suppose year without you by herside was tough huh..so maybe..

"yes she did..she bloody replaced me! she.. i love her..and i waited ..i counted each and everyday to get out so i can hug her

so i can hold her! i can touch her..i can...but no she didn't even care about me she, she Bloody eerr!! that effin w**re!

she re..replaced me! she got a bloody bas***d to re

(((i couldn't finish..it hurt so much inside..to think that my love my wife with another! i could feel drops of tears going down my cheeks)))

Naina came closer..

N: Xiah please don't waste your precious tears..she isn't worth it! tears are valuable and should always be kept within..

please don't cry and waste them...Xiah your not even 30 yet..and you want to give up your life? for what..do you care to think

what will happen to the people that care for you? what will happen to those who have been with you..what would happen to me..

(((i looked up at her..i felt a little guilty..but my heart pained so much..)))

"Naina i love her..it just hurts seeing her with..

naina went down on her knees in front of me..and covered my mouth with her hand

N: Xiah...i know how you feel..and you no what no of my feelings..emotions changed after crying every night

sure it made me feel a tinsy bit better but wasn't worth it. i still have my feelings for that some one..and i..well just stop please

((( I looked deep into naina's light brown eyes as they sparkled looking back at mine..

it felt weird..i always use to feel some kind of connection during the college days whenever i was upset naina would comfort me

and look deep into my eyes)))

N: Xiah stop it..your doing it again!

"naina..what..are you okay..

N: please don't look at me like that you know how i feel...

"what? what are you talking about naina..naina?

N: huh..oh a nothing..umm well ooh coffee's getting cold..

>>>she gave me a mug...and well we both drank in silence.

" umm naina..where is the bathroom?

N: kyun zorr se laagi hain kya..?

"Naina..please..

N: haha..well upstairs on the second door to the left.

i went up the stairs .as i was passing the hall way going towards the second door to the left.i passed the first door

it looked very elegant from outside.. i know it's rude but i felt like i had to enter the room..so i did..

the room was so weird first you go in thinking it's a very mature room..but then behind the door there are bags of bags..

stacks of shoes...boxes and boxes of cosmetics.and so much more that i can't even name..

i was guessing it has to be naina's room..

there was some sort of pin board filled with pictures of

(((me and naina

everywhere...i mean i am her close friend but there are others..ermm jouty for instance is even a closer friend to naina than me..

i saw a picture of jouty but it was a pretty small picture..there was a picture of me and naina of what from when we were 14/15

i had my arms around naina and she smiling happily..now come to think of it we were pretty close..

them were the days...i remember a day when me and naina went camping...it was just the two of us for a time...

she was so scared she wouldn't stop digging her face into me..haha..hmm i don't know what but i felt something then...)))

i heard the front door open..so i rushed into the bathroom)))

i hurried along down stairs to see who it was..my mind screamed WTF??

naina was hugging some one .. it was some guy?

as i reached the ground floor naina noticed and pulled back and the guy turned..

N: you took long..well hero this is xiah..my best friend..you know..the one that got married early..

i gaev some sort of evils at naina in some what anger..

naina mouthed sorry

N: and uhhr xiah this is hero..

(((hmm...hero ? hero hero HERO!)))

"huh? hero that creep guy..you were so protective about him and wouldn't tell me why..?"

Hero coughed : wha what?

N: uhhr bro get in ...i'll be a minute..

Hero disappeared into the living room.

i mouthed the words bro..why was she calling someone that she has a crush on bro?

"he's your"

N: Yes he's my brother!"

"when did you decide to put a rakhi on him?"

N: xiah just stop! stop it! since i we went to high school you have been bickering on about him..

do you know how much it hurt listening to you and others making fun of him.

"what..what are you on about?"

N: remember whenever we were in that cantine place we use to see him and you use to scream

piece of crap coming through...

"Naina what..i was joking..i didnt.know..."

"HUH says the man thats been thorugh jaill and all..you haev a nerve saying that now..has seeing your wife

shagging someone else cleared your mind..!"

Hero opened the door

H: you what??

i got angry boy she broke my heart..she embarrased me ..i could feel i was burning red..i had to get out..

i looked straight into naina's eyes..

"i was just joking but YOU have gone too far!"

i slammed the door shut and stomped towards nowhere..

I shouted in anger :: just as i was feeling a bit better remembering the old days ..she killed it ,,she killed the moment!

what was i thinking...she's my old naina..No! my naina use to be nice caring..would tell me whats wrong whats right

she'd joke around with me and help me.. this one!! grr this one isn't my naina..her hearts made out of stone..its like she's

angry and she bloody blames me for it!

"I don't!"

i looked up as soon as i heard that..nothing there..then i turned and saw naina smiling..

eeek i made a fool of my self again..why do i keep thinking someone above is talking to me ..

i turned away and kept walking...wondering what she was going to do..

i kept on tryign to peek to see if she was following me...but felt bad when she wasn't..

i felt angrier and walked faster..i could her footsteps getting closer ..a smile appeared on my face

i turned to see the hairest man alive..

"Orright mate!"

it was this huge randon man of some sort jogging..

i saw naina still there behind me laughing...

she looked so cute... i couldn't resist and went closer to her..and closer.

she stood there smiling...gosh i missed that smile!

the next thing i saw was naina dissappearing as soon as a ball hits here..

i stood there shocked and recollected what had just happened

" sir.."

i looked up"doh"

"sir"

i looked around and saw a little boy...

"sir ball..ball"

"me?"

"yes my ball..please"

"ball??." i looked around and spotted a ball on the room of the green house near by

"hmm..don't worry i'll get it.."

i got the ball and gaev it to the boy..10 seconds later he threw it at me again..

i looked at him confused.

"play..ball.."

"you want ME to play?"

he nodded..

come on now..

i started playing with him..it wa\s fun imust say ..something i havnt done in years.

"whats your name?" I asked

"Andrew..!"

"neat name"

he smiled..he looked kinda cute i must say ...huh funny if i had a son he'd be just his age,

some one tapped me on my shoulders i got jumped and turned...

N: what the hell do you think you are doing? i've been looking worriedly around for you like some mental freak!

what are you doing>>??huh??

boy was she angry...she looked so scared and lost...but no i remembered what she had said about me..

" so what do you care huh?? can't you see im playing with my friend!"

naina rolled her eyes..

" he's a true friend..at least he doesn't say anything that'd hurt me!"

naina went speechless .she looked down

N: im..im sorry ..xiah i didn't mean..

"look at me and say it i can't hear you.."

she gave me a cold look.. and sighed

N: xiah i mean it i'm sorry ..i didn't mean to hurt you! i

" naina what you said didn't hurt! its not what your saying that hurts..

you never said about having a brother forget who he IS!

N:i had reasons..

"what? what reasons..what was it that hid you from beign ashamed of him..!"

N: ashamed?? see tahts why i don't speak upto you you just you uhhr!

"andrew..you play i'll be back..!"

i led naina to a bench nearby..

"tell me!"

N: its weird..never actually had anyone listening to me or asking about my problems..

"Naina..im listening tell me!"

N: well you know in high school i missed a year worth of education

"yeh..you were taking a gap year or something.."

N: well it wasn't exactly like that..mom and dad were on holiday just before the summer break..baji

was off in america..and me and hero bro left at home..i never realised or would even think hero would steal!

"Steal???"

N: yeh..he stole money from dad's safe..he stole his credit cards..and he went that far that he took mom's gold.

just to waste it on gambling..

"what?? steal from parents! forget that but gambling isn't your family strictly against that?"

N: mhmm...thats why he was kicked out..and we were forbidden to speak to him..he was in college ..you know the

one linked with our high school..it hurt me alot..he hurt us alot..dad was so angry he nearly killed him! it was

horrible..

Naina slowly started crying...

N: growing up knowing there should be someone else with you is hard.. i spent half of my life without hero..

But two years ago hero came back..he was gone for 5 years..he disappeared ...i would cry all night praying

he's okay..he came back..he had been working..he had recived a good job with high wages..he came back and

payed each and every penny which was ever spent on him...dad went all soft and both appologised to each other.

i wiped naina's tears..it hurt me to see her hurt..

"im sorry naina,..i i overacted..im sorry for everything,,"

naina smiled a little!

N: xiah..i've missed you so much..i missed your sayings and quotes..and your philosypher brain..!

i couldn't stop smiling..

N: im sorry if you felt i'm blaming you..xiah i haven't changed its you..

" naina..i understand..your lonely..dont worry..i..im here."

she smiled..N: you were always with me ...if i wanted to i could make that lonesome disappear..but i didn't,

even today you are in my heart my thoughts..and i love you..

with that she disappeared..

i'm totally gobsmaked..naina..?? what ..i felt like crying..what just happened?? i looked around andrew cae over..

"uncle lets play,"

"uhh andrew...wheres is the lady that was here??"

"Lady?? what lady ?? i did not see anyone!"

"what?? there was a lady ..i sat on the bench with her..i.."

i wondered for a minute: was that actually her..hmm or a dejavu?...i mean she couldn't have just...

she said she loves me..she...cried she..??

i had to go and see her i just had to ..what was happening to me?/!!!

i stood infront of her door and knocked lightly..hero opened it..

" you again..came to call me more names have you!"

" err..no uhhr sorry about that..! umm naina..!"

H: Naina..the creeps back..

naina rushed out side ..and hugged me...then pushed back..

n:WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN? i've been bloody worried sick!

don't you ever leave me like that again i've had enough of you leaving me!

i stood there numb..what i was told before was it true..i knew i had weird feelings for her but love?

it was three minutes to twelve my head was just bursting with thoughts..

naina ordered me to stay huh thats my naina lol!

"hmm my naina>>i've just realised i can't stop saying that..its like im obsessed with her or something!"

just an hour ago she was going down the stairs and slipped a bit while i was going up and catched her

boy was she mesmerizing! the warmth between us was awesome..

naina came in..all in white..out of a dream .i smiled..she came and sat beside me on the bed.

.and handed me a cup of coffee

"hmm warm coffee just what i need!"

she smiled..right thats it she is planning to kill me ..her eyes were staring at me which soemwhat made me

blush..its weird i never blush..and her smile was oozing!

N: xiah im sorry for whatever i said before and i'm glad you came back..

i suppose i haven't exactly been open towards you..xiah i mean it i'm sorry ..i didn't mean to hurt you! i

" naina what you said didn't hurt! its not what your saying that hurts..

you never said about having a brother forget who he IS!"

N: well you know in high school i missed a year worth of education

"yeh..you were taking a gap year or something.."

N: well it wasn't exactly like that..mom and dad were on holiday just before the summer break..baji

was off in america..and me and hero bro left at home..i never realised or would even think hero would steal!

"Steal???"

N: yeh..he stole money from dad's safe..he stole his credit cards..and he went that far that he took mom's gold.

just to waste it on gambling..

"what?? steal from parents! forget that but gambling isn't your family strictly against that?"

N: mhmm...thats why he was kicked out..and we were forbidden to speak to him..he was in college ..you know the

one linked with our high school..it hurt me alot..he hurt us alot..dad was so angry he nearly killed him! it was

horrible..

Naina slowly started crying...

N: growing up knowing there should be someone else with you is hard.. i spent half of my life without hero..

But two years ago hero came back..he was gone for 5 years..he disappeared ...i would cry all night praying

he's okay..he came back..he had been working..he had recived a good job with high wages..he came back and

payed each and every penny which was ever spent on him...dad went all soft and both appologised to each other.

i wiped naina's tears..it hurt me to see her hurt..

"im sorry naina,..i i overacted..im sorry for everything,,"

naina smiled a little!

N: xiah..i've missed you so much..i missed your sayings and quotes..and your philosypher brain..!

i couldn't stop smiling..

N: im sorry if you felt i'm blaming you..xiah i haven't changed its you..

((((OMG i've dreamp't this before!..is she gonna say what i think she is,,)))))

she smiled..N: you were always with me ...if i wanted to i could make that lonesome disappear..but i didn't,

"mmm go on..?"

N: yeh well..WHAT?

"say it!"

N: what?

" i know its in your mind and heart just say it!"

she looked extremely freaked out.

N: xiah what are you talking about

i went closer to her i just had to ..>>>an hour later<<<

N: xiah i love. you. i only from your thoughts ...now i feel like i ..i cannot live without you.

____________________________________________________

="i suppose i get you..but do you think..i love her.."

i tried to explain it to him bu the was just too difficult.

="i donno its not nothing like she's cheated on me but i feel like she doen't love me and i."

i said " you know sonny.. if she comes back she's yours!"

="hmm.."

i am all yours..said a voice.. i looked up..mm i really need to get rid of that habit!

he stood up ..i was shocked..

he screamed sairah and ran towards her she did the same..i smiled

awww young love..

he came back running to me a minute later..

="xiah uncle thank you very much...she came back..she came back!!"

"yes Andrew she did..well i'll be off..naina'll be waiting " i said

i smiled and made my way home..

i knocked on the door and my beautiful wife greeted me with a pleasant kiss.

it was our 10th anniversary..our daughter was off at her aunt baji's for a day letting me and naina enjoy are day!

naina made a delicious meal...we talked and i told her about how Andrew was about to do the same as i was

gonna a few years back..

"but u my angel saved me!"

N: i'm glad i was there...you know you really worry me,,what if i wasn't there?? what would have happened?

i wanted have all this pleasure and happiness..or a beautiful daughter like we have! and we

I kissed her..making both of us loose our senses..

i needed the women to shut up..that's the past..it all relys on fate!

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I haven't done as well on this oneshot than the others. sorry about that..my exams are eating me up!

but hopefully you enjoyed it:D

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 16 years ago
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Kidnap

Written by KC294
It was a cold November evening. The wind was blowing hard. It was a perfect night to end your life because there was no one about. I had dreamt so many times of this night. It was the night I was released from prison and when I went back to the love of my life. But she had betrayed me by replacing me with someone else. At the tower bridge I climbed onto the beam when...

"Are you sure you want to do that?"

Max turned around to see a girl with skin as white as milk and eyes as big as a doe's.

Max: go away.

Girl: How can I? Why don't you value the gift of life? Is it so worthless that you wish to end it?

Max: what do you know about life? You are young you still have your life ahead of you.

Girl: so do you. You don't look that old to me. What has gone wrong in your life that you want to end it?

Max: I was framed and sent to prison for a theft I didn't commit. I just got released and thought to myself finally I was going home to see my girl. But she had already replaced me with someone else. Apparently she didn't want to be in a relationship with a criminal.

Girl: you can start fresh. You think you have it tough you should see the people out there if u hear their stories then your problems might look small.

Max: how can I start fresh? Who will give me a job? You forget I have a record even that for theft.

Girl: Well I don't know about hiring but I can help you prove your innocence. I am Detective Salma Pollard. I was actually looking for you Max. I have reason to believe that the person who framed you is now framing my brother Sam. You may know him, Samir Pollard.

Max: Sam... Omg he is a good guy why would anyone to frame him?

Salma: That's why I need your help. Are you willing to help me?

Max: yeah I guess that would give me something to do. I do however need somewhere to stay.

Salma: you can stay at my apartment. I have a spare room you can use and as for work if you are willing to wait tables I guess my big sis could give you a job.

Max: if you set up an interview with her I'll be grateful and once I get a job I'll pay you rent.

Salma: yeah sure. I think you should get of that ledge before you accidently fall off.

Max gets off the ledge and walks toward Salma. They walk to her midnight black Ferrari.

Max: wow you must earn a lot to afford this car.

Salma: actually it's a gift from my sisters. They figured since I was a detective I deserved a fast car so on my birthday they got me this car.

Max: They must love you a lot.

Salma: yeah more than any blood sisters of mine would if I had any blood sisters.

Max: what... you mean you guys are not related by birth?

Salma: no of course not. Baji is oldest and runs the most popular restaurant in town. Any guesses which one it is?

Max: No way... you are telling me you are pals with the owner of Planet Blue Cafe. No wonder you drive a Ferrari. I mean she drives a sleek blue Lamborghini.

Salma: [chuckles] and if you knew how many times I have booked her for speeding you'd wonder why she still has the car.

Max: so who are the other three sisters?

Salma: well there is soap director Jouty. I'm sure you know the famous singer Micky Yoochun.

Max: yeah I have met him a couple of times.

Salma: yeah his wife is my sister. Then there is Dr Sara Young, and famous songwriter Naina.

Max: looks like all your sisters are famous. No wonder you drive this baby.

Salma: yeah... I'm the only one with a blue collar job.

Max: I'm sure they don't think that. I bet they are proud of you.

Salma is about to answer when her mobile starts chirping. She presses the answer button.

Salma: Pollard...

Voice from mob: oi sallu... what u doing pollard pollard... I'm your sister not your boss

Salma: with the way you lecture you sound fiercer then my boss.

Voice from mob: ok ok... calm down just wanted to know if you could come down every one is here and I made Black forest gateaux

Max: mmm yummy

Salma: shut up

Voice from mob: ooo girls Sallu has a guy... so sallu spill

Salma: KC Baji shut up... I'm bringing Max over. Remember I told you about him

KC: ok ok... see you in awhile... love u mwahs

Salma: mwahs

Max: so I presume that was the owner of Planet Blue cafe.

Salma: yeah she is the best... hasn't had much luck with love... but her master chef Yunho has not given up on her yet

Max: wow I would love to see those 2 go head to head.

They continue to talk, learning about each other and in no time they are at the Planet Blue cafe. The place is booming and there is a long queue.

Max: how are we supposed to get in? Have you seen the queue?

Salma: max you forget I know the owner... but watch and learn...

Salma walks up to one of the bouncers.

Salma: hey Carl... table for...

Carl: they are all there including Mr Chef... you better get in b4 the boss commits a crime and murders the chef.

Salma: Max lets go...

They walk into the cafe and go straight to the back only to find KC chasing her chef with a butcher's knife.

KC: [screaming] I'm going to fire you... idiot... it's your night off get out of my cafe...

Yunho: [pleading] but Sara invited me...

KC: [fiercely] well after I slay you I shall go slay her... now go

Yunho: [gently] come on KC please... I want to have dinner with your friends...

KC: [contemplates then angrily] grrrrrrrrrrr... you wait... I'm going to hurt u where it hurts the most... I'll go find Bambi... and maybe I'll bribe her.

Yunho: [shocked and scared] no not my Bambi... I love her...

KC: [evilly] then u'll go... [She swings the butcher's knife]

Yunho: [gulps] ok... let me go make my excuses...

Salma: [steps up to KC removing the knife from her hand] Baji you do know I can arrest you for running after Yunho with a potential weapon.

KC: [sarcastically] yeah yeah... he enjoyed it

Yunho: [puppy eyes with crocodile tears] no I didn't Salma maybe you should arrest her... she could have killed me or even worse cut of important parts of my body...

KC: [raises an eyebrow] such as you dick...

Yunho: [disgusted] no my hands... I create magic with my hands... people love my food if you had hurt my hands then your cafe would go broke...

Salma: [smiles] he is right technically... so Yunho do you want me to arrest her?

Yunho: [smiles slyly] yeah go on... I'm going to press charges for harassment out of work.

Salma: [Turns to KC] you have the right to remain silent anything you do say may be used as evidence in court against you [she turns KC round and cuffs her]

KC: [shocked] you have got to be joking...

Salma: Let's go... btw Yunho fill in everyone else... max you come with me

Salma leads KC out to her Ferrari and puts her in the back. She and Max get into the car and Salma drives to the police station. When they get to the police station Salma gets KC out and takes her in. She hands her over to an officer and tells her to lock her up.

KC: [scared] please don't to this... Salma... please...

Salma: [cold] sorry I am doing my job... [Walks out of the station]

Max: [follows her] wow you sure know how to turn on and off...

Salma: [turns tears in her eyes] no I don't... I may look like I am doing my job but its breaking my heart because I know my Baji is claustrophobic and I can't do anything about it.

Max: [concerned] Call Yunho and tell him... maybe he'll spring her... you said he loves her...

Salma: [crying] I can't... I am the arresting officer...

Max: fine... I'll do it give me your phone.

Salma: [takes out her personal mobile] here... jus press 9 and the call button.

Max takes the phone from Salma and makes the call while Salma walks away.

Yunho: Planet Blue chef Yunho speaking

Max: [shouts] get your stupid back side to the police station and drop those charges or your love will end up in hospital with an anxiety attack.

Yunho: huh

Max: [gently] Yunho I think you have had your fun... come on come down and drop the charges...

Yunho: I shall see... [Puts the phone down and turns to Sara who is standing next to him] is your sister scared of something?

Sara: [thinks about it then suddenly] aw man... sugar Yunho she is claustrophobic...

Yunho: [shocked] what... I'm outta here

Yunho gets into his car and drives straight to the police station. As he comes out he finds Salma standing near her car with Max standing next to her. He jogs up to them.

Yunho: (sadly) sorry Salz... if I knew I wouldn't have put u in this position.

Salma: It's k. Just go get her out.

Yunho goes in and gets KC released from jail. Outside Salma waits in anticipation for KC to walk out and a few minutes later KC comes out looking pale but with rage burning in her eyes. She walks straight up to Salma.

KC: [looks sternly at Salma with tears in her eyes] just stay out of my way... [Turns to Yunho] I thought... never mind what I thought... I guess I was wrong... [She walks away]

Salma: [runs after her] Baji I'll drop you...

KC: I don't need your help... just go away... I have legs I can walk home.

Salma: Baji please...

KC: Salma I need time alone... Please I'll walk home...

Salma: Baji I was just doing my job...

KC: I know... see you around...

[KC walks down the road when a black van comes speeding down and screeches right beside KC. Two masked men grab her and the van speeds off leaving a shocked Salma, max and Yunho behind]

Salma: [reacts first] BAJI....

Max: [comes speeding down] what the hell happened?

Salma: [looks at Max] I think my Baji just got kidnapped.

Yunho: [guiltily] this is all my fault... if I hadn't pressed those stupid charges she would never have been in this mess.

Salma: [puts a hand on Yunho's arm] this is no random kidnapping it has been planned maybe they adjusted the plan but it has been planned. [She whips out her mobile and dials her aides number] Murray get to the station ASAP we have a kidnapping to solve. [Turns to Max] I think you should go home Yunho will drop you. Here are the keys. Stay there and if anyone calls just press the red button under my phone and it'll connect to me at my desk. Max no heroics understood.

Max: [salutes Salma] yes ma'am

Salma: [smiles] Smarty pants... now go... Yunho drop him home and go inform the others. Tell them if they hear anything to call me and I think Hero should stay at KC's apartment in case there is anything.

Yunho: yes boss.

Salma goes back to the police station while Yunho drops Max to Salma's apartment. Max goes into the apartment and looks around. After checking out his surroundings he decides to do some work to help Salma's investigation. After 2 hours of searching on the internet and breaking through firewalls to obtain figures from the company the phone rings.

Max: [absentmindedly] Hello

Baddie: Listen up mate... we have your friend and the cop's brother... Tell you cop friend to stop this investigation otherwise she will find 2 bodies on their door step.

Salma: you coward I am listening... and I shall take you all down for the cowards that you are.

Baddie: drop it for mourn the deaths of you near and dear...

[The line goes dead]

Max: Salma... these guys are serious... they could kill your brother and KC.

Salma: I know... but I can't let them know we are scared.

Max: yeah I know but that means they think we don't care about KC and Sam.

Salma: I'm having the call traced just now. I'll speak to you later. Bye

Max: wait ... I have been working on helping you with the investigation. I have found that the money I was framed for stealing was transferred from the company account to an offshore account in Austria. I have emailed the account number to you maybe you can have someone find out whose name that account is under. There is another off shore account I just have to find it and maybe we will be able to clear your brother.

Salma: Thank you Max. You have been a great help. If you get anything else jus email it to me and please stay out of trouble.

Max: Yes I will don't worry. You take care bye

Salma: bye

They both hang up and Max gets back to work to find out more information on the other account. Meanwhile at the police station Salma is now trying to calm her 3 worried sisters.

Salma: come-on Dee you know I was doing my job.

Naina: Salma that was not even funny... I mean arresting Baji because of Yunho even that when you were off duty...

Jouty: Naina give her a break... it's done now let's help get Baji back. Salma fill us in.

Salma: well this is a planned kidnapping. These people know that if they had just kidnapped Sam it wouldn't hit me that hard because my brother is trained in martial arts but now that they have KC Baji they know neither I nor Sam is going to take any risks.

Sara: did you trace the call?

Salma: yeah it was made from the phone booth just across the street and the CCTV camera has been disabled.

Naina: what about the offshore account?

Salma: shhhh... you guys chief will skin me alive... you know I put my career on the line leaking the info to you guys. The offshore account belongs to Mr Akaash Nanda.

Sara: Akaash... omg...

Jouty: but why would he do that to Max and now Sam?

Salma: well at the moment he is our top suspect and tomorrow morning Murray and I plan to visit him.

Naina: I just want our Baji back... she must be pretty scared.

Sara: yeah her claustrophobia must really be kicking in.

Salma: I just home Sam is there with her and that they are not apart...

"We have a homicide on Salam court, Victim found outside Mr Yunho Jung's House and identified as Miss Fatemah Kassamali"

Salma: [shouts] Murray let's move... [Turns to her three shocked sisters] you guys can follow if you want. I'll call the guys once I get in the car. One of them can pick Max up.

Sara: [gasps] it's not true... Baji can't die...

Salma: Sara Dee pleases... I need to go check... do you want me to get someone to drive u there?

Jouty: [with tears streaming down her face she takes charge] yeah Salma I think you shud get us a cab or something. Sara is in no state to drive. And I hope you will also not be driving.

Salma: you can ride with officer Parks in his car and I'll go with Murray

They all leave the police station and get to Salam court where they find Yunho sitting next to the corpse. Sara, Naina and Jouty run to him and once all three have seen the face its hits home that their big sister has left them. Salma comes up behind and looks at the face.

Salma: [Cold voice] how did it happen?

Officer: looks like she had a severe anxiety attack and her heart couldn't take it. It looks like a heart failure.

Yunho: [tear ravaged face in a furious voice] then I should be dead too because her heart is connected to mine. Her heart can't fail.

Salma: guys I need you to move the paramedics are here and so are the guys.

Naina: [gasp] wait guys... she took a breath [eyes side] I just saw it...SHE IS NOT DEAD

Junsu walks up and hugs her

Junsu: [whisper] I am sorry baby come on let the paramedics look at her

Naina: [screaming] I am not seeing things [points at KC] look she just took another breath...

Paramedic: please everyone move back let me see what is going on.

They all move away. Salma walks away not able to bear the pain crushing her chest.

Salma: [thinking] this is all my fault. I should have gone undercover to conduct this investigation. Now because of me Baji is dead.

Behind her Max comes and puts his hand on her shoulder. Salma turns around and looks into Max's eyes.

Max: It's not your fault. You were just doing your job.

Salma: I know I was just doing my job but it's not supposed to affect the people I care about and it's certainly not supposed to kill my sister.

Max: Salma sometimes thing are just meant to be. It was KC's time to go and whether it was an anxiety attack or a gunshot death only needed an excuse.

Salma: [tears] yeah but she was young... she had never been happy... I really thought when Yunho came to work with her she would find the happiness she deserved.

Max: [takes Salma in his arms] Hey maybe she wasn't meant to experience love in this life or maybe the almighty decided she had gone through enough. [Stroking Salma's hair] All we can do now is give her the best farewell she deserves and remember the happy times you spent with her.

Salma: I guess I need time to come to terms with it. There will be so much to do and...

Max: just take your time and calm down... first we have to find these people before they kill your brother.

Salma: yeah we do... let's go I think the paramedics are about to take her away.

Max: are you going to be ok?

Salma: [smiles slightly] yeah thanks... Max ... never mind

Max: you can trust me with anything. Whatever you are doing is going to clear my record.

Salma: like I said it's my job. Anyways let's go...

They walk back to the paramedics to see KC hooked up to an oxygen tank. Salma looks at Sara enquiringly

Sara: she's in a critical condition. Baji has been having cardiac arrests that why at first we thought she was dead. All we can now do is pray that her heart survives.

Salma: do we know how much damage her heart has sustained?

Micky: no we don't but once we get to the hospital and they do the necessary tests we will know.

Max: Sara you are a doctor right? What are the chances?

Sara: I want to say they are high... but because of how long she was like that the chances are pretty low. Unless we get a heart in for her we are looking at a possible coma.

Salma: well I have to get back to the station. Keep me informed and if there is anything I can do just let me know.

Hero: [concerned] Salma will you be ok?

Salma: yes hero jiju... I will be fine... I'm going to find the b******* who did this and lock them up for a very long time.

Junsu: Salma you can't make it personal otherwise you could get removed from the investigation and that means that we won't have information that may come in handy.

Salma: you guy's please no heroics... If you want to help go to the hospital and stay with your partners.

Junsu: what about Max?

Salma: max is coming with me... I need his help.

Sara: are you going to Akaash tomorrow?

Salma: yes Murray and I are going I will keep you informed. I hope we can find some clues tonight.

Jouty: good luck... I think we'll go to the hospital now.

Salma and Max leave for the police station while the rest go to the hospital. At the police station Salma put max in a room with computers and signed him on to her network.

Salma: you can do your research and access any information u need.

Salma turns to leave and head for her office when Max grabs her hand.

Max: Salz don't stress yourself... get some rest you have an interview tomorrow.

Salma: [smiles] just shows what you know about a cop... Our sleep is a luxury that we indulge in on quiet days.

Max: I know that but if you look at yourself in the mirror then you'll see why I am telling you to get rest. I don't want you to fall over with fatigue.

Salma: ok I'll grab some sleep later on.

As the night passes Max works on what he can find and then heads to find Salma and forces her to sleep. The next day Salma and Murray go to see Akaash only to find that he has left to go to china on a business trip. As the month of November passes Salma works on every angle to solve the case while KC slips into a coma. Max and Salma work closely together to uncover the identity of the second account holder and the more time they spend together brings them closer together. They ate their meals together and as the time went on max got know Salma on a more personal level.

In the first week of December Salma finally gets her break when Akaash returns from his business trip. Salma, Murray and Max go to Akaash's 6 million dollar mansion to interview him. Max stays in Salma's car listening to the interview.

Salma: Mr Nanda we have information that you hold an offshore account in Austria. Is this true?

Akaash: no

Salma: well it is in your name and the money one of your employee's was supposed to have stolen has turned up in that account. If that account is in your name then sure you know something about it?

Akaash: I am telling you I don't know what you are talking about.

Murray: isn't it true that you visited Austria on your way back from your business trip in china?

Akaash: yes I did. I needed a little recuperation.

Murray: well sir... we have the bank records on that offshore account and the record shows that you have used money from that account.

Akaash: [getting angry and shouts] I TOLD YOU I DON'T KNOW

Salma: Mr Nanda, calm down... do you know that when a person is lying they sweat and their heart rate increases. Right now Mr Nanda you are sweating like a pig. So do both of us a favour and tell me the truth otherwise I shall be arresting you on Max's statement and then you won't get a deal from me.

Akaash: what does max know? He's a puny accountant.

Salma: [laughs] not anymore... he has toughened up.

Akaash: [sneers] if he knew anything then he would have said it in court. You are just trying to make me say things.

Salma: ahh so you are hiding something.

Akaash: you will never make me speak... now if you don't mind I have work to do.

Salma: yeah sure... but be sure of one thing Mr. Nanda this afternoon I will be coming in with your arrest warrant.

Akaash: dream all you want detective.

Salma and Murray make their way to the door. Murray opens the door just as Salma is about to exit.

Salma: [turns around] btw Mr. Nanda... your accomplice confessed last night and that is why your arrest warrant will be in this afternoon.

Akaash: [shocked] No... Natasha would never have confessed. It's not true... you are lying... Her account was untraceable. I made sure of it.

Salma: well you certainly did not try hard enough. Mr Nanda you are under arrest for fraud and theft. You have the right to remain silent however if you do or say anything it may be used against you in court as evidence. Murray cuff him and bring him to the police station.

Murray: yes sir.

Murray cuffs Akaash and takes him to the car. Salma follows them and indicates to Max to follow them to the station. When they get to the station Akaash is taken to an interview room where Salma and Murray interrogate him. Akaash asks for his lawyer and his lawyer comes for the interrogation.

Salma: Mr Nanda will you tell us where you have taken Mr Sam Pollard. He has been kidnapped and been in the custody of the kidnappers for over a month.

Akaash: I am not surprised that Natasha blamed that one on me as well but I honestly don't know where they are keeping him. If I did I would tell you so I could negotiate with you but the kidnapping was up to Natasha.

Salma: what about Miss Fatemah Kassamali?

Akaash: she wasn't supposed to die. Those idiots Natasha hires are so incompetent.

Salma: well now u have murder on your hands as well.

Akaash: I never told her to kill anyone... That wasn't part of the plan... you can't pin murder on me.

Salma: well the jury will decide that one. This interview is terminated at 13:07.

Salma leaves the interrogation room and heads to her office. Max stands up the minute he sees her. Her face is pale and the dark circles under her eyes are more noticeable.

Max: hey... you don't look so good.

Salma: Because of these criminals my Baji is in hospital fighting for her life and my brother could be dead. I'm going for a maximum sentence. They will pay for this pain.

Max: [gathers Salma in his arms] what you need right now is some rest and a hot shower.

Salma: [leans her forehead into max's chest] I know but I have to keep looking for Natasha... If we don't find her we will never find Sam.

Max: Salz look at me... [putting his finger under her chin he lifts it so that their eyes meet] we will find Sam but ur mind needs to be clear... and right now I suggest a shower and a nap.

Salma: [smiles] I never thought there would be someone who would be so concerned about me. Thank you Max for being there. I wish I had help and support like yours for each one of my cases.

Max: what makes you think I plan on leaving? Now that I have found you I plan on staying and sticking close by... I'm not going to lose you. Now go home get a shower and sleep and I'll be there in an hour... I'll pass by the hospital and see how KC is doing. [He drops a quick kiss on her for head and turns her around towards the door giving her a gentle push towards it] go...

Salma: [laughs] ok boss... see you later...

Salma goes home while Max goes to the hospital where Jaejoong, Junsu, Yunho and Yoochun were waiting for him. They all gathered in the cafeteria while Sara sat with KC.

Max: Thank you Yunho... I know how hard it is for you to stay away from her but it is imperative that we look for Natasha ourselves. Even though Salma is trying this woman is as slippery as an eel.

Yoochun: but how do we find her?

Max: well she knows now that I know who she is... I have to contact her and then we set a trap and call Salma... so that when Natasha falls into the trap she can arrest her.

Yunho: I am all for it... so what's the plan?

Jaejoong: are you sure this is wise? Salma will be hauling our back sides into lockup if she finds out.

Junsu: but we are helping her and besides we are doing this for KC noona. Look at what they did to her. She needs to be punished.

Max: so we are together on this?

Yunho: count me in...

Junsu: me too

Yoochun: ok I'll help

Jaejoong: I still think we will get into trouble but hey... it can't be that bad. Well I hope it's not that bad. So what's the plan?

Max explains the plan to guys and they all set out to get the plan into motion. Jaejoong keeps the girls company at the hospital while Yoochun and Junsu go to get the video equipment. Max and Yunho go to Yunho's apartment and start making the necessary calls for the equipment they need. They all meet up 2 hours later outside Yunho's apartment.

Yoochun: is this the van?

Max: yeah it is. Yunho and I have set all the recording equipment in there. So are we ready?

Yoochun: yeah... Junsu and I will go back to the hospital so that the girls don't become suspicious. If they ask about Yunho we'll say we put him to sleep.

Max: great... when we are done we'll call you guys. I pray this plan succeeds.

Junsu: yah it will... now lets get moving.

Max: okies so let's roll... see you guys later...

Yoochun and Junsu head back to the hospital while Yunho and Max head off to Natasha's apartment. When Max and Yunho get outside her apartment Max calls her from his mobile.

Natasha: Hello...

Max: Natasha... this is Max

Natasha: Max who Max?

Max: I am hurt that you have forgotten who I am. You sent me to jail remember for laundering 2 million dollars. Now does that ring any bells?

Natasha: Oh it's you... what do you want?

Max: well you do know that Akaash has been caught and he has blamed it all on you. I figured you'd want a heads up.

Natasha: That arrogant so and so... wait till I get my hands on him.

Max: I think you are better off leaving the country then getting your hands on him or he could charge you for attempted murder or assault.

Natasha: that's a good idea... but how do I know that this is not a trap?

Max: I know it was Akaash who transferred the money and that he is blaming you. I always thought you were too sweet to be his business partner and I don't want you to be framed like he framed me.

Natasha: aw max you are so sweet. Thanks for the heads up. Maybe one bay we'll meet up.

Natasha hangs up and makes a call straight after. In the van...

Yunho: Max where did u learn how to hack into secure websites?

Max: the less you know the better. They teach you a lot in jail and when I was released I had planned to bring these guys down but my girl friend had already replaced me and I was heartbroken. I guess if it hadn't been for Salma I would have been dead and Salma's Brother would have been in jail and KC would not be fighting for her life. Anyways someone's picked up on the other side lets listen and get these co-ordinates to where she is calling.

Yunho and Max listen to Natasha's conversation and record it. They also get the co-ordinates to where the phone call has been made to and after the conversation Max calls Salma.

Salma: [groggily] hello

Max: I think I know where your brother is

Salma: [now fully awake] where are you Max?

Max: outside Natasha's apartment... Let me give you the address. You may also want to alert security at all the airports. Bus stations and train stations about Natasha. She may try and escape tonight. Oh and send a unit down here as well. So they can keep an eye on her.

Salma: [while putting on her clothes] how do you know all this?

Max: I just know... The more time you waste with questions the better chance she has of escaping. I'll see you outside that warehouse.

Salma: Max just take care.

Max: I'll see you at the ware house.

Max hangs up and waits with Yunho for the police unit to come before they can leave for the warehouse.

Yunho: you love her don't u?

Max: [turns looking confused] what? Who?

Yunho: [laughs] Salma you monkey

Max: [mummers] no I don't

Yunho: [cheekily] yeah yeah... we all know how much time you guys have been spending together.

Max: just to solve this case.

Yunho: the sir doth protest too much...

Max: Yunho jus shut it... the unit is here lets go to the ware house.

Yunho: ok don't get your knickers in a twist...

Max and Yunho drive to the ware house and wait for Salma to get there. Five minutes later the door of the ware house opens and out come three armed men. One of the armed men was dragging a hooded man by the arm towards a black van.

Max: we need to distract them... any ideas?

Yunho: uh... no unless you have a gun....

Max: Get Salma on the phone and tell her they are moving... I'll go distract them...

Yunho: Max wait...

Max gets out of the car and heads towards the men.

Max: [looking all innocent] excuse me...

The kidnappers turn around with their guns aimed at Max.

Max: [steps back] whoa... I was just going to ask for directions... I am kind of lost so I need to get out of here...

Kidnapper 1: where do u want to go?

Max: uhh see my boyfriend and I were going to see his parents and they gave us this address but I haven't passed a single house... it's just a ware house's for miles....

Kidnapper 2: why don't you ask you boyfriend?

Max: well see they moved recently... so my boyfriend doesn't know where the new house is.

Just then Yunho joins Max....

Yunho: so...

Max: Yunnie boo... they were just about to give us the directions [grabs Yunho's hand]

Yunho: [looks shocked] address...

Max: [making eyes at Yunho] yeah to you parent's house... sweetie we are going there remember...

Yunho: [smiles at Max] of course I remember Maxi... it's just that my brain is still sleeping darling...

Kidnapper 1: stop you guys are making me sick... give me the address and I'll give you directions.

Max gives the Kidnapper a far away address and it takes the kidnapper awhile to figure out the directions. Meanwhile Yunho is whispering furiously to Max.

Yunho: yunnie boo... yunnie boo... do I look like a yunnie boo to you...

Max: I had to think on my feet... if I had just said we were friends they would have blasted us to hell... this way they don't think of us as a threat...

Yunho: the guys better not hear about this...

Max: and who is going to tell them?

Kidnapper 1: here you are... we have drawn a map... here you go.

Max moves forward when suddenly...

"POLICE FREEZE... DROP YOUR WEAPONS AND PUT YOUR HANDS UP... YOU ARE SURROUNDED"

Max: thank god she made it...

Suddenly shots start to fly and Yunho jumps on Max stop him getting hit.

Max: what the hell is going on?

Yunho: the kidnappers started firing...

Max: Omg let me up... Salma could get hit...

Yunho: relax max... she's a cop... She'll be ok...

Max: no... She won't stop at anything... [Max struggles to get away from Yunho. They tussle on the ground. Yunho tries his best to keep Max down but in the end Max gets away and runs towards the police cars...]

Salma: MAX GET DOWN...

Max is hit by a bullet on his right shoulder and goes down....

Salma: MAX... Civilian down... get an ambulance... I'm going to get him.

Murray: [pulls Salma back] no way... they'll hit you... can't you see bullets are still flying

Salma: but he'll die... let go of me and that's an order

Murray: no way... your orders don't count when you put yourself in danger.

Salma: Let me go... [She kicks Murray and when his grip loosens she pulls herself and runs towards max]

Salma runs towards Max dodging bullets while Yunho shouts for her to get down. What feels like years takes only a few seconds. Finally she is there and see's that he's still breathing. Salma takes Max's head and places it on her lap...

Salma: don't you dare leave me... otherwise I will haunt you... [Tears in her eyes] say something Max... tell me what a fool I am that I ran to you while bullets are being exchanged... Max please... [She starts sobbing] The ambulance will be here soon and so will back up... and if you die then KC Baji will never forgive you or me... Max please

Max: [opens his eyes] I love you Salma [closes his eyes again and slips into unconsciousness]

Salma: MAX....

As the gun battles quiets down Salma is still sitting there with Max's head in her lap oblivious to her surroundings. As the kidnappers are apprehended and Sam untied the paramedics rush towards Max.

Paramedic 1: Ma'am you need to move please...

Salma: [looks dazed] huh!!!

Paramedic 2: why don't you come with me Ma'am... and let my friend here check your friend out...

Yunho: [comes running towards Salma] are you ok? Where is Max?

Paramedic 2: Do you know her?

Yunho: yeah this is Detective Salma Pollard... and that guy there is Max...

Paramedic 2: Why don't you come with me and Salma and maybe we can get Salma out of her shock...

Yunho: what about Max? He will be ok right?

Paramedic 2: we will try to do our best

Yunho goes with the paramedic and Salma and they get Salma out of shock... Once Salma is out of shock she rushes to the ambulance where Max is being loaded...

Salma: [whispers] is he... is he....

Paramedic 1: he is alive... but we need to get him to hospital... do you want to ride with us?

Salma: yeah sure... [Turns to Yunho standing behind her] tell Murray that I'll meet him at the station later and Sam that I'll wait for him at the hospital

Yunho: Ok Salma... Take care and see you at the Hospital...

Salma gets in the back of the ambulance and rides to the hospital. Max is taken for an emergency surgery to remove the bullet. The gang all spilt up between sitting with KC and waiting with Salma. Finally after three hours the surgery is a success. The Doctor informs Salma that even though Max has lost blood his condition is stable.

Salma: when can I see him Doctor?

Doc: just now... he should be in the private ward the nurse here will take you...

Salma goes with the nurse to Max's room... he lays there pale with a drip attached to his arm. She goes and sits next to him takes his hand in hers...

Salma: so... you decided to end up here... Max please wake up...

Salma sits there the whole night talking to Max. During the night Sara, Naina and Jouty come to sit with her. Sam also comes to sit with her for awhile before heading home.

The next morning.... Max opens his eyes and the pain hits him with force. As he looks around he see's Salma asleep on the chair next to the bed with her head resting next to their entwined hands.

Max: Salma... [He shakes their hands] Salma.... wake up

Salma's eyes open and she she's max awake and hugs him tightly

Max: [groans] ouch...

Salma: [moves away] oh sorry... I forgot you were hurt... how are you feeling? Do you need anything? Should I call the doctor? Of course I should... wait here... don't move I'll go get him...

Max: Salma relax... I am ok... yes I am in pain... and I have already pressed the call button... the doctor should be here just now...

Salma: I'm so glad you are ok... they caught the kidnappers... and Sam is ok... [The light goes out of her eyes] but Baji is still in a coma....

Max: she will be ok... come here... but be gentle please...

Salma hugs Max... burying her face in his neck...

Salma: I thought I was going to lose you... don't you ever do that again...

Max: I promise I'll try never to get shot at again....

Salma: [Moves away from Max] Max... you know before you became unconscious you said something... do you remember what you said?

Max: [looks into her eyes] that I love you...

Salma: yeah...did you mean that?

Max: Salma of course I did... you have become my life... I would be incomplete without you... in fact I was going to ask you to marry me...

Salma: [tears of happiness in her eyes] aw Max... I love you too... I thought I lost you ... I would have died if I had lost you...

Max: hey... don't cry...

Salma: they are tears of happiness....

Max: [Takes Salma's hand] I know this isn't the most romantic place and I don't have the ring yet... but I don't see any reason in wasting time. Salma... My heart... My life... My love... will you marry me?

Salma: oh Max yes I will....

Max pulls Salma into his arms and their lips meet in a tender kiss that turns passionate. They lose awareness of their environment. After what seems like seconds a cough interrupts them... they jump apart and see Yunho and Jaejoong standing at the door.

Yunho: maybe we should come back later....

Salma: [blushing] no you guys stay here... I'll go see Baji...

Yunho: [his face changes and turns grave] actually that's why we came... Salma she's not doing that well and the Doctor doesn't think she'll make it... in fact he has given up hope... and has given us the option to switch off the machine... since you and your sisters are her family we thought it would be up to you...

Salma: [hearing all this sits down on the chair] how am I supposed to kill her? How am I supposed to take your love away from you Yunho? How can you even ask me to do that?

Max: Salma is right... I don't think the girls can decide because they will forever feel the guilt that they took her away from you. I mean she survived those arrests how do you know she won't come out of the coma. Have some faith.

Jaejoong: I think you should go them Salma...

Salma walks towards KC's room and hears laughter coming from the room. She rushes to see KC sitting up and chatting to Sara, Jouty and Naina. KC looks up to see Salma standing at the door.

KC: [holds out her arms] sallu aren't you going to say hello?

Salma runs to her Baji's arms and hugs her tightly.

KC: are you crying?

Salma: do you know what they told me... they told me that you were dying and that we had to remove the machine.... they ... they...

KC: who made my princess cry? Come on tell me....

Salma: Yunho and JJ jiju...

KC: let them come... esp. that Yunho...

Yunho: what did I do now?

Yunho is standing at the door with Jaejoong next to him pushing Max in his wheel chair.

KC: why did you make my sister cry?

Yunho: sorry Salma but this was Jaejoong's idea.

Jaejoong: [looking shocked] me... me... [Looks at everyone] he's lying...

Max: they both cooked up this idea... and since most of you are here [holding his hand out to Salma. She goes to him] Salma and I have some good news...

Salma: yeah. ..We are engaged... max and I are getting married.

KC: congrats... wow that is good news... may you always be happy...

Naina: awwwwwwwwwwwwwww finally... Salma getting married

Jouty: Congratulations guys... Let me know if you need help

Sara: Congrats... yea if you need help jus shout...

Salma leans down and kisses Max while Yunho whistles and the girls laugh. They live happily ever after.

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 16 years ago
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Darkness, I see no Light.

Deception I see no Truth.

Written By: Naina

Inspired by the song "Darkness Eyes" By Tohoshinki, some Lyrics used in story

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It was a cold November evening. The wind was blowing hard. It was a perfect night to end your life because there was no one about. You had dreamt so many times of this night. It was the night you were released from prison and when went back to the love of my life. But she had betrayed you by replacing you with someone else.

At the tower bridge you climbed onto the beam when...

"Are you sure you want to do that?"

Yunho looks up and sees a woman on her motor-bike and responds:

"I'm just in deep, in a blue sea of loneliness."

The woman walks to Yunho observing the strong muscular body that the man inhibits: "Ahh, your really freaking me out, and I suggest you not kill yourself by falling of this bridge and your body falling into this lake, my family owns this lake . . . we seriously don't want to go scuba diving to find your body." [tries to lighten the intense mood]

Yunho just looks at her for a couple of seconds: "A waterless world would come to a halt so I face the suffering without a way to escape . . . . ."

Woman looks at him: "Are you like some sort of poet or something . . . Is that a yes or a no?"

Yunho [half-smiles]: "I guess, I will have to find another bridge to fall from'."

Woman [serious tone]: "Dieing is never an answer to anything'."

Yunho: "My name is Yunho."

Woman shakes Yunho's hand: "My name is KC."

Yunho [half smiles]: "Miss. KC . . . . I would love to share my story with you . . . but I would rather end this sad story' Because Darkness has already filled my life."

KC [with force pulls Yunho to her motorbike]: "Oh no! Your coming with me' You can tell me your "so-called" sad story at my apartment."

KC drives the bike back to her apartment and makes some tea.

Both adults sit down and drink the tea.

KC [takes a sip of the tea]: "So Yunho, what so tragic thing happened in your life that you want to kill yourself' You should value the life that you have and start afresh."

Yunho [fake smiles, takes a sip of the tea]: "KC, I wish it was that easy, but I went to jail'

KC: ::GASPS::

Yunho [assures]: "Oh don't worry, I was not guilty, they found out four years later '.. [smirks] took them that long . [sighs] I was charged for k-i-iilling my son'. Moonbin [Yunho falls from the sofa and starts to cry uncontrollably]

KC goes to Yunho and comforts him.

Yunho smiles and continues his story.

"I found out later, that the person that killed my son was none other than my sister, my wife believed that I had k-i-illed our son. OUR SON! [slams his fist on the table] When I got released . . my wife had moved on to another man' [his face twitches] that b$%@ didn't even mourn her son's death."

KC [confused]: "I don't understand, your wife, didn't mourn her son's death?"

Yunho [looks at KC]: "I came back and found that my son's body was still at the police station and no one did the funeral ceremony'.. I had to do it myself."

KC [::Gasp::]: "OMG!"

Yunho [grabs KC's hands and looks into her hands intently]: "KC, I want to GO WITH MOOBIN!! I WANT TO BE WITH MY SON! [Yunho cries uncontrollably].

KC [holds Yunho in her arms]: "I can't feel what you're going through but I can tell you this' [grabs Yunho's face and looks into his eyes intently] I'm sure Moonbin would never want his father to give up on life. [smiles intently].

Yunho looks back at KC and she looks back at him and when both are about to share a passionate kiss, 2 centimeters apart both of their bodies are heated up, suddenly, KC's phone rings, [both flushed] she excuses herself and leaves the room to pick up the phone

KC [picks up the phone nervously]: "I told you not to call until, I call you. [Person on phone responds] "No, I have not found Jung Yunho yet." [Person on phone yells] "I only kill people who are guilty of their crime, and get released from jail." [Person on the phone calmly negotiates with KC]. "I'm just saying if I find out this guy is innocent then I'm not doing anything to him. [KC hangs up the phone, and puts it back in her pocket, wipes the sweat off her face]

KC goes back to the living room and finds Yunho fast asleep on the couch, she comes closer and realizes is gorgeous face: "How can this wonderful, honest, true man be guilty of killing his own son' his story has truth in it' what to do KC? What to do?? Errr."

KC gets a blanket and pillow and puts the pillow under Yunho's head gently and covers him with the blanket. She gets dressed and decides to go meet her boss, so she can cancel this whole assassinating deal. She slowly closes the door and leaves her apartment.

The November breeze didn't make KC's emotions any more comforting, she had to end this deal, she never left a mission unaccomplished but this was the right thing to do.

She parked her bike in front of the BigMansion and entered the house.

A Woman sitting on a large red chair is waiting for her.

Woman [smirks]: "I wasn't expecting you this early, KC darling, take a seat."

KC [confidently takes a seat in front of the woman]: "Juoty, I can't find him, I tried looking everywhere for him, and the location where I had tracked down' but."

Before KC can continue, Juoty [cuts in and smirks]: "KC, don't think I'm some stupid dumb ass, who doesn't know what's going on' I know you have found him.. and I want him dead!" [Juoty slams his fist on the coffee table]

KC [looks at Juoty sternly]: "I told you I don't kill innocent people!"

Juoty [stands up]: "He needs to die!"

KC [also stands up]: "What kind of enmity do you have with him? Let him live, he didn't kill his son'"

Juoty [angry]: "JUST DO YOUR DAMN JOB, THAT I PAYED YOU FOR YOU!!!"

KC [confused and also angry]: "Like, I said I don't kill innocent people."

Juoty [smirks]: "Then you better go to him now and protect him, because he isn't going to be living on Earth any longer'"

KC [even more confused]: "What do you mean??"

Juoty [annoyed]: "Just go protect that asshole if you want, or else I'm going to get him killed'. You got 5 minutes. Go!"

KC doesn't understand what is going on but she knows that she has to go back to the apartment, get Yunho and run.

KC [runs out, of the mansion and she turns back once to Juoty and says]: "I'll make sure nothing happens to him'."

Juoty [smirks as KC leaves the mansion, she immediately calls someone]: "Micky, KC found out and she left, I will meet you their."

KC goes on her bike and heads back to the apartment. She opens the door and finds that Yunho is asleep.

She goes to Yunho and [shakes him]: "Yunho wake up!!"

Yunho [lazy eyes opens slowly]: "KC? Uhh, [slowly gets up] Sorry, I slept on your sofa, I guess I will be leaving'"

KC [grabs Yunho with immense force]: "We need to leave, run away! Or else she will get you!!!"

Yunho [confused]: "What are you talking about?" [KC pulls Yunho and puts a jacket over him]

KC [stammering]: "No time, to explain.. let's go." [And before Yunho can respond, he is being dragged by KC and both of them are on KC's bike]

Yunho [holding onto KC's back]: "KC, can you tell me what the hell is going on?!"

The wind gushes over KC's face: "Yunho, I '. [KC's sees a huge pothole on the road] Hold onto me tighter'."

Yunho holds onto KC tighter, and go into the huge pothole, but due to the speed they end up crashing into a tree.

45 minutes later

Both of them wake up in a Ware House. Yunho wakes up to find out that he is in chains. He tries to struggle but can't break free. "Damn"

Juoty [right in front of him taps her foot on the ground with her high heel stilettos]: "Hello, my sweet older brother [walks to Yunho with a whip in her hand] It's nice to see you after a long time' too bad you won't be staying with us for long."

[Yunho looks up to see his step-sister's face, and anger boils inside of him, Juoty face is only centimeters away from him, he spits in her face, which earns him a hard slap]: "JUOTY!!!"

Yunho looks up and sees another man next to her in a muscle shirt and leather pants. He speaks in a Korean accent: "How dare you spit at my wife, you mo*&#$f*(#*@!!!"

Yunho earns another slap in the face, and about three more from his stepsister.

Yunho looks up to both of the people in front of him and [smirks]: "If your going to kill me, might as well'. I was going to do it anyways until''.

Juoty [laughs]: "Lemme guess.. a girl stopped you'"

Yunho's face is written with confusion and shock and hurt do the tight chains that are chained tightly around him.

Yunho [shocked]: "Ye'eah."

Juoty [smirks]: "Micky darling [as she caresses Micky's cheek] can you bring KC out."

Micky leaves.

Yunho [even more shocked]: "KC?"

Micky comes back with an upset look on his face..: "She's not in the cellar."

Juoty [in rage]: "WHAT THE H*LL!! Where could she have gone, whatever the b&*$# probably escaped. She probably doesn't want to get killed either. But, we NEED TO FIND HER, BEFORE SHE GOE'S TO THE POLICE!

Micky [laughs]: "She can't do that, we hired her'"

Yunho [totally confused]: "Hired her? What?!"

Before Micky or Juoty could answer two women smashed through into the windows. One of them jumped on top of Micky and held a knife near his throat the other pointed a gun to his head.

Yunho notices that one of the women gun pointing to Micky's head is KC: "KC!!"

KC happy that Yunho is fine but with a [guilty look]: "Yunho' I"

Before KC can continue Juoty cuts in: "Yunho, Yunho, Yunho my dear brother' I could have let you die on your own, but the enjoyment of you getting killed by someone is much more fun'. KC didn't fufill the job now someone will'."

Yunho [confused & angry]: "I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!!"

Juoty [snickers]: "I hired KC to kill you, [Yunho's eyes bulge out by the news with shock] But, the b&$&% couldn't kill you because she doesn't kill innocent people."

KC [guilty look]: "Yunho, I'm sorry I deceived but it was my job, that's why I was in a hurry to get you away a-n'.

Yunho [angry]: "Enough! Kill me, all of you just kill me, my wife deceived me, I lost my son, [in tears now] All I want to do is die!!!"

Juoty pulls out her gun and goes to Yunho and points it at his head [and laughs like a maniacal lunatic]: "Oh my sweet brother, how I shall miss thee, fair thee well, dear brother, fair thee well'"

Other Woman [in anger]: "NOT SO FAST JUOTY YOU DON'T WANT MICKY TO DIE DO YOU!!"[Woman tightens the grip on the knife near Yunho's neck]

Juoty [fake shocked]: "Oh no! [fake gasp] What about Micky darling'' [smiles and flicks her gun around]'''' like I care' more money for me."

Yunho [anger]: "Money, that's what this is about'."

Micky [in anger]: "Juoty darling'.. I thought we were going to buy that island in Dubai' and live their once we get the money!!"

Juoty [anger and snickers]: "Micky, Shutup! Once I have all the money, I can get all the sexiest men in the world!

Yunho [angry]: "What money!!"

Juoty [smiles and flicks her gun, but it falls on the floor, before anyone can get it, a little boy runs in the room and catches it and points it at Juoty]: "Moonbin, give Aunti Juoty the gun now' [fake smiles] please sweetheart."

Yunho [overjoyed with emotions]: "Moonbin, son your alive" [Yunho cries with immense joy]

5 year old Moonbin holding the gun, was a sight to see, a sight that Yunho never wanted to see. Now he had the sudden urge to live again for his son.

Moonbin [angry but in a child voice]: "Juoty, I won't be scared use this gun, unlock those chain thingys NOW!"

Juoty [afraid, unties the shackles, and Yunho grabs her by the throat and ties the shackles on her]: "Comon, Yunho oppa, please don't do this'.."

Yunho [ignores her and runs and hugs Moonbin]: "I don't understand why? How? [he keeps hugging Moonbin and kissing him everywhere, he still can't believe his son is alive]

Micky [smiles, and cries too]: "Can you guys [looks at KC and the other woman] let me go' you think I will side with [points at Juoty] that woman now?"

KC and other woman look at each other. And nod their heads.

KC [smiles]: "I felt his pulse he's telling the truth Sara, we can let him go."

They let Micky go, and call the police.

Moonbin sits his father down, KC and Sara sit down too.

5 year old Moonbin: "Appa, Umma never deceived you, Juoty deceived her, she told Umma that she will help you. But, only if she fakes that she had a affair with another man and doesn't love you anymore' she also never visited you in the jail' it was all Juoty's plane [Moonbin looks at Juoty who is trying to unlock herself from the shackles and is currently freaked out from a rat] Appa, Umma passed away saving me'

Yunho [looks at Moonbin with shock]: "trying to save you from..?"

Moonbin [looks toward Juoty, Yunho sees this and sees feels immense anger]: "I don't know, but the person had a mask over their face and Juoty was behind that person."

KC and Sara look at each other; their eyes are nearly falling out. Suddenly out of nowhere a man behind KC puts a gun to her head.

Yunho [angry]: "Micky, wat r u doing here? I thought you went to go call the police?"

Micky [angry]: "Shut da f&*@& up! You know that I can't leave Juoty, no matter what she says I still love her. [Gun still positioned to KC's head] Release Juoty now.

In front of Yunho's eyes he sees his son shot, his whole world destroyed in front of his eyes'''''''''..

5 years later at a cemetery.

Is it possible to find light,

When one has lost everything,

Is it possible to find hope?

When one has nothing to gain,

Is it possible to find love?

When one has frozen in time.

A woman walks up to Yunho who is kneeling down near a cemetery: "Yunho sweetheart'"

Yunho [smiles and opens his eyes]: "KC, I wonder why you are with me when I cannot even see your face."

KC [smiles, kneels down next to Yunho]: "love can be '.

Yunho [stares at his son's and late wife's grave]: "Love can hurt."

KC [tears forming in her eyes]: "I hope I'm not hurting you."

Yunho [turns his head towards KC]: "You can never hurt me [wipes tears of her face]'. I was in a deep blue sea of loneliness [traces KC's lips] I don't know how? But I was frozen and couldn't move forward, But you stepped into my life'The lies came and stuck, and my heart fell down into broken pieces. [Puts KC's hand on his heart] Then you came into my life and put those pieces back together.

KC [smiles]: "Yunho, I'm happy that you are moving on'."

Yunho [smiles and brushes his lips against KC's]: "I'm happy that I have you in my life' I'm happy that my son is happy' and our future baby is probably, [smiles] no.. she is extremely happy." [Yunho gathers KC in his arms]

One can always find bliss in the arms of their loved one.

Even if God has snatched the light,

Even in the darkness,

Love can be found.


Note from Naina: I love you Juoty! 😃 don't mind my language.

Edited by suganain - 17 years ago
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Forgotten memories
written by perfangel5655
It was a cold November evening. The wind was blowing hard. It was a perfect night to end your life because there was no one about. I had dreamt so many times of this night. It was the night i was released from prison and when i went back to the love of my life. But she had betrayed me by replacing me with someone else. At the tower bridge i climbed onto the beam when...
His phone rings.

Hero mutters in anger while taking the phone out

Hero: can't even die in peace.

Hero gulps looking at the phone and picks up.

Hero: yes boss.

Boss: I have a new job for you.

Hero: Job?...

Job?? does he really want another job? The last job made him go to jail and lose his gf.

Boss: why...you are not busy are you?

Hero: No of course not.

Hero thinks to himself of course he is not busy, he was just planning to kill himself.

Boss: thought so. Come to the pub tonight to get the rest of the details.

Hero: yes boss.

Boss: by the way how was jail?

Hero holds himself from screaming out "how was jail?!?! how is jail suppose to be?!"

Hero: it was great Boss. It felt like home

Boss: Hmm well don't make it a habit. I had to make quite a number of phone calls , and pull strings to get you out and to make sure nothing stays on the record. Be careful next time.

Hero: yes Boss!

Later at the pub::

Hero: I HAVE TO DO WHAT????

Hero jumps out of his chair and slams his fists on the table. A normal man would have been cowering under the look hero was now giving his boss but the man simply just brushed off his shoulders and calmly replied

Boss: Is there a problem? [eyebrow raised]

Hero tries to find the words but no replies

His boss stands up.......... to a height of 4'11".

Hero: NO BOSS!! [gulps]

Boss: Don't worry I was just streching.

Hero: Oh....I thought that-

Boss: Yes? You thought what?

Hero has a flashback: the last time the boss had stood up. Poor Fabio, still had to take his supper through a straw.

Hero: N-nothing boss.

Boss: Great! Then I'll be expecting you around 5 tomorrow?

Hero: 5 p.m.? [looking hopeful]

Boss: A.M. [leaves the pub]

Next morning:

Hero gets out of his car, rubbing his eyes.

Hero: so this is what 5 a.m. looks like...God! [mutters] the sun is not even out properly.

Hero slams his door close than walks toward the house. Before he can reach for the bell the butler opens the door.

B: She will meet you in the pool house sir.

Hero thanks butler and walks toward the pool house.

Hero walks in the room and lets the door close. As he turns around all he can see is a dart flying toward him. Hero ducks

Sara: Bulls eye!

Hero: are you crazy Sara?! that could've killed me.

Sara gives him a mocking glare.

Sara: are you that easy to kill then? [raising an eyebrow] I am afraid I was misinformed by my uncle.

Hero straightens himself.

Hero: Don't pretend you don't know me..What did your Uncle tell you exactly?

Sara throws another dart at the board hanging on the door.

Hero looks at the board and notices like the previous one this one also made it's perfect mark. She has changed. The girl in the tight black leather and tight pony tail is not the Sara he knew.

Sara: That really doesn't matter. I make my own judgement. Strip!

Hero: excuse me?

Sara: strip!

Hero's lips curve into a smile

Hero: If you want me just say so.

Hero looks at Sara. and notices her cold eyes are transfixed on him. She is clearly not joking.

Hero: [in totally disbelief] I am not going to strip..that is ridiculous.

Sara: you are not ashamed are you? low self esteem maybe?

Hero: in your dreams. You know what I look like.

Sara: It's been a long time Hero.. people forget things so easly these days you can't expect me to remember what you looked like 4 years ago.

For a secnd hero could see a flicker of emotion in her eyes.

Then it turns back to the cold eyes.

Sara: My uncle sent you to be my bodyguard. He might have picked you but the decision is still mine Hero. I can't give you the job if I don't think you are fit for it.

Hero lets out a breath and starts taking his shirt off. Then his undershirt. He takes his pants off.

Hero looks at Sara

Hero: want my boxers off to so I can refresh your memory madam?

Sara could feel her face burning up.

Sara: No that won't be necessary.

Hero pretends to smile and picks up his shirt.

Sara: don't put it on.

Hero: what?? [gives her a look of pure disbelief] Sara! your uncle sent me to be your body guard not to be your personal stripper.

Sara gets up from the chair and heads toward the door.

Sara: you have to take a swimming test. Unless you want to mess up your expensive clothes keep them off.

Hero: swimming test?

Hero follows Sara out the door.

He is sure she has lost her mind.

Hero: Have you gone nuts? is that why your uncle wants me to be your bodyguard? His crazy neice someone to take care of her? the sun is barely out Sara.

Sara: Hero either jump in or leave.

Hero jumps in and starts hitting the water with anger. He goes to the other end of the pool and comes back.

Hero: how was that?

Sara: not bad.

Hero gets out of the pool and Sara tosses him a towel.

Sara sits on a chair and silently watches Hero wipe himself dry. He is still the same. She can still remember every detail of his muscle. She tries to look away.

Hero turns and catches her eyes.

He walks over to her. he places both of his hands on the arms of her chair and whispers in her ear

Hero: if you are really going to act all that cold towards me Sara, try not to stare that way.

Sara wants to push him away but she can feel her arms going numb. It's been so long since she had been close to him.

Hero stands up straight.

Hero: so..anymore tests?

Sara places a gun on the table and a piece of cloth

Hero gives her a mocking smile. She wants him to shoot blindbolded? He has been trained since the day he was born. he can do it anyday anywhere.

Hero grabs the gun and the cloth.

Hero: where do I shoot?

Sara looks around and see some bottles lined up very close.

Sara: shoot that bottle in the middle without moving the others. If any other bottle drops you fail.

Hero looks at the bottle for few seconds than blindfolds himself.

Hero lets out a sigh.

Hero: here we go.

he shoots and hears glasses break.

He takes of the blind and smiles at his mark. All the other bottles are perfectly at place.

He turns toward Sara and raises his gun.

Instead of moving an inch, or flinching, she just stares at him, he pulls the triggers and she sits there like an statue.

Hero waits for her to react. The damn woman has acted cold all morning. It's about time he sees some sort of emotion in her. even if it is panic.

But Sara just stares as he shoots at one of the earrings she is wearing.

The broken piece falls to the floor.

Sara gets up from her chair and walks toward Hero. She hands him his clothes

Sara: if you are done playing games we can head for breakfast now.

Sara walks of.

Hero puts of his his clothes. As he walks toward the garden he thinks of events happening in past hours. He has gotten into jail and gotten out of jail, found his fiance on bed with another man, tried to end his pointless life, gotten a new ridiculous job of being a bodyguard, and the person is none other than sara. The woman who once stole his heart and broke it. in past four years he has lead himself to believe he has forgotten about her. he has never thought about her, never even mentioned her name. His business with her uncle has been strictly professional too. But one look at her today and everything seemed to be back again. She has changed. She doesn't even look like the sweet bubbly Sara he once knew. But he still wants her. He wants her now more than he ever wanted her. Only if she could understand what she wanted.

Sara sits at the breakfast table. The sun is shining bright now making her feel vulnerable. When it was dark she could easily hide her slip of emotions but with brightday light she felt sheer and see through.

Hero: what's next?

Sara taking a slide of toast on her plate.

Sara: you eat.

"mommmmmy!!!"

Hero and Sara both look at the little boy running toward her.

Hero notices Sara's expression soften.

The little boys runs into Sara's arms.

Hero smiles seeing Sara hug the boy so tightly and place a kiss on top of his head.

Sara pulls a chair near her and places the boy on the chair.

Finally the boys eyes fall on Hero.

Hero: Hi ! I am Hero.

Sam: I am Sam.

Sam tries to whisper in his mothers ears but he is so loud hero tries not to laugh.

Sam: Mommy should I say good morning to him.

Sara smiles.

Sara: I think you should.

Sam: Good morning .

Hero: wow! that's very nice Sam.

Sam: thank you. Do you think John will think it's nice?

Hero: who is John?

Sam: he is going to be my new dad.

Sara: Sam, baby I think you should eat now.

Hero looks at Sara..

Hero: you are getting married?

Sara: yes.

Hero: why?

Sara looks at him as if he is ridiculous.

Sara: I am sure you have heard my husband passed away 3 years ago. Sam is growing up, he will need a father in his life. [says in a low voice so sam can't hear]

Hero: you can't just get married for Sam.

Sara glares at him.

Sara: I can do anything for Sam.

Sara turns back to her food. She reassures herself that she can do anything for Sam. She has done it before.He is all she has..

Hero: so...when is the wedding?

Sara: In 2 days.

Hero starts coughing.

Hero: 2 days?

Sara: yes..2 days.

Hero: why the hell do you need a bodyguard all of a sudden when you are getting married in 2 days?

Sara looks at Sam playing with his scrambled egg. She smiles and motions the nanny to come closer.

Sara: excuse me baby, I will be right back.

Sara grabs Hero's arm and walks away from the table.

Sara: Because my uncle thinks Sam and I are in danger. You are aware of my cousin Yunho..

Hero: the one I used to fight with all the time? how can I forget. How is he? I hope his jaw is fine now.

Sara: yes that would be the one. He has been bugging my uncle about the inheritance again. My uncle is worried Sam and I could be in danger. I personally don't care about me but Sam means everything.

At night::

Hero can't stop tossing and turning. He has gotten up 2 or 3 times from bed to drink water. He needs to sleep but sleep just won't come. He closes his eyes when he hears a shot.

Hero's eyes flew open.

Hero: Sara...

Hero jumped out of bed and grabbed his gun from the drawer. He runs toward Sara's room, but someone bumps into him .

Boss: hero..

Hero tries to hold his boss straight but he falls to the floor.

Hero: Boss..[shocked] you have been shot !

Boss: he......... is... here...go [trying to breathe] save her...

Hero can feel his heart hammering against his chest.

His boss holds hero's hand with his bloody hand.

Boss: [having the hardest time breathing] hurry....save her..before he gets...toher.

Hero: I can't leave you here.

Boss: [tries to laugh] don't worry about me.

He painfully takes out something from his coat.

It's a stack of letters.

Boss: she didn't....betray you. It was her father.

Hero: [in disbelief] what??

Boss: I am ...sorr--rrry..

For few seconds it seems like Hero's world just paused. He looks at the lifeless body lying infront of him

Hero: Sara...

Hero runs toward Sara's room and sees her struggle with a man.

Hero hits the man with the butt of his gun with all his strength.

The man groans in pain and falls to the floor.

Sara: Hero...[in a breathless voice]

Hero grabs Sara's hand and runs toward Sam's room.

Sam: Mommy.....[ in a pressed voice]

Sara: Sam...[her fly to the man holding him] Let him go..[she tries to keep her composure though she can feel the air leaving her body]

Man: Not so fast. [looks at Hero] you, drop the gun.

Hero: No way. [points the gun at the man] You are not leaving from here.

The man presses the gun against Sam's head as he cries out in fear.

Sam: Mom...[crying]

Sara: Sam!! [steps toward Sam as the man pulls back]

Man: stay back unless you want me to blow up his little head.

Sara starts sobbing. She grabs Hero's arm and starts shaking him.

Sara: Just drop the gun Hero, I want my Sam.

Hero: Sara...I.....No. If I drop the gun both of you will be in danger. He will not let any of us go.

Sara: [grabs Hero's sleeves tighter] Hero I just want Sam. Drop it. [shakes him]

Hero tries to pull away. He knows Sara...she knows better than anyone else if he lets the gun drop none of them will go unharmed.

Sar: let go of the gun Hero!

Hero nodds and lets go off the gun as Sara catches it and within a split second shoots the man right on his forehead. The man falls to the floor without any noise.

Sam runs into Sara's arms.

Sara hugs Sam tightly, then kisses him all over the face.

Sam: [sobbing] I was afraid mommy.

Sara: [lets out a soft cry and tries to smile] No baby! remember what I said. You are the bravest kid a mommy could ask for. [wipes his tears of]

Hero smiles looking at the sight of mother and son.

Hero: We have got to get out now!! Let's go.

They are about to get out of the room when Sara stops them.

Sara: stop

Hero: what?

Sara: I am sure there are more men. We can't go out there. We will never make it.

Hero: but we....

Hero looks at Sara then turns toward the balcony as if he read her mind.

Hero grabs the sheet on the bed with one swift pull and quickly goes to the balcony, while Sara guards the door.

Hero ties the bedsheet well.

Hero: Ok let's ok.

Sara looks at the door one last time and nodds.

Both Hero and Sara look down at Sam, who is slightly shivering and holding on to sara's leg.

Sara: Let's go baby.

Sam looks up with quivering lips. As if he is trying to be really brave but miserably failing.

Sam: I am sorry Mom....I am scared.

Sara could feel her heart ache.

Hero kneels down so he is at the same level as Sam. He grabs Sam's arm gently then pulls him closer.

Hero: [smiles] See this. [shows his triceps]

Sam nodds.

Sam: you are strong! [as if surprised] One day I will strong too. [flexing] I always drink my milk.

Hero laughs.

Hero: you have to do more than drink milk.

Sam: I do?

Hero stands up and picks Sam up. Sam is so light hero easily places him on his back. Sam locks his arm tightly around hero.

Hero: You have to climb down balconies.

Hero motions Sara to move quickly.

Hero goes to the balcony and places his foot safely on the other side.

Sam gasps.

Hero: don't worry I have done this all my life.

Sam: you have?

Hero: Yes [in a low voice] Just ask your mom. [giving sara an amused look before going down]

Sam: is that true mom?

Sara: Shh Sam. We have to be quiet! [trying to push away the memories of all the time Hero and Sara snuck at night by climbing down the balcony]

Sam nodds.

Hero finally gets down.

Hero: Now lets watch your mommy. She is better than me.

Sara places her feet on the other side of the balcony and gets a good hold of the sheet so she can climb down. But instead of climbing down it looks like she falls straight.

Hero grabs Sara by her waist to stop her from falling.

Hero: Sorry Sam! I guess she is not as good as I thought she would be.

Sara turns around and looks straight in hero's eyes.

Sara: sorry I was out of practice unlike you..now let's go.

Sam: Ok I am done!

Tommy: what? you can't be done.

Sam: Tommy I have told you the story over a gazillion times.

Tommy: Liar. Your are not even gazillion days old. You are 10.

Sam glares at Tommy.

Sam: 10 and an half.

Sam adjusts his glasses and grabs a book from his nightstand

Tommy: Tell me the story naa!!

Sam: No. I have to study.

Tommy: why do you always study?

Sam: you wouldn't understand. It's grown up stuff. You are only 4.

Tommy: 4 and an half (reminding him)

Sam: Can you please go to bed?

Tommy frowns and gets off Sam's bed with his little legs.

He gets on hsi bed.

Tommy: you know Dad said your eyes got messed up because you read so much.

Sam: No he didn't.

Tommy: yes huh

Sam: nah ahh

Tommy: ah huh!

Sam: did he tell you why your teeth fell?

Tommy covers his mouth and shakes his head.

Sam: because you talks so much.

The door opens as Sara walks in.

Sara: why aren't you guys sleeping? [trying to keep a straight face but she can't help but smile]

Tommy: Mom! [almost jumps on sara's lap, but stops himself looking at her big belly]

Tommy: [almost whispering] I don't want to hurt the baby!

Sara laughs and pulls Tommy closer!

Sara: you won't hurt the baby!

Hero walks in hearing the laugh

Hero: I see a party going on without me!

All 3 of their faces light up seeing Hero.

Hero frowns

Hero: sam you are still reading? [shakes his head] you are just like your mother!

Sara hits Hero lightly.

Hero: We need to start working out and make those muscles.

Tommy slightly jumps on hero.

Hero: Papa I have muscles. Look

Hero laughs!

hero: so what did I miss?

Tommy: i was just asking Sam about the night where you had to runaway from the bad people. He won't tell me what happened afterwards. he never does!

Hero raises his eyesbrow at Sam. then laughs.

Hero: that's because he is scared!

Tommy: can you tell me? please please please!!!

Hero thinks for a second then says yes.

They all settle in.

Tommy: Is it true Mom used to wear leather?

Hero laughs.

Hero: yes!! she looked like cat woman.

Tommy: Cat woman is scary! Mom is not scary! [hugging her]

Hero: ok so lets see. where did you leave off?

Tommy: you were getting in the car!

Hero: Hmm lets see. So what happened was we got in the car, went to the cops they helped us and that was it!

Tommy looks at Sam

Sam: and you couldn;t even tell me that?

Sam stays silent.

He knows it was long ago but he does remember that night. He just doesn't remember what happened after they got in the car!

Hero and Sara tucks them in and kisses them goodnight!

Later at night::

Sara: do you think we can ever tell them the truth?

Hero stays silent for few seconds.

Hero: Maybe when they grow up.

Sara snuggles closer.

Sara: I was so scared that night. I thought I had lost him after he was shot.

Hero places a kiss on sara's forehead.

Hero: I thought I lost both of you.

Hero pulls Sara closer.

Sara: but I will always be thankful the night brought us together. If that hadn't have happened you would've never known Sam was your child.

Hero: yeah. [smiles and hugs sara closer]

***** I really really hope you like it. I had the hardest time with the ending, (more like more than half the story) wanted to give up couple of times lol!!! Mwah love you! *****

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 16 years ago
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I Met an Angel
A Fatima and Yoochun story
By dilkeroshni

**Micky's Point of View**

It was a cold November evening. The wind was blowing hard. It was a perfect night to end your life because there was no one about. I had dreamt so many times of this night. It was the night I was released from prison and when I went back to the love of my life. But she had betrayed me by replacing me with someone else. At the tower bridge I climbed onto the beam when...

"Are you sure you want to do that?"

I turn around to look beside me but there was no one there. Puzzled I went back to the thoughts in my head poisoning me so easily without the aid of poison. I bite my lip thinking of the hurt and how I did not want to live anymore.

"You know nothing is worth giving up your life over."

I turn to my left to see a girl sitting on the beam with her dark ebony hair reaching down to her mid back. She was wearing simple white sweatpants with a pink
shirt and a white sweatshirt.

After a couple of minutes of silence I replied,

"I don't want to live in this world anymore. It has given me so much pain. My heart has been ripped from my soul and trampled on. My dignity has been spat on." I am disgusted at myself because tears start to form in my eyes.

The girl turns her face towards me and I can't help but take in a deep breath. Her eyes hold so much pain, yet there is a strength overcoming that pain and I can't help but drown in them and want to take away the pain. I feel an unexplainable anger at the world and anyone who has put pain there and for their treatment of me.

"It might help, if you talk about it rather than just thinking about it and making it worse on yourself. You look like a skeleton."

I can't help but smile. I ask, "Is that an offer?"

"If you want to talk then I do have an ear available"

I can't help but think that the one who held my heart and my love could not even bother with me, when a complete stranger is trying to help me in her own way and I can't help but want to protect her from this evil cruel world and keep her safe in my arms.

I ask, "May I at least know the name of the person who I am going to spill my life story to?" or should I just call you Angel? [a/n: Fatima you're always calling yourself an angeland I thought why not let your wish come true and let yoochun call you an angel.]

Her eyebrows disappear into her hair, "angel? I remind you of an angel. If you must, Its good manners to give other people your name before asking theirs? My name is Fatima and urs?"

The corners of my mouth lift upwards, "Park Yoochun or Micky as everyone else calls me."

I tell her about everything; about going to prison and coming back to find my lover in the arms of another. I couldn't believe how stupid I was when I took the blame for her crimes. I bared my heart to her right then and there. After a few minutes of being lost in the past. I got jerked back into reality and feel loved, safe and happier than I have ever felt. I look down to see her arms around me. I can't help but stare at the top of her head until she looks up at me with those innocent teary eyes. I can't help but lean down and brush my lips over her eyes to wipe away the tears. She opens her eyes and a small smile is present on her lips. I brush my lips across her really quickly. I didn't want to scare her. After a few seconds she gets up on her knees and presses her lips against mine. I feel a tongue brush against the bottom of my lips asking for permission. I open my mouth and feel a hesitant tongue brush against mine. The kiss is slow, filled with love and tenderness. When the need for oxygen becomes vital we break apart, panting trying to fill our lungs with air. I can't help but smile at her. My heart soars when she smiles back at me with passionate eyes.

The whole night passes us by while we get to know each other. We watch the sun rise and take control of the sky.


"Why don't you come stay with me until you get a job?"

I am surprised by her offer. I ask, "How can you trust me a convict."

Her soft reply "an innocent person who was wrongly convicted" is filled with complete certainty.

** Two Months Later**

I was at the end of my patience. Everyone looks at me and remembers my conviction two years ago. They forget about all of my achievements before that. Eight years of my hard work went down the two years ago trying to help someone who I thought I was in love with at that time.

"Maybe its time you were reborn again and tried something you love rather than going into business again."

My mind starts to wander off to the days in high school where I couldn't think of anything but making music and singing with my bros. Those were the times.

"Is there anything that interests you?"

I instantly reply, " composing music and singing"

"So you want to become a singer?"
I reply, "I don't know maybe."

"Why don't we start small."

I burst into fits of laughter, 'How do we start small angel?"

She sticks her tongue out at me and I can't stop the instinct to lean in and capture it with my mouth.

After a few minutes she pulls away from me and says, "starting out on the street or performing on a small stage."

**The next night**

She walks into the apartment and hands me a paper. I look at it and my eyes get wide. It's a performance invitation at the hottest place in the city. Everyone goes there and its tonight. O_O

"Fatima it..its'its'"

"Yes love I know its tonight and I know you'll do fine."

"but Fatima what am I going to wear."

She rolls her eyes at me. " What you always wear love, pants, shirt, shoes and your
bracelet."

I can't help the laugh that escapes me. "of course I am not going there naked. I just meant the specifics."

"Choose what you like and how you want other people to see you. Don't try to choose something that you don't like because it makes you look professional. Express yourself!"

I run into the closet trying to find the perfect clothes to wear tonight. My eyes rest on the black and gray striped shirt w/ gray jeans and black boots and the gray
hat Fatima bought me a few days ago. I take a shower and get ready. My hair is spiked.

When we get to the restaurant, my nerves are at their wits end.

"Calm down yoochun you will be fine love. I have complete faith in you." She kisses me on the cheek as she starts to walk towards the seats. I pull her back and press my lips against her and whisper, "for luck"

She replies, " You don't need it. You've got me, your own personal angel."

Before she walks away, she turns around and gives me a quick kiss leaving me panting for air.

She whispers, "That's not for good luck but just to warm you up." With a wicked smile she walks into the audience and takes a seat in the front row right smack in the middle.

After I hear my name announced I walk onto the stage and take a deep breath. I open my eyes and look into the eyes of my angel, open my mouth and pour my heart out.

**One Year Later**

The noise from the audience in the stadium is deafening. I can't believe how far I've come. In just one year with my angel at my side I have learned to fly in the skies. My name is one of the most known in Korea. I am wearing light brown colored shirt with a black
sweater on top and deep forest green pants. A black scarf hangs around my neck and my hair has grown since my first performance. I am wearing a black hat. A cross hangs around my neck. I am wearing black shoes. I have filled out more and don't look like a skeleton anymore.

I take a deep breath and walk onto the biggest stage I have set my foot on since I was reborn. I feel so nervous and can't believe that I am performing at the Grammy Awards.

I take a take a deep breath. I open my eyes and look into the eyes of my angel and begin to speak.

"A year ago I wanted to end my life because of the injustice done to me. God sent me an angel to help me remake myself. I couldn't' get where I am today without her. I owe her everything. She owns my heart, soul and body. This song is for her.I love you Angel"

[Micky Yoochun Solo~ My Girlfriend
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LuaWOA22H7A
(please click on it and it will provide emotions and you can actually hear him singing rather than just imagining it.)]



You're my girlfriend, you know it too. [He points at Fatima]

First time when I kissed your lips, you were a loveable [blows a kiss her way]
It was bright snowing day that our love began.
Girl they just don't understand, not even a clue
So girl I won't stop. I'm the one who will be right there.

Lets stay together U R my Girlfriend
It feels like heaven. I love you. I do love you so
Just walk with me until the end of times yeah
So let me be of your mine! Just let me please you!!

I'm just tryin' to say how much I do love you
I've been tease you so long that was my bad expressions to you
For just now. Sitting here. Get relax. The day you gave me a blue
tumbler like a puppy lover
Yeah~ with this coffee sweet imagine our future marriage
and gettin associated.
So girl listen to my heart won't change.
Maybe my love is bigger than Ginger bread man's vitality

Baby~ Good Morning everyday I wake up with you with the lovely call.
I didn't know how to (cook but I can make you a song.)

Girl they just don't understand. Not even a clue.
SO girl I won't stop. I'm the who will be right there.

Let's stay together U R my Girlfriend
It feels like heaven. I love you. I do love you so
Just walk with me until the end of times yeah
So let me be of your mine! Just let me please you!!

Everything will gonna be fine.
God gave me answer of my life
Look at me girl
You're lovely I can tell so
One day it will come true. Baby never gonna make you cry.

[He walks off of stage to where Fatima is sitting]

Let's stay together Girlfriend
Hold on together everythings all right
[He hugs her]
Till the end of times baby
Leave the passed behind
You're always my girl friend
Yeah~ I do. Love you so much I do baby
Just walk with me follow me

[He leads Fatima onto the stage by her hand]

Of your mine just let me please you

I love you baby

They share a kiss in the middle of the stage pouring all of their love into that one simple kiss remembering their year together.

I whisper into her ear "You are my Angel"

**THE END**

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 16 years ago
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Wow i have waited for these oneshots forever...
Even though i hadn't finished mine...
well done to Salma who finished hers... on time...
And apologies for writing the longest ever oneshot... if you fall asleep or find it boring pleas say so.... i'd love the criticisms...

okies lets get to the oneshots...


November night...
Salma i loved the story... although i was confused the first time i read it.... i had to read it again and i finally understood... but thats my fault not yours... i was reading it when i was half asleep... i loved the way you have used emotion... it makes the story warm and tingly... (i am already excited reading these oneshot makes me even more tingly) overall i'd say well done... for you to have been doing your exams and writing this oneshot... it roscks... well done Salma👏👏👏

Kidnap
Like i said before that is the longest oneshot i have written so far... i felt as if i was writing a novel instead of a oneshot... anyways like i said criticisms are always welcome....


Darkness i see no light, Deception I see no truth....
Naina i think this is one of the most amazing stories you have written and I say that honestly not just coz the story is about me... I have to say KC's Character is very greyish... and assassin that doesnt kill innocent people... I like it... What shocked me the most was that Micky and Jouty were the villians...
The start was just as i expected... irony and comedy... "My family owns this lake and we dont want to go scuba diving for your body" I know only you could have come up with that and i was laughing... and the way u used the lyrics... that was genius... it just flowed with the whole story... I have to say tha story just flowed the twists and the turns they were very well written... i was sad at the end that Moonbin died... and that Yunho lost his eyesight... but like i said thats the best story ever... I loved it totally...


Forgotten memories
this story had everything... from comedy to romance to action to intrigue... it had everything... Jouty you did a great job... i loved reading how our dictator was a bad girl... amazing... saw sars character in a new light... goob job... i loved the story...


I met and angel
this story was just amazing... i could imagine it happening in real life... its so realistic... yet fictious... great work sara... its brill i love it...





Edited by KC294 - 17 years ago
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Naina's a choosey lover..
😉


A November Night

Wow, it was a interesting story. But to be honest it got a little confusing. I had to read it a couple of times. I loved that my character stood out. I know I would probably mesmerize Junnie. (or at least try). Our life together sounds like fun. ::sighs:: U made me daydream while I was reading this story.
I feel like I have deja vu all the time.😕😆 Jaejoong as a brother would be awesome [I'm happy to be related to him in anyway.

Kidnap

Whoa Baji!!👏👏 Congratulations for writing the longest oneshot ever!
I will never ever beat that! It had everything: comedy, romance, suspense, and drama.
I felt like I was reading a novel. I think I was?😕

when you showed me the preview of the gay part between Yunho and Changmin, I was shocked.
And the when I finally read the story, I was laughing. Changmin is really a smart character, in real life he is too. The story really flowed! I loved it!

Darkness I see no light
Deception I see no truth


This story was hard to write. Its kind of glommy and dark.
I'm sorry I made Juoty and Yoochunnie the villian.
I get tired of making myself the villian all the time.

Baji do you know who Moonbin is?
He is the child-look-alike Of Yunho oppa. [He was in Balloons MV]
[Here's a Picture of Him]


Of course I think Inhwan is my fav. child-look-alike.
The resemblance between him and Junsu is adorable.

😳

Forgotton Memories

Whoa! this story was nicee. Sara is totally that kind of girl[tough chick who doesn't take sh*t!)😃
Who wouldn't want jaejoong to strip. Sara, bad girl! Child before marriage! Shame! Shame!!😳
Actually no I did the same thing in Misunderstandings in Love. Why would Sara wanna break Jaejoong's heart?! WHY MUST YOU MAKE YUNHO THE BAD GUY!!!😡😡 Ahem... excuse me.
Just because he is smokin hot, doesn't mean he is bad. Maybe a little naughty... we might have to ask baji about that.😆😆 Anyways loved the story and the ending. GREAT JOB JUOTY!!👏👏

I met an Angel

This story was awesome. So much making out..[have to admit got a lil bit jealouso]
But it was all good. I guess you used the angel term pretty well. Ahh.. who doesn't like the song "Girlfriend". one of my favs from the T.R.I.C.K singles. I wish they did more solo songs here in there. But then again oppas are so damn busy as a group. ::sighs:: Again this story. [panting with air?] o sorry jealously kicking in again. ehehehe.😆😆 But the whole time Yoochunnie calling Juoty an angel was so sweet. [I highly doubt that he would call her that though]😕. LOVED THE STORY!



GREAT JOBS SISters!!!
sorry took me awhile to comment.




Edited by suganain - 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

Yay! Finally! The results are here!


Game #1

-- Most jealous --

#1

Naina

#2 (a tie)

Sara and Baji-hehe... now how did naina get to No 1?

#3

Jouty

#4

Salma (no guess there she is an angel to us)


-- Will marry 1st --

#1 (a tie)

Baji and sara (wonder who will beat who)- she already beat me comeon... you know that i am still single....

#2

Jouty and naina (we can get married together)

#3

Salma (awww)


-- Have most kids --

#1

Baji (no shock there)- who voted for me huh... kaun kanbakht mera naam likha... and why is it no shock that i'll have more kids then u guys... what if i end up with 2 and u guys with more then me.... lol...

#2

Sara

#3

Salma

#4

Jouty

#5

Naina


--The Celeb in making--

#1

Jouty

#2

Naina

#3

Baji and salma

#4

Sara


--Billionaire--

#1

Jouty

#2

Salma

#3

Naina

#4

Sara

#5

Baji- you think i dont have what it takes to be a billionaire... sniff sniff...


--Most sexual thoughts about dbsk--

#1

Naina (big shock there)

#2

Jouty (shock)

#3 (a tie)

Sara and Baji (so devoted to their guys)

#4

Salma (changmin is too innocent for such stuff.jk)


-- Risktaker--

#1

Naina 9not only is she the devil but also daredevil)

#2

Sara

#3

Baji and Jouty (we don't know how to take risks)

#4

Salma ( too young and sweet)


-- Will scream if they meet DBSK--

#1

Naina

#2

Jouty

#3

Baji and Sara (pshh too mature)

#4

Salma (again the total angel)

About one shots::

There are 2 left. Mine and Sara's! Our's are coming up and we do not mind the rest being posted before ours!

Theme

It was a cold November evening. The wind was blowing hard. It was a perfect night to end your life because there was no one about. I had dreamt so many times of this night. It was the night I was released from prison and when I went back to the love of my life. But she had betrayed me by replacing me with someone else. At the tower bridge I climbed onto the beam when...

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Forgot to post
Misunderstandings in Love last Chapter.
Please Comment.


Misunderstandings in Love

**Episode Three: Patching Up the Love**

Naina stares at the floor and suddenly breaks down crying, flashes of her and Xiah erupt in her mind, the beach, their bedroom, their favorite restaurant, corn, and then the break up, the misunderstandings.

Yunho comes over to Naina and sits down on the floor with her :Why are you crying Naina? For that guy, Xiah, come on it looks like he isn't interested in you anymore. He's hanging out with my wife. (Yunho hits his fist on the floor in anger)

Naina smiles recollecting memories of the happy times with Xiah: I don't know how the misunderstanding started, Xiah and I were a pretty happy couple. Is it cause I wear revealing clothes? He is a little more conservative then me. But he should know that all I ever think about is him..... even today (She starts to cry) when he do-e-sn't tr-u-st me. (Naina smiles again between her tears)

We met at a unusual place at a unusual time, it was at 11:58pm on New Years Eve:

**FlashBack**

It was a cold night and he was the only one on the street that wasn't at home with his family or at some party with friends. Naina absolutely loved the sweet corn. It was a Kenyan treat. He had told Naina that in Kenya you would find them everywhere on the streets. He stood there behind his stone barbeque still roasting sweet corn. Naina jogged over to get some.

Naina smling: hey Kamau, what are you doing here so late? It's New Years Eve at least tonight of all nights you should have gone home early.

Kamau speaks with his Kenyan accent: Maam, people will come out into the streets in a few minutes. Then they'll have my sweet corn.

Naina with excited happyiness: that's also true... and since I am here please give me some corn on the cob. It has to be soft with lemon and spicy chilli.

As Kamau prepared Naina's sweetcorn Xiah came running and stopped at the at the stall.

Xiah also smiling: Kamau I'll have my special.

Xiah blew into his hands because of the cold. Kamau handed Naina her sweet corn and started to work on Xiah's. Naina had been checking Xiah out.

Naina smiles: (thinking) He's kinda cute.

Kamau handed Xiah his sweetcorn and bit into his sweetcorn. Naina noticed some corn stuck to his teeth and started to giggle.

Kamau concerned: Mam are u ok?

Naina smiles: its just that... (giggles) just that he has (roars out laughing) sweet corn stuck between his teeth.

Xiah smiles: well I think you should look in the mirror u have some too.

Naina stares at him in shock then they both start laughing till they have tears streaming down their eyes.

Xiah smiles and sticks out his free arm to her: My name is Xiah

Naina shakes his hand: Naina, nice to meet you

Xiah smiles: nice name... what does it mean?

Naina eyes widen with glint: It means beautiful eyes.

Xiah smiles and says: then you have the right name because your eyes are indeed beautiful.

Naina blushes.

Xiah smiles: It's nice to see a woman who can still blush in this day and age.

Naina smiles and says: your speech is a beautiful as you. You speak sweet words and you have the face of an angel. So tell me Mr. Handsome what are you doing out on a night like this when you should be with friends and family?

Xiah flirts: I was waiting for you beautiful Naina.

And so started the romance of Naina and Xiah.

Two months later...

Xiah yelling: Naina hurry up I can't wait any longer!

Naina who is washing her face: just a second...

Xiah yelling: Naina please I really do need a wee.

Naina smiles and jokes: well then go get one from the games store why are u disturbing me?

Xiah yelling: Not the Nintendo Wii I meant a wee.. as in I need to go to the loo.

Naina opens the door...

Naina smiles: its all yours baby... (and winks)

Xiah smiles with a revengeful face: You wait I'll get you...(Xiah hurried into the bathroom while Naina went into their bedroom to put on her PJ's.)

Five Minutes Later

While she brushed her hair Xiah came up behind her and grabbed her from the waist.

Naina smiles trying to get released from Xiah's possessive hold: Xiah... let go...

Xiah smiles and looks at his Naina's face: No way now your all mine. (he winks)

Naina with her soft tone voice: Xiah Baby..Jaan ...... please

Xiah picked her up on his shoulder while Naina is protesting & giggling at the same time, and took her towards the bed. He dropped her onto the bed and then jumped on the bed as well.

Xiah smiles and caress Naina's face: you know I love you...

Naina smiles: mhmm

Xiah smiles: and I have also told you I don't like this nightie of yours. It's restrictive. (has a naughty smile & pauses) for me.

Naina smiles and curves her lip trying not to release laughter: Sweetheart, think of it as wrapping paper. I mean don't you need to unwrap your presents to know what's in store? (she speaks in a innocent tone)

Xiah smiles and whispers: oh so it's like that...

Xiah pulled her close and their lips met. In a battle to gain possession of the kiss they forgot the world around them and entered a world of their own. Their tongues mated in the most intimate of dances and soon their bodies followed suit. Xiah had Naina crushed under him and while their tongues fought for possession of the kiss their hands were everywhere. Naina kept moving her hand up and down Xiah's back and soon there were nail marks on his back.

Xiah starts to laugh: you're my little wild cat... marking your territory again?

Naina in a possessive tone: of course...you are mine......... Naina will not let anyone have you.

Xiah moved his lips to Naina's neck at the exact spot that he knew she loved. He heard her groan and Xiah smiled.

Naina smiles and complains: Xiah hurry up...mmmm... hurry up

Xiah to busy kissing Naina's secret spot: Mmmm....just 5 minutes... I want to explore...

Naina complains: Xiah now!

And soon they were flying to ecstasy. They fell in a deep and peaceful sleep arms around each other like they would never let go of each other.

**Flash Back ends**

Yunho snaps his fingers in front of Naina:
Earth to Naina, where did you go? (he smiles and wipes Naina's tears) If you love the guy so much......

Naina cuts Yunho in mid sentence and an a upset angry tone: Love? He distrusted me! And now he comes to your house with your wife!!

Yunho guilty look: Yeah but he said he met KC at a bar. I believe them, but hate that KC doesn't trust me.

Naina guilty look and stares at Yunho's face: Do you think we should be trusted? I mean look at me, I, me, Naina, came to my boss's house to sleep for the night, sure it was a guest room, but this isn't professional. Even though I didn't know you were married, this was wrong on my part. (angry at her own actions, Naina starts to slap herself and cries manically)

Yunho holds Naina's hands and consoles her: Naina, I understand you came here, believing that if u fell in love or started dating another man, you would forget about Xiah. But can you? (he looks at Naina's face) No, rite? (Yunho thinks) KC and I never had trust issues. Our life was an ordinary marriage but a romantic fun-filled one for three beautiful years.

**FlashBack**

Yunho comes home tired and hungry, he looks around the apartment and does not find his beautiful wife.

Yunho yelling: KC, Babes, sweet heart, where are you?

Yunho hears the shower running and smiles. He takes off his jacket and puts it on the living room sofa and heads inside his bedroom, and walks towards the bathroom.

Yunho (thinks): So my beautiful & sexy wife is in here, Daddy likes. (with a mischievous grin, he opens the curtain and does not find his wife inside, but a poster of KC stuck to the wall)

Suddenly Yunho is pushed into the shower by some beautiful delicate hands. He turns around to find his lovely wife, giggling at him all wet in his expensive Armani business clothes.

KC giggles: Happy Anniversary!!

Yunho who is all wet angry yet smiling at his beautiful wife: Happy Anniversary to you to sweetheart! (and Yunho pulls her into the shower)

They both have a intense look in their eyes a longing for each other. KC's bangles are chiming because of the water hitting them. KC shies away, and is about to walk out of the shower, when Yunho grabs her hand and licks each water droplet from her arms to her hands as he is pulling her towards him. Now both of them are two centimeters away from each other lips.

KC smiles and innocently asks: Yunho how much do you love me?

Yunho smiles and just brushes his lips against hers: More than you can ever imagine my sweetheart. (Yunho's hot breath is torturing KC)

KC in a seductive tone:
Y are you torturing me?

Yunho confused: Wat do you mean?

KC smiles and whispers: Just kiss me already before, I end up ripping your clothes off.

Yunho whispers into her ear: Who's stopping you my sweet and seductive wife? (he winks)

Before eyes could blink, KC rips her beloved husbands clothes off, and grab possession for each other, like many nights this was different as KC was never the one to attack first.

Yunho who is astonished by his wife's actions:
KC, what has gotten into to you today....... not that I mind..

KC to busy nibbling on her husband's neck as if it was some sort of chew able candy: Y is that you are the only one to take charge in the love making huh? Your forgetting their are two people in this relationship.

Yunho smiles: Ok, you have had your fun, now my turn.

Soon both are engrossed into each other, forgetting the world around them and entering their own dimension. Of romance and love.

45 minutes later in the tub, clothes are all scattered everywhere in the bathroom.

Yunho raises a glass of champagne:
A toast, to our relationship and love, and possibly a third party to our family.

KC holding up her glass raises an eyebrow: I hope your not talking about a mistress?

Yunho kisses KC lips intently: Sweet heart, I meant a baby.

KC smiles: Well in that case, we better get started.

Yunho smiles mischievously: Exactly what I was going to do.

Both of them spend the night in each others arms. Thinking about what the future holds for them, and their yet to be born baby.
** flash back ends**

Naina looks toward Yunho: do you guys have a baby?

Yunho: (Looking dejected) no we tried and tried until I decided I didn't want KC to go through the pain of nt having conceived every month.

Naina puts her hand on Yunho's shoulder: that must hurt... but I think this must hurt her even more

Yunho wondering: If I know my KC I know she's probably sitting somewhere crying her eyes out and you know what the worst thing is. When she's crying I know my heart tells me it like my heart is breaking I have this funny feeling inside and I have it now.

Naina smiles: you should go to her. She's your wife and its cold outside.

Yunho smiles: Your right, she's my wife, and I love her, I'll go get changed.

Yunho goes to change while Naina goes to the guest room to get changed as well. She needs to see Xiah.

Meanwhile at Planet Blue Gardens...

Xiah is running after KC...

Xiah: hey slow down... (running out of breath)

KC keeps running until she reaches a willow tree. She enters the branches and hugs the bark of the tree and sobs her heart out. Xiah enters the willow tree and finds KC on the ground with her arms around the willow tree. He walks over to her and sits down.

Xiah smiles, and out of breath: hey it can't be all that bad...

KC cries: he doesn't need me anymore... I have never felt so alone

Xiah smiles: I know how u feel... but surely he's angry sometimes when we are angry we say things we don't mean.

KC: no he means it...

KC stood up and walks towards the hanging willow branches when suddenly she feels whoozy. She clutches her head and screams "YUNHO" before falling to the ground. Xiah runs to where KC has fallen and picks her up. He takes her to the road and calls an ambulance from there. After calling the ambulance he calls Naina...

Naina was just coming out of the guest room when her mobile rang. It was Xiah...

Naina: I was just coming to see you

Xiah worried voice: please come to the district hospital... Naina, KC fainted the ambulance is on its way to pick us up... just get there with her husband...

Naina worried tone: we'll be there

Just as Naina hangs up Yunho comes out of his room all ready for the cold night. He has a blanket in his hand and an extra jacket. Naina turns and walks to him

Yunho: Naina what's wrong? Why are you so pale?

Naina: Xiah just called...

Yunho worried: KC... what is it Naina? What has happened to KC?

Naina: Xiah just said she's fainted and that he's called the ambulance and they are taking her to the hospital... we should go there...

At the hospital

KC is unconscious in one of the ward rooms.

Yunho and Naina rush in and find Xiah sitting in the waiting room.

Yunho worried expression: What happened to my KC, Xiah??!

Xiah concerned: I don't know, she just fainted. The doc-

Before, Xiah could finish his sentence. The Doctor comes in.

Dr. Sara concerned face (walks towards Xiah): Mr. Kim, next time, you must take care of your wife.

Xiah embarrassed: Oh, no, I'm her friend, is something serious Dr. Sara?

Dr. Sara: Yes, she's pregnant!

Xiah, Naina, & Yunho[shocked expression]: WHAT!!

Dr. Sara: Yes, congratulations to [Dr. Sara looks at Yunho] umm to you?

Yunho all smiles: Yea, I'm the father.

Dr. Sara [walks up to him and gives Yunho an angry look]: Next time, please take care of your wife, her blood pressure was very high. That's not good for her or the baby.

Yunho guilty look: Umm, Can I see my wife, Doc?

Dr. Sara: Right now she is sleeping, in a half in hour; I will have Nurse Salma get you ok. Again, Congratulations! And next time please take care of her health and the babies.

Yunho: Thank you, I promise I will.

Half an hour later Yunho walks into the private room. As he enters he see's his wife looking pale sleeping but the expression on her face kills him. She looks scared and sad. She lays in the foetal position and even though she is sleeping it looks like she has no peace. He walks towards her and sits on the chair next to the bed. He picks her hand and kisses it and just sits there watching her as she sleeps.

Yunho whispers: I'm here baby... nothing will hurt you now. Just rest and look after our baby because they need you (smiles, and pause) as much as I do.

As he says these words KC wakes up and smiles for a second then the pain returns to her eyes. Yunho can see what she is remembering and the words

"if you can't trust me then I don't need you anymore..."

KC tries to sit up.

Yunho: KC, lay down, your not well, you need some rest''. And our bab-

Before Yunho can finish his sentence KC speaks: Baby? Who's baby? You are not related to our bab-.

Yunho cuts in: KC, I know your upset, about what I said and I regret it deeply, You know that you're the only one for me. It's just that every since you became manger of the PerfectAngel Company, you don't have time for me. I have been a bad husband, I'm ashamed. I did not do well on my part'''.

KC who's to weak to sit up, lays back down & in a soft tone says: I can forgive you for thinking I don't make time for you, I can forgive you for getting mad at the late night meetings I have at work, but (she starts to cry) I will never forgive you for kissing that SLUT! And''..

Before KC finishes her sentence, a knock is heard at the door and Naina comes in.

KC sits up now and says: Well, I took the name of "the slut" and she walks in. [with a forced smile] Welcome My Mistress, please continue to snog my husband, right in front of ME!!

Naina comes and sits down on the other side of KC and calms her down: KC, please calm yourself down, it's not good for you or the baby, [Naina lays her down again] Now listen to me before you say anything. [Naina takes a deep breath and speaks] I understand where you are coming from, how can you trust your husband again? There is a simple answer to that. He didn't kiss me, I kissed him. [KC tries to get up again] Wait, before you call me a slut again, I just would like to point out I didn't know Yunho was married. And even if he wasn't I shouldn't have gone to his place. [Naina starts to tear up] I guess, I was thinking, If I started dating someone else, I would forget about Xiah. But, that Junsu just stole my heart away and has never returned it. [KC smiles remembering when Yunho stole her heart away, she stares at him and they both smile] KC, as soon as I kissed Yunho, he pulled away, saying he loves his wife very much. Don't you think if we were going to sleep together, he wouldn't let me stay in the guest room. I believe that all four of us have gone through a lot. But, we can't make our love for each other so weak, that small misunderstandings break our relationships.

KC smiles & sits up, and Naina hugs her and cries in her arms: I'm sorry, KC, I'm really sorry, I feel like I have hurt my sister. I ended up being what Xiah thought I was, a flirt, a whore, a b*tch!

Naina runs out of their and when she's runs out she bumps into Xiah at the door, and she looks at him and continues to run outside.

Xiah worried: What happened to Naina?

KC smiles: She's guilty over the almost break up and well, you go after her Mr. Heart Stealer.

Xiah confused: Heart Stealer?

Yunho smiles: Can you just go! Jeez, can't a guy get some time with his wife, and baby.

KC blushes, while Yunho kisses her on her forehead.

Xiah runs out to find Naina.

Xiah: hey Naina wait up.... (under his breath) why do some guys have it so lucky...

Xiah runs until he catches up with Naina. They are standing on the sidewalk next to the hospital.

Xiah tiredly: wh-eere are you off to in such a hurry?

He holds Naina's face in his palms and see her face ravaged by tears. Her eyes are closed and her body is still shaking.

Xiah concerned: Naina, baby, please open your eyes.

Naina shakes her head and tries to move her face out of Xiah hands but Xiah holds on firmly.

Xiah looks into Naina's closed eyes: Naina if you don't open your eyes how will you see my soul? [puts his hand under her chin]Open your eyes and see what your tears are doing to me. Open your eyes and see what I feel. Open your beautiful eyes so that your Xiah can look into his Naina's eyes. Naina my beautiful, angel please just open your eyes.

Naina slowly opens her eyes and their eyes lock. Naina see's the pain, the regret, the disgust at himself and concern for her all locked away in his eyes. Naina closes her eyes not being able to see all this.

Naina silently: Xiah...

Xiah worried: what is it? Why did you close your eyes?

Naina teary: because I can't bear to see all the pain in your eyes. I just want to wipe it away. I want to change in fact I will change. KC was right I dress like a slut that why people think I am a slut. Xiah I want to be the woman for you, I want you to be able to hold your head up high and tell people I am your girlfriend when they ask. I want what KC and Yunho have, they love each other and he is so proud of her [he looks up into Xiah's eyes with sadness] I want you to be proud of me. Xiah I want...

Xiah holding Naina's face in his palms: then help me wipe the pain away. Come back to me. Let's put this relationship back together. I miss you and I don't know how I have lived all these days without you but I have suffered and I still am and as for changing Naina I love you the way you are, I love the clothes you wear they make you look good. I don't think I want you to change in fact I want my same Naina back. Naina I know this may be hard for you but if you can find it in your heart please forgive me for all the pain I have given you. [he caresses Naina's silky dark hair] I know by not trusting you I made the biggest mistake of my life and I don't think I can ever forgive myself if I let you go again.

Xiah goes down on one knee and takes Naina's left hand

Xiah: Naina, my life, my heart will you please do me the honor of being my wife?

Naina doesn't know what to say. She is shocked. All her dreams are coming true and she had given up all hope on this moment.

Naina stuttering: Xiah... I... ummm... i...

Just then it starts to rain and Naina tries to run but Xiah keeps a hold of her hand.

Xiah serious tone: I'm not letting you go until you give me an answer.

Naina closes her eyes, and opens them and looks into Xiah's eyes, and realizes this is the guy for her, this is the one, she takes a deep breath in, and takes everything in: YES.... YES XIAH I WILL MARRY YOU!...

Xiah stands up and take her face in his palms and brings their faces closer to one another. Their lips meet in a tender and gentle kiss.

Xiah: (mummers with his lips still on Naina's) I-i-i love you... let's go home...

Naina moves away.

Naina smiles: actually let's go back to the hospital and let these guys know we are back together.

Xiah smiles: Naina lets leave those lovebirds alone... I bet right now they are in a world of their own.

Naina: okay sweetie then lets go home.

Naina and Xiah go home and celebrate their engagement with some takeaway and a bottle of some very expensive champagne. They sit on the couch snuggled in each others arms.

Xiah kissing Naina's hand: Naina... when do you want to get married?

Naina smiles: when ever you want

Xiah smiles: if I had a choice we'd get married right now but I want KC and Yunho to be there...

Naina puts her head on Xiah's shoulder: me too... I still can't believe that she's pregnant... Yunho said they had been trying for some time now....

Xiah flirts: speaking of trying why don't we go and practice making our own babies...

Naina blushes and hits Xiah on the arm

Naina giggles: X-x-xiah...

Xiah smiling: Naina baby I know your hot for me.... come on... last one to the bedroom is a rotten egg

Naina smiles: rotten egg huh... I guess that is you [she nudges her elbow into Xiah's stomach]

Xiah [smirks] ' NainA!

Naina jumps of the couch and heads towards the bedroom and Xiah is not far behind. Just as she gets to the top Xiah sweeps her off her feet and carries her to the bedroom. He puts her down and just as he closes the door she pounces on him with a juicy kiss. Their lips mate while their hands work in a fiery rush to remove all restrictions in their way. The kiss turns into a blaze and soon Xiah and Naina are in a world of their own where no one can reach.

At the hospital

KC and Yunho are in each other's arms, trying to contain the happiness that they have just received, both want to jump up in the air and yell and scream with joy. But because of KC's pregnancy, they just stay snuggled.

KC smiling: Yunho, I wonder if it is a girl or a boy?

Yunho smiles and kisses KC's forehead: What if, It is twins?!

KC shocked: Haha! I already have one baby [pinches Yunho's cheek] I don't need two more.

Yunho touches his cheek, and kisses KC's hand: What, I was thinking that, because we worked so d*mn hard! [smiles at her] Especially me.

KC shocked and embarrassed [hits Yunho's arm]: I did some work too [she winks at him] and I'm the one carrying this soon to be heavy load. Your going to think I'm a big walrus!

Yunho smiles and kisses KC's belly: You will be one of the sexiest walruses ever.

KC gasps: How dare you call me a walrus?!

Yunho confused: You just said? But. You.

KC smiles: I'm kidding.

Yunho still has a confused expression on his face. KC sees this and gives him a big juicy kiss, to wipe away the confusion. Yunho reacts to this kiss immediately, and makes it a extremely passionate one in a split second, their arms around each other. They makeout.

20 minutes later.

Yunho gasps and with a sad expression: I'm sorry KC, I promise to a better, husband and father. Promise to be their when you need me.

KC holds Yunho's hands: And I promise, to make you my priority first. And then work.

Yunho puts his right hand on KC's stomach: You mean make "us" your priority first. It could be more than us too.

KC smiles with an eyebrow up: Why do you think it will be twins?

Yunho smiles and kisses KC's forehead: Like I said, "we" worked d*mn hard!

Yunho and KC both laugh

2 month later....

Naina pleading on the phone: KC, please I need to go shopping, I need my shopping buddy.

KC smiles: Oh, ok, I need to go shopping for baby stuff anyways...

They meet at a shopping mall. KC is 2 months pregnant and still looks pale due to morning sickness.

Naina concerned: are you sure your husband won't kill me... you look like you're going to fall any second.

KC smiles: Don't worry he won't, I'm so excited about this wedding. After all, I'm the maid-of-honor. Let's shop today I want to blow some money...

The two girls laugh and shop for the wedding and baby.

8 and half months later

Xiah: (panting) how is she? what's the status?

Naina giggling: she is doing okay, As long as Yunho is with her she'll be ok. [she looks at Xiah and thinks] what will happen to him when I become pregnant?

The door's of the labor room open and out comes Yunho holding a beautiful baby

Yunho with a 100 watt smile: its a girl...

Xiah hugs him: Congrats!! [he sees the baby] she's beautiful

Naina smiles when seeing the baby: how is KC?

Just then an agonizing scream is heard....

Yunho tired: here we go again'.

He disappears with the baby into the labor room and comes out 5 minutes later with two babies.

Yunho with a 100 watt smile: its a boy....

Xiah gives him a brotherly jug: hey one of each... you're a lucky man.

Naina smiles: congratulations... (she gives Yunho a quick hug) I think you should go back inside.

Xiah puts his arm around Naina: she's right go back and give our love to KC.

After an hour

Naina is sitting next to KC

Naina sits next to KC: how are you feeling?

KC who has a pale drained face:exhausted but happy, excited and energetic. I bet that doesn't make sense.

Naina giggles: well you have three months to loose the baby fat.

KC smiles: yes of course, and be ready for your wedding right.

Naina smiles & blushes: yeah... I am really excited. (Naina puts her hand on KC's ) KC thank you.

KC confused: what for?

Naina smiles: us... Xiah and I.. If it hadn't been for you we would never, be together.

KC smiles and puts her hand on top of Naina's: That's what friends are for.

One year later

On a beach in Dubai there are four people standing. Two of them are holding hands. The young woman is dressed in a white chiffon dress while the young man is wearing a white shirt and black trousers. There are red rose bouquets on either side. Standing next to the young woman is her maid of honour dressed in a pale blue and pale pink dress and she is holding a baby dressed in a yellow dress while standing next to the young man is his best man also dressed in a white shirt and black trousers holding a baby wearing black shorts and a white shirt.

Chaplin: are you ready to say your vows?

Xiah smiles: yes we are...

Chaplin: should we start with you then Naina?

Naina blushes and says: You have become mine forever.
Yes, we have become partners.
I have become yours.
Hereafter, I cannot live without you.
Do not live without me.
Let us share the joys. [she looks into Xiah's eyes and he smiles]
We are word and meaning, unite.
You are thought and I am sound.

May the nights be honey-sweet for us. [Xiah kisses Naina's hand]
May the mornings be honey-sweet for us.
May the plants be honey-sweet for us.
May the earth be honey-sweet for us.

Chaplin: now you Xiah

Xiah smiles: Today, as I give myself to you my mind is clear and my commitment
is strong and without reservation. I take you to be my life's partner.
I will never leave you nor forsake you;
I will spend all my days at your side.
We will share a lifetime of eternal, immeasurable love. [Naina smiles looking at Xiah]

Chaplin: I now pronounce you Husband and wife. You may kiss the bride.

Naina puts her hand up: wait

Xiah, KC and Yunho look at her with concern....

Naina: I have something to say...

KC smiles: ooo go on then...

Naina looks deep into Xiah's eyes while holding his hands...

Naina smiles: You are my husband
My feet shall run because of you
My feet dance because of you
My heart shall beat because of you
My eyes see because of you
My mind thinks because of you
And I shall love because of you.

Xiah (with love in his eyes shining through): I love you too

He is about to lift Naina's face to give her one of the sweetest kisses, as they are about to approach for their kiss, Naina holds her head and feels a rush of dizziness and ends up fainting in Xiah's arms.

Xiah holding Naina with a concerned face: Naina baby! What happened? KC, what happened to Naina?!

KC who has some medical skills checks Naina's pulse and smiles: Congrats Xiah, Your going to be a father!

Xiah surprised face: I'm going to be a what?!

Yunho who is laughing and smiles at the same time: A father, Wow, you guys went ahead of the game. Can't keep your hands off each other huh? (smiles and pats Xiah's back, who is still in shock)

5 minutes later

Naina wakes up looking into the face of an angel.

Naina holding her head: What happened?

Xiah smiles: Hello, Mommy to be!

Naina blushes and smiles with a 100 watt smile: Mommy to be?!

Xiah smiles and helps Naina up: You will be one of the most beautiful mothers ever! You know

Yunho smiles: You called. (KC and Yunho laugh) I'm only kidding, continue with what you were saying.

Xiah annoyed yet smiles: You know, Naina you forgot our kiss.

Naina smiles and comes closer to Xiah and gives him a peck, then makes it a passionate kiss, sealing their love and symbol of love forever.

Chaplin starts to cry seeing the lovebirds together.

They break apart and KC and Yunho congratulate the newly wedded couple. Naina picks Maya from KC and cuddles her. The four have become fast friends and always spend time together. Naina and Xiah baby sit on occasion when KC and Yunho need some alone time. They walk back to the hotel where a small luncheon has been organized with only the dreams of their future waiting ahead. And a baby headed their way, or babies? Depending on the baby-making process they used. ;-)

As we grow older together, As we continue to change with age, There is one thing that will never change. . . I will always keep falling in love with you.

Karen Clodfelder


Edited by suganain - 17 years ago

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