RaghVi OS: One Last Chance - Page 5

Originally posted by: Mihika

Sorry the reaction button has again gone nuts

Expectations....it was way above expectations Asfia...I loved it❤️

It's okay yaar❤️

Thank you! It feels so good hear🤗💖

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Aww😳

I'm sorry for making u cry constantly twice🤪

Tune last wale mei bhi rone ki baat ki thi

But I'm not sadist yaar😊🤣

Ab hasle😆❤️

🤗🤗

This is so beautiful and well written

I really loved the emotional transition in the os--how Raghav's emotion went from repentence to that of being a jealous one to his usual naughty self to the romantic him to the caring and concerned hubby...THE SHADES OF RAGHAV RAO

I liked Pallavi's acceptance towards Raghav and relying on him for emotional support

Such a beautiful OS Asfu! ❤️

Angst, Romance, Jealousy sab kuch tha

Description of their emotions was on point 👏

Jealous Raghav and the shock when he realized Pallavi knew she was hugging him only🤣

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Aww😳

I'm sorry for making u cry constantly twice🤪

Tune last wale mei bhi rone ki baat ki thi

But I'm not sadist yaar😊🤣

Ab hasle😆❤️

Ginno ko hasana hai? Ye lo 🤪

Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Ginno ko hasana hai? Ye lo 🤪

Hasna kya wo toh sharma jayegi ye dekhke🤪🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Me000w

Loved reading it!! Keep writing!! 👏

Keep winning hearts with your pieces!! 👍🏼

Thanks a lot, Tannu🤗

Glad to know u liked this❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: tasnimrayian

Hey apple

It was awesome.

Do tag me in next story 💔

Hello Rayian

You can call me Asfiya 😆

Thanks ❤️

Will tag/Pm u next time 👍🏼

Originally posted by: SONIA441

This piece was Beautiful ❤️

You know what! You take my heart away sometimes with your imaginations! It would be so great if we get to actually see this kinda scene

I really don't have words to put in how much I like the scene created above. This was pure bliss❤️

Awww🥺❤️

Thanks a ton, Sonia🤗💖

Happy to know u liked it! 😄

I wrote it in a rush, wasn’t sure how everyone will respond but blessed to have the love you guys shower upon my works! 💕

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Asfita this was so amazing!!!!

The perfect pinch of romance you add always has my heart!!!!

Loved the your version of the pool BTS

Thanks a lot dishi🤗

Such a lovely comment 😍

Glad to know u loved it💕