Originally posted by: nikkiGarg
why no one is reading it …
I did. Just didn't have the time to comment today. It's too good to be ITV. Keep it up girl. Would love to read more
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Originally posted by: nikkiGarg
why no one is reading it …
I did. Just didn't have the time to comment today. It's too good to be ITV. Keep it up girl. Would love to read more
Amazing concept....
please continue writing
PART - 1
All the happenings of the past few months has stressed both meets a lot and now the latest decision of their family about getting them hitched is taking a toll on them
As for meety she knows how meetA already hates her and consider her a thief as he made it all clear on his wedding day to manu didi eventhough she agreed for the dating drama but after the fight in the market the thought of facing him itself is giving her goosebumps as she clearly remembers all the allegation he accused her off.
FLASHBACK TO THE FIGHT
Meety has gone to retrieve a parcel when in the market she stumbled into ram lakhan who she hadn't met in a long while so on their insisting
They went for a pizza party and was having a gala time as being with them helps her forgetting her stress and issues
MeetA who after a month has finally decided to leave the jail he had put himself in was having a meeting On a nearby table meetA who just finished his meeting heard her voice and as if like a movie reel he got reminded of all the trauma and humiliation he and his family
And took it all out on meety
He walked towards her table and slow clapped
Wah ne tere sadke javan koi dekh k Keh sakta h tumhe ki tumhari wajah se kisi ka dil tuta h tmhara jaisi gundi aur dhokebaaj ladki ki wajah se mera pura parivar kitni takleef main aur tm yahan maje se party karri ho Arrey tm jaise
Logo ko kya pata jb duniya k samne apki khili udti h log majakh udate h bezzati krte h toh kaise feel hota h
Mujhe toh kbhi kbhi lagta h tmhari behen ko bhagne main bhi tmhara hu haath hoga
Isiliye toh koi fikar koi chinta koi guilt hi nhi Najar aara
Bravo meet hooda bravo
TM jaise log na isliye kbhi izzat ki zindagi nhi jee paate jb dusro ki izzat hi sare aam nilam krdi toh tmhe koi kyun izzat dega
Anubha aunty or dadi ko dekh k lagta nahi un hone aise sanskar diye honge ki dono ki dono ladkiya awara aur ghatiyan niklengi waise pata bhi h unn bechari yon ko ki ghar k bahar krti kya ho tm Saara din pata nhi tmhare papa
Bs bohot hogya Ibb Alhawat tabse isliye sunne jari thi ki samjhati hu tera dil dukha h aur wahi dukh tu mere pe jahir krra h
Kyunki kahin na kahin khud ne jimmewar manri thi main ki tame pe mannu didi k irado ka pata laga leti toh Baat na aage badhti par Ibb bas tera dukh tanne mubarak agar uss din thare aur thare parivar ki bezzati hui h na toh meri mummy aur dadi bhi koi dhol manjeera baja k khushiyan na manare re ghar te chori bhagi h koi majakh na h
Aur rahi Baat dil tutne ki toh ek larki k piche tu rota reh sari umar bacho ki tarah ya bada hoja ye tere upar h bhale hi pher isse tu apne pure parivar ne dukh dera isme teri galti h mari na par tera parivar tanne jyada behtar pata unke baare
Toh tu apne parivar ne sambhal aur manne apne ne dekhen de jai Ramji ki
Chalo Ram Lakhan saying soo she dragged them away.
Meet stood still the guts of the girl really shocked him coming out of the stupor he realised she has left
But her words really hurted him that she made him feel guilty as If dreaming of his future making plans with a girl he was wrong in it when it was her sister who has wronged him
He sat in his car
Deep who has got busy in a call making alhawat sit inside didn't took notice when Meetwa sped of with the vehicle
FB ENDS
Meety taking after dropping her dadi and mummy in a jagran nearby has come away as the place the music was making her restless and she kept thinking about the decision of families and Meetwa and didn't realised when she reached near a cliff seeing someone already there as a car was parked there she took a u turn
When her eyes fell on the no plate and realised its his car(Alhawat ki gadi h)
Yo itni raat ne yahan aisi sunsaan jagah k karra h kahin suicide toh na karne aa gya hey bhagwan yo chora bhi na bawara h ek dum she looked for him when she saw him standing almost on the edge of the cliff
Re pagal ho gye h ke she shouted
Hearing the sudden shouting MeetA got scared and turned and lost his balance meety ran to him and immediately pulled him back but couldn't balance his wait and fell with Meetwa over meety
Feeling himself still breathing meeta opened his eyes and seeing meety shouted
TM
Tada here goes nothing socha tha date likhungi isme par FB dal diya 😀😀😀😀😀
Agle main date hogi pakka agar main phir se bhavanao main na beh gyi
How did I miss reading this before? Excited to know what happens next.
Wese when will the next part come?
aage likho.. aage likho.. jldi likho… abhi likho….
date kaha h inki?
Originally posted by: nikkiGarg
date kaha h inki?
Literally cliff pe hang karne wala cliffhanger daal dia usne🤣🤣🤣
Part 2
Pehli date - for a new beginning or will it be ending
TM meety pushed him and got up re tu kyun hamesha apni jaan dene pe utaru rehta yo Ibb tesri baar Bachari hu main tanne
Itni baar toh filmo main hero heroine ne na bachata jab dekho tab sar pe bhoot sawar rehta h
MeetA-o hello miss meetH hogi tum ustad ya shahbad ki Don par
Meri koi jann wan nhi bachayi tmne aur tmhe har baar pata nhi kyun ye galat fehmi ho jati h ki main jaan dene lagra hu aur koi kaam nhi h kya mujhe
Itna depressed aadmi nhi hu
Meety - acha toh uss din wo wahan site pe bizali k board toh Gf tha na teri jisne chune khatir marra jaara tha tu
Aur wo gundo teh toh yamraj ji aakar bacha gye the tanne aur Ibb yo khai main girke seedha yamraj ji k pass janne lagra tha Haan
MeetA-dekho isme meri galti nhi h okay sab tumhara kasoor h
(mera Mujh pe tu jhutha ilzam na laga )
MeetA walks near her acha thik h purani Baatein choro ye toh tm manna nhi kar sakti ki uss din agar tmhare sath jhagda na hota toh main bewajah gusse main un gundo se na bhidta aur tm meri jaan unn gundo se na bachati toh ye sab jhanjat main na padte hum na woh guruji woh sab Kehte na humari rishte ki
Meety-maane yo sab na pata dekh main yahan do minute k sukoon khatir aayi toh behas na krni manni
Tu reh yahan shanti te main kahin aur chali jaungi
MeetA - Arrey ruko okay ladai nhi krte par please ab Jab hum aise takra hi gaye h
Toh kya Beth k baat kr sakte h ye sab jo horaha h iss bare main
Meety looked at him as if he has grown horns seeing him talk sense and so normally in a while
Meety - Thik h
MeetA - ao be tho pher he said pointing at the car
Meety - na bikul na tere Saath akele car k andar na bethri main
MeetA - ek minute tmhe main aisa waisa type ka lgta hu kya
Meety - lagta nahi tu 100%h tera kya bharosa. Kab kiss Baat pe para garam hoje aur lejake gadi thok de tu 🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
MeetA-(feeling better not knowing why he felt hurt on thinking that she thought him to be awara lafandar type) oh toh tum yeh kehna chah rahi thi
Meety-toh tanne k laga 🤔🤔🤔🤔
MeetA-Acha woh sab choro (he jumped and sat on the bonnet and asked her to join too)
Meety sat beside Him while balancing herself unknowingly her hand took hold of his arm and seeing her soo close meetA felt some weird feeling in him which he never felt before not even with Manushi for that matter
Shaking himself out of the stupor and to change the topic he asked kuch khaogi
Meety - looked at him and asked re tu kyun itna senti horaha h aisa toh h na ki date sate pe aaya h toh kisi chori ne leke tanne bhuk h toh krle kuch order (taking her phn out) nhi toh laa main krdeti hu while
Mimicking him kuch khaoge ye puchke wo lovers ki tarah impress krne ki koshish krra k
MeetA-(hearing her he looked shocked) oo hello ye na faltu sapne dekhna na bnd karo maine wo date waghera k liye bs isliye bola tha k taki mujhe thora time mil jaye aur main rishte k liye mana kar saku aur agar gharwalo ko reason ho dene ko ki I tried but we aren't a match
Meety-re Ibb aaya na oonth pahad k niche
Manne toh pehle hi pata tha tu itni asani se manne walo main se na h pakka kuch plan hoga
MeetA-Haan ab pata chl gya na ab batao koi idea h nhi toh mere dating wala idea hi use krenge while doing something on his phone
Meety-Main kyun batau tere wajh se hum Iss sab main phase re Haan krne te pehle kmse km manne bata toh deta main hi mana krdeti
MeetA-dekho tum
(pointing finger at but changing his stance he smiled)
acha chalo mat do idea mujhe kya h mere gharwale bhi raji h tmhare bhi main kar leta hu shadi tm theri sanskari ladki tm thori apne bado ko dukh dogi
Meety-re aisa sochiyo bhi mat tere jaise oonnth se byah krne te acha main sach much ki oonth se karlu kamse kam Rajasthan toh ghumne milega
MeetA-(looked at her shocked and angry on being compared even less than an animal) tm tm Pagal ho kya or ye oonth ooth kya laga rakha h meet naam h mera aur
just becoz Rajasthan main oonth milte h tm ek janwar se shadi karlogi
Meety-hey bhagwan kiss gadhe ne mere jaisa naam dediya tanne
Re wo sirf Kehne ki Baat thi budhuram aur waise bhi manne byah vyah na karna toh Ibb tu samjha apne gharwalo ne aur mana krde Iss rishte se
MeetA-maine toh aaram se izzat se kaha tha na aapse ki koi idea socho ustad ji par nhi tmhe hi akd dikhani thi toh ab bhugto main toh nahi karra na tmhe karna h toh shauk se karo
(just than his cellphone rang meetA picked it up and tells someone about the location)
Meety - dekh Ibb na tu mera dimag ghumara byah wale din toh tanne marre te itni dikkat thi ki jaise paat nhi manne thara kaunsa keemti baxa chura liya ho Ibb kaunse gun dikh ge jo maara jaara maare te byah karne ko
MeetA-aarey Arrey chotu baby ko. Bura laga gya
Main koi maara nahi jaara par ye jo chinta ye pareshani h na thare chehre pe ye bada sukoon deri manne toh agar maare teh byah karne ki baat pe tu itna chidri soch byah te toh dil hi tut jaga tere
Just than the delivery boy came and delivered one medium sized pizza and a cup of cold coffee disturbing their heated argument.
MeetA took the delivery and placed it on the car and opening the box took a slice
Said dekho abhi Waqt h soch lo koi idea nhi toh mere dating wale plan main shamil hojao gharwale aaram se Maan bhi jaayenge aur koi hurt bhi nhi hoga warna toh humari shadi honi pakki h
Seeing him taking it all so casually meety snatched the pizza slice from his hand angrily taking a bite said thik h idea chahiye na tanne
Toh kehde jake apne gharwalo se ki meetH ko na chore na pasand usne choriya pasand h isliye wo byah na karna chahti khush
And jumping down pushed the coffee mug and started walking as she doesn't wanted him to notice her tears but turned and snatched the pizza box and left from there running.
A/n socha tha romantic date likhu pher laga itni jaldi manna jayye dono shadi k liye nah
Pher pata nhi date likhte likhte unki baatein hi likh di 🙈🙊🙊🙊🙊🙈🙈 pizza toh khaya bhi na 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Kyunki show main bhi toh yahi krte rehte h wo 🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
Loved it...I know eventually they ll fall in love...do write more parts soon...❤️