Maryada continues FF#8,May 5th.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aditya driving the car when someone start shooting at him his body guards followed him but in vane….

Aditya was calling Shubhankar but he was not receiving his calls….

He was late for home for all this …

He entered the house and slowly went to the study but was shocked when Priya called him from behind ….

Why were you late so late ….?

Don't you care for me ?

Oh don't get angry chori I had some work that is why I was late ….

No Aditya I was waiting for you and I was scared too …bad thoughts were killing me ..

AH AH AHHH Aditya …Priya is feeling pain in her lower abdominal

Aditya: What happened chori don't get hyper lets go to hospital …

Priya : Nothing Aditya its just nothing your wild baby is doing this …

What is he doing ?

He is kicking me…

Oh that means he is taking my side so you don't shout at me …

Both smiled

Aditya : but chori is there any thing serious tell me…jokes apart what happened?

Priya : relax Aditya baby movement inside so a little pain but feels good …

Aditya : okay but tomorrow we are going to hospital.

Priya : Okay !!! done

Now lets got to sleep!!!

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DJ in her room making sure she locks the room and knocks on the bathroom door…..

Shubhankar comes out and there is a deep silence…..

Shubhankar still looking at Devyani…………..

Devyani thinking you don't Shubhankar everything in life is not that easy …sometimes for even touching your dreams you have to pay for it…

I can't do it on the expense of my maryada…..

Yes you are my love too but i don't want to lose neither you nor my family ….so its better I remain silent forever……

Tears starts to flow from her eyes she can't control her emotions….

SJ comes over and take her tears in his finger tips …. And looking at them asks her what does that mean …?

Its nothing ….!!! Devyani moves back ..its better you leave..

I have told you Devyani ji you can't lie….!!!!

Why are you after me just leave me Shubhankar …just leave me I don't want this …?

SJ comes nearer to her don't you think you must say what you should have said till now….

Shubhankar I have nothing to say …..

Acha ….but your eyes are saying something else….

Aren't they saying that you want me in your…you want me as your life partner..you want to touch me and want to be with me…..

Devyani suddenly closes her eyes …..

SJ smiled … closing them will not change the truth.

Devyani realized her mistake but the truth was revealed

Devyani said yes Shubhankar I love you !!!! I love you very very much but……..

SJ stopped her no buts !!! no ifs !!!! at least not for now …

Let me live this moment I don't know how long is this from fate but I will try to prolong it …

Devyani crying ….can't believe what she just said ….

Devyani ji please …he took her hands and kissed on her hands…

You know why I kissed on your hands …..?

Devyani ji crying and said no !!! tell me !!!!

He won't believe me and you might laugh ….

No Shubhankar tell me ……I won't laugh ….trust me..

People say that when you kiss someone on hands then that person will never leave you alone….

Devyani looking at SJ , she smiled ,he was looking like a kid…..

She took his hand and kissed him back on hand…

I wished life remains like this for ever DJ….

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PRECAP !!!!

Doctor what has happened to her…? Is everything fine…?

Doctor: come with me MR .Aditya ….

Aditya gets tensed…




NOTE :

I AM NOT EXPLOITING THE CHARACTERS NOR THE STORY ...ITS MERELY AN IDEA OF MY OWN WITH NO PHYSICAL(SEX) EXPLOITATION..

i always loved SJ and MJ relationship...and i am using it in more of the elaboration ..

not always ...love mean getting physical...

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Tulsey thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great write up dear.
please study for your exams. We will wait for the next post when you are done with the exams.
Good luck with your exams.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay thanks alot thats great of you so i have my exams on 22nd may and 23rd may after that i will be back with next part thanks alot...guys for keeping up with me
so now i can relax and concentrate on my studies.
love you guys
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳adity an priya s love story is a vary sweet an lovely
physical relationship an i love so mach they mumints an priya s pain sence is vary vary romintek
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you doitagain for posting these fan fictions. I feel like I'm watching the show all over again! Please don't stop because I am really enjoying it. However, I have some constructive input for you. I would like to see a track for Vidya and would also like to to Gaurav and Karan come back. I'm not sure if you had any ideas of a track for them. I had this crazy idea for them and if you don't mind me sharing my input I thought with Vicky Donor bringing the attention of sperm donation, we could see Karan and Gaurav wanting to adopt a child. Gaurav could donate his sperm and Vidya could agree to use her egg and carry the child for him. This is just my suggestion but by no means would I want you to divert from any other tracks you have planned. Thanks one again and good luck with your exams!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mugzz its a good idea i had plans but no actual plan so ...but you have to quote me the story in short because even i havent watched the movie i have a great idea about it embedding in my story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: doitagain

mugzz its a good idea i had plans but no actual plan so ...but you have to quote me the story in short because even i havent watched the movie i have a great idea about it embedding in my story


TBH, I also haven't seen the movie! But, reason why I thought of it is because though I'm not sure in India, but here in Canada a lot of gay couples want to have children of their own. A lot of them opt for sperm/egg donation and/or surrogate motherhood. I just thought that was an interesting idea but like I said, this is merely my suggestion as I haven't seen Gaurav, Karan, and Vidya yet. I'm still enjoying your fan fiction and would like for you to continuation however you'd like it 😊

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