Krishna-Satyabhama drabbles updated on pg 9

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Nothing more cute than this Bhabhi :P

Loved it to moon and back!

But but but I am Revathi too :P Afterall she's Mila only

So Satya is Subhi's biggest support,beautiful potrayal of bondings. ❤️

And Satya and Ruki are so adorable,Kanha has always been a treat to read ;-)

What I loved the most was Dau,Kanha,Revathi,Ruki and Satya here.Each of that dialogue was brilliant.

Hmmm

So I got one more drabble request idea...!

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

I am so sorry Shrutha, I really didn't have the time to read anything till today and this was your first PM I saw, so I just clicked!

But what a beautiful drabble!

You really have a way with words and this OS was fantastic!

This is the first time I am reading a Krishna-Bhama piece and I loved it so much. Their nok-jhoks and Krishna's mischievous ways, I love that about his character which you portrayed so well.

Moving on, I really liked how you connected the links in this OS, that was brilliantly done.

This has tempted me to read all your work but I honestly don't have the time. Will catch whatever I can and comment!😃

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: ramya06
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Lovely update Srutha! Of course subhadra's lord would be the most amazing, desired man of aryavrat. 😳 ❤️
Oh how cute, krishna upto mischief and bhama his partner in crime. 😳 😆 Loved the bonding between Dau-krishna and their cute little argument. 😆 Loved everything about this update, can't wait for next part. 😛

Thank you so much Ramya ❤️

He is lol :P He is also coming in the next update. Poor fellow is stuck in between two mischief mongers, and the Kanha-Dau leela 😆😆

I always thought they were 😳

Thank you once again :)

It will come soon. You see, my creativity flows when I have exams.

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Astoria
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Oh!!! Srutha!!! First of all I am sorry for being so late.Was facing problems from IF.

Now,now,now Common link waale idea ne toh dil jeet liya👏
And KrishMa-my God!!!!😳😳

I loved everything.Starting from KrishMa to Dau to Rukmini.

You are talented girl.Take my advice and write a book ASAP.

I am so happy you loved it Dau 😆😆

I take it the KrishMa part was fun for you? 😳

Thank you so much :) As a matter of fact, I may already be doing something like that 😉

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Loved the common-link waala idea. It's ingenious.
Also, the bonding bet. Bhama-Ruki and Revati was shown very cutely!

Thank you so much Pro 😃

I am glad you liked it.

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Sumi-19
Very good !!!! keep it up!!!! very well written.
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Loved krishna balaram fights 😳
Update fast OK!!! Waiting. 😉

Thank you Sumi 😊😊

I will. ASAP :)

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
Beautiful work, Shru! 👏 I love your descriptions and the dialogues between Krishna, Satyabhama, Rukmini and Dau Bhaiyya. Satyabhama is adorable, and I love how you characterized my Rukmini too. Of course, we cannot forget Kanha. He's absolutely loveable!

Thank you Janaki 😃

I wrote Rukmini with you and Pro in mind :)

Kanha is Enough said.

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Nothing more cute than this Bhabhi :P
Loved it to moon and back!
But but but I am Revathi too :P Afterall she's Mila only
So Satya is Subhi's biggest support,beautiful potrayal of bondings. ❤️
And Satya and Ruki are so adorable,Kanha has always been a treat to read ;-)
What I loved the most was Dau,Kanha,Revathi,Ruki and Satya here.Each of that dialogue was brilliant.
Hmmm
So I got one more drabble request idea...!

Thank you laadli 🤗

She is 😳

Thank youuu :*

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: 8520NK
I am so sorry Shrutha, I really didn't have the time to read anything till today and this was your first PM I saw, so I just clicked!
But what a beautiful drabble!
You really have a way with words and this OS was fantastic!
This is the first time I am reading a Krishna-Bhama piece and I loved it so much. Their nok-jhoks and Krishna's mischievous ways, I love that about his character which you portrayed so well.
Moving on, I really liked how you connected the links in this OS, that was brilliantly done.
This has tempted me to read all your work but I honestly don't have the time. Will catch whatever I can and comment!😃

Thank you so much Navu 😊😊

Sure :) It's not a problem :)

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Surya Sundarraj Sriram

@Surya_krsnbhakt

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

I love Krsna-Satyabhama duo!

Okay, first chapter:

First off, I really like Malavika and Priyamvada, but I am delighted that you brought Madhavi into the chapter! She is the Lalita-sakhi of Dvaraka, so her inclusion is like icing on the cake!

And your Krsna is so different from mine, yet he is the same. That is one of the beauties of Krsna, that he is different for all, but he is still the same Krsna! And I like this talking back-and-forth Satyabhama and Krsna!

Truly, that snake thing surprised me, though it shouldn't have, but I liked the way it offered its obeisance to Srimati Satyabhama and Krsna before leaving.

And I am too waiting for Satyabhama to enter Krsna's life! Good thing I don't have to wait!!