As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46

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Semanti Chakraborty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Checked the practice part 😃 wow!!!!! Beyond words
So our Arjun wants perfection in his learning 👍🏼 you go Arjun 🤗 as usual, I loved the part where Yudhi praised & encouraged him 😊
Arjun is more eager for learning ❤️ Guru Drona's characterization is very nice 👏 Carry on dear 😊 May PaarthaSaarathi Bless you always!

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ElMystique

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Bird's eye comes later.. I have something great in mind 😉 Birds eye will coem after the eating in the dark, the water collecting..and I will be distorting abit... Eklavya incident will be after bird's eye 😊

I am not that eager about ekalavyasincident but all I ment was eating in dark and birds eye can be clubbed B

this time I want a very long update😊😊😊

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Shriya95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Awesome brish!!! It was very nice😃😃

Busy now so can't post long comments...so just sumarising, lovely!!! Continue ASAP😳

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Crazypheonix008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Nice one Brish. It's not really surprising that Ashwi sided with Dury and co.because after all birds of a feather flock together. Dury and Ashwi
were alike in many ways. Both were jealous and insecure. But I liked it that you acknowledged Dury's better fighting skills.Again you portrayed Paarth's thirst for knowledge really well. Loved the Arjun-Yudi bond. Update soon

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RosChel.Lobster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Wow Brish both updates were splendid...I so loved both of them ⭐️

In the previous 1 I love how confidently Arjun said he will b better than the best ⭐️

this ashwathama 🤢

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: Shriya95
Awesome brish!!! It was very nice😃😃
Busy now so can't post long comments...so just sumarising, lovely!!! Continue ASAP😳

Muahz...

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: Rushika
Wow Brish both updates were splendid...I so loved both of them ⭐️
In the previous 1 I love how confidently Arjun said he will b better than the best ⭐️
this ashwathama 🤢

Lolz.. Ikr Ashwi is damn irritating 🤢

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amritat

@amritat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Great update Brishti... 👏

Infact your FF is giving me ideas of starting my own, from the point of view of Draupadi... 😉

Keep it up... 😊

Please continue... 😊

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luv_sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Had 3 updates to catch up with..but what an enjoyable read that was!😃😳..Great pieces of writing there Brishti!👏..I Love how you've given imp to detailing n yet kept it subtle!😳😊👏..the Emotions flowing, depicted very well!👏👏

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naq5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#280

reading this thread for the first time & have read all your chapters together. I loved the way you have described arjun's emotions so nicely👏👏. hmm so arjun wanted peace so would always have been in a dilemma about war. Also the discomfort he feels when someone else is in discomfort due to him. 👏

Please do write more. waiting for the next part.

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