A Gangster's passionate love story Rishbala TS last Part page2

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Rishbala TS A Gangster's passionate love story


This is inspired by the movie Gangster:A love story.

Part1



A man was singing in the bar.He was none other than the bar singer Sultan.

( Tu Hi Meri Shab Hai Subah Hai Tu Hi Din Hai Mera
Tu Hi Mera Rab Hai Jahaan Hai Tu Hi Meri Duniya
Tu Waqt Mere Liye Main Hoon Tera Lamha
Kaise Rahega Bhala Hoke Tu Mujhse Judaa... )... (2)

( Aankhon Se Padhke Tujhe Dil Pe Maine Likha
Tu Ban Gaya Hai Mere Jeene Ki Ek Wajah )... (2)
Teri Hasi Teri Adaa Auron Se Hai Bilkul Judaa...


His eyes were on the girl who was sipping whiskey and listening to his song.


( Aankhen Teri Shabnami Chehra Tera Aaina
Tu Hai Udaasi Bhari Koi Haseen Dastaan )... (2)

Dil Mein Hai Kya Kuchh Toh Bata
Kyon Hai Bhala Khud Se Khafa...


Though it was Sultan who was singing in her eyes it was her lover RK who was singing.She smiled hallucinating RK singing for her.

Tu Hi Meri Shab Hai Subah Hai Tu Hi Din Hai Mera
Tu Hi Mera Rab Hai Jahaan Hai Tu Hi Meri Duniya
Tu Waqt Mere Liye Main Hoon Tera Lamha
Kaise Rahega Bhala Hoke Tu Mujhse Judaa...(GANGSTER - A LOVE STORY)


After the song,the drunk girl tried to go out of the bar.But she slipped down.
Sultan held her hand and helped her to get up.
She murmured:Thank you RK.
Sultan was stunned when she addressed him as RK.
She:By the way you sang very well.
He smiled.

She:I never knew that you can sing so well RK.

Sultan:I am not RK.But Sultan...
She:Oh RK...
Sultan:Tell me where you stay.I will drop you there.I don't think you can go home alone.
She:It's ok..I will manage by myself.
She released herself from him and walked.He followed her.
She reached home.But while unlocking the door itself she fainted.But Sultan ran towards her and held her.
He took her inside and placed her on the bed.
Sultan:In this unconscious state leaving her alone here is not safe.I will stay here till she is awake.
Sultan sat near her.

The sun rays fell on her face and she opened her eyes.She was shocked to see Sultan sleeping near her and screamed moving away from him.Hearing her scream Sultan woke up.
Sultan:What happened?
She:Why are you here?Get out.
Sultan:You are misunderstanding me.Yesterday night you were so drunk that the situation got worse and you fainted.So I thought I should be with you for your safety.Believe me.

She:I am sorry and thank you.You are the singer Sultan.Right?I love your songs.
Sultan smiled:Thank you.And you?I always see you.In fact I have always noticed you.
She:Noticed me?Why?
Sultan:I don't know why.
She:May be because I am the only woman who is seen drinking there.
He smiled in a pale way.
Sultan:You did'nt say your name yet.
She:Madhubala.
Sultan smiled:Nice name.
He looked at her.
Sultan:Can I ask you something?When you were drunk you were calling me RK.Who is RK?
Madhu was silent.
Sultan:You may be thinking why you should share your personal life with a stranger.Right?
Madhu:Nothing like that.You helped me though I am a stranger.So you are not a stranger anymore.
Sultan:For me, you are not a stranger as I see you daily.
Madhu:Even I see you daily.So you are not a stranger.
They both giggled.
Sultan:Then tell...
Madhu:RK is the love of my life.
Sultan became dull.

Flash back...

Madhu was dancing in a bar.A man tried to get closer to her.
Madhu:Leave me.
He:Why are you behaving like a Sati Savitri?I know what bar dancers do.
Madhu:I am not like you think.For bread and butter I dance here.But I will not sell myself.
He looked at her lustfully:Come with me darling.
Madhu slapped him.In anger he pulled her hair making her moan in pain.
Suddenly somebody punched him.
She was shocked.That guy punched him a lot and he escaped.
Madhu looked at him:Thank you for saving me.

He:It's ok.
Madhu:May I know your name?

He:Rishab Kundra.RK.
He walked off.Madhu kept staring at him going.

After a few days...

Madhu was walking on the street to reach her house.
Suddenly she saw the man who tried to molest her in the bar with other men.She sweated.
He:That day you escaped from me.Now how will you escape from me?
She became nervous.

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The other guys too looked at her lustfully.She got scared.

She ran.They ran after her.Suddenly she bumped into someone.She looked at that person.
It was RK.
RK looked at them.RK punched them hard.They all fell down weak.

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RK:If you all come again after her I will kill you all.
Madhu:Thank you.
RK:Your name?
Madhu:Madhubala.

RK:These guys are dangerous.They can even come to your house to take revenge.So it's not safe to go home.
Madhu:Then where will I go?
RK:Come with me.
Madhu was stunned.
He grabbed her hand and took her home.
Madhu saw his skin bleeding.She saw a first aid box there and put ointment on his wounds.
He was staring at her.
Madhu:No one is there at home?
RK:No.I am an orphan.

Madhu was stunned:Orphan like me?

They both looked at each other emotionally.

After 2 days...
Madhu was feeling restless.
Madhu:How long can I stay in your house RK?
RK:Why?Are you scared of me?
Madhu:No,I trust you.You are a nice guy.But I am a woman.I can't stay with a man like this.

RK:So you are getting insecure.
Madhu was silent.
He took the knife and hurt his hand.Madhu was shocked:RK!
He took blood


and filled the parting of her hair.She was shocked.
RK:Sorry for doing this without your permission.But to make you stay here I had to do this.
Madhu looked at him emotionally.

Madhu:Why do you want me to stay here with you?Just for my safety?

RK:I don't know.But I feel like seeing you always.
Madhu smiled tearfully.
She took a cloth piece and tied over his wound to stop bleeding.


Madhu got ready to go out.
RK:Where are you going?
Madhu:I am going to the bar to do my job.
RK:Stop going there.I can't tolerate you dancing before those drunkards wearing revealing clothes.
Madhu was stunned.
Madhu smiled:But I need to earn.How can I depend on you always.
RK:I am there to earn.I am earning for you too.Are you not giving you food.Then why are you going and dancing before drunkards?I know that you are not comfortable with it and you are compelled to dance in the bar for livelihood.
RK cupped her face in his hands emotionally:But now onwards you don't have to do what you dislike.

Madhu smiled emotionally looking at RK.

She thought:Somebody understood me very well and is giving me a decent life too.
RK:If you are dying to dance..then dance with me.
RK pulled her closer and danced passionately.Madhu was surprised.She enjoyed dancing with him.

Kyu Aaj Kal neend kam Khwab zaada hai
Lagta Khuda ka koi nek iraada hai
Kal tha Fakeer aaj dil shezada hai
Lagta Khuda ka koi nek iraada hai

Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya
Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya

Pathar ke in rasto pe
Phoolo ke ek chaadar hai
Jabse mile ho humko
Badla har ek manzar hai

Dekho jahaan main neele neele asmaan thale
Rang naye naye hai jaise ghulte huwe

Sohye se khwab mere jaage tere waaste
Tere khayalo se hai bheege mere raaste

Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya
Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya

Tum kyu chale aate ho
Har roz in khwabo mein
Chupke se aa bhi jao
Ek din meri bahoo mein

Tere he Sapne Andhero mein Ujaalo mein
Koi naasha hain tere aankho ke pyalo mein
Tu mere khwabo mein jawabo mein sawaalo mein
Har din churaa tumhe mein laata hoon khayalo mein


RK pecked her palm.She was lost in his first kiss.

Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya
Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya

(Woh Lamhe).




But suddenly RK came back to senses and felt guilty.
RK:Sorry Madhu..I don't know how I kissed you.
Madhu:It's ok RK.
RK was relieved.
Madhu thought:I know that RK loves me.His possessiveness and care show that he loves me a lot.Still he is guilty about kissing me thinking that I don't love him.But i will remove his guilt soon.




After a few days...

RK was surprised to see the room decorated with candles and rose petals.


Madhu came wearing a beautiful saree.She was blushing.

Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai


He could not take his eyes off her beauty.


Ho Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai
Khwaahishon Ki Shaam Dhalti Hain... (2)



He caressed her face.Madhu was lost in his touch.

Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai

La La La...

Suddenly he came back to senses and moved back.
Madhu:What happened RK?
RK:Sorry Madhu for touching you.
Madhu:No RK.Don't be guilty.


You have the right to touch me.Because I love you.


Teri Aankhen Dikhati Hai
Hamein Sapanen Sitaaron Ke
Ho...
Tere Hothon Pe Likha Hai
Jo Tum Bole Ishaaron Mein
Ho...

RK looked at her in disbelief.She nodded with a smile.


Khwaabon Ke Karwaan Mein Raat Chalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hain
La La La...

He cupped her face in his hands:I love you too Madhu.

Behakti Shaam Aayi Hai
Tujhe Lekar Ke Baahon Mein
Ho...

They embraced each other emotionally.

Tujhe Chhu Loon Ke Rakhu Main
Chhupakar Ke Nigaahon Mein
Ho...



He pressed his lips on her forehead softly.His lips moved towards her eye lids as she closed her eyes.
He caressed her hands and shoulders sensually.
Madhu embraced him losing her control.

Sharmati Ithlaati Hai Machalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hain
Ho Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai
Khwaahishon Ki Shaam Dhalti Hain...


He took her to the bed.He put rose petals on her sensually.She closed her eyes.


Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai
La La La ...

The lit candles witnessed their passionate love.

Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai



Ho Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai
Khwaahishon Ki Shaam Dhalti Hain...






Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai

La La La...

Behakti Shaam Aayi Hai
Tujhe Lekar Ke Baahon Mein
Ho...
Tujhe Chhu Loon Ke Rakhu Main



Chhupakar Ke Nigaahon Mein
Ho...
Sharmati Ithlaati Hai Machalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hain
Ho Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai
Khwaahishon Ki Shaam Dhalti Hain...(GANGSTER - A LOVE STORY).



RK took Madhu to a restaurant.
RK:So biwi..this is our first date.

Madhu blushed.
RK:So enjoying?
Madhu:Hmmm...yep.

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They both smiled.
They ate food feeding each other.




RK and Madhu were living happily.

One day when they went out,some men attacked him.
RK punched them.Madhu was in shock.
Suddenly a middle aged man came out of the car.
RK:Balraj Sir!

Balraj stared at Madhu:So for this girl only you decided to leave our gang.Good influence on him girl.
Madhu was confused.
Balraj:But you can't RK.If you leave our gang...she will be killed.
Balraj held Madhu tight and put the gunpoint at her.Madhu was scared.

RK was scared:Balraj Sir...please leave my Madhu.
Madhu:You know that I will do if I tell you that I will do.I will kill your Madhu if you leave our gang.
RK:Please leave her.I promise that I will not leave our gang.
Balraj:I can't trust you as long as you stay with this girl.You should leave her and come with us forever.
RK and Madhu were shocked.
RK:How can I leave Madhu?She is my life.
Balraj:If you don't leave her I will kill her.Tell me...you want her life to be safe or you want to stay with her and see her getting murdered brutally?
RK and Madhu were shocked.
Balraj:Think and take a decision in 2 days.
Balraj pushed Madhu towards RK and left.
Madhu:What is all this RK?I have never seen you shivering before anyone.But now you are weak before him.Why?And what was he saying?
RK:I am weak before him as he is more powerful and dangerous than anyone in this world./He is my Boss Balraj..a very powerful Don.I am a Gangster Madhu.
Madhu was shocked.


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautiful pics,
Awesome update,
loved it,
Rk saved Madhu from the creeps,
Rishbala loves each other,
Rk a gangster,he works under balraj,Balraj put a condition to leave Madhu and come with him forever or else he will kill Madhu,
do continue soon
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Hi jasmine di.. 👏 super story and really loved it...
Super pictures.. the way rk saved madhu then both enjoyed life together. But this stupid balraj is blackmailing rk with madhus life.


Now wat will happen... 😕 continue soon
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Congrats on the TS!

awesome update, terrifically written
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Awesome update!!
Loved it.
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Awesome update...
Pics r Beautiful...
Rishbala moments r Outstanding...
Totally loved it...
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Beautiful update superb
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Beautiful story dear...Rk is a gangster and he loves madhu so much and madhu also loves him...
What happened between rishbala?...Waiting for ur next update dear...
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Awesome update.. Loved it.. I already read it on contest.. Thought I commented here sorry for being late Rk & Madhu loved each other & but that ballu what's the need of him coming back?? Rk wanted to start a new life with Madhu.. In next part Rk goes to coma na plz bring him out of coma in next part they suffered so much in life & deserve a happy life.. Waiting for the update plz update soon..
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Awesome update. Loved it.

Rk saved Madhu from the creep boys.

Rishbala loves each other and got married.

Rk a gangster, he works for balraj.

Balraj put a condition to leave Madhu as RK wants to leave gang.

Balraj want Rk to be with him forever or else he will kill Madhu.

Please update soon.
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