RiShbala FF: SiNfuL NiGhTs (thread 11 link in pgno.1) 12/11 - Page 41

Originally posted by: FLORAFAIRY

Sorry Aaniya! For late commenting but this is the 3rd time I am writing this because from yesterday onwards I am trying but I am unable to. Some problem was there in my mobile net. So, again I am writing my views

ITS COMPLETELY FINE DEAR.. I KNOW HOW MUCH PAIN IT IS TO COMMENT SOMETHING AND IN RETURN IT DOESNT GET POSTED.. 😭

. So, here it goes-
OH MY GOD! You ended this part this part in such a situation.

HAHAHA😆

I guess its Aisha. Only you know where this story is going to take turn.

LOLZ MADHU😆

Aaniya! Just answer my one question

OKIE😆

, i.e Is this story going to have a happy ending. I am very much anxious to know. After you said there is Rishbala seperation. I just don't want a sad ending.

YES DEAR.. IT WILL HAVE AN HAPPY END..😃

Welltever it is I know you will do your best. So, no problem I'll be loving your work. Now, coming back. Well, I already guessed that Radha was upto something by her moves and it may lead to marriage thing. And thats it.

YEAH.. RADHA'S CRYPTUC MIND..

Well really you did give shock Aaniya! And now I really think that Madhu should move out Mansion than only Rk and Radha will know her value. Well I really liked this Rk. Now he come to know that Madhu is jealous for him. Great update! US!

Originally posted by: maithu_

Hey Ani!

THANKS MAITHU

Sorry dear for not commenting all these times! For all the lovely chapters you have shared with us.

Thanks for all the PM dear!

ITS ALRIGHT DEAE

First of all A VERY HAPPY & EXCITING CONGRATULATIONS for the one year completion.

I'm hooked to this story as much as I'm hooked to my favourite chocolate.

Lots of love for continuing this and keeping all the tracks in finger tips.

Love this story a lot.

AWW.. SO SWEET😳

Since the last time I commented, a lot of things have happened.

Radha wanting to get Madhu married and keep her away from her son RK!

RK seeing Ria as just a person he knows and getting Madhu's feelings towards Ria

Arahaan and Aisha the best they can ever be. Standing on the right side and supporting the right one and en-lighting the situations

YEO DEAR.. RADHA IS ON PLANNING MODE.. RK & MADHU IS HAVING BREWING FEELING..

AND ARHAAN & AISHA ARE TGE GOOD FRIENDS TO RISHBALA

And Madhu! The girl who crossed a lot of path and turmoil.

It was and still is an extraordinary ride to read your writings!

THANKS DEAR..

I think the person is Aisha! She will get to know what is really happening in her friends life, I think!

Or can it be Trisha who came to use Madhu's room for a brief minute.

LETS SEE WHO IT TURNS OUT TO BE..

Well wait eagerly for the next part dear!

All the best!

Thanks for this story!

🤗

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Hey Aaniya!

What's up?

I believe you won't be shocked seeing me here!!

HEY MAINA...

TRUST ME I AM😆

Well see I have started working on the major review i.e. the 12 part review!

Then I thought before I do that I should post my review on this update!

I can't handle one more update in my bag!!

So here am I with my review on part 70.

SUPERB👏 *clasping my hands*

But before that let me tell you I was waiting for this update impatiently where RK gets some common sense knocked in.

It was an AMAZING update Aaniya.

Wait not only amazing it was progressive.

To be honest in past few updates of that Ria track got me irked.

And very honestly it showed me no progress other than one that was Madhu growing bolder for herself.

YEP DEAR .. FROM NOW ON STROY WILL BE REALLY MOVING..

EARLIER JT WAS MADHU'S PAIN & SUFFERING

Always Madhu was confused, frustrated and hurt.

And to be honest I felt it so real.

Means honestly it happens in real life.

YEAH.. REALITY..

However, coming back to the update.

This update knocked some sense in RK by making him realize what's bothering Madhu.

Arhaan.. We all love you..

True friend I must say...

VERY NICE FRIEND :)

RK is somewhat I can say innocent and unknown to the feeling called LOVE and TO BE LOVED.

PERFECTLY EXPLAINED

Honestly speaking at the point when he recalled how Ria used to ask him to hook up with other girl thing my heart went out for him!!

HE IS PURE FROM HIS HEART

Well better if I don't go deep into it...

It would be too messy to handle.

HEHE.. I KNOW

Now coming towards the malicious woman, MRS. KUNDRA.

I have no words to describe my hatred for her...

I love her when she is RK's mother but I hate her when she stoops so low.

How can someone be so cheap?? So bullsh*t??

Like she just wants to get rid of Madhu any way doesn't matter how?

SHE IS SHREWD & CUNNING WHEN IT COMES TO MADHU..

I feel that RK and Radha are going to have a face off regarding Madhu's marriage.

MAY BE YES..

Or maybe Mohan will handle it before hand only.

And I read in one reply of yours that RK and Madhu need a push t realize their actual feelings.

Maybe this marriage thing will push RK towards an edge.

Because since he has realized the jealousy thing I think he will either clear Madhu's misunderstanding or maybe he will not.

MAY BE YES ;)

Why do I feel that something bothering is coming up??

UR INTITUTION IS CORRECT

Like something really messy!!

No problem actually!
It will make this story more fun only.

Next comes that piece of shit Vir... Whatever his name was!!

I don't think after reading my review on Radha you need to know what I must have felt about that Mr. Slave Dealer.

Like he doesn't wants a wife man!

Means come on dude!! Get a life!! Get SOME BRAINS!!

Total dork I will say!!

HAHAHA.. SUCH MEN CHAUVINISTIC PIG KINDA GUY HE IS..

RK did the best thing by spilling the drink on him.

Excuse me MR. Sick head you are standing in RK's mansion only!!

LIke how?? I mean how are such people existing in this world till now?

Why aren't they murdered yet??

LOLZ.. SO MAD U ARE ! 😆

Moving on towards Madhu.

This girl is... helpless man!

Sometimes her crying irritates me but then the hurricane of emotions inside her melts me.

SHE IS HELPLESS.. OPTION LESS TOO..

She needs a clear as water kinda confrontation with RK!

YES..

Which I know isn't possible because of RK!!

The flashback was nice.

I am glad that RK voiced out his thoughts to Arhaan at least.

RK and Arhaan were amazing in this update.

Specially Arhaan.

THATS WHY THEIR FRIENDSHIP IS STILL STRONG

And now I am wondering what are they going to do with Vira... Let's call him Virus.

Yes so I am waiting to see RK and Arhaan dealing with that Mr. Virus.

LOLZ... 😆

Now coming to the last and most thrilling part...

WHO IS THAT PERSON??

You used the word COLD VOICE..

Aisha won't use a cold voice with Madhu! Will she?

Aaniya you love to end on such cliff hangers!!

I am not able to wait.

I am loved the update thoroughly!

NOW WHATEVER THAT PERSON IS.. WE KNOW A SECRET WONT ALWAYS BE A SECRET ;)

Amazingly written!

You know as much their characters make this story beautiful the same way their characters sometimes become a hurdle for them.

I swear if you continued to show emotions like this na Aaniya I will... something will happen to me for sure!

Your writing is so flawless...

The emotions are portrayed so beautifully that I can relate them to real life...

*SIGH*... U makes me get flattered😆

AND AM OBLIGED BY UR WORDS

Remember you once asked me why I love this story so much??

Well here is one the point from it.

I can relate it to real life.. Personally speaking.. I don't know about others but I do feel that it is quite close to reality. I have in actual been with people like RK. I have dealt with many Madhu's. I have witnessed many many many Mukund and Ria's!! And last but the least I have seen friends like Arhaan and Aisha.

AWW DEAR.. I KNEW ABOUT RK & FRIENDS THINGS IN UR LIFE.. BUT NEVER THOUGHT OF MUKUND & RIA LIKE OF PERSONS

Happy First Anniversary Aaniya!

The story you began with an innocent girl getting stuck up with a monster is now the story which is now explaining that behind innocent person there is also a strong person and sometimes Monsters are result of our deeds only.

THESE LINES ARE EXTREMELY BRILLIANT.. U TOOK MY HEART AWAY WITH THI LINE

I am not going to say update soon!!

Cause I know your exams are going on.

Best of Luck for that dear!!

Rock them and Shock the examiners!!

LOLZ.. THANKS😆

Thoroughly enjoyed this roller coaster ride till now.

This story has been a true like literally I mean it A TRUE ROLLER COASTER RIDE.

Keep rocking with such amazing piece of writings Aan!

Stay Blessed!!

Loads of Love,

Maina.❤️

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

I hope you enjoy this mini review of mine.

Hopefully till you reply to this I will complete the review of mine.