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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update maithu..
I thought queen would scold Madhu but she surprised everyone..

Where did rishab go at night..??
Madhu is going to follow him..

Waiting for the next part..
Update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb update

Queen also wants to join them
Loved it

Thank you so much dear!
Glad you loved reading it!
Yes Queen wants to join them dear!
Thank you so much once again!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: harini_

Awesome update,
so its groundskeepers who told to queen about their outing not Dipali,
next time queen also wants to go with them,
is Madhu also going to ride the horse and follow him,
thanks for the update

Thank you dear for reading and liking this part also
Yup it was not DipSu who told the queen
I think she is also going to go for a ride! Let's see LOL
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Clara20

Awesome update dear..

I thought nw queen wl scold madhu bt she was delighted that her daughter smile come back..
Nw madhu wl follow rishab does she knw horse riding too

Thanks dear!
Happy you enjoyed reading it
That is the mother in Queen LOL
I think she knows else it will be risky
Keep on reading
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai

Good update

so the queen is not angry from them for going out without telling her
and she asked them to tell her next time and she will join them

this is good

Thank you so much dear for reading and liking this part
She was just pretending to be angry LOL
That would be a great family outing I see Heee
Thank you once again
Keep on reading

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Varsha15778383

Nice update

I thought queen is angry with madhu for going out without her permission but she is sweet and she is happy that her children are able to smile happily forgetting their sorrow of losing their father
So dips didn't told any bad about madhu to queen till now.I thought that was the reason she sound angry
Waiting for madhu and RK adventure in horse
Story is really going in a very interesting way dear
Update fast

Thank you dear!
Happy you find it nice
Yup! Queen wants their happiness more than anything else
For now, Dips is quiet, let's see in future
Thank you once again
Keep on reading
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice update maithu..

I thought queen would scold Madhu but she surprised everyone..

Where did rishab go at night..??
Madhu is going to follow him..

Waiting for the next part..
Update soon..

Thanks dear
Happy that you are surprised LOL
You will soon know where he is going
I hing she is going to also
In few minutes, next part!
Thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's a little short update dearies!
Sorry!

Part 19 (Previous part : Part 18 )


Freeing the horse from its shelter, she pulled it out and climbed on it, adjusting herself on its back.
Checking all the needed items, she also got out of the shed and started to follow the Prince.
Turning left and right, in the snow filled areas, where nothing other than white and green scenery is available, she and the horse moved.

"Thanks Papa! If you weren't there, I wouldn't be on horse today!" she said riding the horse slowly.

The plain space turned out to be a mountain with fir trees all over and water runoff by the side with beautiful birds chirping lovely songs.
Turning her head here and there, she couldn't see the prince anywhere in her sight as he disappeared inside a dense fir trees forest while she was still moving slowly.

"We have lost the Prince's tracks!" she says to the horse with a sad face "I hope you know where you are going!" she says caressing it with hope.
Few minutes passed and the time started to run faster than she wanted "I think we are lost!" she said as she searched for any signs of shelter or something "May be we should head back now!" she says as she started to lose hope of seeing Prince again in this place.
"Come on! Let's head back!" she says and starts to turn when the horse takes its own initiatives and moves on its own "No no no no!"
And as the horse picked up speed "Hey! What are you doing? Hey! No!" trying to control it "Stop stop!"
And the horse whinnies, making her to take strong hold on it "No no! Not this!" and eventually she falls down and it grunts and run away from there, leaving her alone.
"Wait!" getting up on her knees "Come back!" moving forward "Wait! Don't leave me!" but I was of no use as it also disappeared from her sight as she breath heavily turning back and left and right to see any help.

Hours passed and she started to walk and walk as sky started to change colors and she was alone in an unknown place.
As the place started to darken, she took care with each steps and suddenly stopped hearing something pass by.
She turned to that side and there was nothing.
"Hello? Is there someone?" getting nothing in reply, she continued.
Once again after few seconds, she heard a sound and this time it was no something or someone moving but growling sound.
She paused in her track with fear written on her face and turned to see behind her.
And there stood a snow wolf, growling at its prey.
"Oh!" and she started to panic "Help!" she said in her trembling voice as she it move towards her.
As she moved backward, she fell on her back and moved "Hel me!"
And then, both the animal and lady in distress heard a sound, sound of a gunshot which was from near them.

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Thank you for reading buddies!
Leave your words so I can know what you feel.
See you this evening with Zarir!


Next part : Part 20


- Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 18
Queen reaction was v positive n she is willing to go wid dem on outing next time
Madhu is thinking about prince hesitation in taking d crown
He is going somewhere
Madhu gonna follow him
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 19..
Madhu followed prince n gt lost
Rishabh is dere?he fired on d snow wolf?interesting

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