RISHBALA FF: Wrong number, part 15 updated on feb - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Agirl12

3rd..

Wow.. Rk loves hearing Madhu's sound...is he in love with her?
They had past?

Ohh..Rk...he is so much in pain...he is deliberately distancing himself from his dear sister...but, is it same for mother too?
Is he upset with Radha?
Why isn't he letting Trishna stay with mother..

Got to see darling Rk...how he was recording Madhu's sound..and loving DD...dare devil from Madhu...

Madhu too finds him super handsome, but isn't accepting it..

Beautiful update



THANKYOU dear, no he is not distancing himself from radha...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Superb update jeni..and Trishna called Mukund.. and they talked.. trishna told him that madhu got to know about the affair..but she dont know the name !then.. madhu came to Mansion !and Radha & madhu's bond was real nice..so someone's bhabhi, someone's bahu & someone's Biwi came home..rk talked to her in phone.. as always !and Now he is trying to sneak to her room to see her ! wow !thanks fr pm !



THANKYOU dear aaniya, yes sneak peak... keep reading keep supporting
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Agirl12

Part 4 and 5

So Rk loves Madhu..Deewane...wow...that too from past 2.5 yrs...
What is Rk's past?...Why is he so scared...I so want to know why he changed after coming from abroad...

.Who is Trish's bf? Why is he restricting Trish to tell his name? Is he good person?

WE HAVE TO WAIT TO KNOW ABOUT MADHUS FAMILY

I have a doubt..
And Madhu and Ria did mistake...the last call was to Rk? And they thought it was to Trish's bf...

And great..Rk recognised Madhu's voice...is he confirmed it's Madhu?
They are going to talk daily? Madhu thinking she is speaking to Trish's bf and Rk knowing it's Madhu only?
Madhu...she changed her name to Aaliya but didn't change her surname...

I loved their cute fight in phone...haha..she saying you are not Rk...


SAYING TO RK YOU R NOT RK... ONLY MADHU CAN DO.


So, they are going to Rk mansion...now Madhu is there...I think Rk will shift from outhouse to mansion for his deewane..😳

Wonderful update..



THANKYOU dear,
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Agirl12

Part-6

Wow...This story is so interesting...
Wonderful update..



THANKYOU DEAR

So, Madhu called from Rk mansion itself too?...Wow...I am thinking Madhu will think him as Trish's bf and want to know how is his behaviour?

YES YES

Or Madhu thinks him as stranger?

So, it's Mukund..Trish's bf is Madhu's brother...Okayy..
So, both are each other's bhabi...great...

Ohh..Trish had deleted the number..that's why Rk's number came..

And I did one mistake...I had read characters in first page...but didn't remember...Maa is not RK's and Trish's mother,

NO RADHA IS RK AND TRISHNA'S MOTHER.

she is dadi...

Everybody love Madhu...she is everyone's pyari...

Rk and Madhu's call...wow...Rk directly made her gf ...

HMM...

hehe...he is not disclosing her identity...
So, will Madhu fall in love like this with Rk, thinking him as Randhir singh?
I loved their phone convo...sweet


THANK YOU


Precap...Rk going to see his princess...wow...😳...waiting for this..


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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 7


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Kundra MANSION:

Rk goes hiding behind bushes and trees to avoid getting caught in eyes of night guards.. After 5min he reaches near a dark cornor behind the mansion where its pipelines are connected... he checks the pipes so that it wont break off when he is halfway up.. he jumps high and get hold of a huge pipe thanks for his 6feet height and workouts that he reached the first floor corridor in just 2min...

he is wearing a track pant and vest his usual night costume. He walks slowly without making noise... now he is thinking in which room madhu will be.. he first goes near guest rooms but no one is their then he goes near trishs room with a doubt maybe all are sleeping together like in hostel but no... only trish and other girl is sleeping. Atlast their is only 2 rooms left in the floor. One is his old room that he use when he was staying in Mansion and other room next to his...

The door of the room next to him is slightly open so he peeks his head alone to see someone sleeping on the bed curling like a child and covered in duvet upto neck showing her back to him...

There is no one needed to say that its honey to honeybees.. he knows its his princess.. his heartbeat started to raise simultaneously raising his eager to see her. He slowly close the door without making noise so he won't wake her up from her beauty sleep. Each step that he takes toward her is giving a feel of peace to his heart.. he stops his steps in front of the bed facing her...



He is seeing her after 2.5yrs in bones and flesh a long wait... his eyes gets stuck on her frame like making a pencil art of her in his heart to keep this moment a memory lasting forever... he moves towards her and sits on the edge of bed keep looking at her to sequence his thurst and craving for her lively presence in his lonely life. . .


The moonlight that falls on her face works as a makeover on her already angelic face making it glow, the slow breeze flowing through the open window playing with her hairlocks falling on her face creating a small frown on her face making her look exactly like a small kid. .. ... he chuckle mildly and moves his hand closer to her face to move her hairlocks behind her ear letting his fingertips get the bliss of touching her flawless soft fair skin a little long than necessary.

He was about to withdraw his hand when he felt a slight hold on his hand... he is shocked whether she woken up but no she is sleeping holding his hand between her chin and pillow... he gets more and more mesmerised by her acts... he know he have to go now so he slightly blows air on her face from forehead to chin drawing a straight line...

as expected her hold loosed but before he moves back he hear a slow whisper PRINCE DON'T GO he looks at her face shocked and surprised but she was in deep sleep... he smiles and slightly press his lips for a kiss on her forehead with all his love and promise to meet her soon and goes back to his room as silently as he came.

Kundra OUTHOUSE

Early morning Rk woke up little before his usual time he goes to do his exercise before getting ready. After finishing his exercise he leaves to shower. He moves towards wardrobe to choose his dress. Everyday he usually wear the first dress his hand touches but today is not everyday and he is not like usual today everything is happening unusual. . . He never remember a day after his return himself being this enthusiastic and happy for breakfast in km

He is keep checking one after another dress on himself because he knows first impression is the best impression.. this is not first time he is going to see his PRINCESS but for her its first time to see him.

Atlast he choose a white with black formal wear hopefully... his eyes again and again goes to clock checking time every few minutes once he goes near mirror to set his hair and check himself onelast time before making his biggest presentation of his life yes he is going to present himself before his princess... hundreds and hundreds of thoughts running inside him "what she will call him dd? Will she like me, what if she dont? Etc..." pushing all his thoughts aside he goes near curtain opening it standing before it


Rk's room

"IAM COMING PRINCESS AS I PROMISED TO bittuji NOW I WONT AVOID U..." he said determined tracing her face in frame

Taking his watch wallet and phone from table he starts to move towards the hall when he gets a call he attends it HELLO bittuji before he continue his talk he bumps with someone..

Kundra MANSION (7.40am)

Early morning madhu wakes up and quickly takes a shower and small prayer to babaji goes to meet Radhamaa and others in hall.. Radhamaa is instructing staffs sees her comingand smiles at her..

madhu: good morning Radhamaa

Radhamaa: good morning bete.

madhu: Radhamaa where is Ria and trish

Radhamaa: they r getting ready will come now...

both trish and Ria joins after few minutes.

Radhamaa: trish go and call your bhai for breakfast

madhu dont like sending trish alone so she also joined her.

Kundra Outhouse:

trish and madhu enters Outhouse madhu was impressed with its interior and checking it out when trish saw someone in hall and goes there to see bittuji and start to talk with him..

madhu goes to first floor corridor painting handing on walls and suddenly bumps on someone and was closed her eyes fearing the fall but it dint happen instead she felt two hands holding her securely... she opens her eyes to see a man looking at her straight to her baby brown eyes with intense black eyes she lost herself in his magnetic eyes...



their world stoped for both untill they heard someone calling them... Both turned still in same position to see trish and bittuji standing few feets away gasping at them with open mouth ...

Sensing their position Rk straighten them both and turns can't able to face the teasing face of their respective friends... madhu leave from there immediately... Rk keeps looking at her retreating figure...

trish: bhai... how r u

Rk: hmm... am 5n angel, how are you

bittuji: can we continue our chat after breakfast someone is waiting...

trish give a confused look for his statement while Rk glare at him..

bittuji: i mean Radhamaa will be waiting for us.., what say cheif

Rk: yeah.. lets go

Kundra MANSION

Trio enters km to see madhu and Ria chatting with Radhamaa and she laughing on seeing Rk madhu stops. Radhamaa and Ria turns to see what happened to see Rk coming in...

Ria: darling dampak(dd) says dreamily

madhu mummers haan haan daredevil which Rk standing between Radhamaa and her hears he is trying hard to control his smile...

trish: bhai meet my friends Ria and madhu.. and turns to them to introduce Rk

Ria: Dont even think... who dont know dd i mean superstar Rk,

trish: ok ok... but meet my other bhai bittu verma

Ria and madhu: hai bittuji,

bittuji: hai madhu, hai Ria

They all goes to have breakfast ( Rk in head chair madhu to his right Radha to his left trish and bittuji next to Radha Ria next to madhu ) Staffs servers all and left.

madhu: maa km and Outhouse both are super its structure and interior are wonderful.. am going to miss you and this house from tomorrow

Radhamaa: thankyou bete, you can come here whenever you want. I will also miss u all

madhu: i dont think Mr.Kundra will like us coming her often maa
Rk doesn't like her calling him mr.Kundra. more than that why will i stop her coming here.

Radhamaa: y do you say so madhu.. did Rk said anything to you bete

madhu:No Radhamaa he dint, but i doubt because i see Mr.Kundra liking to stay alone... before Radhamaa could answer Rk spoke

Rk: Nothing like that you, you can come anytime u wish.. you r trishs friends and this is her home

madhu: when she herself is staying in hostel with us leaving her home. how can we come her. i know some security reasonz .. trish signals madhu to stop not to make her upset madhu stops..after few minutes of silence

Ria: how did you get to wake up on time today?

trish: haan madhu what happened to your dream prince, he left you?

Radha Rk and bittuji all looks at madhu with shocked expression.

Radhamaa: madhu u dint say to me about your someone special..

Rks expression changed into pain thinking about his madhu liking someone else

madhu: maa he is my prince who comes in my dreams i myself haven't seen him... and trish my prince never leaves me not after what happened yesterday she smiles with shyness
all become curious to know why this reaction

trish: what happened yaar?

madhu explained in detail what all happened yesterday night someone entering her room to kiss on her forehead... all are looking at her as if watching a horror movies climax

more than all Rk was looking at her with shock for thinking him as her dream...

madhu: i never felt his presence so real, i felt he was right there in my room. everything was like happened for real... i think its magic of km if i stay her for few more days i will find him soon i guess. my dream prince she said dreamily

trish and Ria: madhu it may be some thief na.. and teases her.. madhus face falls hearing about her prince..

Not knowing her prince is keep looking at her sitting next to her and smirking seeing her. right at the moment he wants to take her away from whole world to some place where only they 2 exist...

Radhamaa:ok now all eat no more talks and teases

Later all settled in hall where trish bittuji Rk and Radha was talking to eachother after a long time... madhu has seen trish missing her family since she started staying in hostel from past 6months...

Radhamaa: so now all get ready for your next plan

madhu: No maa some other time feeling lazy, today fully i want to spend with you after exams we will go.

Ria and trish: lazzzy madhu

madhu: Oiiie am not lazy, here i reschedule my plans so you get time with your always busy bhai but you. she turns to Radhamaa for support with a cute frown

Radhamaa: ok ok.. dont tease my madhu.

trish: haan maa how can i not tease madhu madam after what i saw today morning

Radhamaa: today morning what happened trish

madhu jumps in between nothing Radhamaa and points Rk with her eyes. which dint go unnoticed by Rk who was pretending to read newspaper.. but his eyes ears and heart dint leave his PRINCESS from the time he entered km... he is enjoying her antics like kids enjoy cartoon shows, her smile her frown her care for trish and Radhamaa..

trish brings her family photo album to show to her friends her father, sikky brother and ramya bhabi ... madhu and Ria know they all died in an accident along with bittuji's parents when trish was 14years old.

(NOTE: radha is mohans 2nd wife after meera's death.sikky is meera's son he is 8yrs elder to Rk, but for radha, sikky rk and trish all are her own children)
she saw the surrounding turning emotional

madhu: trish your mom and dad are looking like an ideal couple... your mom is so beautiful and your dad is handsome. but i have a doubt

trish: what doubt madhu

madhu: Radhamaa, why do ur kids dont look either beautiful(looking at trish)or handsome(looking at Rk)

hearing this trish starts to chase her all are enjoying there bonding.. bittuji also started to admire madhu, only she can bring back happiness in this family all are enjoying...
later trish also spend full afternoon speaking to her bhai about her studies, exams etc.. bittuji madhu and Ria also become friends and shared numbers,

after early dinner which Rk and bittuji avoided, knowing their habit Radha dint force them, before leaving trish explained what she saw today morning in Outhouse both are elighted as they wish seems possible now...

Rk and bittuji dropped all three in hostel...

Precap: Rk getting a call from Australia? guess who it will be.

Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Pt 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
RK is truly mesmerized by Madhu and the way you explained her beauty was like a dream.
Madhu thinking that she is dreaming of her prince whereas he was in fact present in the room.
Oh my RK has Madhu's picture in his room. He is crazily in love with her.
Happy times came to an end coz the girls went back to the hostel.
Love the bond Madhu shares with Radhamaa.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Character sketch..v nice..
Rk a superstar ..radha is his mom n thrishna is his sister
Madhu,thrishna and ria are friends
Thrishna wants madhu to become her bhabhi ahaan
Madhu is d laadli of her dadaji,papa n her brother mukund n mukund love thrishna
Bittiju knows rk secret which no one knows interesting
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Loved d prologue..awesome introduction of leads
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chap 1..amazing
Wat if its nt d real rk..n bittuji brought him in place of real rk n nw dey r looking fr him..a guess
Dipali as usual is after rk..
14 th boyfriend omg hahahah
Going to read chap 2

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