Rishabala TS : Slightly Wicked : Part Three : Page One : 20.10.17 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Finally read it!!!!
Omg how big... I love these big big updates.. I felt like its version 2 of tum mere ho. But this RK beat every other character you have written with his obsession.

How loyal he is, he doesn't want to lie to her. He doesn't want to keep her in dark and he doesn't even want to hurt ranveer for her.. I am crazily in love with him..

Waiting eagerly for remaining parts
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Nice story love it update soon eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
My god lazy, waat a plot. Sooperbb. I love ur stories Lazyy. I always did. U brought oberoi bros here aahhh😆. D innocent naughty Rudy s soo agressiv here haaa😲. Rk loves madhu unconditionly, but i thnk he s soo obsessd. Poor madhu. She just startd lovng him, & in a riff she has to leav him. Nw ver vud she go??? Dont knw. Want to explor moree plzz updat soon lazyy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Ohh god..
What a starting
Can't wait for more of this...
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
wow ..so happy ..new story
nice to see u back dear
manipulative ,possesive RK ..love him..😉
what a plan 👏❤️
loved d bonding
continue soon
waiting 4 d next part

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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
thanx 4 d pm dear
bas aapke pm ka intezar rehta hai 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: UniquePrincess

Res.
Unres..
Di u have Written Shivaay in one place were Rk meets Ranveer . thanks hun... have corrected it😳
Di,I just cant imagine oberoi bro's in illegal business..Om such a sweet guy and Rudra such a naughty guy in illegal business. hehehehe... yeah even me... but then just wanted to try something😛.



Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Ohh god this rk is wicked hehehehe

But he cant lie to madhu no, he can't😉
It was so sweet of him to let madhu know everything he loves her truly and doesn't want any secret between them😛
Superb start di loved it to the core
Pls update next part soon thank you so much dear.. will update in a bit😛



Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update.

Loved it totally.
Very beautifully written.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.


thank you so very much dear😛😛😛

Originally posted by: moumita.madhuk

I always love your stories awww thank you darling🤗... Lazy... I will wait for the next part!!! BTW saw in fb today that someone AGAIN plagiarized your story !!! Duniya choro se bhari hui hai! yeah hun.. it is so disturbing and saddening.



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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: harini_

Congrats for new story, Thank you hun😛😛
Interesting and different concept,
Superb update,
thoroughly enjoyed read it, so glad u enjoyed it hun😛😛
Kundra's are underworld don's and Malik is their trusted men,
loved Rk's characterization,when it comes to Madhu he is very possessive and over protective, he is wicked, Yup... his world revolves around her😛
Madhu loved Ranveer, LOL yeah.. don't know what she was thinking😆😆😆
Rk loves Madhu and every one knows this except her she didn't realized that she loves him,
loved Rishbala moments and Madhu too realized that she loves him but Rk didn't let her confess her love, glad u liked their moments hun😛
loved the way Rk let her know the truth he loves her truly he didn't want her to be in dark,
he knows her very well he also knows she will go and will not stay with him after knowing the truth and he let her go for a while, yes, he loves her a lot and it kills him that he was cheating her😛
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
will update it soon.. no probs😛



Originally posted by: manna43

Wonderful starting.New plot.Rk is gangster n madhu is also from criminal family.God ,how many guns rk have.hahahahaha too many😆😆He misguided Madhu to marry him. Obsessive or possessive whatever he maybe he knows Madhu completely.But why he want that Madhu know the truth .why he let her go. coz he truly loves her and wants her to choose him out of her free will😉

Thanks for pm n waiting for next part. no probs hun.. will update it soon.



Originally posted by: .Harini.

Nice to see you back Lazy thank you dear😳

Awesome and Interesting Start of the story thank you😃



Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

supentabulous Start Lazy Dii.. thank you😃
the Tri bro & their bhabhi's convo is treat to read.. !! glad u like them hun😛😛
om always has a stand of his own.. like Rudy says, he is sach ka boyfriend😆
rk The Manipulative master..
and Rudi's smart mouth..
loved the compositions ;) thank you so much dear.. glad u liked the brothers😛😛




Originally posted by: Tinku2015

👏wow beautiful...waiting for the next...rks love is just tooo adorable n heavenly


thank you so much dear.. so glad u liked RK's love for Madhu😛😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mahimesha

awesome update 😃 thank you hun😃

this rk is wicked but i love him😃... who want any redemption 😉 awww thank you hun, that you don't want a redemption🤗
he is good what he is...😉 loved the family bonding 😃 yup, they family is very close😛
madhu surely loves him😃 yes, she does😛
waiting for next part 😃
plzzz update soon ... please don't disappear now 😃
thanks for pm😳
will update it soon.. no worries hun😃



Originally posted by: bhumi1492

Owesum start with a long update and amazing concept.


thank you so much dear😛

Originally posted by: dharsii

Superb Update.
Loved it..
thank you hun😛
Rk is too possessive towards madhu..
Except her ,all the one know about RK's interest ..
yup, she was too blind to realize that he loves her or she loves him😆
What a plan RK!! and married her...
But he feel guilty.. That'swhy he doesn't allowed her to propose..
He wants her proposal ,after known about truth..
He knows,she will leave..Feel bad for him..
yes, he doesn;t like cheating her... he wants her to love him and accept him
Om..is straight forward..
Rudra is naughty one..
Waiting. ...
update soon.. will update it soon😛




thank you😛

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou


awesome start. thank you hun😛 thanks for the story. had been waiting for long for one lik this.awww thanks hun for waiting to read the story🤗 i hate ranveer . why? he tried coming btwn rishbala. tried bcoz rk dint let him n spoiled his plans.hahahaha Ranveer isn't that bad hun😉😆 all ur rks are obsessed lovers. most of them. and this one too. hehehehe is that a bad thing or good?😳😳i really wish u update the whole story now itself. u see i cant take suspense. my heart will blast off. LMAO madhu left the house. i really liked rudy n omy. they're so cute glad u liked them hun😳 . pls update soon. if possible then within 2 days. plsss. thanks a ton for the pm. awww so sorry for the long wait hun.. will update it today😛

pls update this one before any of ur other stories will do😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

thank you hun😛

Originally posted by: Clara20

Awesome start dear...

Waiting to see nw hw madhu wl forgive rk or go back to him..


thank you dear... Madhu will have to accept him as he is😉

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Lazy loved your surprise dear. aww thank you hun😛

Brilliant start, loved it to the core.
Interesting concept. so glad u liked it hun.. thank you so much dear😛
Kundra's doing illegal business and they are the underworld dons and Malik their trusted man. Madhu is his daughter.
OMG RK loves Madhu crazily and he kidnapped Ranveer to marry Madhu. yup... he has been in love with ehr for decades
But he did not want Madhu to be in dark so through OM let Madhu know the truth. he didn't want to cheat her😳
Madhu is leaving the house and he knows that she will one day come back to him. yup and she will😉
The trio are very close to each other. even madhu😛
Loved OM and Madhu's convo through message. glad u liked that... Madhu calls him when she wants to have a heart to heart
Continue soon.
Shall be waiting for the next update. will update it today😛



Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

Wonderful start lazy...I really liked these brothes

Plz update soon...waiting


thank you so much dear.. so glad u liked the brothers... will update it today😛

Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice start lazy dii.. thank you so much dear😛

Always love to Really wicked rk.. hehehe me too😳😳😳
He loved madhu... Madhu thought She loved ranveer but she didn't realized her love for rk.. yup, she was a blind idiot😆
Waiting for next part..
Update soon.. will update it today😛

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