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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010


As always awesome update Aani, loved it.
THANKS DEAE :)

Feeling bad for Madhu she has to tolerate Radha and RK but why is RK like this.
HE IS COMPLICATE.. HE WILL TAKE TIME TO SHOW HIMSELF

Wish Madhu gathers some courage and leave their house and stays in a hostel away from them.
ITS NEED LIVELIHOOD & MONEY WHICH SHE DONT HAVE AT PRESENT SITUATION

Continue soon, waiting for the next update.

Thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001


Wow Fantastic and so Awesome Chapter

Thanks for reading :)
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Thanks for reading :)
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Originally posted by: taahir004


Amazing Chapter
THANKS ;)

RK doing these stuff with Madhu
he surely has some hidden plan but I do think he is very attracted to her though
he does not show it
YES.. U GOT IT RIGHT..
AND HE NEED TO NAME HIS ATTRACTION TOO..

but at the same time I also want Madhu to be strong in front of RK..
YES..SHE WILL .. WITH TIME.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: V-love

it's too good waiting for its next part eagerly

thanks for reading dear :)
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Originally posted by: cutical

poor madhu is hurted by tadhu rude words other sides rk inrimate behavoiur every one using her like a doll gur i hate both rk n radhu poor wats this rk mystery wy he is behind her only mohan n ranbir us gud nice update soon thnks for the pm

thanks dear..
yep.. rk has reasons.. not one.. but many..
his own reason which will be revealed later..
and radha, she will be like this..
thanks for reading !!
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Sinful Nights
Part-4



A Day With Him

Her fingers clutched the sheets of papers, as her heart beat run faster. What if he do something with her in front of all people. Her image will be tarnished. That day whatever happened, it happened in the confined space of four walls, but here, its opens & He Is Psycho !!
As to answer her silent queries, he grasp her left wrist firmly & dragged her out of the class, his jaws set tight, his eyes focus ahead, while a flabbergasted Madhu run behind him, matching her steps with his, her hand clutching her handbag & her assignment file. She don't know where he is taking her, and why ??
Now what has she done ? She can hear the faint muttering of people around who witness them together, after all its not everyday that Rishabh Kundra Drag a girl away from the class with himself !!

She tagged behind him like a helpless rope as he fetch her with himself taking long strides. Madhu somehow succeed to clutch her handbag & assignment file tightly so that it wont slip off. They can feel the pairs of inquisitive eyes on them as they cross the corridor. On one hand there is Rk who bother a least about what people are thinking. On the other hand hand there is Madhu who has never been centre of unwanted attention like this, for all bad & gossiping reasons of course. She thought its only in mansion that she had to bear him but he started his whims in collage too, the only place where she could be at peace.
"I have important class." She spoke feebly as he fetch her to the new building opposite of the building where Madhu's classes are going to start, admist all crowd. The collage has 3 beautifully architect buildings, one for Junior students, another for Graduation-Pursuing students of all streams & the last one for Master degree-Pursuing students. The second building is where Madhu's classes are held while the third Building is where Rk's classes are held, as he is pursuing his master degree while madhu her graduation. He didn't paid any attention to her, instead he fish out his phone with other free hand checking for important message.
"My class will be start anytime soon" she twist her wrist in his firm hold as he climbs upstairs. Madhu realise that its the premises of Master degree students, and she is away from her Premises. Why he brought her here ? Her classes, she has important assignment to submit. She cant question him too, he wont answer her instead he would be more irked.
Rk ascends up the stairs marching towards his destination with madhu lurking behind him trying to match his steps with haste steps, as he has her wrist fix in his hold.
"Oww.." Rk halts hearing the soft yelp, turning around he spot madhu kneeling on the staircase, her file & handbag lying scattered beside her. She couldn't match his step on stairs, as a result trip over and fell down, gaining chuckling & giggling from the viewers around. Rk looks down at her with disapproving looks as he bend down picking up her handbag & file, he thrust it in her hand and pull her up sharply holding her arms. With a low whimper madhu stands up, though not much hurt. Turning around he resumes walking, but this time with slow steps. Madhu experience the new eyes on her & new murmurs too, here everyone is her senior, but damn, her classes !! It must have started.
Rk took the right turn finally reaching where he wants too. Madhu stops in the door steps observing her surrounding, as Rk Left her wrist & strolled inside. It a huge rectangular room, much like an activity room. The walls are painted with different shades with funky pictures, poster. There are musical instrument & speaker in the middle of the hall, there are few props too, and a platform with 5-6 flat shiny marbled floored stair for audiences to sit & view.
"Woohoo.." She lift her eyes up to the source of hooting to find few guys, a gang of 6-7 guys staring, murmuring & grinning at her, standing with different instrument in their hand. Madhu clutch her handbag close to her chest, in anxiety, of being in altogether different place. Whats this room is for ? Who are they ? And why Rk brought her here, she cant get it !
"Come in" she hear the familiar voice & she looks ahead to Spot Rk walking forward with a guitar in his hand. He stops near another guy, and pass the guitar to him.
"Thanks dude" the guys said, checking the strings of guitar then landing his eyes on madhu. Madhu can see, he is also similar to Rk in his dressing style. His height is also same as Rk, though Rk is more well built, But What caught her attention is that The guy's attitude is likely to be similar as Rk's, just his Eyes are blue colour while Rk's is pooled black.
"I wont repeat myself again" Rk broke her daze, speaking to her, as the guy next to him stares at her. Feeling highly conscious of her surrounding she step in, walking with baby steps to the Point where Rk & this strange guy is waiting for her. Her eyes downcast, sensing that there is no other girl in the room except her, the room is full of guys. Rk's eyes follows her steps, as she stands in front of him, clutching her bag to her chest, her soft curls flowing freely, her baby pink skirt reaching her thighs, team up with high heels.
Madhu stands in front of them, just like a goat who has been taken to slaughter. Madhu feels the eyes of this strange guy on her, then he turns to Rk grinning ear to ear, gaining a cold look from Rk.
"Go & sit there" Rk spoke to madhu pointing at the stairs like platform made for viewers. Madhu's eyes follow the place where he is gesturing, but her feet didn't move.
"My class" madhu urge him, her voice stuck at her throat. She really feel awkward being alone with these guys & Rk, whose real face she has seen earlier too. Her mind is screaming at her to turn & run, but her heart didn't had the courage to turn & run, she has already tried that many a times & face the consequences too.
"No class for today" Rk discard her request without a second thought.
"There is an important assignment to submit today, plz let me go" she pleaded him to let her go, the marks of this assignment will be included in internal, and after getting back on 3 subjects in her earlier collage she get to know the importance of every marks, but seems like her pleas appear as some funny things to them, as the blue eyed guy standing next to Rk chuckled. Rk caste a look at the guy who just chuckled & then he step close to madhu. Madhu step back instantly, scared of Rk's approaching steps, her eyes glancing around the room to find every soul's attention on her & Rk, on the interesting live scene casting in front of them. She knows Rk wont think even for a second before throwing any of his act towards her.
"When i say No.. it means only NO !" Rk states arrogantly staring at her deep soulful eyes, ceasing all her thoughts to argue back. She silently gaze him, he always dictate her, his words always powerful & strong. For his errant whims she has to sacrifice her marks !! And is there anything she can do ? No, the moment she step out of here defying him, he would turn her lil world upside down. He has did that earlier too. Where is she stuck & with whom !!
Sometimes, u find urself standing at one way road from where there is no turn back. Her beautiful happy life with her mother has been snatched away from her & now she is standing facing the harsh reality & the ruthless people available in the world.
Rk watch her dropping her head silently, sadness spread around her beautiful couture as she took slow steps towards the platform where he asked her to sit.
"Rk, Arhaan, see this" as madhu was strolling to the seating platform she heard a guy calling Rk. She turn around to find both Rk & the strange guy next to Rk walking towards the groups of boys, now she get the other guy's name is Arhaan, and he is same as Rk, she concludes. No, all are same as Rk, she counter her thought looking the group of boys, including Rk & Arhaan discussing something. Keeping her file on the floor, she sits on the lowest flat curved shape stair. She keeps her handbag on her lap, her legs propped & inclined touching the floor. Her eyes absorbs the beauty of the hall, studying the moves of the group of guys present at few distance from her, practising with musical instruments. Her eyes capture Rk along with Arhaan, both sitting on stool in the corner with guitar in hand, talking coolly among themselves. And that surprised her, cause She has never seen Rk talking with anyone, and with her either he spoke coldly or commands her generally.

"Madhubala, it is ?" Arhaan raise his brows at Rk, as he gesture at madhu who is sitting alone, several feet away from them. Rk follow Arhaan's gaze, madhu is sitting with her handbag on her lap, her fair hands resting on the bag, her eyes constantly viewing the watch on her wrist & the main door of the room. Hmm.. No wonder she desperately wants to get away from here.
"Mhmm.." Rk hummed, focusing his attention back on Arhaan.
"From where did u get her ?" Arhaan asked.
"Dad drop her in mansion" Rk smirks as Arhaan laughed. Rk & Arhaan are best of friends, not childhood friend though, they have some similar things between them, which made their bond stronger. Arhaan is the sole person who Rk confides in everything, or it is not wrong to say that they share each other secrets !!

Madhu views her watch again, then the door, and then at Rk again, but this time Rk & Arhaan caught her looking at them. She observe Arhaan whispering something in Rk's ears, and then a moment later they both smirked looking at her. Madhu quickly tore her gaze away from them, & gaze the shiny marble floor. She feels really odd with the way both the friends stares & smirks at her. Wait, and that reminds her, Rk's Prior behaviour. He just to stare at her, smirks, then came close to her, so close that he kissed her. For a moment Madhu's heart skip a beat, thinking it again, what if Arhaan is too like him and they Are discussing her ? Oh god !!
Suddenly she felt suffocated, with the thought, the stares, the laughter, the whistling, the smirk, everything made her feels dizzy. She folded her knees up, squaring her both arms both it, she kept her head over her arms facing down, to block out every images & thoughts, yet she can hear the soft tune of guitar, drums etc. Its music room, where the seniors practices. She inhaled deeply trying to control are restlessness, trying to calm her nerves which is ready to burst out of anxiety.

After few minutes, when she felt better she raise her head up, to find the group of guys indulged in practice, even Rk & Arhaan too. She can tell that by seeing the serious frown on Rk's forehead. She view her wrist watch again, only 10 minutes is left for the period to get over, only if she could make it upto there & submit her assignment. Building the shattered courage she pick up the file from the floor & stands up taking her hand bag she forces her feet to walk to the direction where Rk is sitting with few papers in hand. She walks upto him with thumping heart, standing few inch away from him while he has his back towards her.
"R..Rk" she gathered her frozen voice to call him, but he didnt seem to hear it. Well because her voice was inaudible to human ears, but Arhaan spot her, and he thump on Rk's shoulder gesturing at Madhu. Rk turns at her, and so all the guys went silent, watching her, and their silence drained the courage she gathered.
"The asi..assignment is really important." She starts very softly "Only 10 minutes is left for the period to get over. Can i go to submit it please.." She pleaded.
Rk stares at her hardly before giving his verdict in negative.
"NO" his voice echoed in the room.
"Please.. I'll fail if i don't.." Madhu starts only to be interrupt by Rk again.
"If u don't go back & sit there quietly I'll make sure that u don't pass in any of ur papers." He states coldly as madhu looks at him wide eyes.
"Get back.." He said again, seeing her opening & closing her mouth like a fish, trying to saying something but not being successful. Seeing his past record its clear that he don't gives empty threats, dejectedly madhu walk back to the same place occupying it, as Rk focus his attention back on the lyrics of the songs.
"Beats" he spoke as they took their position near their instruments. Madhu watch on as they starts playing a rock tune, synchronizing the tune of drums, guitar, piano.. Etc.., she don't even know the name of all instruments.

"Meri rooh ka Parinda pharphadaye..
Lekin sukoon ka zazira mil naa paaye..
Me ki kara, me ki kara.."


She look amazed as Rk starts singing, while playing the guitar. She never knew the guy with wayward arrogant aloof attitude knows to sing too.

"Ek bar toh tajaali toh dikha de,
Jhooti nahi magar tasaali toh dila de,
Me ki kara, me ki kara.."


They were playing a beautiful tune, and Rk's voice added stars to it. Seems like he is the lead singer of the band, and they all are truly incredible.

"Rajan de yaar bhulleya, sunle pukar bulleya..
Tu hi toh yaar bulleya..
Murshad mera, haafiz mera.."


[Bulleya From Ae Dil Hai Mushkil]

By the time they finish, the whole crowd of seniors directs their feet to the music room, as the room got filled with the people around, admiring their Collage's best Rock Band's performance more Precisely Practicing. Rk & his group is Quiet popular in institute, though madhu never knew of it. From the murmuring she can hear, its clear that Rk is one talented singer & the admiring object of many girls around.
"Have u got the tickets of his concert ?" Madhu overhear a girl asking to another girl.
"Ofcourse, how can i miss his show. He is growing youth sensational Rockstar, My Rk. Am sure this year too he will win collage feast competition like last year !" The other girl replied drooling on Rk, and his group.
"I hope one day he would get the much deserve recognition. He & his team deserves it." The first girl replied. Madhu looks back at Rk & his team, as they ended the show, asking the people to move out.
"Guys, please move out, its practice hours going" Arhaan spoke loudly trying to clear the room, while Rk cast a glance in madhu's direction to make sure she didn't leave & as excepted he found her glueing to her place.
"We got permission to practice here for next one hour, either u guyz can leave or u can stay. Ur choice" Rk turns around tearing his eyes off from madhu hearing the sing song voice. He looks at the girl clad in short skimpy dress with permission paper in hand, Dipali Bhatia.
"We'll stay" he said flatly walking away from her with his guitar. Soon the hall filled with few more people with cds & props. From the chattering going on, madhu got to know that they are here to practice dance. They are going to have Inter collage competition so the practice are going on for the same. The practice is going on a group & couple dances. Madhu was looking at Dipali who is showing some sizzling moves with her partner, when she felt someone's presence beside her. She turn her head sideways to find Rk sitting beside her with Arhaan next to rk, followed by his group. Arhaan has his arms wrapped around Rk's shoulder with his eyes on Dipali while Rk was staring at Madhu. Madhu looks around uncomfortably & shift away a lil from Rk.
"Superb" Arhaan clapped & Dipali grinned at him & Rk.
"Guyz lets have free moves. Join up everyone" she shouted as everyone cheered joining in the room, dancing freely.
"Mind some show" Arhaan mischievously whispered in Rk's ears eyeing madhu, as madhu look between rk & arhaan alarmed, her finger nail digging onto her hand bag's fabric in nervousness. Rk turns to Arhaan with smug smirk, and looks back at madhu, with full fledged smirk.
"Come" he extend his hand to madhu.
"No.. Plz.." Madhu shook her head in negative, her mind clouded with the vision from his room when he made her dance with him.
"Say yes" Rk's jaws clenches tight, as he could feel eyes on him.
"Rk.. Please" she beg her voice quivered, as everyone's eyes landes on her & Rk.
"Its yes then" rk declared, fetching out her handbag he throws it at the corner, and pull madhu up by her arms.
"Continue.." He gesture everyone else to continue but now people are more interested in the show Rk is putting putting before them with this unknown girl. Regardlessly the music got on, and Rk pulls madhu to him dashing her body against his, An electrifying feeling coursed through their bodies with the close contacts.

"Toh Aao naa Chale Phir se,
Sathao naa mujhe phir se"
(Come, lets start again, Plz dont hurt me again)


Her eyes were dropped on floor while his eyes are on her face, as he slide his arms around her curvy waist. His other hand held her hand, firming his hold on her waist he pulls her gently closing whatever lil space available between them, & her soft curvy chest pressed against his. Madhu looks up at him as he starts moving their bodies to the music, locking his eyes with her, he gently push her away, twirl her & he pulls her back in his arms.

"Mein Tannaha hu bina tere,
Bulao naa mujhe phir se"
(Am so lonely without you, Call me once again)


The viewers continue to enjoy the live show going on before them. The collage stud is romancing this junior girl, its indeed a show for them. Rk is a name in their dictionary for less good & many bad reasons, so they are interested in this pretty maiden who attracted his attention.

"Khabhi haq toh jatao naa,
Hu kya mein yeh batao naa"
(Show ur rights on me, Tell me what am i to u)


The music went on & on, so is his fluent steps with hers and after few minutes he started getting cozy with her publicly, as Madhu feels his breath on her neck as he turns her around, her back pressing against his chest, his fingers skimming through her stomach over the fabric, while his other hands running down her torso to her hips, his lips pressed on against her neck, leaving lingering kisses, his hot breath caressing her skin, madhu shivered with the provocative things he is doing with her.

"Tumhari aankho se duniya,
Mujhe aa kar dikho naa"
(Show me this world from ur eyes, ur point of view)


[Lost without You From Half Girlfriend]

He trace his fingers down her arms, and twirls her around, facing her, he hold her by her waist as his both hands lingered on her waist, he looks at her, her eyes mirroring her vulnerability, her lips shivering, her face flushed, her breath ragged. Madhu run a quick glance around the hall, by now everyone has stopped dancing, frozen on their spots they glued their eyes at them only, at Rk & Madhu only. Madhu gulp scandalise, her breaths gone heavy, her heart beating like its gonna fail any time soon, this is very humiliating for her. She can see people gasping, some murmuring, and many snorting at her. Raising one of his hand he sweep the flowing hairs from her neck, burying his head on the crook of her neck he started nuzzling her, while his fingers plunge inside her top, crawling up her torso, getting in direct contact with her skin, moving in upward direction, madhu closed her eyes frozen at strange sensation coursed through her body at his touch.
"Dude.. Get a room or should we vacant the room ?" Arhaan playfully interrupt the movements of Rk's fingers on madhu's body, as Rk withdraw himself from madhu, stepping back. Madhu stands there like a stone on her spot.
"Quite a show" Arhaan added winking at Rk, which Rk shrugged with a smirk. Rk looks at Madhu who looks ready to faint within a second.
"Break" he announced walking away from the crowd to a secluded corner, and soon the crowd disperse with the hottest gossip from the room. Arhaan followed Rk, while Madhu slumped down where she was sitting before. He just get in her cloths in front of all, she felt awkward, and at the same time different too, her body react differently to him & his touches, while her mind react different. She watch Rk talking to Arhaan in the corner of the room, her eyes shone with unspoken anger along with unshed tears. She don't know what kind of sadistic pleasure he gets by humiliating her. She stayed there alone, crying burying her face with her head down, resting her head on her bag kept on her folded legs, her arms pillowing her head.

She didn't realise how much time passed, whether its seconds, or minutes or hours, her tears dried up too. She stayed there still exhausted with all day's events.
"Here" she looks up as a voice ring in her ears, the room is isolates except her, and Arhaan. Yes, he stood in front of her with a plate of food in hand.
"Eat it" he spoke passing the plate to her. She looks at the food on the plate, realising that she is indeed hungry, she hasn't eaten anything since morning, she only pick on her breakfast, she notice the time, at showed 3 O' clock in afternoon.
"And don't worry about assignment. U'll get the full marks even without submitting it" He spoke to her casually sitting beside her. Madhu looks at him, and she shift away from him a lil, leaving somber space between them. Assignment, she totally forgot about it, she had worked hard for it.
"But file.." She hurried to take out the file from her bag keeping the food plate down.
"No need, it has been taken care of" he discard it.
"How ?" She looks at him perplexed.
"Do u really think Rk gave u an empty threat to fail u in subjects" Arhaan gave her a look which clearly says that she is dumb.
"But, how can he.." She trails off, thinking.
"The less u know, the more is better" Arhaan spoke to her curtly & walks off leaving her to feed herself. Madhu looks at his retreating form. Strangely She found it easy to talk with Arhaan, as he is lil less arrogant than Rk, and less scary than Rk. Shoving her all thoughts to the farthest corner, she pick up the food plate, digging on it, filling up her stomach.

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Its been long time past evening, madhu could see the darkness surrounding earth's atmosphere through window, and she is still sitting in the music room. She divert her eyes from window to where Rk, Arhaan & few other guyz were sitting with bear can in hand, sipping on it. She could see, Rk & Arhaan stealing glances at her & talking something among themselves, laughing, and looking at each other as if having some silent conversation through their eyes. What he did to her today in front of all, she don't want to talk to him a word even. She tears her eyes away from them, and wrap her arms around her knees. Today has been a long day for her, from morning to evening. Their classes get over by afternoon & off time is afternoon, but cause of Rk she is still stuck here in collage, she can very well imagine the scene which is going to take place when she'll step in mansion this late, Radha Aunty will again blast her on for staying away from mansion, till this late.

"Rk.." Arhaan calls for Rk's attention.
"Hmm.." Rk hummed sipping on his bear can as Arhaan points at madhu, and Rk looks at Her Sitting lost in some deep thoughts, her arms wrapped around her knees & her chin resting on her knee, and she looks beautifully lost.
"Its late hour, u should let her go, now. I heard the taxi drivers are calling for strikes & lock out." Arhaan States the fact. Its been an hour that collage has been closed officially. Rk think for sometime, and then was going to stand up when Arhaan pull him.
"What ?" Rk frowned. In reply Arhaan show him a message on his mobile.
"We need to go" Arhaan added, as Rk stares him back.
"Last time" Arhaan promised, Rk nodded, and stands up, strolling towards madhu.

"Get up !" Madhu heard the arrogant tone, as she found Rk hovering over her. He bend, picking up her bag he thrust it in her hand & pull her up by her arms. She flinch as his fingers sink on her soft skin, leaving mark. Leaving her arm he curled his fingers gently around her small wrist & dragged her out, as madhu run to match his speed. After so long hours she can finally breath the free air coming out of the collage gates, she thought about where he is taking her again, when he calls for a cab, standing in the road outside the collage. One cab went past them but didn't stopped, thus Rk tried to get another cab, leaving her hand from his hold. Meanwhile madhu scrunch her small nose with the smell of beer, coming from the beer can in his hand, and shift away from him & the disgusting smell, though rk notice her actions from corner of his eyes, and her every restraining action triggers something in him. He turns to her, taking one close step towards her, reaching her, he put the open end of beer can on her soft lips. Madhu who didn't see it coming, cringe back with a shriek, rubbing her lips with the back of her hands vigorously, profusely frowning at Rk, while he looks at her with lazy smirk on his lips. He is certified mad !! Madhu thought.
Seeing a cab coming from opposite direction Rk waved his hand stopping it.
"Ji Bhai sahab" the cab driver stops the cab in front of them. In reply Rk looks at him, walking around he noted the no. Of cab, while both madhu & cab driver looks at him perplexed. After his lil inspection Rk pulled madhu by her wrist, opening the door of the cab he pushed her in.
"32/B, hail colony, Kundra Mansion" Rk give the address to the driver as the driver nods.
"In 30 minutes, she should be standing inside the mansion." Rk pass on another order.
"30 minutes ? Bhai sahab, this is cab not jet, to reach the location in 30 minutes at this rush hour" the driver spoke miffed at Rk's attitude as Rk spare him a cold look.
"45 minutes, thats it. After that i wont watch out whether its ur cab or jet, before shattering it into pieces."
Madhu gasp at his open threat, so is the cab driver. He looks back at madhu then at Rk again.
"I deny giving her lift. U both better arrange for other cab" the cab driver denied. Sure enough the man (Rk) is mad, according to him.
"Shh.." The driver's eye rounded as Rk shushed him by drawing a knife on the base of his throat, while madhu looks at his dumbfounded.
"45 minutes ?" Rk asked again.
"Y..yes" driver assented. Rk darted a last glance at him, putting 500 rupees note in the driver's pocket, then he walk back opening the back door Rk seat inside cab fetching Madhu's handbag rummaging through it he fish out her cell phone, punching his number on her mobile, saving it.
"I must get a Call from u, when u reach home, else be rest assured to never see a mobile phone in ur lifetime, get it " Rk order her coldly, and she nodded her head at his tone. Leaving the phone with her he step out of the cab, as the poor driver drove away to do his work in 45 minutes.
As the cab speed up, madhu looks back at Rk who walk inside the collage gate throwing the empty beer can in dustbin, she realised he is more than what he is exposed !!

"Madam ji, that mad man is ur boyfriend !" Madhu looks stunned at the driver who is busy driving.
"Boyfriend ?"


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Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago
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Hmmm... 🤔
I,m not gonna forgive u for this.!😒
I mean how could u play with feelings ??!
U have Absolutely No Right to give us THIS kind of update and then not to give next update for a week !!
I CAN'T BELIEVE that when I complimented u that u are giving tough time to lazy 's stories , U actually took it to your ego and thought to Become Better than your Senior ! YOU SHAMELESS GIRL ! How dare u???! 😡😡😡
You have no right to replace lazy in My Heart.!! How I always used to think that lazy is gonna be my most favourite writer 4ever as none can be more perfect than her in writing stories😭😭 but U😡😡😡 !! U BLOODY VAMP!! U dare to become more perfect than her???!!! HOW COULD YOU??? 😡😡
I was just reading this update when suddenly a thought occurred me that this Rk is quite similar to the character of Rk in Bas Haq Hai Ik Mera Written by Lazy but then..!! 😲THEN I REALISED THAT I LIKE THIS RK MORE!!!!! 😲It's all your fault Aaniya!!😡😡 1st you write this kind of update then on top of it you have the nerve to make us wait for the next update!!?? 😡😡😡U can never understand our feelings *that "tadap" we feel to get a next update from you ! *😭 specially to me it's a Drug ! You and your stories are drug to me !!! 😳😛All your fault ... !😡 Else u wouldn't believe I had been just a silent reader in this forum from past 7 years ! 😳Even lazy who was my Favorite ..I never felt the need to comment on her stories maybe because I knew that there are many people who praise her enough for her stories .And because she might be aware that she is exceptionally a good writer ! 😆But you !! 😡You dumb head!😡 For you I have to write these lambe lambe comments so that u get aware of your Built in talent ! ⭐️And also *cheekily saying*😳 because I had lost 2 best writers of this forum lazy and sudha 😭now can't Offord to lose the one who has dared to replace lazy as in no 1 best writer for me ! 😡
Now finally coming to update 😃😛
I know some people are asking u to show madhu strong and she should stand up for herself in front of Rk and blah blah so on ! . But if you ask me then honestly I would say let madhu remain the naive innocent one . 😊😛There are many stories u have written in which u had shown Madhu the strong one, who fights back 🤔. But don't do it this time ! You are just going in the right direction
So keep going.👍🏼 This story is a hatke from your other ones 😉& to be honest I just love the lovestories between the Bad Boy and sweet innocent Naive girls .☺️So that bad boy remains bad for the entire world😈 where else that sweet innocent Naive girl remains in the save shelter of his embrace ... *_* haayee. .
I also laughed out in this update when there was line madhu was self thinking that what Rk did to her today in front of all she is not gonna talk to him lol..🤣 as if he comes to chitchat with her every hour a day ..hahahahahahahahahaha. .😆
Anyways .. I don't think I need to describe more how I felt this update was like.👏
Edited by -LoveAnnie- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks dear :)

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