RISHBALA SS- My Magic Man (Last part pg 13 dt 18/4) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: pirl18

Genie Rk n slave Rk...is gonna soo much fun...
New n owsm concept

Thank you so much..pls keep reading..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Wow.. Ash.. Guess what..
I was planning to write a story on rishbala..
Where Rk is Jinn, of madhu..
And the new movie phillarui too influence me with lot of idea..

But, have to say, u pull it off very well..
And rk as hootyy jinn.. Wow..
Superb.. The convo..
I loved it..
Congo..
And thanks for pm :)

Thanks aan..oh..i loss a chance to read an awesome story from you ...but my friend i know u damn expert in finding new..new ideas..😉
Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Hi friends here is the first part..this part is dedicated to priya akka..pls ignore grammatical errors 😊



My Magic Man




Part-1




"u will do everything that i said.."madhu raised her eyebrows..
"yeah surely.."rk replied..
"any thing.."she came closer to him...this time he remained silent & gave her a look as she coming closer & closer to him..he took a long breathe & hold it in his lungs..
"i want to.."madhu.
"u..u..wan..want to.."rk.
"fly..."madhu..
"hah..?"rk..
"yeah it was one of my greatest wish..i want to fly.."madhu.
"hoh.."he releases his breathe in relief..
"only this much..i thought.."rk.
"what u thought..?"madhu.
"ah..nothing..u want to fly na..ok then hold my hands.."rk.
"what..?can i touch u..for that u have body..?"rk laughs hearing her question..
"i am a genie not a ghost..v have everything that humans have & more than that.."rk.
"oh.."madhu..rk forwarded his hands & she hold his hand tightly..they rise above..
"rk will any one see us..?"madhu.
"no..v r invisible now..?"rk..they flied through the whole city..



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"today i am very happy..today..today flied..like a bird i flied..thank u rk.."madhu.
"no need of thanks..its my duty.."rk.
"ok i am sleepy now..bye.."madhu.
"hm..if u have any need just caress this ring for three times.."rk tells this & disappeared..madhu went to her bed & slept..




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Morning




"madhu..madhu..open the door.."trish called her.
"hm trish..let me sleep.."madhu.
"open the door madhu.."trish..
"oh this trish.."she get off from the bed & opened the door..
"happy b'day madhu.."trish told with a sweet smile..
"oh today is my b'day na..thanks trish.."she hugged her..
"v have arranged a party for u at evening.."trish.
"really..again thank you.."madhu.
"actually v r very excited.."trish.
"for what..?"madhu.
"today he will come na.."trish.
"ur man..?"trish winked at her.
"what..?but trish.."madhu.
"u told us na he will come in a special day..& today ur b'day a very special day..so i am sure he will na..if there is a person like u told he will surely come..he everyday call u na he is very care about u..so he will surely come.."trish leaves..madhu gulps her saliva..
"what i will do..what i will do..oh..madhu think any idea..
if they come to know about the truth..they will kill me by teasing..think madhu think.."madhu.
"idea rk.."she snapped & caressed the ring..rk appeared & bowed..
"oh rk plz stop bowing like this..i feel something when u do like this.."madhu.
"as ur wish..y u called do u wanna something...?"rk.
"hah..i want a u.."madhu.
"ah..!"rk.
"i meant can u help me..u want to act as my boyfriend before every one..u have all the qualities to become my bf..if u were a human.."madhu.
"if i were a human..?"rk.
"no..nothing..u r not a human na so v can leave it.."madhu..
"but sorry i am very poor in acting..can u ask anything else.."rk..
"no this the only way..u want to do it pls.."madhu.
"but.."rk.
"not pls u want to do it..its my order.."she said in a strong tone..
"ok i will.."rk.
"hm..then be ready for evening party..."madhu.





Evening





Party starts..all all enjoying their own way..
"madhu when he will come.."trish..
"he will come now trish.."madhu..as usual she pretend like getting a phone call..she goes to secluded area & caresses the ring..rk appeared..
"u did'nt changed ur dress..?"madhu.
"no.."rk.
"this a party..change these dress & wear a denim jeans & blue shirt.."madhu..
"that means.."rk.
"ah..wait i will show u.."she took the pics of it from google & showed it to him..
"ok.."he snapped & next second his dress change..madhu's eyes stuck on his handsome face..
"u look so handsome...come.."madhu..he leaves with him..when he crossed the gate everyone's eye fixed on him especially girl's..trishna,ria & dips looks him with swelled eyes..
sikky,mukund & sultan felt jealous of his as their girls drooling him..
"hi guys..meet mr.rishab kundra..my wound be.."madhu shyly told..
"hai.."three girls forwarded their hands at the same time..he looks three hands confused..
"hai..i am mukund.."mukund came between them & shook his hand with him...




After some times..



"Start music.."sultan yelled..the DJ starts playing music..
"come lets dance baby.."sultan invites dips who is looking rk..
"ha sultan.."she stood & gave her hand to him..all starts dancing expect rk & madhu..
"Hey rishab,madhu..come & join us.."ria..they nodded no..
"hey come na plz.."dips..finally madhu accepted & looks rk..he gave her a
-as her wish- look..
madhu came to there by holding his hand..
"hey change the song..play some romantic song for our romantic couple.."sultan..song mein pareshaan plays..rishbala dances according to the music..while dancing madhu's ankle twisted & when she was about to fall rk holds her..they have an eye lock..
"wow.."every one claps for them..





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"Ah Rishab what about your parents.."sikky..rk looks madhu..
"They r in USA.."madhu.
"oh..whats their name..?"sultan.
"oh this sultan.."madhu thought..rk again looks madhu..
"sharukh kundra & deepika kundra.."madhu.
"ah..?"sultan.
"i meant sharad kundra & deepa kundra.."madhu.
"oh.."sultan.
"ok its late night..bye rishab.."madhu..rk tries to leave..
"hey..hey..stop..stop.."mukund..
"what..??"madhu.
"do u have any important work.."mukund.
"no.."rk.
"then stay with us for few days.."mukund.
"no..no..he have urgent work at office.."madhu.
"u stop ur blabber..he told na he us free.."mukund..madhu glares at rk..
"so v r staying together for few days..v can enjoy dude.."mukund.
"ok then u take him with u but only for few days..ok.."madhu.
"hello madhu...v r not going to our apartment v r staying here for few days..v planned everything..how can v separate u two beautiful couple..so v r staying here..& dips b'day is coming na till v r here.."sultan.
"but its after a month..u told me na for few days only.."madhu.
"one month is not such a long period.."sultan..madhu feels dizzy..
"how this genie adjust like a human..he dont know anything about humankind.."she thought..
"hello madhu..r u dreaming.."sikky snapped at her..
"i thik she lost in her thoughts..she is getting her man near na but madhu v always keep an eye on both of u so dont even think about it.."dips smirked..madhu pretend smile..
"but i did'nt took any stuffs.."rk..madhu looks him with hope...
"dont worry dude v will give u necessary things.."sultan breaks her hope..
"ehh..this sultan..i will hit his head with hammer.."madhu thought..





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"ok guys its time to sleep..good night.."mukund told & when they r about to leave to their room madhu calls "rk..i want to talk to u.."
"sorry its late night.."sikky smirked..
"plz its urgent.."madhu pleaded.
"ok..v can allow na..poor girl.."they teased her..she takes rk with her..
"Rk..behave like a human..no magic..do u understand..."madhu..rk nodded & they leaves..




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After sometimes men's room.

"cheers.."sullu,mukku & sikky starts their real party..
"hey dude come & join us.."sikky called rk.
"no..i wont drink.."rk denied..
"pls one for us.."sikky.
"no sikky.."rk.
"hey y u r behaving like this dude..i think this is madhu's teach..she is a mamma girl..dont hear her words..pls only one for.."sultan came near him with a drink glass & sat near him..
"pls have one.."sultan.
"no..alcohol will affect us badly...& may my truth come outside if i drink this..oh god pls save me from this situation.."rk thought..they hears a knock at the door..
"oh no...hide this all..if the girls see this they will kill us.."sikky...they hides all the alcohol bottle..rk took a deep breathe in relief..
"rishab pls open that door.."mukund..
rk opened the door & saw madhu...
"madhu.."rk..everyone looks her..





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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Thanks u for dedicate me aishu.
Nice update..
She wants to fly..For that she went near to RK.
Poor RK,...
RK acts like her boy friend...
Madhu is so nervous..
Waiting for more magics..
Thanks for pm..
update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
beautiful start. ..aishu. .
madhu first wish. .fly. . 😳
oh ..rk act like madhu bf. .
madhu is so lucky. ..she had genie bf. .
all friends stay together. .
and rk stay with boys. .😉
early waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

awesome update aishu. rk has to pretend as human. dont knw wht will hppen. do update soon. thnks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Aishu awesome update, loved it.
Madhu is getting her things done, first she flied like a bird and now she made him his bf.
Poor RK the genie trapped with Madhu. But the story is going to be very interesting with each passing update.
Curious to know if RK will fall for Madhu being with her.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update,
loved it,
to her friends Madhu introduced Rk as her bf,
now Rk is going to stay with them for few days hope he doesn't get into trouble,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Wow superb different story dear.Rk is a genie and madhu is a aladin.Different thought dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
PART-1
Superb update dear.Rk is a handsome and dashing genie.Interesting dear...

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