Masked Wounds part8page22dt27/3

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Hi friends I am starting New story.hope everyone will support me.don't know it's a new concept or not.yet I felt like writing it when the idea striked.

Masked Wounds


Part1

Rk slowly reduced the distance between them.he came close to her.madhu unknowingly moved back and she hit the wall.rk caged her in between his hands.he passionately looked at her eyes.he further reduced the distance.now she can feel him very close to her.rk leaned a little.madhu felt his hot breath on her forehead.rk gently trailed his hands over madhus he moved his hands to her waist and squeezed.he gently caressed her hair .madhu looked at his eyes. He leaned his lips to hers
"no..."madhu pushed him back
"what..."rk
"you are trying to..."madhu
"what are you saying Ms madhubala"rk
"cut it"mehulji shouted
"what are you doing...why are you spoiling it at the last moment."mehulji
"it's not me...ask your favourite heroine."rk
"rk...discipline."mehulji warned him
"ok...whatever"rk went to his seat.the makeup man came with the mirror.he looked at it and set his hair.
"am I looking good...bittuji?"rk
"yes chief you are the most handsome man in this industry now"bittuji
"yes..."he smiled admiring himself

"madhu...concentrate ...look you are not madhu now and he is not rk...please be the character...here Raja and sania is in deep love and they are having thier close moments...ok now let's take it?"mehulji
Madhu nodded.
"ok come on everyone in places... "mehulji clapped
"mine forever scene 20 take5"clap board

They again repeated ...but alas! at last moment madhu pushed him back.
"damnt...whats the problem with you madhubala.can't you see you are wasting everyone's time...you know my seconds worth 1000s. Not like you new comers.I told mehulji that a new face won't work.but he is confident about you."rk
"look rk I am not a new comer...I had been in serial industry from last 5 years...and I had won awards every year."madhu
"oh...yeah...you are a great actress na...when why you come here.go and die in that third class soaps."rk
"mind your language..."madhu
"you are talking with the superstar rk..I could spoil your career in seconds."rk
Madhu glared at him.padminiji came in between them
"madhu... What are you doing? Apologize him."padmini
"no...I won't"madhu
"attitude han..."rk
"sorry rk sir..she will say sorry.madhu..."padmini glared at her
"sorry..."madhu in a feeble voice
"what I didby hear"rk
"I am sorry Mr rishab kundra"madhu said loudly.
"that's it"to smirked.
Madhu looked at him with tear filled eyes.to went back and said"pack up"
Mehulji patted on his head and looked at the producers accusing face.

Rk mansion

"hey rishu why are you so early?"radhaji
"it's all because of your crying beauty..." rk
"what happened to madhu?"radhaji
" ha! My mother is worried about her heroine than her own son"rk
"it's not that...I just asked"radhaji
"ma...she doesn't know how to act...mehulji is really mad.I told him for thousand times not to cast her...but...what to do its my bad luck to bear such craps"rk
"rishu...beta She is a talented actress.you know she doesn't need glycerin to cry in sad scenes.she is that much involved in the character."radhaji
"yeah she doesn't need glycerin to make the producer cry"rk
"hey rishu... What is it beta?why are u arguing with your mother?"hukkuji
"nothing papaji...about that madhubala"rk
"han...it's your first scene with her.how was it"hukku
"no we didn't shoot"rk
"y rishu?"hukku
"she...she is just dramabaaz.she looked at me like I were molesting her"rk
Both radhaji and hukkuji laughed out.
"what?"rk asked angrily.
"why mehulji chose a romantic scene first...the girl should get comfortable with you na"
"comfortable with me...for what? Am I marrying her and is it suhaagraat?"rk
"mind your language rishu"radhaji
"sorry ma...I am just fed up with that girl .well whe're is sikky and ria"rk
"they are watching the serial meiej."radhaji
"what that serial ended "rk
"yes but it is retelecasting in another channel.so they are watching it."radhaji
"ufff God everyone in this home is mad"rk
"rishu tomorrow you are going for shooting?"radhaji
"yeah second shift"rk
"madhu will be there?"radhaji
"I don't know...it's my closeup scenes and I don't care about hers.I asked mehulji to shoot our solo scenes. I want a break from her damn face..."rk
"rishu May I come with you tomorrow.."radhahi
Rk looked at her angrily
"I know beta you don't like us to come to set.so I asked u...I want to talk with madhu...please beta"radhaji
"ok"rk
"I am also coming"ria
"babhiji r u mad?"rk
"please I want to see her...once please"ria
"superstar is at thier own house yer they want yo meet that girl...amazing family"rk went to his room
"ria I want madhu my daughter in law."radhaji
"yes mom...I like her very much"ria
"look...if rishu hear it...he will put this house upside down...that much he hates that girl."hukkuji



Plecase like and comment.tell me if it's repeated concept
Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago

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maangeet.gmmg thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow great start waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing part..!!
Loved it..
Thanks for pm rach di :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the New Story.
Great start, RK a superstar and Madhu an actress on television, both working together for the first time and RK hates her. Interesting to know how they will fall for each other.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for the new story,
Superb part,
Rk is a superstar n Madhu an television actress now she got movie offer,
Rk hates her but his family likes Madhu,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story. .di. .
have hand 4 story going on. .how you managed. .
I am wonder. .
and also how you gets title starting from 'M'..[;)]
interesting concept. .
rk is superstar. .
rishbala doing movie together. .
and rk hates her. .
thanks for pm. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super Ka..
Today two new stories U have started..
Congrates for that..
Rk is so rude to madhu..
He hates her..
Radha wants madhu as daughter in law..
waiting for that..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb start di
Loved it
So madhu is from telly land nd rk as usual bollywood superstar
Wondering what is stoping madhu from doing that scene
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Wow ,two new stories n quite different concept.Rk hates madhu ,why.eager to know.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res..
unres..

superb story chechi..
madhu is from serial & rk is a big superstar..
how rude he is with madhu..
waiting to see how this hate story turn to love...
update soon..
Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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