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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update,
hope some good happens in the theme park
continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
She sees RK standing in the queue along with Bal baby in his hand with smile."Now I must make them talk once so may be they understand each other "thinks her in mind when someone hold her shoulder making her jump on panic."Hey what happened to you Dipali why are you so much tensed on seeing me "asks Madhu holding her shoulder.Dips tries to compose herself when she hears someone calling her from opposite direction."Ohhh god Come on Bal.See Dipali aunty is here with her friends see"says RK walking towards her.Madhu sees them with shock and stares at Dipali with anger thinking It is her plan.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Madhu walks away angrily leaving dips ."No Madhu,I swear I don't know anything ,its just coincidence just coincidence,I promise "shouts Dipali on seeing Madhu walking away angrily without talking to her,she turns to find RK smiles on seeing her suffering .she rushes in to follow Madhu with Aryan ."Why Dips Aunty is running like rabbit "asks Bal innocently and makes RK burst into laughter once more.Shikky comes with popcorn packet Nd sees the daughter father duo laughing with confusion.He tries to go to them when he hears someone shouting "Madhu.....Madhubala,Don't run Wait for us to come .....wait ".He sees Dipali running behind Madhu.Aryan shouts "Auntyyyyyy".Madhu stops once on hearing his voice ."Thank God you stopped ,I have lost many calories due to running .You see its coincidence ,God promise Let's go Right way and they don't know this place .It is a very big theme park dear,You won't meet Bal baby or RK anymore .OK let's go to cafertina." Says Dips

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Posted: 5 years ago

I am reading this for 2 years. Please write daily or one day gapp and complete it soon. I so want a happy ending

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Posted: 5 years ago

Madhu walks away without replying to her holding Aryan's hand .Dips tries to compose herself when she receives a message from RK .she reads the message hiding it from all."Where are you ?tell the place now".she types the place and rushes in to join Madhu who have ordered chats items and sitting chatting with Aryan about his schools and friends .Dips sits in the opposite chair .she takes the menu card to order when she finds someone touching her .she turns to find Bal baby standing there with beaming smile in her face."Now you are out.we found you .Now You must find us ,(she turns to RK who us standing bear the cafe entrance )RK come here ,I found Madhu Aunty and Dips aunty .let's have snacks together ".Madhu almost chokes the food on hearing her words.Aryan sees the girl with confusion and asks"Auntyyyy,how this girl is looking like you .her eyes and face is same .you once tell RK so that we can check your voice also ".Dips stops him from further eating by feeding him jelebis.

Madhu glares at the approaching RK without expressing any words and tries to eat when Bal Baby sits next to her taking the big chair from the next table

"what are you eating ?she asks trying to peek inside the food.Shikky and RK sits in the corner table hiding Themselves from her view . shikky smiling at RK."Bring us two plates Samosa and one plate kachori "orders RK .Aryan sees the handsome uncle staring at his Madhu and tries to hide the view by holding his kerchief.Shikky laughs on seeing the activity."Little Devil,I thought Sultan is the competitor for you but now see its our Aryan "murmurs Shikky stuffing the samosa in his mouth.

Madhu sees Dips trying to eat without talking."Dipali,don't try to act very goody goody ,you come home and let's talk OK ".Bal baby tries to talk with Dips and Madhu but both of them remains quiet without answering her.she thinks for a while and turns towards Aryan."What is your age,why are looking at me and my dad as alien?"asks her on seeing him playing with food.Aryan sees her with stunned expression.

Dipali tries to talk when her phone rings .she goes to talk with her store manager about arranging the goods leaving Aryan,Madhu and Bal baby in the table.RK sees Bal baby sitting without eating .He says to Shikky"See she is not even asking bal to have some food "at the same time,Madhu takes one jelabi and give it to Bal telling "eat it and I will give you samosa,do you like Samosa?".

Aryan sees them with wide eyes and shouts "Hey both of you are eating with left hand ".Bal baby concentrate on eating the jelabi.Dips sees them distance and pretend to talk on phone when she hears someone talking nearby "If you took good care of our baby,even you can feed him Samosa and karchori".she turns to find Shikky standing near her .while she tries to control her tears and talk ,he walks away.Dips reaches to the nearby bathroom and shuts herself it and breaks down crying .Sultan comes out his room dressed in formal coat suit and stops near Aryan's room searching for him.he finds Meera reading some novel in the hall and goes to talk to her .

RK sees Shikky talking with Dips and she rushes out of the place and questions Shikky regarding the same."what are you talking,I was just Standing and she was just standing ,no conversation ,why would I talk with her, and moreover we are over.....we ......we are just strangers ..thats all.I don't have any motive to hurt her but just leave it ".he tries to avoid the topic.RK searches for Dipali and calls her phone .Madhu sees Dips missing for a long time .she feels confused .Bal baby takes a spoonful of snacks and asks madhu to open her mouth.Madhu thinks for a moment and opens her mouth to have the food.Shikky sees RK busy with phone and finds him calling Dips repeatedly .he goes to search for Dipali himself .

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Posted: 5 years ago

finally u updated this story also,plz do give frequent updates

Awesome updates,

hope Madhu soon puts her in-differences aside and showers her love on Bal,

continue soon

thanks for the update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Bal baby eats the food happily and smiles on seeing Aryan trying to eat chaat items with his spoon ."Why are eating with spoon ?,only by using our hands we can feel the taste of chaat,every time RK will scold me for behaving very weird but I love eating chaat very much ".Madhu almost choke the food on hearing Bal talking exactly like her.RK smiles on hearing his daughter's definition for eating chaat.he turns to find Shikky missing for a while .

Shikky searches for Dipali everywhere and but in vain.at last he finds her standing in a distance

Dipali stands alone near a pond with tears .she hears footsteps and tries to go when someone holds her hand stopping her from moving ."Why are acting very good and crying like a baby ,you know I am searching for you even without having food ,are you a fool to stand alone,what the hell happened that your are behaving like this .you are killing me Dipali,the same way how you killed my baby ,you will only stop after my d...".she stops him saying further by keeping her hand in mouth He shouts at her and stops her from going.she sees him with teary eyes but stands still without trying to move or trying to talk.He angrily pushes her into a nearby chair and leaves the place .Dips sits in the chair thinking about his words once more .

Madhu settle the bill and finds Bal baby still tagging with her ."You...Why are you coming with us,we have many important works to compete before today,go to your family "says Aryan on seeing that she has no plan to go .Madhu smiles on seeing his angry tone."you go from here,we need to search for Dips aunty " ,Aryan tries to avoid her but Mashy stops him from talking further,"bal baby,where is your dad,you don't miss him ?" Asks her with tension on thinking about meeting RK.Bal baby sees them with stunned expression."Omg,I missed RK,he is a poor soul .where did he went ?".RK hides from her view by holding a newspaper in his hand.Madhu thinks about calling RK but stops herself and begin to call Shikky.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update

Bal is so cute,she is mixture of both Rk and Madhu

hope Rishbala unites soon but with this Aryaan and his father it takes some time

thanks for the update

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Shikky comes back with his phone in hand and finds Bal baby and Madhu searching here and there .He thinks to walk in when his phone begin to ring with Madhu's call.He silent the phone without attending the call and stands hidden near the washroom.he searches for RK and finds him sitting by holding a newspaper in his hand."Bal baby,You sit here,we will come after finding your dad"says Aryan on seeing her trying to accompany her.Madhu finds its weird that both of them are not attending the call and gets angry.

"It must be their cheap trick,where the hell did this Dipali went,all are adding problems ,"she angrily call them once again.Bal Baby sees her with curiosity.she finds hard to shout at the kid."Bal,please you sit here with this Aryan here itself ,Mo....I will come after searching for Dipali aunty OK ".he makes them sit near the table and goes in search of Dipali.

(I will post a longer update evening )

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RK scold her for leaving the children alone ,he sees Shikky Standing near the washroom .Shikky sees Madhu going and gets relived ,

he feels someone touches his shoulder,"No Madhu,I didnt do anything It was all RK's plan don't get angry with me",he shouts and turns to find RK standing .RK beat him angrily telling ,"You are a traitor ,traitor ,you are helping her helping her AMD telling its my plan ".

They stops on seeing someone seeing them closely.Aryan stands there with hands in his hip.Shikky tries to smile but Aryan begin to run shouting ,"Madhu aunty,they are here ,they are here ".RK lift him from going further.

Dipali sits alone in the bench watching people enjoying in the park with family.she remembers her days with Shikky when Madhu sits next to her,"why are sitting here,leaving me to deal with that baby ,she is too much too much ,is it also your plan ?".she tries to cheer Dips but fails on seeing her still feeling very sad .Madhu also seed the direction to find a family happily enjoying .She hugs Dips and asks her to be cheerful.

"Madhu,I never felt contented in my life ,Always I had wavering mind ,First I dated RK and then married Shikky ,then I did many bad deeds to separate you from Rishab because I felt Radha ma is loving you more than me but never thought to leave Shikky,though I didnt show my love to him because he may think me weak,But never ever I thought him bad ,never but now after these years,I am trying to be good but he is hating me so much ".

Madhu wipes her tears and asks her to smile."

Uncle,give me any other flavor of ice cream,and give the bill to this white uncle ",RK hit himself in the wall thinking how Aryan is eating ice cream and enjoying ."Aryan beta,if you eat so much ice cream then you will catch cold and you can't play in theme park so stop it ,what will happen if your Dad comes to know that you eat ice cream ?",Shikky tries to convince him but in vain.he sees Shikky and suddenly shouts "You are abducting me ,I will shout ".Both RK and Shikku sees each other and smiles bitterly thinking their fate.Bal baby sits near Shikky and sees Madhu coming .

She tries to say when Aryan rushes out and runs towards Madhu and Dipali."Dips aunty,I had ice cream chocolate ,vannila and even brought you kulfi come".he pulls her towards the table .RK and Shikky sees each other and finds Madhu standing there with folded hands.she sees Bal baby smiling at her and turns her view .

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