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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1- "Kya apko yeh nikah qubool hai" Madhu closed her eyes a small tears fall from her eyes , she was about to say"y..." ."NO" a angry female voice suddenly came ,all eyes truned to see Ms Jubeda Khan standing at the door with her grandson RK looking ever so angry. She stromed forward and said loudly "this marriage cant happen" then looked at the groom and ordered firmly "just get lost"...

All shocked , Gayatri Masi came forward and asked worridely "yeh app kya kar rahihai ,why are u stopping this marriage, looks yeh Madhu ki zendagi ka sawal hai?". "you are wrong Gayatri this marriage wont save ur daughter life but will ruin her" Dadima looked at Madhu "and this girl dont deserve this".

Gayatri shocked listening to her friend couldnt understand why she is saying like this ? Madhu is not her own daughter but she loves her more than her daughter. She is a orphan and came to her orphange with her mother when she was 5 . After death of her mother she brought her up like she did the other girls of this orphange. Madhu is already 26 so Gayatri was trying hard to find a match and after almost 6 month this proposal came . Its just perfect for Madhu as a orphan . She looked at groom's family angry faces and try to mend the situation "jubeda lets talk inside all are watching".

"no" came an angry reply "baat sabke samne hogi, taaki saako pata chale yeh log kitni fraud hai". Dadima and Rishab both looked angrily at the groom. "stop it Jubeda u are insulting th."...

This time Rishab's voice stop Gayatri "they deserve worse then just insult". Gayatri looked at him confusingly Rishab glaring at Rashid and continue "this man whom u choose for Madhu is a cheater, he is already married and marrying again just for money which is in Madhu's name" all shocked hearing him Gayatri couldnt believe"this cant be true"

Dadima put a hand on her shoulder for support "yehi sach hai. When u first told me about this guy who want to marry Madhu just in a week i got some doubt,so i told Rishab to find everything about him just this morning Rishab told me about this man's true face". Gayatri couldnt believe the person before her could be that disgusting she looked at him and asked strenly "is it true? Or if its true why did u hide?" Rashid kept looking here and there then his mother answered or say shout " ha yeh sach hai. So what he is marrying for the 2nd time he has money if he can feed two wives then whats wrong in this matter "...

Gayatri looked at the woman who is supporting his son " how can you say there is nothing wrong in this?. Your son was about to marry my daughter by lying?" . Rashid couldnt keep mum and finally said "We didnt lie we just didnt tell thats it or waise bhi you should be happy that this orphan girl is marrying a man like me".

Gayatri just grabbed his collar and pushed him toward the door " out there wont be any marriage". His mother rushed to him and made him stand "you are not doing right Gayatri ji . In all this Madhu will suffer ". Dadima came forward and said "you dont have to worried for our daughter she will get much better person than ur son" .

This just hit Rashid's ego "you are wrong Jubedaji ,this girl" pointing at Madhu "would stay forever here ,arre you guys should be grateful to me that i am marrying her. First she is already 26 and a orphan also even she doesn't know who her father is no man in his sense will marry her" . Dadima couldnt control and slapped him hard " dont u dare talk about her like that". Rashisd touched his check and said bitterely "sach karwa hota hai but it is the fact that girl will be unmarried forever no one will marr...".

"My grandson will marry her" Dadima said loudly, all shocked especially Rishab but before he say anything dadima announced proudly "my Rishab will marry Madhu right now" loud graps escaped from everyones mouth . She truned around and said strenly to the groom family "get lost before i call the police".

As soon as they left Gayatri came forward to Jubeda she dont understand what to say"Jubeda are you sure?" . Dadima smiled and held her hand"yes Gayatri my RK will marry Madhu" Gayatri just hugged her feeling happy. In all this no one asked the opinion of Madhu and Rishab...

Madhu instanly looked at Rishab and find her answer she just rushed to her room and locked herself and start crying on her bad luck. She never wanted to get married to that Rashid but couldnt say no to Masi . She loves Rishab but always knew that he doesnt love her nor he wants to marry her. She was happy when they came to stop her marriage but never thought Dadima would say something like that ...

Yes she loves him and always will but she would never force him in any relation , she know the result of an unwanted marriage and know the result of it also as her own mother faced the same fate and remain unloved ...
Edited by Keepdreaming - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Updated first part hope u guys will like it. Guys i update from phone so cant send the link but if u guys still want pm do mention it in comments thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful part
would love to read more !!!
cont soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update,
loved it,
Madhu is an orphan and she is getting married to rashid ,
dadima and rishab stopped their marriage bcoz they came to know that he is a cheat and he is marrying madhu only for her money,
now Rk is going to marry madhu for his dadima and madhu loves rishab but he doesn't like her
waiting to read more continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.Dadima stopped madhu's marriage n announced rishabh will marry her.Will rishabh do ?Madhu loves her ,does he also.Waiting for ans.
Update soon n do pm me plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice first part! Thanks for continuing...
This Rashid family is so cheap and disgusting. He is already married and ready to get married for money. Such an idiot!
So Rishbala are gonna get married. Madhu loves him but RK doesn't. Let's see what happens...

Do PM me next time if you send PMs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update. ...madhu knows that she love rk but at the same time she knows he I not loving her...I feel bad that how unwanted madhu is...waiting for next they married life turns up. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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qt an interesting prologue
rk says qabool hai but he hates madhu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chap 1..a v well written update
madhu was getting married to rashid but he wasnt a nice man.rishabh n his dadima saved her n she asked rishabh to marry madhu.madhu already loves rk but rk hates her as evident from prologue
looking forward to next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superrrbb start of the story..!! Interesting concept & looking forward to the next part :)
Congoz on ur first story & first time writing,wish u luck :)

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