RiMa TS 'My Fortunate Libido Mistake' COMPLETED@30 (12/09) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71


OK So here I am with my comment . First let me do my as usual thing 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


OHK Sultan is Madz handsome man 🤣🤣🤣🤣 But its OK sometimes such shits happen with people in life , like how it happened with Madz 🤣🤣🤣 So Now its RK on the door . You made RK as Rocket Singh - Salesman Of The Year 🤣🤣🤣


Should I feel happy that Madz dint had sex with her husband and is getting attracted to an unknown stranger or should I feel sad that its a kind of extra marital affair or cheating on your spouse ?? 🤔 Well what you are showing is just a story and so there is no harm in reading such stories bcz as a writer you are always supposed to think beyond imagination BUT then such things are reality also where spouses cheat on each other and such things are a kind of taboo in Indian society . Well whatever it is , I am quite cool about whatever you are gonna show in the story .


🤣🤣🤣 LMAO Madz entry in the guest room with pillow and her gawking session on RK reminded me of a bollywood song "Kundi mat khadkao raja seedha andar aao raja" 🤣🤣🤣 I'm not typing the whole song bcz you are smart enough to sense the meaning and situation of Rishbala 😆😆😆 Well so Aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai and even RK is equally attracted to Madz .


OK now something I want to say is that if you are showing such relationship then make sure that Sullu is not a saint and Madz can get a chance to divorce him 🤣🤣🤣


It was a nice update . So the sexual tension has started b/w Rishbala 😈 Waiting for the next update 😳😳
Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
hey nice n hot update ...i thought madhus husband is rk ...u shocked me
anyway ireallly dont know whether i like the stranger romance or not bcoz it cmpletely wrong or i think so but it is rk so its cool ..i think u will come with nice reason to this attraction like rk is already in love with madhu like ... and another guess is that the stranger boy is actually rk not sales man i think
he comes in search for her ...and oh god sultaan ...poor guy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Superb update, must say a hot one.
Curious to know what happens next.
Continue soon, shall be waiting

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Ufff... Such a wrong timing yar... I was all the way waiting for the last part to be completed ... But it was just a teaser... Next wala kab mile GA yar?? ... Still confuse is the stranger rk ?? ... Phew .. Madhu didn't let her husband to be close.. But I my view too... Can't see madhu's decision in letting him inside while she was all alone ... But no worries... Till the stranger is rk and that they gonna be together..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Dis stranger is rk?? N who is Madhu husband
Awesome update Eagerly waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Oh !Sullu is madhu's husband I thought it was rk.But now this salesman is rk or someone else.But Madhu let him enter her house ,served coffee n food.Is it right ?I am still confused .plz update soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
hey aniya read the parts in one go...no doubt you r a fabulous writer.glad that i am 18 ..so sullu is her hus.When i read 1st up i thought that rk is her hubby.but no...hey its amazing...Is it a dark love story..?Enjoyed thoroughly dear..keep writting..plz do continue..n dont pm me.It is difficult to send individual pm isnt?.But i will comment...hey thsnks 4 ur 3 stories...update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I thought Rk was madhu's hubby ... But u shocked me... Liked the update though few things r not realistic... It's like a fiction & the hot stranger is Rk & I guess rk knows madhu already from her intern days...
New he's here... To meet her...
But what's this again u stopped at ryt moment... Only a hug... But it was steamy all the way with ur writing
Ta for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really don't know to be happy or sad abt madhu"s behaviour.I'm happy feels like the stranger is rk.
sad bcos madhu allowed complete stranger inside the house giving him coffee, supper and on the top herself too.little hard to digest.
I'm total intriguing. Pls update soon, how she gonna face everything after the intimate? ???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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why anni,why ??!!
tumhe all boys me sultan he mila madhu k husband k liya ?(kohi vi boys k name li sakhti thi ha )
i am not shocked ,ki rk madhu ka hubby nhi hai,i expected!but sullu !!!!(ye tumse
expect nhi kiya tha)
come back to story,
rainy rainy night,hot guy,beautiful lady !!
ahem ahem,,,,
but it feel wrong ,madhu is married girl,
or stranger k sath ahem ahem feel wrong
but i know writer,so she give perfect ,happy ending.
also i like sudha di idea ,(pata nhi aani ka brain ma kya story hai??!!)
amazing update,
early waiting ,update soon.

Edited by sapnaf52 - 9 years ago

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