Rishbala FF: WANTED !- Chapter 8 updated on pg.81 (30/9/16) - Page 22

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall , Humpty Dumpty had a great fall

London is bridge is falling down falling down falling down

Inky Pinky Ponky father had a donkey . Donkey died , father cried .

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Sorry for unresing my comment so late but I really can't help it because I had to read this part of your story twice to actually comprehend that what was going on . No no no the part was not that bad that to understand it I had to read it twice BUT I just couldnt get this chapter into my head that is why I had to read it twice because your Part 2 of this chapter ended somewhere else and Part 3 of the chapter had no connection to the previous chapter even a bit . The ending of the 2nd part was with some Black Man rescuing a girl but this chap starts with some women who is forced to entertain men's . The only connecting part in both the chapetrs were the Ballu scene . So he is dead . I dint expected his death sequence this soon but its OK since this is how you must have planned the story . Let' see what RK does now bcz he was working hard on this case but unfortunately Ballu died . Lets see who is the killer in future episodes . The part was really intriguing and waiting to see a fast update from you so that things becomes clear a bit because I'm actually clueless as to what is going on (IDK if something is wrong with me or you actually presented your readers with a jigsaw puzzle to solve . So in this part of your story I have nothing much to comment since I'm seriously clueless as to what is happening therefore I will be waiting for the next part to see if I can join any dot or not . Sorry Sowmi baby for dissapointing you with such discouraging words ). But the way you wrote the part was really appreciable and you did really well in that . Good going girl !!!

getting more interesting😃

Fantastic update, loved it.

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

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Awesome update. So who's the prostitute? Is it trishna? So balraj is dead n he's an underworld criminal? ?? Is he? Is madhu his biological daughter? I hope no. Awesome update . Do update soon. Thanks a lot for the pm