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Simran Sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yay me first again

Woaahhh...Ishu you are becoming a tremendous thriller writer👏👏👏...Hahahaha Honestly i can't stop laughing on Deepali's situation🤣...she helped both of them by giving each and every update of Sultan's plan and at last what happened with her she ended up in a prison hahahha...perfect she deserves that😆😆😆

I knew from the beginning that Madhu is acting...thanks for not making her a vamp...or else I would have eaten you up😡😡😡...lol just kidding bae.😉😉😉...even i doubted Deepali...but How you implemented the story was superb...phoonk phoonk ke kadam rakhein hain tumne

Loved the brief romance...thanks for including the romantic moments also😉

Well what kind of lawyer you want to become...let me guess you will become a criminal lawyer as far as I can see😆😆😆

Loved this TS...keep writing such stories dear

Thanks for the PM Ishu

Love you

Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago

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Sarim.fatmi

@Sarim.fatmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

omg what a tremendous update dear.

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Kuddos to you baby...👏👏 for successfully completing this brilliant story in 3 parts unlike me... i say 2 shot & give 4 shots... 😆😆

Mind boggling update! 👏👏

though we all were so sure that Rk was not dead right from the first update you still made us wonder what was the actual plan... 😉😆

showing Madhu evil & Dipali a good good girl was the highlight of this story... 😆😆

well, few thing i guessed after reading the second part but not fully... like how Rk found out abt Sultan's evil intention... never thought that 6 yrs back venice accident & the hospital room scene, Rk asking dips phone was the key to the mystery... so he found out everything then itself but Rk acted brilliantly showing he knew nothing abt that... that's why he is our superstar nah!😉😉

Rk executed the plan pretty well & fool Sullu... 😆😆

poor dips got stuck between two borthers... she loved Rk but madhu stole him... so she thought to favour sultan at least to get some huge bucks... but crap! 😆😆

i felt like killing sultan when he said he liked madhu...want to marry her but when she deceived her brother for money then why not she do the same with him & tried to kill her...🤢🤢

that madhu hanging on the branch of tree & Rk hiding behind the bushed & jumping in on time & saving her like a hero scene was quite filmy..😆😆

All your madhu's are smart yaar... she played the role given to her quite well... she spontaneously called the cops too & Sultan got killed by the DIG... Sultan ran from the DIG to DIG hole in the graveyard i guess...😆😆

everything was so amazing about this story... but the best plan will be their plan to make babies...☺️☺️

Thanks for giving us this interesting story to read! u r truly a brilliant writer! 👏👏

love u🤗

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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vishti4eva

@vishti4eva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

wonderful update dear.love the plan

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Amazing story
Loved d end 😊

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sapana

@sapnaf52

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Amazing update ishu,
finally u unfold suspens ha!!
hey ,i was right!!!!
it was rishbala, masterplan (kaha tum us sadakchhap ko madhu ka partner banaya)lolz.
i was also right ,i told na,there was plan in sultan head to kill madhu & our hero come and save her that happen!!!!,
race 3 in rishbala version and it was
superb,superhit.
Dip was soo good here ,i cannot digest her ,how dips was so good,true etc?
but u unfold her mask and our vamp come back.
so joining rk office was sul-dips plan.
rk's charm any one fall in love with him so why cannot our dips not fall hehehe.
dips is in love!!!
and love this dips ha because of her (her WA ) rk know the sultan plan.
dips with sultan and also with rk.
and now in jail lolz
finally u bring our madhu (sweet ,cute and loves rk lots ,and do whatever for rk life )
sultan is dead now,wo ab nhi aaega,bullet khaya hai bhai ly.

Sultan also fall in love with madhu (who can't) but get scared for her nature gold digger,Darr gaya sultan lolz.
Again planning for plan ???

rishbala and making children ;;;
masterplaner rk hai then this defintly success!!!.

Superb,awesome,story.
u bring and hold suspens till the last part.Great work ishu ,
loved it(aba me bina tension padh sakhti hu ,exam k liya)
u update this part na.
thanks for pm.and thanks for update

Edited by sapnaf52 - 9 years ago

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silverfire

@silverfire

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

I knew it! I knew it!! I knew it!!!. U can never kill RK.😛 My last prediction was also right. Rishabala were in it together to nail sullu ullu.😃

When I started reading this chapter I thought maybe Madhu was really evil n she deserved the death sullu had planned. 😕 Then our hero made his entry n everything fell into place.

Kudos, Ishu! U never let the cat out of the bag till the end.

Great story n a fitting ending to it. That ullu deserved death. Nothing short of it. 😛 I never expected dips to be his partner in crime. She looked like Miss goody two shoes.

We got back our sweet innocent Madhu who will do anything for her RK. 😛 They r meant to be together.😳

Now they r on the nxt plan.😆 Planning babies.😳

Thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Thanks for the PM.

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Superb ending.

As expected Right kameena has it all planned.

Sultan confessed his love for Madhu and then tried to kill her.

They underestimated RK and Madhu.

enjoyed reading the story.

keep writing.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Ishu, Amazing story, Awesome update and beautiful ending, loved it.
Happy that Rishbala are fine and are together, Sultan got punished for his deeds.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Nice part.

Happy ending for rishbala. But was dipali a double agent? Or double double agent? She helped both brothers. That was funny. But nevertheless it was nice thriller n suspense story. Looking forward to more of your stories.

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