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PART 12 - LAST PART




Rishabh turns the knob of his main door . They both entrs the house , when suddenly a hard punch lands on Rishabh's face making him stumble backward


"Sultan..." , Madhu says with shock


"You cant live your life now Mrs Madhubala . You injured me . You are going to die a brutal death now Madhu" , Sultan said in a rage and took out his gun from his jeans pocket


"Who is he Madhu ?? You know him ??" , RK asked Madhu after composing himself from the sudden assault


"Rishu ! He is the same person who took me as a captive to get his work done . He is the one who punched me in my abdomen and he is the only one who wants to kill the Russian President" , Madhu said to RK while hugging him


"Whattt. He punched you"


"How dare you Creep ! That you raised your filthy hands on my wife" , RK roared in anger


"Rishu he is the one who had kept his men outside our house to keep an eye on your every moment"


"Oh Buddy ! So you are that leech who created a ruckus in the flight for my wife . Dude you shouldn't have punched me on my face and spoilt my handsome face" , RK said in a dead cold voice making Madhu shit scared of the upcoming events


Sultan pulls the trigger of the pistol he was holding and RK bent down and hits him hard on his stomach making him squeal in pain . The gun drops from Sultan's hands and Madhu holds the gun . Here RK punches Sultan badly knocking him down , when suddenly he remembers to ask about the person for whom he was working .


"For whom were you working Sultan ??" , RK asked Sultan while holding his throat firmily choking him for breath


"Leave me RK" , Sultan said while pushing RK's hands from his throat


"I asked you that for whom you were working ? Who is that person who supplied you with all the classified informations ??" , RK punched Sultan hard near his chest making him fall down on the floor


"Tell me you pig . I will ask you for the 3rd and the last time and if you don't tell me the name of the person then I will finish you off " , RK said while holding his hairs


"I ... I am not telling you that"


"Fine ... Then I am killing you" , and saying so RK took the nearest flower vase and broke it into pieces and took hold of one piece and inserted it into the spot where Madhu had earlier inserted the fork making Sultan shriek in pain


Sultan din't open his mouth for another 2 minutes when RK in anger brought that broken vase piece near Sultan's eyes


"Wait ... I am telling you . You don't need to make me blind for that" , Sultan finally managed to say in a whisper


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*In RK's Department *

"Brin the man who tried to kill Prez is dead" , RK told to Brin and

other agents who were present with him in that room



"What ..."



"Yeah I killed him . He was in my house to harm my wife and me"



"What ... You killed Sultan??" , Revin asked shocked (I hope you

remember Revin else visit page number 11)



Rishabh looks at him



"How do you know that his name was Sultan ?"


"Tha ... That's ... Because ..." , Revin starts to stammer to come up

with a perfect answer



"That's because you are that traitor who joined those deadly people

to kill Prez , and told Sultan that in which hotel Prez is gonna stay.

Am I right Revin or am I right ?" , RK said in a cold voice



"Rk Its ...Ummm ... That" , Revin tried to come up with an answer


"Why did you do this Revin ?? You were one of the best agents that

whole Sweden had"



"I dint do anything RK . What's the proof that I did all this along

with that dead mam???" , Revin said in his defense



Suddenly Revin gets a call . He looks at the number and is shocked . He

looks towards RK who had Sultan's phone in his hand



"This is the proof Revin . When I killed Sultan , I got his phone from

his jeans pocket and checked all its calls and traced down the people .

And the constant call from yesterday night till today noon was done

by you . Arrest him guys..." , RK said with pain



"RK you cant do that with me"



"And what you were doing with taking my wife as captive and killing

Prez was right ??"



"What was the reason Revin , that you did this ? An agent is suppose

to protect people and country and not to harm them" , Brin finally

broke his silence



"Last year my wife went to Syria to get her best friend out from that

war torn zone and that day itself Russia has dropped a plane to kill its

enemy in the Syrian state . There were huge casualties in which I lost

my wife . And that day I sweared that I am gonna avenge my wife's

death from Russia . And so to avenge my wife's death I met this

Sultan . You remember RK ! Last year when my wife went to Syria to

bring her friend out from there , I had a mission in Istanbul against

these terrorists and I was gonna kill him but then thought to have an

interrogation with him and so I had brought him

to Istanbul headquarters and when the next day I got to know about

my wife's death then all I wanted was vengeance . And that time only

when I lost my wife , I let him go free on the condition that the first

thing he is gonna do is to help me in killing Russian Prez . And that's

how I knew Sultan from past one year" , Revin said dejected



"What you did was wrong Revin" , RK said



"And what Russians did was right ? Why Russia and America has this

habit of poking their nose in other countries matter ? Syria could

have handled its situation and I wouldn't have to loose my wife . RK !

If anything would have happened to your wife then wouldn't you

avenge her death ? You killed Sultan because he harmed your wife . If

you are right then why am I wrong ?" , Revin asked RK who was been

dragged from there by the agents



"RK forget all this . Don't take Revin's word on your heart . Its just

his anger of loosing his wife that he is talking nonsense" , Brin said

while keeping his and on RK's shoulder



"I don't know what Revin said is true or not . Brin I need some days

off to spend with my wife . Can I get leave ??"



"Ofcourse RK . You are given 3 weeks off . Go and spend your time

with your wife"



"Thanks Brin"



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*After 4 Months*

And the "Order Of The Sword" medal goes to Mr Rishabh Kundra .

We request Mr Kundra to kindly come on stage to receive his medal

from the PM



"Come Biwi"



"What ??? Why . The medal is for you"



"I know that Biwi . But still come with me to the stage to give me confidence" , and saying so Rishabh with a smile held his Madhu's hand and escorts her to the stage



"Can I have the mike ?" , RK asked the anchor



"Sure"



"Ladies and Gentleman ! I would like to apologize to Mr Prime Minister

because I cant take this award" , everyone looks shocked and baffled

at his comment



"Its always said that behind every successful man is a woman and

behind my mission's success is my beautiful wife , so I want Mr PM to give this award to my wife because it was her presence of mind and

bravery that saved everyone and the Russian President . Biwi please

come forward and accept this award from Mr PM" , RK said with a

smile looking at Madhu who has tears in her eyes



Madhu came and held RK's hand , "RK we are always together for

everything , so why should I take this medal alone ? Wont you come

along with me and held your hand against mine to receive this honour

?" , Madhu asked with happy tears and they both forwarded their

hand to take the medal from the PM and came down from the podium.



"Biwi"



"Hmm" , Madhu said while keeping her head on RK's chest and walking

with him back to their seats



"I love you . You always inspire me to be brave and strong and to not

loose hope" , RK said while intertwining his fingers with Madhu



"I love you too Rishu . And you always inspire me to do things for

others and bravely because I know you will protect me from every

harm"



And saying so RK kissed Madhu's cheeks in public making Madhu and

all the females present their blush profusely



This chapter was written in a hurry so dint read it . Kindly ignore all

sorts of errors . I hope the chapter made sense and with this I finish

off this story . It was a pleasure to read your wonderful comments .

Thanks everyone ❤️😳

Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
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First!!!🥳


Awesome ending, babe!!👏👏

So it was not Brin but Revin the traitor... & Ishu, baby, u r too much!!! do u think we have super memory to remember this Revin guy who came in the 6th chappy?? & he just said only one dialogue...


"RK why did you call us on such a short notice and that too at the middle of the night??" , Revin one of the agents from RK's department said to RK when he saw RK entering the main hall of PM's house

"Revin our work doesn't see if its night or day , winter or rainy" ' RK said angrily


(Baby, U made me search for this guy... U shld have better mentioned... Refer pg.11, part 6, para ??? Then it would have been easy for me to find... Lol! You know i m too lazy... But still i re read the update (not fully) to find this Agent Revin! Lol)


Lol!!! Seriously, u made us suspect Brin & even the PM at one place... But not this guy! Lol!😆 You fooled us... Or i shld better say u fooled me... 😆


Okay... So Revin joined hands with the wrong side to avenge for his wife's death... But i felt what he did was wrong...


Hehe... Madhu didnt miss anything... She just said every single detail to Rk including sultan punching her stomach... & that fumed Rk more & he knocked sultan's ass! 👏


See, when Rk had the control over the events hapoening or when he was with his wife he protects her... But Revin couldn't protect his wife bcos he was not with her... Or she was not smart as madhu to escape... In fact there is nothing much to escape.. Her death was designed like that... So that doesnt justify his act of revenge...


Loved the last bit more... Rk honouring his brave wife by asking her to receive the award & Madhu insisting that they both collect it together as they are always one... So lovely! 👏


Thoroughly enjoyed this thrilling ride! 😛

Thank u so much! Keep writing more of such mind boggling stories!😉


Love ya!🤗


Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Beautiful ending to this thriller story dear !! But didn't expect the traitor to be some revin. You mentioned the page yaar but I was too lazy to read when my saviour sudha akka had mentioned the para in the comment. Thank you sudha akka !!😊
Sullu is so weak against Mr and Mrs. Rk. Poor guy was got injured at the same place. I thought you liked sullu😆

The award ceremony to honour RK and madhu was amazing. They proved their love once again before the whole world !!
Thanks for the lovely story ishu !!
Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago
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Ishu perfect ending to a beautiful story. Awesome update, loved it. Shall be waiting for read more from you.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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nice end...thank u for the pm...
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awesome ending loved it and tq for the pm
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Awesome ending ishu.
love that convo between rishbala during award ceromany.
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Woahhh what a twist in the climax...I was thinking it was Brin but no it was Revin.
Yes I really forgot about Revin...for me he was a sidy character but you made him the main antagonist mind blowing it was Ishu👏

Yay finally my wish was fulfilled of RK punching Sultan ...Hahahaha when Madhu was telling RK about Sultan I was fearing that he doesn't punch RK again taking the advantage of the situation but thankfully nothing that sort of happened.

Revin's revenge was completely baseless...by killing the prez the problem cannot be solved. Though what happened with her wife was unfair but it was destiny.

last part was so adorable...RK is a gentlemen...he could have took the award but he took Madhu with himself instead for receiving the award alone...lovely ending dear...so this story is over...never mind pls continue writting such great stories😉

Thanks for the PM Ishu

LOve you
xoxo😊
Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago

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