RiMa FF : Unconditionally In Love (Chap 1 - pg 9)21/11

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unconditionally In Love


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Madhu : No, you can't leave me like this. You promised me to be with me always. You can't break your promise.


She cries while hugging him, he is lying on bed and taking his last breath, he says with a difficult : No Madhu, be strong. You know I can't see you in pain. Even I don't want to go but I have no option. I haven't enough time left. Please don't cry, bid me with a smile.



Madhu : I can't.



She again hugs him tightly, somehow he manages to make her look at him and says : Madhu promise me... You will start a new life. You will get married. I can't see you in pain, you have to move on with someone else. Please.



Madhu : No... Stop your nonsense. You are nowhere going. Understand?



He says : I have to go!! Please make it easy for me. Promise me Madhu!!



She cries : No!!



He says : Okay!! Not for yourself but for our Unborn child. Our baby needs a father. I know a child needs the mother most but they needs a father too. I will not be there anymore to give the love to our child. So please move on, it's my last wish. Please Madhu!!



His words makes her think, she simply nods and says : I can't give your place to anyone. I love you and I will love you only. No one can ever replace you. But... But I can't promise you, but I will try to move on, for our child only.



Suddenly his pulse rises, he starts breathing heavily, he says : Thank... Thank you Madhu. I love you.



He closes his eyes, Madhu hugs him tightly and cries : I love you too Raja.



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Madhu is sitting on wedding altar, dressed as a bride, she looks at her groom once and a year escape from her eyes.



She thinks : I love you Raja. I am moving on as I promised you. But I will never give your place to this stranger. He will never become my husband ever, I will always consider him as my child's father. Why did you left me and our unborn baby? How can you think that anyone else can love me and our baby more than you. Today, my name is changing from Madhubala Raja Khuswa to Madhubala Rishabh Kundra but my heart will never change. It will always beat for you only, your love will always remain with me.



RK thinks : I hate you from bottom of my heart. How can maa get me married to a strange girl. Okay if ma forced but how can she accepted me. I will never love you and never give you the rights of wife. I will make your life hell to the extent then you have no option left, except to leave me!!!



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How's the teaser guys? Something different from other stories. I hope you will like it. Please vote it, if you liked!!



Thank you.





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by ..snow_flake.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing concept
Loved it
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Originally posted by: luvvivian286

Amazing concept

Loved it
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

thank you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yes its Something different from other stories n i like its concept n now curious 2 know about more n want 2 read it...sooo pls dont make us wait n plsss update soon...dont want 2 miss this wonderful story of urs on rishbala...thanks 4 d pm dear

Edited by parimaniya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start...
Glad its rishab who died.. I am not so attached to raja rani in serial too not so much of feelings when he died... But feeling sad for madhu & the unborn baby... But in a way happy too becos they r in safe hand now... How much ever rk tries to show him as a monster he is only a sweetheart...
Well i dont get how a mother could get her son married to a widow that too when she is carrying someone else child?? Is rk also a widower?? Or divorcee?? Or a drug attict or something so his mother felt the need to marry her son to a nice girl... Who is willing to accept him with all his flaws...

Btw... Isnt 'Realization' ur story?? That story plot is also some what close to this right?? Madhu's husband will die & marries Rk... & they take a long time to realize their love?? Is that ur story or some one elses?? But i m sure i read some story like that... But due to delay in update i kinda forget the story details...

Hope u take this story in an interesting way... & give reasonbal updates in a month... I m not asking for frequent update as we all know we have a busy world outside but still i wish u could give few updates in one month & be regular & nevet leave the story in mid way... As many writers r starting but leaving in btn... Which utterly disappoints the readers... Hope u won't do that dear... Sorry if i had hurt ur feelings...
Cheers...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congo on new story⭐️
awesome teaser..Raja died & madhu going to marry rk fr raja & unborn baby..And Rk is not goody goody persn here..He already decided 2 torcher madhu..lets see who gets torchurd😆
Gr8 concept..Thanks fr pm & continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Interesting concept waiting for dis story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsme teaser
Its very intrstng

Continue soon
Would love to read it


Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start.
But does rk know about madhu's pregnancy?
Seems it's gonna be an interesting story. Do update soon.

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