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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nyc update...i loved the movie also..nyc vm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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RISHBALA FF -Pyar Ki Yeh Ek Kahani




PRECAP

new entry ( who ?😕)

Ria to herself " is he behind me know? did they break up?"

dear diary" i love him and will love him forever"❤️

RISHBALA ki I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU...( REALLY?)

RIA " do you love someone rk ?"

RK " yes i do "

RIA " you're still in love?"

RK : " always. forever"

in her room

'RIA :WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH HIM?'


he he he. guys these are just the hints. story coming soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m really confused why rk is hitting on ria
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting precap...
Waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the precap, continue soon, waiting for the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ms.who ever you are...

I wonder, Why do you put a Note of...
"THIS STORY IS FOR INDIA FORUM MEMBERS ONLY & DONT COPY TO OTHER SITES"

when its already a copied one !

This is Directed by Purijagganath who is aTelugu movies

director, with cast Allu Arjun, Amalapaul, & Caterina teresa .

Movie Name : IDDARU AMMAILATHO

Translation in english: " With two Girls "

Story PLOT :

" Rk and Madhu fall in love and get engaged with their parents consent. And start spending time together.

And coming to Riya. Rk kept the diary wantedly in Riya's room and Riya thinks madhu is dead as per plan of Rk, Riya will be falling in love with Rk and to trap Riya only as she is a psychology student ,she will be interested in human behaviors he kept that Box under the bed of riya room and creates as if madhu is dead and this all only to plot and trap her father Amar behl and the dons who are Sultan and Sid...
This is only becoz , As Madhu was injured becoz of that Sultan gang as she shot something about their deals in her handicap...
And Rk wants the don to come out & to take revenge on him for hurting his madhu he is playing with Riya girl.

But at the end riya finding out madhu who is alive suddenly in the last scene confess him about Madhu is not dead and he shocking her tells his plan about all the trap he had created for
his revenge to which riya realize she is the one who is got fooled in all the mess. "

Every Scene , Every dialogue whatever you have written is taken from the Movie IDDARU AMMAILATHO

I guess u arent aware that there are telugu people here too and you had written this as this is your own plot .

Atleast put a Note in the start of your story that this is completely taken from a telugu movie so and so...
it wud be gud !

I'm not asking you to refrain from writing this but atleast be true and give the note on the start of story .

I'm sorry if u have felt my Commenting here wrong but I'm now a days fed up of people copying works which are others and showcasing it to be theirs.
Becoz how much hardwork it takes one to write I know !

PS: i hope I read something new from your own ideas soon !




Edited by Nithunavi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Nithunavi


Ms.who ever you are...

I wonder, Why do you put a Note of...
"THIS STORY IS FOR INDIA FORUM MEMBERS ONLY & DONT COPY TO OTHER SITES"

when its already a copied one !

This is Directed by Purijagganath who is aTelugu movies

director, with cast Allu Arjun, Amalapaul, & Caterina teresa .

Movie Name : IDDARU AMMAILATHO

Translation in english: " With two Girls "

Story PLOT :

" Rk and Madhu fall in love and get engaged with their parents consent. And start spending time together.

And coming to Riya. Rk kept the diary wantedly in Riya's room and Riya thinks madhu is dead as per plan of Rk, Riya will be falling in love with Rk and to trap Riya only as she is a psychology student ,she will be interested in human behaviors he kept that Box under the bed of riya room and creates as if madhu is dead and this all only to plot and trap her father Amar behl and the dons who are Sultan and Sid...
This is only becoz , As Madhu was injured becoz of that Sultan gang as she shot something about their deals in her handicap...
And Rk wants the don to come out & to take revenge on him for hurting his madhu he is playing with Riya girl.

But at the end riya finding out madhu who is alive suddenly in the last scene confess him about Madhu is not dead and he shocking her tells his plan about all the trap he had created for
his revenge to which riya realize she is the one who is got fooled in all the mess. "

Every Scene , Every dialogue whatever you have written is taken from the Movie IDDARU AMMAILATHO

I guess u arent aware that there are telugu people here too and you had written this as this is your own plot .

Atleast put a Note in the start of your story that this is completely taken from a telugu movie so and so...
it wud be gud !

I'm not asking you to refrain from writing this but atleast be true and give the note on the start of story .

I'm sorry if u have felt my Commenting here wrong but I'm now a days fed up of people copying works which are others and showcasing it to be theirs.
Becoz how much hardwork it takes one to write I know !

PS: i hope I read something new from your own ideas soon !




dear friend.the movie's name is IDDARA MAYILATHO. i don't do anything of others ideas. it's just that im inspired from those stories. i write them on my own ways. and as far as i know, this is india forums and being myself a south indian i know that there are lot of other south indian members and readers too. if you don't know revti21 who had seen the movie had commented on this in a positive way. and for your info the plot which you gave now is not at all the actual story which i planned to write. as i know there are people who had watched the movie. AND some parts of the plot you gave is not right. sanju(hero in movie) takes revenge for not only his lover but also for killing his parents. you missed out that part.
and for the dialogues i've changed it on my own way .if you wan't i'll pm you the plot .

its true that rk want's to take revenge and madhu is involved in it but the story is not so. MOHAN KUNDRA is one reason. and the dons are actually bhujang and sulthan. as FOR SID i have own evil plans. he will suffer in the end a lot along with amar behl . he's the main villain.

do check the movie in you tube. it comes in hindi, telgu and malayalam. i wuld never copy a story just like that, that too from on of my favorite star's movie. pls if you find this harsh i'm sorry. i,m really not upset with this. and thank you for letting me know.

forgot to tell you. read your stories on rishbala before but couldn't comment on it as i was not a member back then. they're really good. do keep writing friend and pm me when you do. and as for the DO NOT COPY THIS STORY thing, just tried it when i read lazy's stories. just wanted to know how it worked thats why. if you see i haven't blocked any of my other posts than these. and my stories you'll find in meij writers index page 35. if you see i've written OM SHANTHI OM also in my own way. if you read that you'll understand. you can write numerous stories with one theme.

thanks friend, im merliah johanna . do pm me if you have doubts
love you

Edited by madhumeandyou - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ! U can call me Nithu...

firstly i rarely lose my temper.
this is like my 2nd time in virtual world speaking a lil harshly...and 1st time i spoke though it was for all right reasons but this time its for wrong reason i realised...
i speak before i think once.

i didnt checked ur profile at all once before i commented here... only after seeing ur msg and reply i got to go through ur stories and realised u were right .
Even after commenting here i msged my one of the frnd here who knows me well asking did i do crct in commenting such...
becoz harshness and speaking blunt is not my type at all...

These days stories are being copied nd i was been the one from many days seeing all such nuisance by ppl copying writers stories in forum to wattpad and got fed up and typed wtever came in mind as a comment here without going through ur profile.

I dont think its anything wrong in writing film stories for improving ur skills in writing or if u feel like writing that story on ur fav couple mentioning well its a film story.
I thought u r fooling ppl here & when i was going to check ur other works i got a call and moved away from my PC .

May be i have hurted u with my words though they r not very harsh i know may be u felt a lil hurt seeing my comment i can understand.
but trust me i wudnt have done that if i know that u write film stories on RM couple :)

I mean it I'm Sorry !
But must say ur english is so gud, i feel kerala ppl literature skills r too gud idk y but i have this opinion from start...

PS: I hope you havent taken me as so stright forward and blunt girl ...becoz im not one and hope u didnt mind my comment here !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely Precap...👏

So our Rishbala are a storyline now ...😊...and that too inside this IF story...😲...vowww thats amazing...👏

plsss continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Hey ! U can call me Nithu...


firstly i rarely lose my temper.
this is like my 2nd time in virtual world speaking a lil harshly...and 1st time i spoke though it was for all right reasons but this time its for wrong reason i realised...
i speak before i think once.

i didnt checked ur profile at all once before i commented here... only after seeing ur msg and reply i got to go through ur stories and realised u were right .
Even after commenting here i msged my one of the frnd here who knows me well asking did i do crct in commenting such...
becoz harshness and speaking blunt is not my type at all...

These days stories are being copied nd i was been the one from many days seeing all such nuisance by ppl copying writers stories in forum to wattpad and got fed up and typed wtever came in mind as a comment here without going through ur profile.

I dont think its anything wrong in writing film stories for improving ur skills in writing or if u feel like writing that story on ur fav couple mentioning well its a film story.
I thought u r fooling ppl here & when i was going to check ur other works i got a call and moved away from my PC .

May be i have hurted u with my words though they r not very harsh i know may be u felt a lil hurt seeing my comment i can understand.
but trust me i wudnt have done that if i know that u write film stories on RM couple :)

I mean it I'm Sorry !
But must say ur english is so gud, i feel kerala ppl literature skills r too gud idk y but i have this opinion from start...

PS: I hope you havent taken me as so stright forward and blunt girl ...becoz im not one and hope u didnt mind my comment here !

thank you. but you didn't have to apologise. i really didn't feel bad. i know why you commented like that and truly it was not harsh.

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