SS: 'Dark Paradise' Chp 15 Pg 75

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Great Start 👏👏

OK so like Madz even I am curious to know that what Business Malik has to do and that in the absence if his own daughter ?? Is he some kind of underworld don or any vampire type character ?? Now I am quite curious and eager to know about Malik's secret 🤣🤣🤣

Dehradun reminds me of that vampire show on star one 🤣

WOW . What a start to Rishbala's story 🤣🤣 So who were behind RK chasing him ?? 😲😲

And whats with RK reacting when Madz tell her about Malik and Malik reacting hearing RKs name ?? Ahhh you are just confusing plus building suspense ...😡😡😡

You better update soon . I am quite impatient now BCZ I wanna know as soon as possible about all secrets .. I hate surprises 😡😡🤣🤣

But a very good chappy and very well written keeping the suspense element intact .. Good Job

TC 😛😛

Edited by BurnThemAll - 10 years ago

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Amazing start rk n malik know each other its interesting eagerly waiting for nxt update

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Excellent update.

Rishabh n Maliki r thinking now. Does Rk think Malik is behind his mom death? Why is Malik hesitant?

Thoroughly enjoyed the start.

Waiting for the nxt chapter.

Thanks for,the PM.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Superb update, like Madhu even i am curious to know what business Malik does, Rishab remembers Madhu i think, Rishbala, curious to know what happens next.