Rishbala OS: The Man Beneath the Superstar (NEW) 8-16-15 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome..Awwsome..damn awsome it is...Tainar...luved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Lovely OS
u express RK's feelings so beautifully.
thanx 4 d pm Tainar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os !!! Well Rk very perfectly found out his soulmate !! The setting for date us very romantic i mean nicely expressed !! Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
fabulous OS
thanks for pm tainu 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful OS.
Why is this a one shot? You can it make it an SS 😛. Loved the superstar and his cheer leader 😳. Add me to your pm list.

Aren't u writing in wattpad anymore? I did nt get any notification. also comments are very less there. But i prefer IF over wattpad and blog . so its ok for me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harshika_HR123

me first [:D/] 🥳


cute OS loved it 😊



Lol! Yay! You're first. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BurnThemAll

The first thing that came to my mind while reading this Chappy was WOW & AWWW.😳😳😳

Awesome babes👏👏


OK at first when you were describing about those illuminated candles and all I thought that they were going to get romantic😈🤣🤣But Alas you broke my dream and showed it as a Date🤣

Wohaaa quite fast our RK is😉😆 Just met last night and he is already having Date with his lady love😛 Though its true that you just need that person and that moment which can make you feel and realize that YES this is that person whom my heart was longing for😳😳😳

I don't mind this Bad boy image of RK . It actually made me felt like a Casanova kind of a person RK is🤣🤣

Chocolate Cake😛😛 Even I want🤣Awww so RK found Madz cute , sexy and everything .😳😳

Ahhh I loved this RK & his cute , sexy Cheer leader😳😳 And the way he asked Madz for her hand at the last of the Chappy 😛

A very winsome concept and title it was . Enjoyed it thoroughly .👍🏼

Good peice . Kudos to you babes👏👏👏

TC 😳




LMAO! The beginning did promise a story for the gutter minded fan girls huh? Lol! My RK is always fast. How quickly can I get Rishbala in bed? ;) Already have a prequel to this story but now I may have to work in reverse and write about them doing the horizontal tango. ;) Food for thought. ;) Thanks for the idea boo and also for your awesome feedback!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely n realistic one.i wanna see more to this os.rk is in love now.nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I came back to read this again! I have to admit, I liked it the second time better as I have read the other version.
It is like connecting the dots. Now the story is making sense to me.

I love RK's protective nature over Madhu and that too so quickly. It is sweet.

But they want 'different things' that sounds like trouble!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just read this after reading BOY Meets Girl
It makes sense now

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