RM 3S : THE VOWS final part - pg.29 (17/07/15)

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Fab story, loved it to the core, R.K is a gem of a person so loving, caring, understanding. Loved Madhu too her concern for her parents is natural being the only daughter.

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ananya2010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

You are a fantastic writer. Waiting for the next update.

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varsha joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Ohhh god sudha it was an awesome start

Loved it pls cont soon

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candle_light

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

beautifully writtend
soo sweet & awsome update 😊

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catharsis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Loved it to d core, Sudha di.
I kinda like to read about sugary sweet, coochie coo Rishbala. 😆
D best part was Rishabh's promising vows n his honesty, which touched my heart. 😳
Waiting for d next update.
Thnx for sending me d pm.

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

WOW!! fantastic start dear...loved it a lot

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Ishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: madhurish
Hi ishu...
I m so so happy after reading ur comment...
Ur comment is enough for me to feel that my effort doesnt go waste... I m so glad u like this story...this rk...
Yes... All the girls have that constant fear of missing their parentd after marriage... Here madhu is a only child too so she was even more worried that her parents wont have anyone to take care of them... But now she is releaved bcos they got a son in rk...
Thanks for liking the vows... If u didnt liked it then my title would have gone waste lol...
Yes... Madhu is damn lucky... Wish all the girls get a hubby like rk... But all the girls shld be like madhu too to deserve him... Infact even better...
Will try to post the next part soon...
Keep reading my stories & encourage me dear...
Thank u...

P.s i hope u didnt get caught for smiling at the middle of the class & get any scoldings... Lol...

Yeah don't worry Dear 😆! We students know how to use mobile during boring lecs without getting caught 🤣 .

Keep writing Dear and do update the next part soon .😳

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shruthi murali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

If i remember correctly u were not going to write till august right? Den how come dis one anyways I am happy seeing ur story

How can he be sooo what to say short of words so perfect and caring !!! I m waiting for this type of man and hope somebody like this meets me after 8 years lol!

I definitely didn't expect hot Sr but yes a passionate kiss in ur story but this rishbala didn't have that passionate kiss may be becoz it's madhu's first time!!

She shud have said that she has a secret lover I thought she wud say and it wud have been fun to see rks reaction but poor innocent told the truth!!

Lol honeymoon in haridwar wud be perfect hahaha

I really loved the way he gifted that house to madhu and her parents that moment I fell in love wid dis rk but what to do madhu already married him! this rk has a very big heart

"With this ring, I give u My heart, My soul, My very life, I belong to you & only you. I'll make my life's mission to keep you happy & safe"

This was so beautiful words really very touchy and romantic!! So overall totally loved with so sweet and simple rishbala !!

Loved the way u presented this part !! It is really a sweet simple and pleasant story !! Thanks for pm continue soon

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veni7842

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Lovely start Sudha dear...
I can totally understand madhu worries regarding her parents , I even sometimes feel like madhu that who will take care of my parents after my marriage...u plhave written her feelings and fears so nicely dear...
Rishab , such an understanding guy..the vows he gave to madhu in cafe is awesome, even I sometimes dream of listening those kind of words from my future husband .lol

Also the wedding vows are amzing...cannt express hiw much i love those words while reading..also an amazing feeling to hear such words frm our life partner Madhu is very lucky to have such a nice guy in her life...
Wow he built her a house as a wedding gift and requested her parents to stay near her...loved him so much in this...
Honey moon in Kashmir :p :p..eagerly waiting to read nxt parts...
Loved this so much :)...
Love you for this story...title is amazing

Edited by veni7842 - 10 years ago

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Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

God twnnie its hilarious

Mera rk finally bada ho gaya 😆

He is no longer a virgin 🤣17 mein hi kar liya isne

Wonder which chudail was first dips or ria ya phir koi aur 🤣

Rk dude I know u r experienced but ur biwi needs to be trained man how come will u train her if u keep ur in laws with u 😉

Ab ye mat bolna ki sasuma n sasurji will also learn to do it from u 🤣

Deviji were u a freedom fighter in ur last birth

Direct freedom ki tention kyun ri do u have some secret lover

That if he doesn't allow u to get out u won't be able to train him like he ll train u in doing it had hai bala 🤣🤣🤣

Aw my rk man don't u know by ur overloaded experience that malliks have got khandani avatar of being stubborn dickheads

Y dude did u become a architect from CEO that u constructed a house kya zamana as gaya hai nowadays ppl can do any job without degrees 😆😆 I so wish I don't have to study more n I can make my house without degree 🤣 n wat the is madhu modern girl or charlin Chaplin me zamane ki honeymoon in rishikesh n haridwar 😆🤣 bala ji didn't your mummyji tell u that u shd.go on a romantic place if u want Hatte katte bachhe 😆

Woman u go on teerath yatra in haridwar let me take my rk to Paris n put him to some use otherwise if he stays with u he ll become bhaktjan singing hanuman chalisa at bed pe cricket time 🤣

Overall awesome os twinnie

I m wondering which vow will he actually not fulfill getting bala mad n she leaves him so that I can do it with him 🤣

Edited by Love-Blossoms - 10 years ago