Rishabala FS : Intruder in Love (Part 4,5 - Page 22) FINISHED 3/5/16 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! great update dear...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
i just want this rishabh😆😆 bt really he's such an awesome guy every girl dream of so m i...btw fantastic update dear just want 2 read further n further of course all credit goes 2 u ur one of wonderful writer... so they really kissed cant believe...hope madhu wont regreted...now look forward n curious about how their journey vl b go ahead ?... knw its definitely awesome bt still...pls update n thanks 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update.
They r attracted to,each other but RK does not know madhu's real intentions. How is he gonna react when he comes to know she is a reporter?😕 Madhu is in real trouble now. One side is her feelings for him n in the other side is her job. Poor girl...
Is suru madhu's own daughter or adopted? Feel there is some story behind that. Let's see...

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this update.
Thanks for,the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Supurbly written waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the hot hot update. Lice the dance moments RK holding her close and lips touching very well written what next my dear. Love this chapter a lot. RK is so romantic. What happen to Depali RK.
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Posted: 9 years ago
AZRU PENNED IT BEAUTIFULLY..DO CONT SOON..
LL BE WAIITN
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi everyone 😃
Hope you all are doing well 😉
I am back with Part 4 of this story 😆


PART 4


Next day madhu was very silent in the office, Sikky kept asking her what happend but she dint reply him at last Sikky stopped madhu and asked the question which he was waiting to ask madhu from yesterday night "Madhu I know the question I am going to ask is personal but only you can answer " sikky said. Madhu knew what was going to come , she wanted to avoid him , the question to be precise. "Sikky I have work , tomorrow any how I am going to resign before your dad fires me " "Madhu wait ! I just want one answer, Who was that with you? I know you dont go on to kissing random people" "Sikky .. that ... I " "Tell me was that RK?" "Yes" "You both love each other!!" "No , he is engaged" "But not married" "You should tell him your feelings" "Never" "Stop being Stupid" "I will never ever meet him" "Madhu, calm down and relax. Dont take decision" "Sikky.." "No discussions now, lets go and have lunch its almost 4" "Okay", madhu replied and they start walking towards canteen when her mobile starts ringing, She sees the name and gets tensed Sikky sees the change in expression and asks "Who is it madhu" "Rk" "Receive the call" "I wont" "Madhu stop being so childish. Atleast listen to what he want to tell" "Okay but I am not sure after yesterday.." "Talk to him" Sikky replies in a stern voice. "Hello" "Hi" "Hi madhu, how are you?" "I am fine" "Madhu can you come and meet me" "Rk i am busy" "Madhu its important " "And I am busy and I cant come" "I am at RFC studio shooting for Ek ishq Ek junnon movie, whenever you get free time come and meet bituji, he will send you to me" "Rk...I ..." "WIll wait for you" saying this Rk cuts the call. After lots of argument wit Sikky madhu decides to go and meet him, When she reaches the studio, bittuji recognizes her and send to Rk's vanity. Madhu slowly enters with trembling feet, her heart starts beating fast and warm feeling takes over her thinking about Rk, she wouldn't agree but she loved being with him and dint regret the kiss. "Madhu I knew you would come" rk replies with his sexy smirk. "You said there was something important" "Madhu I dont know how to explain this to you, things are little but complicated nut the trusth cannot be changed" "What is it Rk" madhu asks fearing what Rk wants to say, "Madhu i want to say you something but before that i want to say something else, Madhu I and deeplai broke up. She loves someone else and agreed because her father was pressuring her and I also agreed as my mother wanted me to get settled. we were friends and never shared anything more that. We decided to end things today but we want to nobody to know it as the media is always back of me" "Okay but what is the point of you telling me all this" "I know she is your cousin and this will be awkward for you because we just broke up" "Rk, i also wanted to..." rk dint let madhu finish and moved closer "Wait madhu let me finish first, Madhu I dont know how or when but I love you, I am ready to accept and love suru whole my life, I will be the perfect father for her. I love you Madhu, I know there was something special between us from the day we met, for me its love madhu and you feel the same but it will take for you realize give a chance to your feelings to us" Rk said and pulled her close gently their body touched from head to toe. It wasn't the first time that she was this close to him. She felt strange sensations in this new developed proximity. She was trying to free herself when she saw his face moving forward.She stilled in fear or desire she didn't know. In that moment she was just feeling his hot breath fanning her face and his gaze shifting from her eyes to lips. His chocolate brown eyes were doing strange things to her and she knew she would lose if she kept looking at them. She needed to look away. ''Look away , look away'' she kept chanting to herself. With that she lowered her gaze only to settle down on his lips. And she noticed the slight lifting of his lips and glanced up to see his eyes with a naughty glint in them not a very rare sight but this time it was something electrifying and she stayed captive involved in the intense eye-lock. He shifted more close to her if that was possible his lips almost touching, their breaths intermingling. She sucked in a deep breath. She could feel his musky cologne playing havoc on her senses. But he had stopped moving. Was he teasing her? She looked up in his eyes which had turned in dark shade of chocolate. His eyes were asking the unspoken silently. She knew it was best to turn away, she could feel his grip loosening on her. Her next move surprised both of them, she moved her face to meet his waiting lips. She felt a jolt of electricity pass through her entire body as her lips touched his in the lightest of caress. She pulled back slightly remembering her slip but found her face cradled in his hands and his lips pecking her slowly but repeatedly. The light touches soon turned into a passionate kiss with his lips coaxing hers to open. All sane thoughts of maintaining distance were out of her mind the moment he had held her face and started kissing, the sparks were meant to fly because somehow both of them knew they where meant to be together. Madhu pulled back as she was short of breath and slowly realized what was she doing, She moved back and started crying "What happened madhu? Do you regret it" rk asked,"Rk there is something very important I have to tell you and after listening to that I hope you dont regret it" "I will never regret anything, If its about suru or her father, i dont care, I know that was your past and you are single you are single. I love you Madhu" "Rk its not about Suru's father, Its about me. I just want you to trust me" "I trust you Madhu" "Rk I am not deepalis cousin, I am a journalist working for bhatias news. That day you found me in deepli's house, I was a intruder, My boss has given me a task to get some news about you that's why I was there by Rk now this Intruder is in love" "Whatever was between us was also fake just to get news!" "No rk , other than hiding my identity i never lied, Do you forgive me ! Do you trust me?" "I need time madhu" rk said and went.

Madhu went home, fed madhu and went to back all the time she had been crying silently all the time. She was scared, scared to loose what was not hers but she wanted it. She cried herself to sleep that night but in the middle of the night phone beeped of which she was unaware and it was Rk's message saying "I trust you madhu and I think I have fallen in love with the intruder". Next morning Rk woke up with continious ringing of his mobile it was his Manger Bittuji "Chief check the bhatia news channel" "Okay" rk replied and opened the television, there was a news flashing "Breaking News: Superstar RK breaks up with his long term fiance Deepali" RK looked shock at the news and siletly whispers "How could you do this Madhu".

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Edited by AzraZaidi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi again everyone 😃


PART 5


Madhu got up and finished all her chores, she was all ready to go to office and resign. While having her breakfast with suru, madhu started checking her phone there was a message from Rk. It said he trusted and loved her, madhu felt ecstatic reading it. She was glad Rk forgave and accepted her, her life was changing for good, she was going to have someone who will love and cherish here, she will have someone she can look up to share her responsibilities. Suru was going to get her much awaited father who would accepted her whole heartedly. Madhu was in her thoughts when Suru called "Mamma look hero is coming on tv", madhu's trance broke and she turned to see the dreams she build a go on the verge of shattering, their was news flashing about Rk's breakup with deepali and at the end of the segment came the thing she feared the most her name was given for bringing this news and getting it telecasted. Madhu was shocked beyond her wits how could her name be displayed when she was not the one who gave the news. Rk said nobody knew about the engagement being called off other than the family members that could mean that Rk would blame her for all this and even the channel broadcast her name. She had to explain and make him understand with the determination to sort this mess madhu started dialing Rk's number but to her bad luck he dint pick any call after consecutive 15 calls he finally picked "Dont ever call me Reporter madhu malik" "Rk listen .." "Shut up madhu!! Dont ever call or try to contact me. I dont want to see your face ever again or else you will see the worst of me" "Please.." "I hate you Madhu and I also hate myself for loving you" saying this Rk cut the call, she tried calling him again but it was of no use. Madhu felt shttered, she was broken "What happened mamma? Why are you crying?" suru asked in a worried tone that moment madhu relaised taht she was crying "Nothing baby, why dont you go and pack your toys we will be going to grandma's house" "Okay mamma" suru replied and went to her room in excitement. Madhu dialed a number on her mobile but this time it was not Rk "Hello Madhu" "Hi sikky, i have some work with you. If your dad plans to fire me give him my resignation letter i will be mailing it to you shortly or if he decides to keep me let him now I am going on a 1 month leave" "Madhu what happend, why a month long leave?" "I am going to Mothari. As you know there wont be any proper signal there, if you want to contact mail me. Once in a week I will go down to the Internet cafe and check my mails" "What happened Madhu?" "The air here , its suffocating me. The one time i decided to live my life, give myself a chance it backfired. Rk hates me Sikky, he hates me" "Madhu this cant be true there must be a misunderstanding" "There is ! Which can never be cleared. This is my fate Sikky" "Dont lose hope" "I have nothing to hold on to. Bye Sikky" "Bye, Take care of my princess" sikky replied. It has been a three days since madhu was gone and Sikky was restless. He knew he had to do something before permanent damage was done. He decided to meet Rk, he dint knew if he could clear the misunderstanding but he could atleast try. Being the son of bhatia has it own perks and also being a reporter he was able to get through Rk's security on the shoot and meet him. "Hi Rk" "Who are you ?" "Rk, I am Sikky Bhatia, Madhus's friend the one Suru calls Buddy" "Oh , i recognize you but why are you here" "There is something I have to tell you" "If its about Madhu I dont want to hear" "I love deepali and she loves me" "What!!" "Its better if we talk inside" "Lets go" rk replied and took Sikky to his vanity van. "Now tell me" "Before joining my dads office i was a photographer, I worked with deepali in her model shoots and we fell in love. We decide to tell our parents after I stand up on my own legs not on my father money, then my dad dragged to his channel you could say." "So" "Before deepali could tell her parent your mom came up with your proposal which she couldnt refuse because of her fathers pressure" "I see" "Then dad gave task to madhu to get a news about you, i thought this would be a best chance. So i thought to help madhu by telling to peep in yours and deepalis relation but unfortunately you both met that day and madhu had lie. Then things started getting out of hand, madhu had no news , she was dying in guilt, you both liked each other. So me and deepali thought it would be best if she calls of the engagement but i guess that day when you met madhu you dint tell her about it. Next day Madhu would lose her job if she dint get any news and she had no news so i published about the break up in the name of madhu. Rk , Madhu truly loves you, she never wanted to lie it were the circumstances that went wrong" "I know" "Madhu said there was a misunderstanding and you hated her" "I was stupid. I should have trusted her and listened to her. Where is she now?" "She went to Mothari, her mothers house" "Thanks buddy I will forever be indebted" "hey only suru can call me that , amm...but if you wants you also can" "Thanks again" "Anytime" sikky replied with a sigh. Madhu sat at the river bank not enjoying the cool weather but trying to find a little peace in it. She never thought the days or her life would change drastically. She started dreaming she started to belive that everything would get perfect but nothing happened. Madhu got up to go back to the house, her mother would start getting worried. She started walking when she saw Rk "Not again" madhu murmured, she has been hallucinating about rk lately. She closed her eyes tightly and opened but still Rk was there "Are you for real" she asked moving closer to him and the colonge smell hit her, she realized this time he was for real. Next moment madhu started talking to be precise giving explanation that she wasn't guilty, Rk already knew that and his focus shifted to the way her lips moved. Her perfect plump lips beckoned him to a cherish them. He wanted to tell her that he knew everything and nothing mattered but her closeness to his body did not help him think or say, he decided it was best to explain her with his touch . He leaned in slightly taking in her scent, she smelled divine, enticing, alluring... so lost was he in her that he leaned further, her face so close to his, that an inch more and he would get to taste those delicious lips.She stopped talking, her breath coming in puffs. Her eyes rounded in surprise taking in his closeness, he knew she expected this but no so soon. However, he rejoiced when she did not pull away. His dazed mind had lost semblance of was it right or wrong. He swiftly diminished the last few inches between them, as his lips claimed her soft ones. It was at once, both shocking and unexplainable expected. The cool wind blew across surrounding them in a warm cocoon. He felt her stiffening for a mere moment, before her lips gently moved against his and that moment he knew how badly he wanted her in his life. " I love you Madhu" "I love you Rk" " I know nothing with certainty but the thought of having a future with you makes me dream " rk replied and continued kissing her

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NOTE:

Hey !! I know i took a year to complete this but Architecture student life is damm busy
i know i lost a lot of readers thats why i think i should end my journey as a writer
Love you all, your comments were one of the best part of my life and yes dnt forget to wish Suru


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Edited by AzraZaidi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for completing this story... Nearly after a year...😉😆 Ending was good...
Loved it ...
Finally their MU got over & they r together forever...
I m sure Suru would have loved ur birthday gift for her...
Thanks!
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Fabulous dear... Loved the end.. And don't say you lost your readers.. There are so many readers who were eagerly waiting for you.. Read your Stories.. You are amazing writer di..

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