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Posted: 10 years ago
Obsession Part 10

Madhu is praying in the temple.
MADHU:Eyy Ganpati Bappa...Please show me the right path.
She closes her eyes.She sees Rishab.She opens her eyes.She is shocked.Because Rishab is standing before her.
She can't believe her eyes.
MADHU:Rishab?

She pinched her hand to know whether it's a dream.

She said in her mind:No,it's not a dream.When I closed my eyes I could feel him.Now he himself came to me.Did Ganpati Bappa sent him to me to show me my path?
Rishab is surprised:I never expected you here.I am so happy to see you here.Really a pleasant surprise.I really prayed to see you.Surprisingly when I opened my eyes I could see you.I doubted whether it was a dream.But no...it is a reality.You are really in front of me.What bro said is true.God hears our prayers.

Madhu said in her mind:Like me he always doubted whether it's a dream or not.We both are in the same situation.What a wonder!

Panditji comes there.
He observes them.
He:You both are made for each other.God will hear your prayers.You both will be united eternally by God.
Rishab becomes happy. Madhu is stunned to hear his words.
That man goes away.

Rishab smiles at her.

RISHAB:Madhu...do you think like Panditji said we will be united eternally by God?

Madhu remembered viewing his face when she closed her eyes and prayed to her God to guide her.
RISHAB: Madhu..I really feel that the Panditji is right.That's why unexpected twists happened in our life.Otherwise Sultan and Muskaan's wedding would not have taken place.
She is not able to understand her inner feelings.She looks at him suppressing her unknown emotions.

They both walk together.While walking her hand hits the sharp edge of the door and hurts her finger.Her finger starts bleeding. But she ignores it and goes out.Rishab holds her hand.She looks at him unbelievingly as she does'nt expect him to hold her hand like this.

RISHAB:It is bleeding.You may be having pain.Right?

MADHU:No Rishab.I have no pain.I have overcome the biggest pain of my life.Compared to the mental pain physical pain is nothing.

RISHAB:But I can't ignore your bleeding finger.

He took a kerchief from his pocket and tied it over her wounded finger.She becomes emotional seeing how caring he is to her.Both of them stare at each other.

She remembers Muskaan telling her that Rishab will love her madly and will make her happy.Unknowingly they share an eye lock.



She breaks the eye lock and goes away.Rishab keeps looking at her.Before entering the auto she turns back and looks at him.Rishab gets excited.She turns off her face and enters the auto.The auto leaves.Rishab is very happy.



Muskaan has to go for her friend's wedding party.She has took the saree and ornaments she has to wear from the cupboard
Mus:Where is Madhu?She promised me that she will come and help me to put make up.Let me go out of the room and see whether she has come or not.Good thing that Sultan's parents are not here.Otherwise they would scream at us for allowing Madhu to get in before marriage.
Muskaan enters the front room.She sees Madhu and Rishab there.
Muskaan smiles:Madhu has come.Now she will dress me up fast.I will look the best at the party.

Suddenly her ears hear their conversation.
RISHAB:Madhu..you are here?
MADHU:I just came now to help Muskaan to dress up for the function.
RISHAB:Ok..carry on.I am going out.Bye.
Muskaan is shocked.
Muskaan says in her mind:That means Rishab knows that she is Madhu and I am Muskaan?Madhu told everything to Rishab?Then why did he kept quiet?He did'nt show his anger towards me.Something must be cooking in his mind.My God!
Rishab goes out.Muskaan walks fast to her room.
Madhu enters Muskaan's room.
MADHU:Hi Muskaan.I brought your favourite brand's make up kit.
Muskaan's face is dull.
MADHU:Why are you not happy Muskaan?I kept my promise and brought the cosmetics for you.
Suddenly Muskaan screams at Madhu.
Mus:No,you broke your promise.You cheated on me.
Madhu is shocked.
MADHU:What are you saying Muskaan?
Mus:Don't pretend to be innocent.You revealed our secret to Rishab.Right?
Madhu is shocked.
Mus:Tell me Madhu..you told Rishab about it?
Madhu's lips shiver.She is tense.
Mus:Your silence gives me the answer.Why did you tell him the truth?
MADHU:I did'nt tell it purposefully.Actually somehow from our mannerisms Rishab found out the truth.When he questioned me I could'nt deny it.I had to admit that I am Madhu.
Mus:Stop it.Purposefully you told him the truth,so that you can win Sultan back.
Madhu is shattered.
MADHU:No Muskaan.Sultan is just my brother in law now.

Mus:Lie.
MADHU:You are doubting your own sister?

Mus:Your proved that you are not trust worthy.

Madhu feels upset.

MADHU: If I wanted to break your married life I could have told everything to Sultan,not to Rishab..Rishab has promised me that he won't tell the truth to Sultan.If I wanted Sultan back I could have used Rishab to convey the truth to Sultan.But I never did that and Rishab has'nt informed the truth to Sultan till now.

Muskaan is not relieved.
Madhu takes out the make up kit.
MADHU:Make up..
Muskaan takes it amd throws it down.
Mus:I don't want any make up.Just leave Madhu.Give me peace of mind.I hate you.I don't want to see your face.
Madhu's heart is torn by her words.
She thinks:I gave my life to her.Still she hates me.
Madhu's tears fall down. She walks out.
Muskaan is worried.
Mus:Oh God!What will i do?I made a big mistake by trusting my unfaithful sister Madhu.She is a vamp who cheated me.She is trying to snatch my Sultan from me.If Sultan comes to know the truth,he will ditch me.I can't live without Sultan.
She goes crazy.

Madhu is thinking of Muskaan's cruel words at home.
She thinks:I have to prove that i don't have any plan to separate Sultan from Muskaan.
Madhu dials Rishab's phone number.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think this time I am first to comment.Happy that Rishab n madhu feel a bond. But how mean is this muskaan ,she blames madhu. She herself behaves like a vamp.what will madhu do .continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Hate muskan she is so selfish
I think now madhu ll ask rishab to marry her
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Posted: 10 years ago
What kind of sis is that muskaan? How can she treat her own twin like that. Very self centred. Nowo satisfy her six, madhu is going to marry RK. What ever, I want them married. That's all.
Nice update.
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Loved it

Beautifully wriiten

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
so i think now madhu will decide to marry rishbab to clear muskan mis understand
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww rishbala luks good together ,
and the great muskan iska naam miss dukhi hona chaiye tha ,
waiting for more rishbala moments ,!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey jasmine another cracking update. u hv written dis story so beautifully awesome dear. ur every updates make our tounge tied. muskan is really a vamp selfish. how can she says those word to madhu. she is a Chester who has cheated everyone. rishabala r made for each other n god has give them his blessing. do update soon. n thanks for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
muskan is such a bitch she didnt deserve madhu as a sister.
Continue soon.
Thanx for pm..
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update an thnks for pm 👍🏼hate muski😡

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