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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Ending is little painful but it goes perfect

With the story

Malik was punished for what he did and

Ended up in the mental asylum

Rk and Madhu may End up together but

The past and guilt will be haunting her

She loves Rk truly and she may forgive

Her father after few years because

She really love him

Sani was cured and happily settled

Padmini lost her daughter

Madhu ending her life

It's a very painful

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#522

outstanding updates 😊

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Bon_Vivant

@Bon_Vivant

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Heart wrenching but perfect ending
Really beautiful story

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#524

frm one point ending suits d story, as aftr so many tragedy they cnt be 2gthr.. Bt ending with someone in place of her.. Thats what its hurt.. Madhu could be in comma or die & rk loves HER Only.. No one else in his life.. !! But nyc storyline.. I Enjoyed:)

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amy447

@amy447

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Suprb story... 👏
Nice ending... ❤️...Feeling sad for madhu...Xx😒

Edited by amy447 - 10 years ago

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BEEVI

@bevi-najim

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#526

I loved every bit of this story but only the end

I can't take that ending sorry yaar not liking the ending

I was waiting for the update even I was reading with excitement but when the end come I am disappointed

Really sorry if it hurt u it is really painning inside and my eyes r watering I thought u will be giving something happy ending

I don't think so this is happening ending

One more thing I don't like people who suicide because it gives pain really very pain for our loved ones

I am trying to give some other ending in my mind to satisfy mysel and gave a ending also to satisfy my heart and mind I know it is wrong it's ur story but the end is eating my mind what I can do yaar

Really sorry for that So iam taking the ending which my heart says ok this it I took this as ending to myself

Madhura is madhu after her falling she was found by a couple near a shore and madhu lost her memory They take her as they daughter because they lost they daughter same day when madhu was found who also look like madhu and they hid the truth for her they say she is they daughter and believed that God has given they daughter again she live like they also believe them and rest of the story I take it as it as

Till the end madhu never gain her memory back and rk away for the truth that madhura and madhubal are the same person like that I finish the end to satisfy my self really sorry to do this

I love this story too much that why Sorry to hurt u

It is a awesome story it will be in my heart

Thank u for the wonderful story keep writing

Once sorry to hurt u

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..Tia..

@..Tia..

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#527

First of all no need to PM me about the story and say nasty stuff:(

I see committing suicide as a sin but it doesn't mean I can't write about it. I know what Madhu did was wrong I am old and mature enough to know what is right and wrong so no need to lecture me on that 🥱

Madhu always did wrong things in a moment of weakness and that's shown in the end too. The way she was made she would not be able to live and hate her father. She would not be able to live happily with RK with hatred in heart and RK would be hurt to see her in pain. I did not see a happy end for them so I ended it with the death of one and I am not at all unhappy with my decision.

If you all were going to cry at the sad ending then you should have made it clear to me that you NEED a happy ending as far as I understood from your comments you were not that much bothered someone even said it's my story and I can do what I like. I have read so many FFs on IF in the past with sad endings but those writers don't get such negative feedback readers are so understanding with them but I guess nobody dares say anything to popular writers 😆

Finally If you had not noticed then I ended it where Madhura said the exact same words Madhu said and she smiled at RK 'knowingly' I actually ended it on a mysterious note. Although I ended it sadly I left hope that Madhura could be Madhu. But it was not clear as I wanted the readers to choose what they want to believe but NOBODY noticed that 🤔

If I hurt you then I'm sorry (you guys have been saying this line to me ever since I started this FF 😛 )

Edited by AdhooriKahaani - 10 years ago

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#528

ohh no such a unexpected ending but it surely justifies the title but not our rks heart well he wanted to be loved all his life n till end he craved for that love but wen the time came that love too left him for whom a dusgust of a man

i know i always said that its difficult for me to accept rk with madhu but the way u showed her true love for him i actually started imagining her filling the void in rks life but arghh y did she have to suicide

y shd kids be punished if parents commit sins which r not forgivable i mean if we see practically will our parents commit suicide if we commit sins no right i abosuletely disagree with madhus suicide committing instead of leaving the world she cld have lived for rk n loved him n made upto him with her love by cutting all ties with her father that wld have been more sensable or she cld.have asked her father to jump frm bridge to prove his love for her but i accept this ending too as u wrote it so well n it was hearttouching

but in all wat i like is madhuras resemblance to madhu n maybe madhus soul is in madhura thats y rk n sani feels she is their madhu even the first five letters of their name r same

but one thing really made happy was that rks love for her

for her souls peace he married n had kids but still loved her thats wat actually shows the gravity of his love for her

in all u did awsome job on this story n i loved every bit of it

tanu u r a rockstar in mysterious department plss keep on writing more

Edited by Love-Blossoms - 10 years ago

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#529

The ending is so perfect

So I just suggest not to bother

It's just one of the story

U had written it very well

I totally agree with u for Madhu

Commiting sucide and the reasons also

It's little painful when we read

But we had to accept it

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#530

I thought everyone also mentioned that it was a wonderful story. It's just that it was sad. That does not take away the fact that it was written beautifully.

did not mean to hurt you and I'm sure it's the same with everyone else.

however did not notice that Madhura can be Madhu.

hope you keep writing.