RISHBALA TS : IN THE NAME OF DESTINY

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Wow awesome update luved rk pov

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

nice update sufi baby!!

well, to be frank till the first half i liked Rk & also i was convinced with what he did though it was wrong but still he was so in love with her & he wants her by hook or by crook but then he cant ask her father like that giving regards to his character so he took a wrong way but then he is compensating with his love but after reading the second half i mean after the flash back..that love making portion i felt little disgusted on Rk...he is just a sex maniac...even i doubt whether its love making or just lusting with a pregnant women!! if he loves her so much then he should never thought of hurting her & he is giving the pain daily...cant he resist is urges??

How much ever care & concern he shows alas it turns out to be for his own needs, he want to save her energy to f**k with him!! but poor madhu, malik & bittuji are think him as a mahaan...but only if they knew!!

its one different story!! we thought of various possibilities but never this one!! i dont say i hated Rk in this story but i'm sure what he did was wrong & i loved the story!!

thanks for the pm dear!!

waiting to read ur other works!!

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

well done and congrats for completing the new thread..both the sis...

So...comign to the update.,..thsi RK is quite weird..sorry but to make her his...his tareeka...was so different..

but he is so into Possesiveness..coz he lived his life all alone..so can understand his insecurities...

that was quite surprising update...please do write such stories more...thanks for the OM sufi and Suzi

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kg15

@kg15

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

That was completely amazing! This part turned RK into a tricky lover... So different... What I felt, the darkness in his character which was shown in first part turned into a manipulative one... But I so liked it... Really a different way to win his lady love... Hahaha...

Good Job Sufi!

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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

I'm sharing my opinion honestly. i really liked the bonding of RK n Madhu in first part but second part left me in puzzle. RK may not be an evil man but he's is cunning. He's very much self-centered as he manipulated Madhu's thoughts too to accomplish his needs! I really don't agree with the thought of making love with a woman who's 7 months pregnant! It's impossible! It not only hurts but also can cause miscarriage or later health hazards. 😲 a responsible father n hubby would win over his need or lust n give his wife n baby all the comfort they needed.
That's purely my POV. I don't mean to hurt anyone. Those who have loved RK's character here should note this points that what Madhu would have done or thought if she got to know his real feeling. Yes he loves her but it's crooked love😔

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sufidox

@sufidox

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

i totally agree with the people who think that RK is cunning, manipulative, possessive.

i just wanted to show that people are like this also. they act before the world.

the world will think that they do anything for the people they love but it's just the opposite. they make/ manipulate people to do anything for them. i just shared my thought through a rishbala story that's all.

as far as the love making is concerned, jst a lesson to those women who allow their husband to use them even if they don't want it. they just need to stop it and they should also have a say in that.

that was my only intension. sorry if i have hurt anyone throughmy OS. i sincerely regret it if i have.😃